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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Nice update Abi :)
So karthi was still searching for her aww cute

Karthi promoted nice :) but going away :(

Yenna ithu Karthi in love with someone else?

Is it a prank?

whats going on?

Raji pavum i feel for her... Lakshmi good friend realised something was wrong and went to comfort her...

Hope KR unite... will wait and see

And defo enjoyed this update Abi thanks for the update

Before even knowing about this Asha i dont like her 😆

Paarpom whats next in store :)


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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Hey Abi, nice second part. The story so far is going interesting, wondering if Karthik still likes Nisha/Asha (I noticed that you put two different names) or if he's over that. Aaaww Raji, she's disappointed but who knows things can change in life. Vishnu and Lakshmi were both being nice friends towards K & R also. Waiting to read the next part!
Edited by Smiles-20 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Pasamalar...semaya pothu story ippo..intha part adi dhool..👏👏

Thank God..karthik a vara vechutanga...pavam paiyan..alanchu thirinchu thurumba poitan..lol..

Woohhh...Karthik,..project manager a??..US ku ponuma??..aiyoo enna ithu??..sweetana news nu paartha..shock tharaye Abi..😆

Raji planning this surprise ??..aww...super...😳

Raji disappointed...she is in love...appadi podu aruvala...aana karthik Asha va love panrana??🥺...appo KR husband n wife illaiya??...kadavule.😲😲..enaku appave doubt vanthuchu...enaku ippo kadupaaguthu...grrr...hehe...😡😡😆

Ennda 3 dhanush mathiri edhachum probem ah? Solluda... Appa dhan story intresting ah pogum...

This line...hehehe...liked it.

Nisha...romba thimiru pidicha girl polaye...aiyoo intha karthiku nut kalandurucha??..konjam rajiya vechu atha tight panni viduma..😆

Last narration..regarding Raji's condition...awesome..⭐️but pity her..😭

Waiting ma...thanks for the pm😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: plily

Wow Bubbly , superb da.

As you said ist better than frist part .. but u make Raji cried athuthan konjam kashthama iruku.. .

Karthika surprise panna ipidi oru planning . Paiyan USA going 🥺 ..

Lakshmi notice Raji's reaction , good friends as usual ⭐️.

Flashback .. nice but Nisha characterku Karthik loving her 😕
Pity Raji but hope for a twist 😭

Nice update da .. 😊

Timingle update kuduthuruke Bubby ..👍🏼

Next updateku me waiting dear

Thanks for ur comment sis... Kashttathulaiyum oru inbam irukku sis... 😉 Adha neenga poga poga parppinga...

Timing la kuduthutten la... Enake achiriyama iruku... 😆


Word Count: 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: prema27

Nice ... Kasthama iruku karthik loves asha😭 but hope good twist later part... But KR not husband and wife ... I thought they are hubby and wife in part 1... Ok ... Waiting for update ... Thanks 😉

Thanks for ur comment...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Gayathri30

Nice update Abi :)

So karthi was still searching for her aww cute

Karthi promoted nice :) but going away :(

Yenna ithu Karthi in love with someone else?

Is it a prank?

whats going on?

Raji pavum i feel for her... Lakshmi good friend realised something was wrong and went to comfort her...

Hope KR unite... will wait and see

And defo enjoyed this update Abi thanks for the update

Before even knowing about this Asha i dont like her 😆

Paarpom whats next in store :)

Thank u so much for ur comment sis... Mee too don't like her... 😆

Word Count: 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smiles-20

Hey Abi, nice second part. The story so far is going interesting, wondering if Karthik still likes Nisha/Asha (I noticed that you put two different names) or if he's over that. Aaaww Raji, she's disappointed but who knows things can change in life. Vishnu and Lakshmi were both being nice friends towards K & R also. Waiting to read the next part!

Hi sis... Thank u so much for ur comment... Sorry for the mistakes... Its Asha only...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shiningstar77

Pasamalar...semaya pothu story ippo..intha part adi dhool..👏👏

Thank God..karthik a vara vechutanga...pavam paiyan..alanchu thirinchu thurumba poitan..lol..

Woohhh...Karthik,..project manager a??..US ku ponuma??..aiyoo enna ithu??..sweetana news nu paartha..shock tharaye Abi..😆

Raji planning this surprise ??..aww...super...😳

Raji disappointed...she is in love...appadi podu aruvala...aana karthik Asha va love panrana??🥺...appo KR husband n wife illaiya??...kadavule.😲😲..enaku appave doubt vanthuchu...enaku ippo kadupaaguthu...grrr...hehe...😡😡😆

Ennda 3 dhanush mathiri edhachum probem ah? Solluda... Appa dhan story intresting ah pogum...

This line...hehehe...liked it.

