~~ * SS Endrum Priyamudan * ~~ Part 4 updated in page 8 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bubbly na bubbly than , so sweet of you dear 😳
waiting for the update !
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@shiny... Thank u very much for ur comment bro... Enna bro ippdi solluringa? Rakhi kattuna kasu kudukkanum la? Adhu dhan vazhakkam?πŸ˜†
Karthik en asha va love pannuran nu ennake innum theriyala... Adhukulla ungaluku eppdi puriyum?πŸ˜† Hero va ippadi lam kekka kudathu... Avanuku nallave moolai vellai seyiyum...πŸ˜‰

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@plily... Thanks a lot for ur comment sis... Guest role? πŸ˜† Sorry sorry inime vara parts la lam hero role dhan pannuvan... πŸ˜‰
Ahhayooo sis en story lam countless ah padikkadhinga... Adhu ungaluku dhan aabathu... πŸ˜† Inime vara part KR dhan... πŸ˜‰

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@smiles...Thanks for ur comment smiles...
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Originally posted by: Ramya05

Nice part... Wonderful friendship... Amazing update...


Do keep updating:)

Thanks for ur comment sis...
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@archana... Thank u so much for ur comment sis... Its ok sis... Neenga comment pannale ennaku pdhum... Paavam ennoda story ya orey naale 3 parts yum padichi irukkinga... Ungaluku dhan kashttam... πŸ˜†

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Happy Krishna Jayanthi Friends...

Part 4 -


"Ana adhu panna naanga vitta dhana?" A unknown voice came there...


Suddenly she turns to see who was standing ... Seeing the person her face lighten up... Her grandmother standing with folded hands and bright smile in her face...


Raji ran to her and hug her tightly... And starts to cry... She rubbed her back comfortably...


GM : Ippa Enna ayiduchhu nu ippdi nee azhudhuttu irukka?


Raji : Unnaku edhuvum theriyadhu patti... Amma---


GM : Ennaku ellam theriyum...


Raji : Unnaku eppdi paati theriyum?


GM : Irukkave irukka un arumai friend... Lakshmi...


Raji : Avala... Ooru full ah idha dhan paravatti irukkula? She said in anger...


GM : Edhuku ippa ava mella kova padura? Avala vidu modhala nee edhuku indha kalyanatha niruthanum nu nenaikkura?


Raji : Enna paati puriyama pesura? Karthik idhula ishtamae illa...


GM : Appdi nu avan unkitta sonnana?


Raji : Idhula solluradhuku enna irukku? Avan dhan Asha va love pannurane...


GM : So what? she asked very casually..


Raji : Enna paati unnaku moolai edhachum kozhambiducha? Avan Asha va love pannuran... Enna avana pudikala nu sollittu irukken... Nee ennadana loosu mathiri pesittu irukka...


GM : Idhan saku nu cycle gap la enna loosu nu solura parthiya?


She give absurd smile...


GM : Inga paaru di ma... Nee kekkamale sandhosham un kurai pechittu kottudhu... Adha vennam nu solladha...


Raji : Nee enna sollura nu ennaku puriyave illa...


GM : Indha kalyanthu ku oothuko...


Raji : Adhu mattum mudiyadhu paati... Avanoda love azhichittu dhan ennoda love kappathunum na... Appdi paata love ey ennaku thevai ila...


GM : Ahhayyooo... Endi avan enna romba thangamana ponna ayiya love pannuran? Andha asha va... Avalum ava dress um... Avanga appa ivlo kasu vechi irukkan irunthu avan ponnu ku oru periya dress kuda vangi kuda matainkuran.. How cheapskate he is?


Her sentence made her to laugh.. Her GM admire her smiling face...


GM : Nee indha mathiriye eppavum sirichikitta irukkanum... Adhu karthik un kuda irunthadha dhan mudiyum da... she said touching her cheeks softly..


Raji : Ana enna pannuradhu enna munnadi andha Asha mundhikittale... She made sulky face...


GM : Inga paaru game la first yaru munnadi varanga dradhu mukkiyama illa... Last yaru varanga dradhu dhan mukkiyam... Nee aasai patta vazhkka amaiyanum na indha klayanthuku oothuko...


Raji : Ana klarthik ???????


GM : Karthik kitta indha kalayanthuku oothukatha mathiri nadichiko...


Raji : Nadikuradha? Acting? Ennalam mudiyadhu pa...


GM : Ayahoo... Apdiye unnaku nadikka varadha mathiri dhan.. She said thinking about her childhood day...


Raji : Adhu lam appo... Seri naa eppdi avan kitta nadikkaradhu? Adhu mattum illama avanuku ishtam illa nu thernjidhaku apparam...


GM : Inga paaru karthik ey un love purinchikittu... Unna kalyanam pannipan... Adhuku naa guarantee.. Ana adhuku nee naa solluradhellam kekkanum...She said strictly..


Raji : Sollu... Avan enna kalyanam pannikama vera yaruvudhu nalla ponna kalayanam panni kittalum paravala... Ana Andha Asha mathiri ratchasi ya kalyanam panikka kudathu...


