Hey my very first attempt to write... i dont't think i am good at it at all...
I was listening to the song Aa Jao Meroi tammana and thought of ArVi... So I decided to write an OS...
So here it goes...
This is from the seen when arjun told his feelings to purvi and'
Arjun lowered his eyes as Purvi was constantly looking him in astonishment he felt as if he had done a wrong thing so he stepped back...but "NO" his mind said to him he was not wrong at all, he truly loved her and he just confessed it. How on this earth could it be wrong?? This gave him the confidence and he looked at her again she was like frozen looking in the same way at him and in the background music starts along with the awesome rain which was already there Purvi managed to get her eyes off him..
Actually she was unable to decide why this confession affected her so much, if she didn't love him at all? She was trying to search an answer in his eyes!! Why was she doing this?
All these questions were hitting her brain and her heart was already hammering against her body for being so close to him' so did his she could feel it as he once again came closer to touch her face remove the hairs from her face which kept on disturbing the view of her extremely pretty face. She straightened as she was leaning to thwe wall breaking the trance making arjun come back in hi senses once again he backed and she ran away slowly'
Thoda teher, thoda teher
She turns back only to him craving for her'
Sun le zara, sun le zara
Dil keh raha, dil keh raha
They both share an EYE lock' purvi comes back in her senses and turns back, she starts heading to her house'
De na sazza, yun bewajaa
Root kar mujhse na jaa abhi
Bhool kar shikwa gila sabhi pyaar ka
Arjun has been looking at purvi constantly not a single moment when hhis eyes went off her'
"PUrvi" he says' having tears in his eyes making her turn back again'
"I Love You" he aid once again looking intently in her eyes'
As he says this, a tear dropped on her face and he could easily recognize it among the raindrops which were washing her face'
Aa jao meri tamanna
(meri tamanna)
Bahoon mein aao
She turns back and finally enters the house crying' he is still standing on the same place trying to digest the situation
Ke ho na payee judaa hum
(payee judaa hum)
Aaise mujh mein samaoo
Ohh..
She ran in her room and hid her face in the bed as deep as she could and started crying'
Suddenly she came to the window to see if he was till there? And she saw him standing the same way he was'
Their eyes met again'
Har ghadi lag rahi teri kamiii
Le chali kis gali yeh zindagi
Hai pata lapata hun pyaar mein
Ankahi ansuni chahat jagi
Jo hua, pehle hua nahin
Aaj tum karlo zara yakeen
Pyaar ka
She made a "Why are you doing this" face to him
And he shrugged expressing "I can't help it!"
Aa jao meri tamana
(meri tamanna)
Bahoon mein aao
Ke ho na payee judaa hum
(payee judaa hum)
Aaise mujh mein samaoo
They stared at each other intently'.
Oh rut jawan, dil jawan, hasrat jawan
Tu hai toh yeh bhi hai saare jawan
They remembered the Dhabha scene
Woh nagar woh dagar hogi haseen
Tu mile pyaar se mujhko jahaan
The shiv mandir scene went in front of there eyer
by now he was sure she loved her too' "yes she does"
His heart said to him.. and he spreaded his hands asking her to hug him'
Paana hai tujhko yeh dil kahe
Har ghadi ab toh nasha rahe pyaar ka'
Aa jao meri tamana
(meri tamanna)
She ran to him open the door as fast as possible and dissolved herself in him'.
Bahoon mein aao
Ke ho na payee judaa hum
(payee judaa hum)
Aaise mujh mein samaoo
They hugged each other pulled each other close ' as close as possible' their hearts pondering against their bodies but another kind of calmness was their the feeling was out of this world'
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