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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
i i just want to tell u.. u are one of my fav writer.
dil k nazuk dhaaage is one of my fav ff
thank u so much for pm.
loving your stories.
do continue soon. 😊😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: pihu2june

i i just want to tell u.. u are one of my fav writer.
dil k nazuk dhaaage is one of my fav ff
thank u so much for pm.
loving your stories.
do continue soon. 😊😊😊



thanks I am glad you liked it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
it was beautiful ... really enjoyed reading it...

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Original Twisted Love Story


A Black colour open jeep was riding on the highway roadhaving two people on it...both of them are bestest of the best detectives and had been praised by the government for many times and had been favourite of every citizen and also had hatred in every criminal's eyes..!!! They are favourite of every child as in most of the cases which include children, they give them an inspiration...an inspiration to trust yourselfyour brainyou will power and also..To love your country...without any selfishness If I am not wrong...Yes..!!! You had guessed it correct they are none other than Mayank and Nupur The detectives.They just had the meeting with commissioner of police about their recent case they had solved of business of the fake currency notes.and had been praised by the departmentwhile instead of taking the credit they said it was their duty to serve something against these types of crime.

Mayank where was a serious type of detective who believes in working hardconstantly open his mindnever let it rest for a time...focused determined and a charmerno one can resist herself from his charm...but he never gives any look to any girlhe is just himselfhe don't know..His one look took away anyone's heart...but ignoring all these...he just concentrate himself on his duty...for him his duty has more priority..And no one could replace it...not even girlssometimes it feels he carries and imaginary board stating "No Girls Please..!!! Try another place..." It's not that he had a bad childhoodbroken parent's relationshipinfact he has...most loveable parent's and mostadorable pair of parent's...but yeah..Their financial condition has taught him to be serious and focussed in lifebut he forgot thatby being like this...he had'nt enjoyed his life...and is missing most precious time of his life..

Where Mayank was serious... a bit akdu...and dicipline loving personNupur on the other was completely opposite of Mayank.She is full of lifea girl who is bubbly...cute adorable...sweet... soft spokena huge SRK fana fun loving personand also has sharp braina good fighting skills..And why won't she poessessafter all...Mayank had taught her how to fight in emergencyshe is just an adorable person.she loves Shahrukh...like crazy and can't stand...if anyone could say anything against her Shahrukh.it seems that she has a good childhood..And enjoyed every bit of her life...but the reality is that her childhood had been not so...good as Mayank...her parent's were of just name...they had never given her time..Infactfor about 6 months her parent's didn't knew that she is a detective...seeing her in TV and newspaper...they got to knowshe always craved for parental loveand sometimes because of it..Get jealous...with Mayank..Both Mayank Nupur...hate each other to the coreMayank saying Nupur not being much decipline towards work and where Nupur said him being over sadu...and should change his attitude...a day hasn't gone in which they hadn't fight may be the issue would be of needle sizebut they had to fight..They can't agree to each other like this easily...and in their fight only sometimes solve their cases...both irritate each other to the core...but made the bestest of teams..A world class...team , they had only a thing common between them and that is their sharp brain which enables to catch the criminal before any...severe crime could be taken

They returned to their office making the files about their recent cases, keeping the record for the future use when Nupur said while typing on the computer,"Ye waala case bhi free fund mein jaayega"

Mayank: Kyu

She looked at him as a matter of fact and said,"Payment kon dega"
Realizing the problem he passed the sarcastic smile and said,"Sopresently abhi hum free hain!"
Nupur: Arey haan Mayank free se yaad aayaa...Shahrukh ki nayi movie aayi hain chalo Na chalte hain mazaa aayega...
Mayank: Suit yourself mein nahi jaa raha hoonmujhe koi shauk nahi hain
Nupur:Kya Mayank chalo Na thoda to enjoy kerna sikho mazaa aayega chalo Na
Mayank: Nupur mene kahan Na mujhe nahi Jana and that's mine final decision got that
Nupur (muttering herself): Sadu, ek baar saath chal leta KO kya chalata jata kabhi meri baat nahi maanta idiot.
Mayank: Tumne kuch kahan
Nupur: Menenahi...nahi to...covering herself she asked to tum ab kya karoge
Mayank: Mein jaa ker apni favourite book padhunga bahut time se nahi padhi finally aaj complete ker dunga...

