~~ * SS Endrum Priyamudan * ~~ Part 4 updated in page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys...


I came with my new SS... Don't know if you guys like it or not so I'm just giving a bit of my story here... Will continue it on the basis of your reviews... And one more thing... This SS is dedicated to my best friend who is celebrating her birthday today... ( Sush )


This is my birthday gift to her... Happy Birthday Machi...


Part - 1

A pleasant morning time, the Sun was about to rise, the routine work was going in the street .The street was very broad , each and every house was simply good looking ...Actually it was a quarters for University workers...



She is in the deep sleep... She is sleeping by hugging her cute teddy bear... Without that cute teddy she won't sleep... She is dreaming...Dreaming her favorite recipes... Suddenly a cold water splashed on her face... She got up with the sudden jerk...


Raji : " Pissasu.." She looked at him with wet mixed fiery eyes...

Karthik : " Athai ezhuppa sonnanga... " he said looking at the side wall...

Raji : " Adhuku nu ippdi ezhuppuva ? Raji nu koopittu iruntha naane ezhunhdirchi irukka matena? En dreams ipddi keduthu vittutiye da..." she said in worried voice...


Karthik : "Appdiya madam... Foru your kind information... Naa 15 nimishama indha vena pona pera Thondai keeziyara allavu koopttitu irundhen... Nee ezhundhirikkala... Athai dhan indha idea kuduthanga.."

She glares at him...


Karthik : "Seri appdi enna dreams vandhuchu naanga kedutthu vittom... " he asked


Raji : " Ennoda favorite recipes ellame irunthuchu theriyuma... Chappathi , puri , Idly, dosai,Pongal, Vaadai , gulab jammun, Parrota, Alloo gravy , panneer---


Karthik : " Ey irru iruu.. Nee pattu sollitte pora... Unnakum mattum eppdi di indha mathiri kanvellam varuthu" he asked


Raji : " Adhellam appdi dhan seri nee odi poyi ennaku oru filltter coffee eduthuttu vaa.." she ordered him..


Karthik : Adhuku vera aalu paru... Unnaku coffee pottu kudukka dhan naa B.E padichi irukkena?


Raji : Podanga...

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She got up from her bed... And headed towards the bathroom...


After 20 minutes... she came from the bathroom... Drying her wet hair standing in front of the

mirror...

Karthik came with a cup of coffee... And gives to her...


Raji : " Ennada adhisiyama coffee pottu kudukkura.." she asked in suspicious tone...


Karthik : " Nalladhu panna indha ulagam ippdi dhan sandheegam padum.. Unnaku poyi potten paru enna sollanum.. " he was annoyed...


Raji :" Seri seri thanks... " she said and took the coffee and sipped it... Without a second she spitted on the floor...


Raji : "Auf auf... Thu thu... Cha enna kandraviya da kalandha ippdi kevalamana taste varudhu... " she asked in confusion...


Karthik : Appdiya... Kaalimannu taste kuduva di unnala kandupudikka mudiyala?


Raji : " Pissasu.. Unna... " she was searching a weapon to beat him... She took the pillow and start beating him...


Karthik : " Ey ey vaalikudhu.. vidu di... " he was shouting in pain... But she was deaf at the time...



" Arambichittingala? " A middle aged women came there...


Raji : " Amma enga paru ma eppa parthallum ennkittave sanda poduran... " She was complaining about him like a child...


Karthik : " Edhu naanu unkitta sanda podurana.. Coffee pottukudthadhuku nee dhan enna ippdi Adi Adi nu adikkura... Athai eva pannuradhu naayama neengale sollunga... " he said in innocent voice...


" Eppa...ungalaku panchayathu panniye en kaalam oodidum pola... Office ku time ayiduchu la rendu perum mudhala kellambunga... she ordered and went...


Karthik : Bulb vangunniya...


Raji : " Chi poda..." she throw the pillow on him..


At breakfast


Raji : Ummm... Ada ada unn kaippakuvame thani ma... Pongal semmaya irukku...

There he came ... He is in Formal attire.. Looks handsome.. He was hurry to go to office... He was running out of time...


" Rajiii... " he shouted in hurry...


But she was busy in her work... Tasting the pongal for each and every spoon.. She was not listening to his shouting...



Karthik : " Ey evlo neram di sappudura? Already time 8:15 ayiduchu... Nee pattu ippdi kottittu irukka... " he said in hurried voice...


Raji : " Dei iru da.. Idhu ennamo pudhusu mathiri pesura? Eppavume ippdi dhana povvom... Innaiku enna scene kattura"


He gives glare look at her... And went to take the bike...


Raji " " Ey ey iru da... Naanum varen.. vittutu poyidatha... Amma bye ma... " she was running out of the house...