Nisha...romba thimiru pidicha girl polaye...aiyoo intha karthiku nut kalandurucha??..konjam rajiya vechu atha tight panni viduma..😆

Last narration..regarding Raji's condition...awesome..⭐️but pity her..😭

Waiting ma...thanks for the pm😊

Thank u very much bro... Avanga husband and wife illa... Raji ya vechi dhan tight pannuven... 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3 -


She cries continously... Without her knowledge tears rolls down from her eyes...


Lakshmi : Raji please... Azhadha... Yarudhu partha enna nenaippanga...


She tries to comfort her... But she keeps on crying...


Lakshmi : Raji... Karthik vishnu varanga...


She quickly stops crying and wipes her tears with her palm...


Vishnu : Ennachu? En Pasamalar ippdi vaadi irukku...

Lakshmi : Pasamalar Anna poruppa irukka mateikkurane dhan...


Vishnu : Naa enna poruppa irukka mateguire... Naaa nalla poruppu paruppoda dhane irukken...


Lakshmi : Irukka vendiyavangaluku irukka matainguraye...


Vishnu : Enna lakshmi ippdi sollitta? Nethi kuda nee kettanadhukaga... Office ku leave pottu unn kuda full day shopping pannen la? Enna poyi ippdi sollitta..


KR shocked...


Raji : Adi paavi... Nethi enkuda Library ku vaa di nu sonna appo vara maten nu sonna... Ippa puriyudhu en varala nu... Un kuda pesave kudathu... "she said with childish anger..."


Lakshmi : Ey summa avan variya nu kettan adhan ponnen... Plus neenum unnaku neriya things vanganum nu solli irunthila appdiya adhaiyum vangitten...


Raji : Podhum podhum... Romba akkarai irukkura mathiri dhan...


Karthik : Ava kedakkura raji... Naa unna shopping kootittu poren...


Raji : Yaru neenu? Enna? Poda dei..


Karthik : Ennadi naane solluren... Namba mattiya?


Vishnu : Dei Indha ulagam adutha second azhiya pogudhunu sonna kuda namba va... Ana nee shopping kootittu poren nu sonna epdi da nambaradhu ?


Raji : Un kuda naa shopping vandha... Just Browsing dhan panna mudiyum... Shopping panna mudiyadhu...


Karthik gives glare look to her...


Karthik : Namba Innum 2 weeks la US poga porome... Pona podhu nu ketten paru enna sollanum...


Raji becomes silent... Lakshmi looks at her...


Lakshmi : Karthik... Nee US poguradhuku munnadi silla procedure irukku... Nee enkuda vaa naa explain panniduren...


Lakshmi takes karthik to her cabin... Thinking about not to embarrass raji anymore..


Vishu gives unpredictable look to her...


Raji : Enna appdi parukkura?


Vishnu : Onnum illaiye summa dhan...


She looks suspiciously...


Vishnu : Naa ennaikume unnaku seiya vendiyadha senjikittu dhan iruppen... " he said with genuine voice and leaves..."


Raji : Enna sollittu poran... She couldn't able to get it... So she leaves to work...


Next Day


Vishnu's House...


Raji : Hi perimma... Eppdi irukinga?


Perimma : Ennadha solluradhu... Un anna yum perippa yum vechi kittu eppdi irukkuradhu?


Raji : Rani mathiri irukkalame...


Periapppa : Appdi solluda ma... Nee aalvo en magal...


Periamma : Podhum podhum unga appa ponnu paasam...


Periappa : Unnaku porukkadhe... Ava kedakkkurama... Avaluku poramai...


Raji : Enna periappa neenga sanda poduradhuku enna reason aka try pannuringala? Naa kellamuren... Anna madilla dhana irukkanga...


Periamma : Ama poyi paru.. Nalla thoongittu iruppan...


Raji : Seri naa parthukuren...

She goes to his room...


He is in balcony... Stood leaning on the wall... Looking down the floor... It clearly show that he was deeply thinking about something...


Raji : Enna Pasamalar yosanai lam balama irukku...


He came back from his thoughts...

Vishnu : Onnum illa... Ama nee enna inga?


Raji : Mudhala kai nittu soluren...


Vishnu : Edhuku?


Raji : Neettuda solluren... Ellathukum kelvi kettuku kittu...


Raji ties rakhi in his wrist...


Raji : Happy Raksha Bandhan Anna...


He was extremely happy... He hugs her and says thanks to her...


Vishnu : Thank u so much my dear Thangatchi...


Raji : Seri seri... Kasu edu...


Vishnu : Kasa ah ? Edhuku?


Raji : Ada ada onnume theriyadha mathiri nadikkuriya... Rakhi kattunnen la kasu edu ma?


Vishnu : Oh... Adhuva...


Raji : Enna adhuva? Modhala kasu... Nee eppaiye enna na vangalam nu plan pannitten...


