~~ * SS Endrum Priyamudan * ~~ Part 4 updated in page 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shiningstar77

Adadada...starting e semaya iruke ,Abi..Loved it..Loved it..πŸ‘πŸ‘

Raji..hehehe...thongathula koda recepies ninaiputhana?..thinnipandaramo??.πŸ˜†..(Yei ivangala pathi naan engayo keta maathiri iruke)πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Karthik..ada ivan vera..ava nalla dream kandukittu iruntha..atha stop pannitan..πŸ˜†

Oh..sir coffeelam pottu kodukararanu paartha,ippadi bulb kuduthutane..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Pongal a ivalavu nerama saapidrala Raji??..super...paiyan kilambitan athukulla..

Aama KR enga irukaanga?..Raji veetulaya??en??

Inga paaruda...pasamalar vanthuthan epayum kottitu povarama thangatchiya karthik vittutu pogumpothu..Superda..😳

VL..Nice play than..rajiya enga irukanganu theiryalaiyamla...Karthik pavampa...but enaku ithu pidichuruku..πŸ˜‰

Super start...Super title...Super SS,,,athuvum Super friendku...ellam supera irukuβ­οΈπŸ‘πŸΌ

I cant wait for the next part,Pasamalar..Seekarama update pannu..Seriya??...ithu Un pasamalaroda orderπŸ˜†

Thank u so much for ur comment bro...

@bold Guess pannunga bro... Poga poga dhan theriyum adhu...

,Pasamalar..Seekarama update pannu..Seriya??...ithu Un pasamalaroda order Idha neenga solluringala? πŸ˜† Unga Pasamalar thangatchiya irunthu kittu neenga ennkitta ippdi order poduradhe thappu...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SushK16

Adipaavi Machi... Ennaku sollamaiye oru story ah start pannitaiyaa? 😲 😲

Adha vida shock, it is dedicated to me?? 😲 😲 Birthday gift?? 😲 😲

Serious ah expect pannave illa di... What you have done is too much and what I feel is beyond words... πŸ€—

A HUGE surprise on my birthday... And you have made me feel really special... 😳

THANK YOU SO MUCH MACHI... You have left me dumbfound with this... Life la eppodhum nyabagam vachurupen di... πŸ˜›

I am extremely lucky to have you in my life... Love you forever and ever... ❀️

P.S. - Will come later to comment more properly... I am feeling really proud... Thank You once again di... Love you lots... πŸ˜ƒ

-- Sush πŸ˜‰

Unkitta sollittu panni iruntha adhu eppdi surprise ah irunthu irukkum?πŸ˜†

Friends kulla no thanks... Unnaku pudichi iruntha ok dhan...

Onnum avasaram illa porummaiya comment pannu...

Love u too ❀️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sathyakrs

Interesting start Abhi..πŸ‘πŸΌ

Raji mom ah athai nu Karthik koopidran..are they married or relatives staying in the same house ??

Raji is foodie here!!!!..super..πŸ˜†πŸ˜›

As always their tom and jerry fights...cute ones..(which we enjoyed in season 1)

R and V playing some prank it seems...poor karthik..

Wish you update regularly Abhi...

Thank u sis... I will update weekly once...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: plily

It was an awesome story for an awesome friend .

Superb Bubbly ,

Raji foodie apidiya (base yenga irunthu varuthu I know) πŸ˜†

Athai magal Rajiya .. going to same office .. super !

Vishnu annava 🀣

KRVL the foursome is back ...

Pls pls continue Bubbly .. un chella sis is waiting ..

Thank u so much chella sis...

@bold Shhhuuu... Adhellam vella solla kudathu.. Manasukullaye vechikkanum...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Kandippa continue pannuven sis... En friend ku vera dedicate nu sollitten... Continue pannidhana aganum...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Abi, it's great of you to start a SS for us. Hope you do continue and update as often as you can. I enjoyed reading the first part a lot. Karthik and Raji and their arguments were fun lol. Looks like Vishnu and Raji are playing on Karthik lol! Vishnu and Raji's conversation was so funny!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smiles-20

Hi Abi, it's great of you to start a SS for us. Hope you do continue and update as often as you can. I enjoyed reading the first part a lot. Karthik and Raji and their arguments were fun lol. Looks like Vishnu and Raji are playing on Karthik lol! Vishnu and Raji's conversation was so funny!

Thanks smiles for ur comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2 -


Raji comes to office...


Raji : Lakshmi ellam ready ah irukku la?


Lakshmi : Ellam ready raji... Dei vishnu karthik phone panni vara sollu... Paavam evlo neram veyila suthuran...


Raji : Nalla suthattum... Avanuku vennum...

Lakshmi : Ey avan unnakaga dhan ponnan... Avana poyi ippdi pesuriye?


Raji : Vera ippdi pesuradhu... Vittutu vandhan la... Adhuku Tit for Tat...