Saying he leftfrom there leaving her mouth was huge open and thought,"Ye kesa insaan hain, mere saath movie nahi jaa sakta but haan ghar per beth ker apni booring novel padhegaGod ji..!!! Kesa insaan hain ye aur mein hoon ki iske peeche diwanirealizing what she is sayingnahi nahi mein nahi...mein bhi pata nahi kya kya sochti rehti hoonchal beta Nupur apni movie dekhne chalte hain

She was enjoying the movie in the theatre at the interval she came out to grab something to it when she felt a hand on her shoulder , she became a little alert and turned swiftly but relaxed seeing a constable there , he handed her a card which stated " Commissioner of Police". She asked him,"Kahan hain VO..." He replied to her,"Car mein"
Sighing that she had to leave her movie she went with the constable towards the exit door .She sat in the car and greeted him,"Good Evening Commissioner Sir, kahiye kese yaad kiya"

Com: Tumhare liye case layaa hoon

Nupur:Okayto chaliye fir hums Mayank KO bhi pick up ker lete hain

Just than she heard Mayank's voice who was sitting in passenger seat,"Humari aise kismat kahantumhe to movie se uthaya hain mujhe to Commissioner Sir Ne meri novel k bahut hi interesting point per pahuchne se pehle hi...utha liya"
Nupur (to herself): Ye to bahut acha kiyato Comm..haan ji Sir to batayiye kya baat hain

He asked the driver to start and told a story to Mayank and Nupur
"Tum dono ne Ajesh Rawal import export ka naam suna hain"

Nupur: Haan Sir, Suna hain bahut kam samay mein inhone kaafi tarakii ker lee hain

Mayank: Aur haan suna hain kaafi bade consignment le rahi hain aur bahut successful hote JA rahe hain
Comm.: Right..!!! But Hume lagta hain ki iss import export business k peeche Ajesh Rawal is business ka maalik kuch aur hi ker raha hain

Mayank: You mean iske track record se zaayeda acha iska off-track record chal raha hain

Comm.: Rightiss off-track record KO pata kerwane k liye humne apne department se ek lady officer KO bheja thaaur uski report k hisaab se bahut bada ghotala chal raha hain wahan per

Nupur: To ab kahan hain ye aapki lady officer usi se saari baat pata chal sakti hain

Comm.:Actually baat ye ki humari vo lady officer Aparna Rao pichle do dino se missing hain aur mujhe shak ki uske gayab hone k peeche Ajesh Rawal ka haath hain

Nupur: Aur aap chahte hain ki ab hum Aparna ki jagah le aur iss saare off-track business k baare mein pata kare

Comm:: Haankyunki mujhe lag raha hain bahut bada racket chala raha hain ye Ajesh Rawal import export k business k peeche

Mayank: Thik hain Sir Hum tayiyaar hain iss racket ka to parda farsh ker ke hi rahenge

Comm.: Good..!! Aur haan Ander entry lene k liye mene tum dono ka intezaam ker diya hain tum dono naam badal ler jaaoge

Telling them their respective names and post on which they would be entering his office he left them to Mayank's house as soon as he left Nupur fumed while entering his house,"Ye to aisa lag raha hain mujhe tumahre jesa banna padega Commissioner Sir ko aur kuch nahi soojha Administrative Officer,chii kitna boring hain aur uper se mujhe tumhari tarah khadoos behave kerna padega ye to sabse bura case hone wala hain meri life ka" listening to her tantrum Mayank retort her back,"Oh..!!! Hellotume kya lagta hain bura sirf tumhare saath hua hain Aare kam se kam tum chup rahogi to kaam per dhayan to de sakogi mera socho fashion photogopher ye bhi koi kaam diya VO bhi very friendly in short tumhare jesa tumhe pata hain tumhare jesa banna kitna mushkil hain..."

"Meri taarif ker rahe ho ya burai..."