Vishnu : Indha dhadava unnaku kasu kudukka poradhu illa...


Raji : Dei ennada sollura... Achachoo en kanavulla manna vari pottudadha da...


Vishnu : Unnoda aasai neravetha poren... " he said


Raji : Ennoda aasia ah ? Ennadhu? " she was confused... She unable to understand what he was saying..."


Vishnu : Indhadava unnod anna oda gift romba perusu... Un anna evlo pasamanavan nu nee parppa... " he said by pulling her cheeks softly... And leaves...


She stands with thinking mode...


Afternoon time... In Lakshmi's house...


RL sitting in the sofa... opposite to each other...

Lakshmi : Ennadi ippdi sollura?


Raji : Ippdi solllurana? Avan sonnadha solluren...


Lakshmi : Seri may be avan edhachum unnaku pudicha things edhachum vangi vechi irukkalm la?


Raji : Illa lakshmi... Avan sollum bodhu avan voice avlo genuine and affectionate ah irunthuchu... Avan ennoda aasai nu edha solluran nu theriyala... Adhan unkitta adha pathi edhachum sonan nu kekka vandhen...


Lakshmi : Illaye enkitta edhuvum appdi avan sollala... Ennava irukkum...

RL confused... Trying to find what vishnu was mentioned...


Lakshmi : Oru vella unnoda love pathi therinchiducho? she asked in doubt...


Raji : Adhuku vaaipe illa... Kandippa therinchi irukkadhu... Vera edhachum nu nenaikkuren...


Meantime Lakshmi mom enters into the house...


L mom : Vaama raji eppdi irukka? she welcomed her...


Raji : Nalla irukken Amma ... Nee enga market poyittu varingala?


L mom : Ama ma... Market poyitu varen... Ivala poo sonna poga mataingura... Pombala pullaiya enna vellai di nee veetula seyiura?


Lakshmi : Ennama ippdi sollitta? Morning dhana unnaku coffee pottu kuduthen..


L mom : Coffee kudthuthen nu sollu di... Pottu kudthen nu solladha... Unga appa pottu kudutharu nee vandhu en kitta kudtha... avlodhan... Idhuku peru vellaiya?


Raji : Vidunga Amma... Ava idha senjadhe periya vishiyam... Idhe Vanam megam mottadhoda irukku... R and L mom laughed...


Lakshmi : Enna vechi rendu perum kalaikiringa... Parthukuren...


Raji : Seri amma naa veetuku kelamburen...


Lakshmi : Ennadi adhukulla kellamburen nu sollitta? Iru sapptu poo...


Raji : Illa di veetula vella irukku... Amma vera seekirama vara sonnanga... Apparam varen... Varen amma...

L mom : Seri amma...


Raji leaves...


In Raji's house...


she parked her scooty i and enter into her house...


K's Mom : Enn marumagalu ku noora aayisu... Avala pathi ippa dhan pesittu irunthom... Avale vandhutta...


Raji : Ada ada romba dhna en mella pasam katturinga...


K's mom : Naa paasam veikkama vera yaru di veippa?


Raji : Ama appdiye romba dhan pasatha katturinga...


K's mom : Naa matttum illa inime enna pullaiyum un mella pasatha dhan katta poran...


Raji : Ama ama kattittalum..


K's mom : Ella marriage anadhuku apparam un eppdi vechi thanguran nu paru...


Raji : Enna? " She asked in confusion... "


K's mom : Enna di appdi parukkura? Nee innum konja naalu la en marumgala aga pora... She said by pulling her cheeks with extreme happiness...


Raji was shocked to the core... She was dumbfounded... She doesm't know what to say... She was not happy but not sad also... She was totally confused...


R's mom : Ennadi sandhoshathula vaai adachi poyittiya? Unnaku ok dhana?


Raji comes back to real world...


Raji : Yaru kitta indha mudivu eduthinga...


R and K's mom shocked...


" Yara kekkanum? " A hard loud voice came there...


They turns back to see...


Vishnu : Yara kekkanuma? Sollu... Yara kekkanum? " he said in anger hidden voice...


Raji : Enna kekkanum... Kalyanna pannika poradhu naan... Enna kekkama eppdi indha mudivu edupinga?


R's mom : Enna pesura raji... Naanga ennamo unna road la pora pechaikaranuka katti kudukka porom? Unnoda murai paiyan... Unnoda athai paiyan... Avanuku dhana katti kudukka porom...


Raji : Adhunala udane enna kuda kekkama indha mudivu eduthuduvingala... " she asked in anger...


K's mom doesn't know what to say... She maintain silence...


Vishnu : Atha neenga ulla poonga ava edho kozhuppathulla sollura... Dhidderunu ketta udane ippdi sollura... Naa parthukuren... Neenga ponnga...


Both K and R's mom leaves...