Vishnu : Seri seri... Avanuku naa phone panni vara solluren...

Vishnu takes his mobile and calls his number...


Karthik : Sollu da...


Vishnu : Enga da irukka ?


Karthik : Anna nagar poyittu irukken...


Vishnu : Machan nee udane office ku vaa...


Karthik : Edhuku da?


Vishnu : Nee vaa da soluren... He cuts the call...


After 20 minutes he reached the office...


He goes to their cabin... But VR was not there... So he decided to go to conference room..

He enter into the conference room...


When he enter into the room... He heard A big round of applause... His colleague greeted him with cheers and applause...


Congratulations karthik...


Karthik : Edhuku ? he asked in confusion...


Lakshmi : Edhuku nu sonna merisillayaduva...


Raji : Karthik... Nee ippa team leader kedaiyadhu... Project Manager...


Karthik : enna? he asked in extreme happiness...


Vishnu : Adhu mattum illa machan... Top 10 companies la irukkura RIT company project ne dhan panna pora... And you're going to fly to US... He said with action...


Karthik doesn't know how to react... He stunned for a moment... No boundaries for his happiness... He have no words to express his happiness... Actually he dreamt to work in US... His dream comes true..


His colleagues one by one congrats him...


Ashwin : Congratzz buddy... Idhuku nee treat veche aganum...


Karthik : Kandippa...


Vishnu : Ok guys... Thanks for your wishes... Parattum vizha inidhe mudivu adaindhu... Adhunala thangal anaivarum Thanga Irukkaiil Amarndhu Thangal Kadalai podum vellai arambikkavum...


Colleague : Seri guru ve...


Karthik : Dei ennada idhellam?


Vishnu : Summa oru surprise dhan da...


Karthik : Ungaluku indha news yaru sonna?


Lakshmi : Vishwanathan sir dhan... Avaru direct ah unkitte ye solluren nu sonnaru... Naanga dhan avarutta surprise naangale sollidurom nu sollittom...


Karthik smiles...


Lakshmi : Ana indha idea kudthudhadhu Raji dhan...


Karthik : Thanks..


Raji : Edhuku Thanks lam? Naanga idhellam senjadhe... Nee treat veippendradhuku dhan...

Ozhunga mariyathaiya semmayana treat veikkura...


Vishnu : Ama machan.. Illati ippave vishwanathan sir ta solli unnoda promotion cancel panniduvom..


Karthik : Eppa sammi kandippa vechuren pa... Seri eppa US poganum?


Lakshmi : Innum date fix pannala... ... May be two or three weeks la kellambara mathiri irukkum..


Suddenly Raji's face becomes dull... She ask excuse and leaves..


Raji : Ennaku konjum work irukku... Naa ippa vandhuduren...


She leaves...


Lakshmi : I also have to go... See you in lunch...


Vishnu : Seri lakshmi...


In Terrace...


She looking the sky and immersed in her own thoughts...


Lakshmi : Raji... ( Touch her shoulder)


She turns... Her face looks dull...


Lakshmi : Ennachu raji?


Raji : Onnum illaye.. Naa eppaiyum pola dhan irukken... She smiles to hide her feelings...


Lakshmi : Ennkittave? Unna pathi ennaku nallave theriyum... Happy dhan iruntha... Karthik two weeks la US poganum nu sonna udane un face dull ayiduchu...


Raji : Appdi ellam onnum illa...


Lakshmi : Ennaku theriyum...


Raji : Enna theriyum?


Lakshmi : You have some feelings on him..


Raji : Manangatti.. Adhellam onnum illa... She avoids eye contact with her..


Lakshmi : En raji maraikkura? Ennkitta edhuku maraikkura? Sollu adhunala dhan dull ah irukka...


One drop of tear escaped from her eyes...


Lakshmi : Raji...


She looked at her with tears


Lakshmi : Raji... Enna idhu chinna pulla mathiri azhudhukittu...


Raji : Ennaku kashttama irukku lakshmi... Innum two weeks la avan kellambiduvan nu nenaikkum bodhu varuthama irukku...


Lakshmi : Raji... Appo nee??


Raji : ( Takes a deep breath )Yes.. I love him...


Lakshmi : Idhu edhuku di ethana nalla avan kitta sollala?


Raji : Bayama irukku lakshmi...


Lakshmi : Bayama?


Raji : Ama lakshmi... Naanga rendu perum orey naalu dhan pirandhom... Onnu dhan vallandhom... Arambadhulla ennaku avan mella endha feeling um illa... Ana ippa ennaku...


She unable to complete her sentence...


Raji : Idha naa sonna na... Avan eppdi eduthupan nu theriyala...


Lakshmi : Eppdi eduthupan na? Kandippa avan ok solliduvan... Yena nee na avanuku avlo pudikkum...


Raji : Theriyum... Ana pudikkaradhukum... Kadhalikkaradhukum vithiyasam irukku la?