GM : Appadi podu... Nalla ponnu na nee dhan.. Unnai avan kalayanam panni pannipan...


" Rajii... " Her mother called her...


" Enna amma? "


" Karthik vandhu irukkan paru... Poyi pesu.. " She said...


She looks at her GM... She said All is well through her eyes...


She leaves to see him...


In terrace...

She went to him... Stood behind him... He feels her presence... He turns and looks her with hestiation...


Karthik : Rajiii... " He calls her with hesitation...


She was feared...


Karthik : Sorry raji...


She was puzzled by his sorry...


Raji : Edhuku karthik?


Karthik : Illa ennala dhan unnaku evlo kashttam... Ennakaga nee unga appa ammakitta sanda pottu indha kalyanam venam nu sollura...


Raji : Idhula enna irukuu karthik ? Nee vera oruthi virumbum podhu... Naa eppdi indha kalyanathuku oothupen...


Karthik : Romba thanks raji... Enga nee indha marriage ku ok solliduviyo nu nenaichen...


Raji Mind voice " Neenjamve unnala en love purinchikka mudiyalaiya karthik ? Illa poi ah na ourthiya love pannuradhu nala ennaoda unnmai ana love unnaku puriyalaya?? She control her tears...


Karthik : Nalla purinchiduchu... Nee sonnadhuku apparam dhan sandhoshama irukku... U r always my raji... Yaralaiyum indha raji ya enkitta irundhu pirikka mudiyadhu...

Knowing or unknowingly he said that she always for him only.. His intentions may be different but his words comfort her heart...


Raji : Karthik... Endha kalyanatha niruthuradhuku orey vazhi nee unnoda love Mamma Athai kitta solluradhu dhan...


Karthik : Hmm... Kandipa solluren.. Seri raji naa kellumberen... bye...


He leaves...


GM comes to her...


GM : Ennadi naa sollura mathiri sonniya?


Raji : Mm... Sollitten... Asha va love pannuren nu unga veetula sollidu nu solla sollitten... She said and goes to her room leaving her GM dumbfounded...


Next Day... In office...


Raji was in conference hall... sitting in the chair and sleeping by keeping her head on the table...


Karthik comes to her...

Karthik : Raji... Raji... " he patted her shoulder to wake up her "


Slowly she woke up from her sleep... She looks so tired... She was not well both in heart and health...


Karthik : Enachu raji en ivlo dull ah irukka?


Raji : Onum illa karthik.. Nethi la irunthu lesa feverish ah irukku...


He touch her head...


Karthik : Ey ennadi fever evlo irukku ? Leasa fever adikkudhu nu sollura? Vaa doctor kitta polam..


Raji : Adhellam onnu venam karthik... Naa tablet pottuten..


Karthik : Tablet pottadhuku apparamum ivlo fever adikkuma? Modhala nee kellambu..


He grabs her hand... She unable to stand itself... She fell unconscious... He hold her waist and hugged her before she hits the hard floor...


Karthik : " Raji... " He patted her cheeks.. No response... So he phone up to doctor...


After an hour later...


She gains conscious... She was lying in sofa...


He was sitting near her with anger...


Karthik : Loosa ah nee... Udumbu sari illa na doctor ta poyi katta mattiya... Oru nimsiham ennoda heart ninnu poyiduchu,... Innum chinna pullai ah irukka? You only have to take care of yourself..


Raji keeps quite...


Karthik : Nee romba weak irukka nu sonnanga... Not only in you health... Unnaoda manasu aalvu laiyum weak irukka... Adhu ennaku nalal theriyudhu,... Nee munna madhiri lam enkitta pesuradhu illa.., Ennachu unnaku? Please... Ellathiyum enkitta share pannuva... en edha mattum enkitta share panna matainguraHe asked her with concerned...


Raji : Yena... Naa unkitta adha share pannanum nu nee virumbala... She said flattly... But her words made him to confuse..


Raji : Naa kellamburen karthik...


Karthik : Ey iru naanum varen...


Raji : Vena karthik... Naa thaniyave poyikuren... Yena nee eppavume en kuda vara mudiyadhu la... " She tries to made him to understand her love.. "


Karthik : Raji... " he call her name.. To clear whether her words carrying her love for him..."

She unable to face him... She cries to made him to clear his thought was true... He stood dumbfounded... He doesn't know what to say.. But his heart was found a solace and happiness... But his mind tells him to get angry on her...


Raji : Sorry karthik... Unkitta ippdi sonnadhuku... Ennaku theriyum Nee Asha va love pannura nu... Ana ennala ennoda love maraichi veikka mudiyala... Ellathiyum unkitta naa share panni irukken ana enoda life yum unnoda share pannikanum nu nenaichadhu ennoda muttal thanam dhan... Adhuvum nee asha va love pannuran therinchidhaku apparam unkitta ippadi pesuradhu thappu dhan... Enna manichidu karthik...


She joined her palms and cries to him... He unable to take that situation anymore... Without second thought he grabs her hand and hugs her... She doesn't expect that... But she needs that... And keeps silent by resting her head on his chest...