Raji : Nee enna pesura nu therinchidhan pesuriya?


Vishnu : Ellam therinchadhunala dhan pesuren...


Raji : Enna theriyum unnaku? " she almost shouted..."


Vishnu : Ellame theriyum... " He too shouted..."


Raji : Unnaku sonna puriyadhu... Ippa enna avasaram en kalyanuthuku? " she asked in irritation...


Vishnu : Unnaku ippa kalyanam pannuradhu prechanaiya illa kalyanam pannuradhe prechanaiya illa karthik kalyanam pannuradhu precthanaiya? " he asked in suspicious tone...


Raji : Moonume dhan prechanai...


Vishnu : Enna prechanai nu naanga therinchikkalama?


Raji : Pudikkala nu solluren vittudunga.. Avlodhan... Vera edhuvum kekkadhinga... " she said and walks to her room...


Vishnu : Oru nimisham...


She turns back...


Vishnu : Endha kalyanam nadanthe therrum... Idhu yaru nenaichallum matha mudiyadhu... Nee ennoda thangatchi avan ennoda Nanban... Ungalaku ippa enna seiyanum nu ennaku nallave theriyum... " he said with hard voice and left...


She runs to her room... Opens the door in anger... And sits on the bed... Suddenly she starts to cry... Thinking about what Asha said in morning...


FLASHBACK


In office


Raji was busily working in laptop... She was sitting in the conference hall... Asha came there...


Asha : Hi raji...


Raji : Hi..


Asha : Enna adhisiyama serious work pannittu irukka? " She asked mockingly...


Raji : Enn naa idhuku work panndhe parthdhadhu illaiya? Work pannuren nu scene kattitu suthuravangala vida... Naa nalla dhana work pannuren? " She too asked mockingly...


She glares at her...


Asha : Unnaku onnu theriyuma? Karthik ennoda romba close ayiitaan... " she provoked her possessiveness...


Raji : Romba nalladhu adhuku enna ippa? " she asked calmly...


Asha : Ila sonnen... Naaliku kuda enna pub ku koottitu poren nu solli irukkan.. Avan enna love pannuran theriyuma?


Raji keeps quite...


Asha : Enna raji theriyuma? " she asked again to irritate her..."


Raji : Theriyum... " she said in low voice... "


Asha : Avan enna sincere love pannuran... Naa illa na avan uyiraye vittuduvan... Andha alvu love pannuran...


She maintains the silence and control herself...


But Asha not stops her irritable talk... She keeps on irritating her...


Asha : Ava enna seekirama kalyanam pannikkanum nu nenaikkuran... Seekiram avanga Appa Amma kitta pesi samadham vangiduvan... Nee dhan en kalyanatha pa ennaku manamagal thozhi nikka pora...


Raji : Asha please... Idhu nee enkitta sola vendiya avasiyam illa... Ennaku neraiya vellai irukku naa kellamburen... She tries to leave from there...


Asha : Raji... Marupdaiyum solluren karthik en mella uyira ye vechi irukkan... Enna thavira vera yaraiyum avanala ethuku mudiyadhu... Yaraiyum... " She said her last sentence very hard and clearly...


FLASHBACK ENDS...


Raji was crying...


Raji : En kaduvale enna ippdi pada paduthura? Naa unn kittta kettadhu ellam onne onnu dhan... Karthik sandhoshama irukkanum... Avan eppaiyum sandhoshma irukkanum... Ana nee ennale avanoda sandhoshatha azhikkara mathiri seyiyuriya? " she cries to God...


Raji : Enna analum seri indha kalyantha niruthida vedniyadhu dhan...


"Ana adhu panna naanga vitta dhana?" A unknown voice came there...


To be continued...


Author's Note


Hi Guys... Again boring update... Sorry for giving dragging update... Next part onwards story will move forward...


And one more thing... If you have any doubt or mistakes regarding update... Please speak openly... Or give pm to me... Because I am not satisfied with this part... My exams are going on... So I am busy with my exams... So I typed in hurry... Sorry for the mistakes...


Please do comment and don't forget to hit the like button...


Edited by Abinaabi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Hi Abi
Nice update :)

slowly more is coming out although slightly confusing... but as i said before shall wait till you reveal more

okie so most people people are routing for KR even vishnu and lakshmi and their parents

but raji doesnt want it as she wants his happiness... whats karthiks say in this ?? wonder how he feels about this... he told raji he loves someone else and now they want KR to get married worried how he will react

I like vishnus character in this... good brother and friend to KR ... he is doing his part well... he wants KR to unite and a different side to him more forceful than the usual jolly type which is nice to see :)

lakshmi also a great friend to raji

i feel bad for rajis character shes stuck in the middle i hope she doesnt get blamed for this by karthi

wonder who came in the end waiting for your next part eagerly :)
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