"Jo tum chaho...but the main point is I need to be very friendly with models...".Nupur said him teasingly,"Aww..!!! Aur VO baby Mayank se nahi ho paayegaso sad".Mayank said angrily,"Better hain tum apne kaam per dhayan do"

Next morning in the office of Ajesh Rawal import export office a man entered with a Camera hanging around his neck, he reached upto the reception and leaned towards her asking about the studio.He was none other than Mayank
"Hey beautifull I am Alex your fashion photogopher yahan per studio kahan per hain"

Receptionist: Hello Sirshe was pretty much impressed with his personality and ofcourse not who could held herself from Mayank's charm she said smiling to himstraight and first left Sir".He too pass a smile to her saying thank you he moved but came back and said in very firlty way,"Vese aap apne baal khule rakhiye bahut sunder lagti hain..".The girl blushed to core and when he left she opened her hair...unknown to them a pair of eyes were seeing them and somewhere fuming with anger,"Mujhe to kabhi nahi kaha...aur yahan...per receptionist k saath flirt vese to bada ladkiyon se bhaagta firta hain huh...samjhta kya hain vo apne aap ko..".She went upto her and said in her strict tone,"Listen Administrative office kahan hain".Receptionist in a confusing way,"Mam...?"Nupur said in more stern voice,"Mein yahan ki Administractive officer hoon Sonali Mehta "

Receptionist: Ohh..!! Morning Mamyahan se straight and first right..."

Nupur:Okayaur haan ye apne baal bandh ker rakha karogot itsaying she moved awayshe felt so furious on Mayank controlling her urges she moved to the cabin to search for what she had come.

Where Mayank was on the purpose of clicking the photographs of the model was taking the photographs of the other places...not leaving any single place on the other side Nupur was searching every file in the office when she glances that they had an important dealing but the file of that client is missing ..She was searching when suddenly someone enters her cabin she get starlted a bit...soon composing herself she asked in her strict tone,"Tum kon ho...Aur mujhe bina pooche tumhari himmat kese hui yaha aane ki"

Man: Madam Mein yahan ka keeper hoonVO aap nayi hain to saari files ki places aur kitni hain unki jaankari dene aaya tha...

Nupur: Kese maintain ker rahi hain files tumnesab idhar udhar hain koi bhi thik se nahi mil rahi hain

Man: Madam aise baat nahi hain saari files alphabetical order mein lagi hain

Nupur: Acha agar mujhe Slaten Bartey ki file chahiye to mujhe kis section mein milegi S mein ya B mein


Man: Mam Na hi VO aap KO S mein milegi aur Na hi aapko B mein.kyunki Sir K bahut important client hain aur Sir Unki filr khud maintain kerte hain apne cabin mein

Nupur: Thik hain to VO file mein khud jaa ker dekh loongitum jaa sakte ho.

As soon as he left she took a deep breath and sighed and thought,"By God..!!! Mayank ki strict bolna kitna difficult hain kitni baar to meri hasi nikalte nikalte reh gayi...Chal beta Nupur Ye Ajesh Rawal ke cabin mein jaa ker dekhte hain"

She searched his cabin and soon she was able to take Slaten Bartey's file Ajesh Rawal entered the room , introducing herself as their administrative officer she went from is cabin sighing,"Aaj to baal baal bache".Where on the other hand Mayank was getting familiar with the model and were taking her to different areas in order to take photographs, he asked a room to open to the assistant when he said this can't be open , he gets a little furious and told then he'll continue only after talking with their administrative officer, They both met when Nupur told him that the file is in Ajesh Rawal's cabin but she missed the opportunity and asked him,"Tumne bhi kuch pata kiya ya fir model k saath flirt kerte rahe..Vese mene aaj tak tumhe nahi dekhamere se to kitne rookhe tariike se baat kerte ho aur model...usse se to tum bade has has ker baat ker rahe the...hain...!"There was a pinch of jealousy in her tone which he had sensed but not distracting their aim he said to her,"Poore wherehouse ki photos kheech li hain mene..Bas vo "NO ADMIN" wala room band hain vo nahi kiya...".She looked at him at amazed and said,"Goodab baaki ka kaam aaj raat ko...right partner...".He replied to her,"Right".