She came out...But she can able to see only his disappearing... He was already starts the bike and reached the street gate...


Raji : " Poyittan... Korangu... Ennakitta varamleye poyiduva... Appa parthukuren da..." she made in her mind...


Raji : " Ippa namba eppdi poguradhu? Appa kitta ketta... Nambala varuthu thallichiduvanga... Amma kekave vennam... Andha pissasu ku dhan support pannuvanga... Lakshmi ? Ava romba punctuality ache... Vera yaru? she was thinking...


" Ada irukkave irukkan Anna..." she phone up to her Anna...


Raji : " Anna.." she called so lovely...


Vishnu : " Solluma thangatchi... Enna vittu poyittana? Ippa naa vandhu unna pick up pannanum.. Correct ah?" he asked mockingly...


Raji : Gagga poo...

Vishnu : Vandhu thollairuen..


After few minutes... He came to her house...


Vishnu : Unnaku driver vellai parukuradhe ennodaiya pollapa akkitiye di...


Raji : Seri seri... Unnoda pullambal niruthittu... bike edu da...


Vishnu : " Ennaku vennum dhan... Lover pick up panni drop pannu venndiya vayasulla... Thangatchiya pick up panni drop pannittu irukken.. Ellam en neram... " he pollambify to himself... And starts the bike...


In Office


Laskhmi : " Hi Karthik.. " she said in cheerful voice...


Karthik : Hi lakshmi...


Lakshmi : Enga raji?


Karthik : Vazhakkam pollla dhan over ah panna adhan vittutu vandhutten...


She smiles... " Ippa eppdi varuva?"


Karthik : Adhan Pasamalar Anna irukkane avan kuda varuva...


Vishnu : Appada ennaku nooru aayisu...


Lakshmi : Dei adha naanga sollanum da... Neeyalam nooru varusham irunthu enna pannapora?


Vishnu : Enna lakshmi... Naa ellarukum oru role model ah iruppen...


Lakshmi : Dei neeyalam role model ah ?


Vishnu : " Ama lakshmi... Enna mathiri yarum irukka kudathu dradhuku oru role model ah iruppen.." he said and laughs with his usual trademark laugh...


Lakshmi : Kaduvullae podhum da... Kalangathale arukkadha...


Karthik : Seri Raji enga?


Vishnu : " Enna ketta... Nee dhan sollanum raji enga.. " he asked the same question...


Karthik : Un kuda dhana da vandha...


Vishnu : En kuda vandha nu unnaku yaru sonnadhu.. En kuda ava varave illaye...


Lakshmi : " Seri karthik.. nee avaluku phone panni ennga irukka nu kellu..." she asked him to call her..

Karthik phone up to her... But it was switched off...


Karthik : Switched off nu varudhu...


Vishnu : Veetuku try panni paru da...


Karthik phone up to her Athai...


Karthik : Hello Athai...


Athai :" Sollu da... Enna seekirama rendu perum office ku poyittingala? " she asked about them.. So it cleared raji was not there...


Karthik : " Ahan... Vandhuttom athai.. Atha oru mukkiyamana call varudhu... Naa apparam pesuren..." he cuts the call..


Lakshmi : Ennachu karthik... Raji anga irukkala ?



Karthik : Illa laskhmi...


Vishnu : Ennada ippdi sollura.. Innaiku meeting vera irukku... Enga pona?" he was thinking...


Karthik : Ennaku konjam bayama irukku laskhmi..


Lakshmi : Adhellam onnum illa karthik... Ava vandhuduva...


Karthik : " Dei naa edhukum veetuku poyittu vandhuren da..." he told... And take his bike key..


Vishnu : Machan... Ippa edhuku waste ah? Traffic la engeyachum mattti iruppa da... Vandhuruva...


Karthik : "Paravalla da... Anna nagar bus stop la dhan ava iruppa nu nenaikkuren... Naa poyi kootittu vandhuren..." he said and went...


VL looks at each other and laughs...


Vishnu : Poo mavane poo... Konja neram Veyilla thirunchittu vaa...


Lakshmi : Vaa da avan varathukulla namba work mudichidalam...


Both goes to the conference room...


To be continued...



Author's Note :


Hi friends... Romba shock agittingala? Story konjum sumara dhan irukkum...

Naa IF ku vandha pudhusulla indha story ezhudhunen... Adhuku apparam interest ellama vittutten... Dhideerunu indha story update panna ennanu thoonuchu... Adhan panniten...

