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Originally posted by: kunakshafan26
its a lovely os i must say we have soo many writers in our forum hats off 👏
Thank u so much. I'm glad u liked it.😊
Originally posted by: kunakshafan26
its a lovely os i must say we have soo many writers in our forum hats off 👏
Originally posted by: abhi_arshilover
Thank u so much for all ur appreciating words. I'm glad that u liked it. Will try to continue if every one want to read.
Originally posted by: lvukunal
Wowww...supperrbbb..awesome...job (Y) mohan chawanni.. <3
Originally posted by: Texie-Shady
Hey ya . I just read your os and loved it totally . I cried the whole way . Especially this part
She really wished that he return today. When she is leaving for school she imagined him saying from her behind, "Aye chawanni, sunna... Mere wish kiye bina hi tum ja rahi ho!" When she turned, she imagined him with open arms, smiling calling her for a hug. But when she went close he vanished like everytime. Brushing it off she started for her school. Well, this is not new for her. She sometimes imagines him and feel more sad when her illusion breaks that she is missing him but he is not and not even tried to contact her. And it even make her angry! To top it up today when she is on her way to home a guy had tried to misbehave with her! And he even commented that there is no one to protect her. Though navika gave him left and right, she is sad that her spiderman is not there to protect her like he promised. She always craved for a father figure when her father died. It was fulfilled by her spiderman but he too left her! That's why she is sad and angry.This part really pierced my heart and I was so close to shred my tears 😭 this one so nice and beautifully written and the last part was so good 👏 I wish u had kept some Mohan's feelings also .Plz write a second part and plz pm me when write more on these characters plz 😃Ps I watching a movie No 1 business man and your story was so nice I got attracted to this and left the movie 😆 it is still playing and I m here replying . Okay so got to go and watch the movie . Lots is missed 😆😉
Originally posted by: angeala95
Wow!! U brought tears to my eyes!! Nbt se related itne time baad kuch padha hai!!
While reading this i just got reminded of one episode of ssn 2 when mohan and nanhi came face to face and nanhi asked him ki 12 saal ek vaade ke saath jeena kya hota hai pata hai aapko??
Truly beautiful!! This gave a really realistic perspective to nanhi's mindset in ssn 2!! She lost her brother, her best friend, her father figure!!
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