At Night they entered the office Mayank goes to the "NO ADMIN"room opening it with his nail knife while Nupur's goes to Ajesh Rawal's cabin searching the file, Mayank clicked the photos of the whole room, checking the room fully seeing each bits and particle of the roomcompleting his work he was about to go when he noticed that the room could be open from outside not from insidehe thought for a second when his eyes falls on the iron machine..He switched it on and placed it on the piece of cloth laying there...within few minutes it started burning making the fire alarm to beep, the gaurd came opening the door, Mayank who was hiding came and moved out of the room, he came out wondering where Nupur had been.On the side Nupur got the file seeing what it has in it which is being personally being maintained by him when she saw a fax has been received by the machine she was about to see it when she heard some foot steps she hid herself behind the almirah and saw it was one of the man of Ajesh Rawal , he took the fax and went out, she sighed a relief taking the file she slowly with creepy legs moved out of the cabin and reached upto him,before she could tell him he bombarded her with several questions,"Kahan reh gayi tum, NupurEk file ko dhundhne mein itna time lagta hain kya, aur subh to tumne dekh liya tha na ki vo kon si jagah per hain aur mere hisaab se tumhari yaadaash itni buri bhi nahi hain ki tumhe kuch yaad hi na rahe, tumhe pata hain abhi mene Ajesh rawal k aadmi ko yahan se jaate hue dekha, Thank god..!!! Usne tumhe nahi dekha, agar kuch gadbad ho jaati to, Uske paas gun bhi thi, Nupur kuch to kahyal rakhti apna, ab aise chup kyu...kuch bologi bhiyaa yuhin chup khade khade mjuhe dekhti rahogiaur daant sunni hain kya tumhevese to bada bolti ho..Per ab bolti band ho gayi.Nupur mein kuch pooch raha hoon!!Aur tum hoki!"Cutting him in between she said,"Bas bas basbaba...shaant tum bhi na Mayankvese to kuch nahibolte aur ab dekhokitna bol rahe homein wahan file dhundh rahi thi...tabhi ek fax ayaa usse hi dekh rahi thi...Ajesh Rawal k aadmi ko dekh ker chup gayi...thi...tum bhiitni tension kyu lete ho..I'm fine...".He said in almost whispering tone,"Itni tension isliye leta hoon kyunki mein tumhari bahut care karta hoon".But she didn't heard it correctly and asked him,"Tumne kuch kahan".He realized what he had blurted negatively nodded his head and scolded himself in his mind,"Dude ye to kya bakwaas soch raha hai..Apne kaam per concentrate kar!"They moved to their office to combine all the clues and figure out the real matter behind it.

They discuss their clues when Mayank told her to look at the pictures carefully and explained her,"In pictures ko dhayan se dekho they had only scissors and knife nothing sort of swing machine was there in this room".To which she analyze,"That means in this room only cutting is done nothing else..".He said,"May be...but the main point is this rejected pieces of cartonsNupur...itna bada conginment har baar reject ho ker aa jata hain".She told him about her clues,"Ye dekho Mr Slaten Bartey ki file, ye Ajesh Rawal ka sabse bada client hain and everytime whenever the consignment goes he rejected him , fir bhi everytime he sends a big order to them, aur to aur insurance amount consignment amount se bahut bada hainye dekhosamjh mein nahi aa raha hain aakhir aisa bhi kya iss client mein ki ye har baar isse hi apna sabse bada order bhejta hain".He said,"Ho na hoye in consignment ki shipment k bhejne aur reject hone k peeche aur bhi koi bada kaam kerta hain , ab to jab agla conginment reject hoker aayega tabhi pata chalega..".Nupur said,"Aur agla consignment aa raha hain kal".Mayank told her,"Vo bhi boriwali k good down mein".She looked at him with impressive and said,"Waah Mayank kya baat hain.".He smiled a bit but regaining his posture coming back to his sadu avtaar he said,"Ab baatein kam aur kal ki tayiyaari kerte hain"

