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Hello this is ReadLo (again 😆)
This thread will be for all the OSes I'm going to write
I would put all my OS's in the same computer, it will be easier (or not, if ever V or Nat passes for spammer...😆)
I wish you a good reading 🤗
Hello this is ReadLo (again 😆)
This thread will be for all the OSes I'm going to write
I would put all my OS's in the same computer, it will be easier (or not, if ever V or Nat passes for spammer...😆)
I wish you a good reading 🤗
Contents
Scene after Pranati woke up after Vardhan's attack
1 - You have turned my world upside down, Pranati Mishra
Scene takes place just after Dadi says they will have to move
Scene when Pranati burns his memories before marrying Archit.
The One Shot takes place at the moment of Pranati's awakening after Vardhan's attack.
The song that played in the background during the writing process
https://youtu.be/c19t5ORk8Xo
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Rey had fallen asleep near Pranati without knowing it. His feelings made him mentally tired, the body could no longer handle the overflow of emotion.
He had kept Pranati's hand in his, his closeness calmed his distress.
She had made him lose several years of his life.
Between accepting her feelings for her.
Accepting the fact that she might like Archit.
Between the fact that his life was endangered.
Too much for him to handle, his mind needed rest.
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At sunrise, Pranati opened her eyes, she had flashbacks that assaulted her.
She didn't remember what happened to her.
His head was very sore.
She tried to get up, but her hand was being held by Reyansh's hand.
She watched him sleep next to her.
What is he doing here ?
Why is he near her ?
And how did she return to the Khurana ?
These were the questions that went through his mind.
She took her hand away from his which woke Rey.
She took her head in her hands and tried to remind her of last night's events, but mostly to stop her pain.
- What happened last night ?
She was asking herself the question. Maybe saying it out loud will help her.
She felt Rey behind her. His closeness didn't help her, she tried to get up, but he told her to stay in bed.
How could she lie there ?
Some of his memories seem to be gone !
- Rey what had happened ?
She turned towards him.
Pranati tried to look at him, but his vision was still blurred. She had a really hard time keeping her consciousness awake.
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Seeing her in this state was very difficult for Rey.
He would have liked to ask her what had happened to her.
Despite the years of separation, he knew who Pranati was.
And especially since she lived in the same house as him, he knew perfectly well that Pranati would not do anything to destroy her image, especially if her life is linked to Jagnu.
But...
But... If she loves him...
Rey rejected the idea and looked at her.
- You have spent more than a day sleeping. Jagnu is very worried.
- Rey, what happened ?
He didn't want to talk about the situation, but lying to him won't help.
- You were found in a hotel room with Archit.
- Archit ?
Pranati seemed confused, but Rey didn't understand why ? !
She had gone to join him, hadn't she ?
- Yes, Archit.
Although he would have liked to ask her what had happened, he first had to make sure she was all right.
- I will call the doctor and send Jagnu to you.
- No.
- No what ? Rey asked him.
- No need to call a doctor, I'm better. I want to see Jagnu.
- I'm going to get it.
Rey walked towards the door. He stopped before opening it and turned around to look at Pranati.
Seeing Pranati breathe the same air as he did momentarily eased his worries, but now how would he cope with the next few days ?
Rey knew he didn't deserve it, but Pranati lived in his heart, and had done so for years.
Rey now knew that wherever he went, Pranati would have to be around him.
Rey knew he could never forget it !
Rey knew he could never tell her things clearly.
But Rey also knew that if he was ever separated, they would never really be separated.
Because Jagnu is what connects them.
What did the future hold for them ?
Only God knows.
But Rey had a premonition that his world was about to take a turn that would make him face certain things, and he was ready for whatever fate had in store for him.
Wow...I reimagined that scene with this OS❤️
Nice start Readlo.. Rey's strong emotions hidden inside pops up but now he forced them to bury for a while just for pranati...
As usual superb Readlo👏
Will be waiting for next update in next week
Wow...I reimagined that scene with this OS❤️
Nice start Readlo.. Rey's strong emotions hidden inside pops up but now he forced them to bury for a while just for pranati...
As usual superb Readlo👏
Will be waiting for next update in next week
It will not have an update...🤣
It was a single text.
If you want me to do another scene, don't worry, you can tell me 😉
But for me I have rewritten the scene according to my heart, there is nothing more to add.
Hello this is ReadLo (again 😆)
This thread will be for all the OSes I'm going to write
I would put all my OS's in the same computer, it will be easier (or not, if ever V or Nat passes for spammer...😆)
I wish you a good reading 🤗
Nats....see what happened...we have officially being tagged as spammers 
Readlo, This is amazing!!!!!!
This OS is beauty!!
We didnt get a scene in the room after Pranati woke up and when she came down she already knew what had happened- and this OS scene fits in the story brilliantly.
Originally posted by: DiscoDhokla
Readlo, This is amazing!!!!!!
This OS is beauty!!
We didnt get a scene in the room after Pranati woke up and when she came down she already knew what had happened- and this OS scene fits in the story brilliantly.
Yes...True....readlo......do write more OS....i promise not to spam this thread......but we need more OS like these.....
Nats....see what happened...we have officially being tagged as spammers
I don't forget lol
My poor FF post 😆
Originally posted by: DiscoDhokla
Readlo, This is amazing!!!!!!
This OS is beauty!!
We didnt get a scene in the room after Pranati woke up and when she came down she already knew what had happened- and this OS scene fits in the story brilliantly.
Thank you DD 🤗
It bothered me that they cut the scene.
Afterwards I understand that they can't drag things out, but a little coherence would not have been out of the question.
We had his awakening and then straight away a drama...
So I said to myself I'm going to rewrite things according to my vision.
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