Lakshmi : Enna raji ippdi pesura? Edha vechi avan unna vennam nu solluvan nennaikura?


Raji : Yena karthik vera oruthar mella feeling irukku...


She was shocked to the core...


Lakshmi : Enna ? Vera oruthar mellaiya? Loosu ah nee?


Raji : Ama naa loosu dhan... Adhan eppdi irukken...


Lakshmi : Yaru avan love pannuran?


She refused to tell the name...


Lakshmi : Raji sollu... Yaru adhu?


Raji : Asha...


Lakshmi : Asha va? Enna ollura... Appdinu yaru sonna?


Raji : Karthik e dhan sonnan...


Lakshmi : Raji..


Raji : Ama lakshmi avane dhan sonnan...


FLASHBACK


KR plays basketball...


Raji : Mudinacha enkitta irunthu ball pudingadu pappom...


She was Dribbling the ball... Karthik try to catch the ball... But she smartly plays...


While playing karthik starts to talk...


Karthik : Raji... Naa unkitta onnu sollanum...


Raji : Ennada sollu... ( Dribbling the ball )


Karthik : Ennaku konja nallave edho mathiri ya iruku di..


Raji : Ennda 3 dhanush mathiri edhachum probem ah? Solluda... Appa dhan story intresting ah pogum...


Karthik : Aaasai paru... Ennaku andha feeling unkitta eppdi solluradhu nu theriyala... Sonna nee eppdi eduthupa num theriyala... Naa love pannuren...


Raji stops for a second... And again she starts to Dribbling the ball...


Raji : Yaru? ( Mind voice ): If he say my name... How will I face him...

She was blushed... she was waiting to hear her name from his mouth..


Karthik : Rajiii...


She stops Dribbling the ball... Karthik catch the ball...


Karthik : Naa Asha va love pannuren raji...

He said and puts the goal...


Karthik : Goal...


She was rooted to the place... She felt her head was reeling and the whole world spinning around her... Tears rolls down her cheeks... She unable to control her tears.. She thought that sight of her karthik telling that he was loving someone.. She was unable to take that easily...


Karthik : Raji ennachu appdiye ninnutta?


He comes to see her face..


She quickly wipes her tears and composed her feelings...


Karthik : Ennachu raji? Kannu en kalangi iruku? he asked with affection...


Raji : Onnum illa karthik kannula dhosi vizhundhuruchu...


Karthik : Enga kattu?


He softly open her eyes... Tears roll down her cheeks... He takes the dust from her eye by blowing his air into her eyes...


Karthik : Ippa poyiducha?


Raji : Mmm.. Poyiduchu..


Karthik : Naa sonnadhuku nee edhuvum sollalaiye...


Raji : Nee happy na naanum happy dhan...


Karthik : Parrahhaaa... Enna innaku en mella ivlo paasatha katturinga? he asked playfully...


She smiles.. " Summa dhan.. Oru nalllachum paasatha katturene.."


" Karthik..." His mom calls him...


Karthik : Seri raji amma koopiduranga... Naa vandhu ennoda love story pathi solluren...

He winked at her... And ran away...


She stands alone... Suddenly she felt she becomes orphan... She cried loudly as much

she can... She didn't think karthik will love some one... That too Nisha... She didn't even think in

dreams he loves Nisha... Because she hates Nisha... Actually Nisha didn't like her...

Nisha was modern and attitude girl... She was self centered and selfish too...

Her father was rich...Because of her father's richness she dominates others..


Thinking about her... Raji came up with one question...

" How could he love Asha?" Thinking about that her heart pains more... She unable to do anything...She never likes to cry.. But Without her knowledge tears continuously rolls down her cheeks... ... Seeing her crying face... Clouds also starts to cry... Rain water mingled with her salty tears...


Rain was pouring heavily... She stands like a statue with teary eyes...


To be continued...



Author's Note :


Hi friends... I think this part is better than first... I hope u like it... If anyone not like it , I promise I will give my best in upcoming parts...


I swear I'll not disappoint you at the end... Nambunga...


Waiting for your comments...


Please do comment and don't forget to hit the like button...


Edited by Abinaabi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Me first Machi πŸ˜‰

Reserved 😎
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Bubbly , superb da.
As you said ist better than frist part .. but u make Raji cried athuthan konjam kashthama iruku.. .

Karthika surprise panna ipidi oru planning . Paiyan USA going πŸ₯Ί ..

Lakshmi notice Raji's reaction , good friends as usual ⭐️.

Flashback .. nice but Nisha characterku Karthik loving her πŸ˜•
Pity Raji but hope for a twist 😭

Nice update da .. 😊

Timingle update kuduthuruke Bubby ..πŸ‘πŸΌ

Next updateku me waiting dear


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice ... Kasthama iruku karthik loves asha😭 but hope good twist later part... But KR not husband and wife ... I thought they are hubby and wife in part 1... Ok ... Waiting for update ... Thanks πŸ˜‰
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