He himself don't know what made him to do that... But he felt he was right...


There was two eyes seeing this beautiful scene with pure hatred heart... standing behind the door...


Asha MV : Never... Avalo seekiram un jeeyikka vitura matten... Karthik naa love pannadhe unna avan love pannida kudathu nu dhan... Kandippa unkitta irunthu karthik pirichiduven... Sure... you are going to lose your life... I am only the winner...


Slowly he broke the hug... And looks at her with guilty heart... He was unable to face her... She too in the same situation... Actually they were good friends since from their childhood days... But they itself didn't know when that friendship turn into love...


Karthik : Kellambalama?


She nods yes...


Karthik starts the bike and stops besides her ... And waiting her to sit... Raji hesitate to sit after sharing her feelings to him...


Karthik : Raji time ayiduchu...


Raji sits behind him... The ride was very silent... After few minutes he reached her home...


She got down from the bike... And walks to her home... But she was stops by his call...


Karthik : Raji...


She turns...


Karthik : Inga vaa...


She goes and stands keeping some distance from him...


Karthik : Innum kittakka vaa...


She goes near him...


Karthik : Raji... Naa solluradhu eppdi nee eduthupa nu ennaku theriyala... Ana solluradhu nejam... Idhu dhan ennoda mudivum kuda...


She starts to hear curiously...


Karthik : Inga paru raji na eduka pora mudiuvu unnakum sanshotha tharum ennakum sandhoshatha tharum... Unnoda love true... Ennoda love um true... Naa edukka pora mudivu unnaku ippa kashttatha kuda tharalam ana pinnadi romba sandhoshatha dhan tharum... Adhula ennaku endha sandhaegamum illa... Poyi nalla thongu... Naaliku parukkalam... bye... Good night...


He starts the bike... And drives to his home...


After he went she goes to her house...



To be continued...


Author's note


Sorry friends... I know this is short update... But Today only I starts to type... Today I am fully busy with celebrations... Innaiku krishana jayanthi veriya... Neriya vellai irunthuchu... Adhu mattum illama teachers day vera... So adhuku vera ennoda teacher vettuku poyi celebrate pannom... So adhunala update short mudichitten...


Konjum mokkai dhan irukkum... Na mistakes lam apparama vandhu edit panniduren colouring apparam vandhu kudthuduren...Ippadhiku idha Adjust pannikonga... Please... Ana naa ennoda promise kappathitten... Krishana jayanthi annaiku update pannittom la...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†


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Edited by Abinaabi - 9 years ago
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Wow..super story .. I love it... And thanks for the super fast update...
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Happy Krishna Jeyanthi Abinaya 😊
Thank you for the lovely update ..

Raji's pati , jovial person , master planning lam poduranga kalyanathuku .. 😎
Raji & pathi convo very funny , casual la pesuranga . Very friendly pati πŸ€— . Raji is very firm in her decision even after pati advise .

Raji & Karthik convo ; love this , so much of love and affection .. ❀️

Raji Mind voice " Neenjamve unnala en love purinchikka mudiyalaiya karthik ? Illa poi ah na ourthiya love pannuradhu nala ennaoda unnmai ana love unnaku puriyalaya?? She control her tears..

Raji's reply make pati speechless . Raji is right after knowing Karthik's love how could she agree for the marriage .

My favorite , superb Bubbly 😳 ☺️

Raji : Sorry karthik... Unkitta ippdi sonnadhuku... Ennaku theriyum Nee Asha va love pannura nu... Ana ennala ennoda love maraichi veikka mudiyala... Ellathiyum unkitta naa share panni irukken ana enoda life yum unnoda share pannikanum nu nenaichadhu ennoda muttal thanam dhan... Adhuvum nee asha va love pannuran therinchidhaku apparam unkitta ippadi pesuradhu thappu dhan... Enna manichidu karthik...


Raji pour out whats all in her heart even knowing that the bitter truth will make him guilty but it is the best for both of them πŸ˜’

She joined her palms and cries to him... He unable to take that situation anymore... Without second thought he grabs her hand and hugs her... She doesn't expect that... But she needs that... And keeps silent by resting her head on his chest...


The hug , no need to explain anything sometimes a hug can make you at peace . Unknowingly they love each other . Abi you have describe it so beautifully and soulfully . So close to heart ❀️ .

All the best Asha 😑 . I'm waiting for that ...

Karthik yena mudiyu yeduka poran teriyile but I hope it the best for both of them .

Wonderful update Bubbly πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸΌ KR touched my heart ...

KR convo is superb dear . KR vanthale magic than le , beautiful pair .

Waiting for Saturday again .. can wait



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update Abi
Raji situation I feel sorry for her she's in a helpless situation

Karthi not sure what to say about him does he like raji or not? Or is it just genuine concern :/ not sure entirely

Raji and her past ROFL too jokes the past is advice and idea Hahahha liked their conversation.

I hope raji gets something good happening

This asha she's driving me insane now! I seriously don't like her she just needs to disappear nonsense.

Gosh some people like seriously

Thanks Abi for the update :) waiting for next part :)
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