Next Day they reached the gooddown and met a person named Abdul, he was their khabri who gave them information about the Ajesh Rawal's business he told,"Mayank Bhai, ye jo banda hain ye apne aap mein hi bada tedha hain jab yahan se conginment jata hain tab hardly koi security hoti hain but jab consignment reject hoker ataa hain tab itni tight security hoti hain ki koi panchi bhi nahi aa sakta bina permission k".Mayank said to him,"Yehi to pata kerna hain humne Abdul ek chota sa kaam karega humara".He spoke something in his ear while he nodded his head.At night when the consignment came the cartons were placed in the storage area and everyone left to come in the morning for the rest of the work,from two of cartons Mayank-Nupur came,they with the help of Abdul hid themselves thereThey checked the cartons to analyze what has been they were hiding in these rejected cartons but on checking they found nothing Mayank said,"Yahan to clothes k alawa aur kuch nahi hainKya hota hain yahanSlaten Bartey kon si country hai".She replied,"Holland".Mayank analyzed,"Aur Holland mein aisa kya milta jo yahan per bahut keemti haintabhi to insurance ka amount original amount se bahut bada hota hain".Nupur said,:"Iska matlab kuch bahut kimti cheez lag ker aati hain jo yahan per bahut kimti hai..lekin kya..".Mayank analyzed,"Holland mein kya milta hain dairy products, Tobacco,sugar,Oil...Kya...".He was thinking and thinking when Nupur's eyes fall on the solitare diamond of ring she recalled when on encounter with Ajesh Raal in his office he told everything about of her diamond ring just looking at it something clicked and she said,"Diamonds..".He asked in confusion,"Diamonds..??? Are yyou sure...".Nupur said,"100% let's check again".They checked the cartoons and found a diamond piece at each cloth they took a piece out and to check whether it's real or not Mayank applied it on the mirror, since a real diamond only can cut the glass, so it has been proved that they does the smuggling in the face of import export.Mayank said,"To diamonds ki smuggling hoti hain yahan se nakli diamonds jaate hain aur fir asli diamonds reject consignment mein aa jaate hain aur sabko lagta hain ki ek aur consignment reject ho gaya..Great".Just than they heard sound of clap, he was none other than Ajesh Rawal she said with evil grin,"Good very good!!! Finally tum logo ne pata ker liyalekin ab marne k liye tayiyaar ho jaao".Mayank said,"Tum itni asaani se nahi bach sakte".Ajesh Rawal said ,"Pehle khud ko to bacha lo..le jaao in logo ko".They tried hard to freed themselves but couldn't both of them separated, Mayank thought where Nupur had been going he shouted her name , she looked to him with a pleading gaze but both of them were helplesshelpless to save themselevesHelpless to save each othershe just were seeing each other may be for the last time or may bein a hope that they will meet...but one thing was common it was showing pain and care for each other.soon they get's separated to different directions towards the path of their death.

Hold On Hold On..This is not the end...Wait for the furthur consequences...Don't you want to know..what happens next..!!!😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice os dear and I read ur all os from ur previous gallery except twisted love (another) story ur all os r beautifully written dear I luvd ur narration and eagerly waiting for both os update plz dear if possible pm me when u give nxt update
Edited by sheetal1979 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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superb. loved sadu mayank and chulbuli nupur.
waiting for next part.
😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sheetal1979

Nice os dear and I read ur all os from ur previous gallery except twisted love (another) story ur all os r beautifully written dear I luvd ur narration and eagerly waiting for both os update plz dear if possible pm me when u give nxt update




Thank you so much gor reading all my od..

I have even provided lunks to ss as well in index


I'll surely pm to once i give another update.

I m really thankfull
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: pihu2june

superb. loved sadu mayank and chulbuli nupur.
waiting for next part.
😳



Thanks i'll update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: shafy_MN




Thank you so much gor reading all my od..

I have even provided lunks to ss as well in index


I'll surely pm to once i give another update.

I m really thankfull

no thanks dear thanx to u and all writers who gave such beautiful story and in last 2 monthd I read all Mayur stories os ss and ff I read ur all Mayur stories os ss ff all and hope o r day u complete ur story "sreendipity" so thanx to u dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sheetal1979

no thanks dear thanx to u and all writers who gave such beautiful story and in last 2 monthd I read all Mayur stories os ss and ff I read ur all Mayur stories os ss ff all and hope o r day u complete ur story "sreendipity" so thanx to u dear


Thank you Dear.. really I have no words. Being just a newbie in writing..I have never thought my ideas my stories will be loved my you guys to this extent.

Regarding serendipity, I'll try to repost it. The main issue is I lost the touch and now I have to ho back to that state of mind again. Give me sometime let me think about it. I'll update you soon.
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