Neriya mistake irukkum... Adhellam neenga dhan edit pannikanum... Editing vella ungalodadhu... Ennoda close friend dhan eppavume edit pannuva... ( Adhu yaru nu ungaluke theriyum.. πŸ˜‰) Enaku edit pannave theriyadhu... Mukkiyama I am too lazy to correct the mistakes... So if any mistake is there ( Kandippa irukkum ) please give PM to me... Ingey unga paratta kottidathinga... πŸ˜†


Seri story ya pathi enna nenaikkiringa? ... Should I Continue or not? Please write your opinion openly...


Waiting for you comments...


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ammukuty thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Happy birthday teddy and nice start abhi
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Abi πŸ‘
Super unnoda style story and i like it

πŸ‘athu eppadi yenga ponnalum sapadu vida mataiya? πŸ˜†

Raji and her dreams about food loool

Karthi Raji aww cute relationship between the too and funny too i like it different concept

Yay KRVL are back :)

oru sila confusion iruku aana as the story progresses i know it will be unveiled so waiting for that cant wait for the next part do update soon please :)

Hahaha are Raji and Vishnu playing a prank on Karthi venum vitutu ponnala so serves him right

Nice start to the story and its good do continue :)
Edited by Gayathri30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Adadada...starting e semaya iruke ,Abi..Loved it..Loved it..πŸ‘πŸ‘

Raji..hehehe...thongathula koda recepies ninaiputhana?..thinnipandaramo??.πŸ˜†..(Yei ivangala pathi naan engayo keta maathiri iruke)πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Karthik..ada ivan vera..ava nalla dream kandukittu iruntha..atha stop pannitan..πŸ˜†

Oh..sir coffeelam pottu kodukararanu paartha,ippadi bulb kuduthutane..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Pongal a ivalavu nerama saapidrala Raji??..super...paiyan kilambitan athukulla..

Aama KR enga irukaanga?..Raji veetulaya??en??

Inga paaruda...pasamalar vanthuthan epayum kottitu povarama thangatchiya karthik vittutu pogumpothu..Superda..😳

VL..Nice play than..rajiya enga irukanganu theiryalaiyamla...Karthik pavampa...but enaku ithu pidichuruku..πŸ˜‰

Super start...Super title...Super SS,,,athuvum Super friendku...ellam supera irukuβ­οΈπŸ‘πŸΌ

I cant wait for the next part,Pasamalar..Seekarama update pannu..Seriya??...ithu Un pasamalaroda orderπŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Adipaavi Machi... Ennaku sollamaiye oru story ah start pannitaiyaa? 😲 😲

Adha vida shock, it is dedicated to me?? 😲 😲 Birthday gift?? 😲 😲

Serious ah expect pannave illa di... What you have done is too much and what I feel is beyond words... πŸ€—

A HUGE surprise on my birthday... And you have made me feel really special... 😳

THANK YOU SO MUCH MACHI... You have left me dumbfound with this... Life la eppodhum nyabagam vachurupen di... πŸ˜›

I am extremely lucky to have you in my life... Love you forever and ever... ❀️

P.S. - Will come later to comment more properly... I am feeling really proud... Thank You once again di... Love you lots... πŸ˜ƒ

-- Sush πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Happy b day sush...
Nice start... Do continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start Abhi..πŸ‘πŸΌ

Raji mom ah athai nu Karthik koopidran..are they married or relatives staying in the same house ??

Raji is foodie here!!!!..super..πŸ˜†πŸ˜›

As always their tom and jerry fights...cute ones..(which we enjoyed in season 1)

R and V playing some prank it seems...poor karthik..

Wish you update regularly Abhi...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was an awesome story for an awesome friend .
Superb Bubbly ,

Raji foodie apidiya (base yenga irunthu varuthu I know) πŸ˜†

Athai magal Rajiya .. going to same office .. super !

Vishnu annava 🀣

KRVL the foursome is back ...

Pls pls continue Bubbly .. un chella sis is waiting ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammukuty

Happy birthday teddy and nice start abhi

Waiting for the next part

Thank u sis...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gayathri30

Abi πŸ‘

Super unnoda style story and i like it

πŸ‘athu eppadi yenga ponnalum sapadu vida mataiya? πŸ˜†

Raji and her dreams about food loool

Karthi Raji aww cute relationship between the too and funny too i like it different concept

Yay KRVL are back :)

oru sila confusion iruku aana as the story progresses i know it will be unveiled so waiting for that cant wait for the next part do update soon please :)

Hahaha are Raji and Vishnu playing a prank on Karthi venum vitutu ponnala so serves him right

Nice start to the story and its good do continue :)

Thanks for ur comment sis...

Enna pannurdhu sis? Adhuvum enna kudave varudhu... Ennala vida mudiyala...πŸ˜†

Vara updates la confusion lam kojam konjama clear agaum...

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