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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update dear
love it

tasha playing with baby lovely

ah baby love dutta enjoy his company😃

like the views of dutta about working women😊

animal dutta great
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thanks for pm dear

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey hammie awesome job dear so dutta cleared his intention on letting naku to work ,naku and rani conversation were also good and nakku teasing to him in the morning.dutta finding chance to romance while nakkku on phone what a badmaash and then they talk about munno sounds interesting thanx for lovely update and pm. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsem lovely munno love dutta and nakku raani conversation dutta ram conversation and nakku calle him animal wow and munno teases dutta and the last scene was really love so nakku like his hairy chest and they think about child
thanks for commenting and for enjoying it.wanted it to be light hearted after thepomp and ceremony of saagi...xxxhammie
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reserved ...will be back soon :)
listen sharmillee.tim tim..many thanks for your x2 feed backs on the saggai episodes..why are you such an angel Daya? ..makes me look like a heartless devil for not having the common courtesy of penning a thank you ..do you think i can do it now😳..you're such a lady..

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Hammie mein aagai to read & comment on this marvelous piece of work you stayed up to complete...straining to keep those eyes of yours open :P hope you got some sleep in there though.
tu meri PR bun ja..and my doctor too...haaa
ok chal lets get started - Chapter 19 : "Time...thou ceaseless lackey of eternity"

aww what a cute baby...and Naku swiftly picks him up and hands him to her saab...and he too has managed to take the baby with no problems...with one hand under and the other around...kya hold..so protective and the baby of course likes him ...who doesn't right :P
I thought i'd explore the paternal side of Dutt's..even I fell inlove with lil'en
Rani & Naku chat...it was nice to see the ladies have a moment of sharing...they can be great support for each other in th future...hope thier friendship goes strong :)...
I did'nt envisage a frienship .but can be looked into thanksfor the tip
ab Ram & Dutta's chat ..lol...just as casual as Rani & Naku's ...talking about future plans...in both cases...loved the convo about sending wife to work...and Dutta's reply to Ram "two halves don't make a whole ..two complete persons make a whole...something defo to think about...and his reply to why he 'supports' her ...very well written ...giving her the opportunity to have her dreams...u gotta love this man :D ...and he lightens the mood beautifully...ahhaha love that Ram's question got him choking on his drink lol...love these too...well at least even if not immediate...he has plans to have kids in future...Dutta also had a onther chance to further thrash out the idea of equal opportunities offered to both genders

D's answer to Naku's question about complexion of skin was well written...loved the way Major has given his answer to her :) ...oh LOL at his one liner ...he is one hungry beast...well at last wen it comes to her...i can't say the same about actual food :P
loved doing this part..color issue much taken about in uk ..the whole business of racisim...so yes i didwant to explore it way..
wow Ram was quick to grasp onto Dutta's comments from night before...lol...answering Kala's thoughts about Naku having no need to work ...
Ram's possible change in ot look ,of course bigging up Dutta's image..
aww Dutta is feeding munno...how cute...that baby really likes him eh :P lmao now way he cried ...put himself to Dutta chest and yanked a chest hair LOL ...poor Major ...
sigh .phulwari..for all those who recognise the phrase from last year..
I liked the bit where they both go to Bappa...and what dutta asks for is very wise lol...and the last bit about being a good husband ...very touching scene
i enjoyed writing this part ..for wisdom is what we need for discerning and living life,a divine wisdom..more precious than material gains
naughty dutta using the chance while she is on the phone to take advantage haha...LOL he's going to shave of his chest hairs heehee i thought this might pop up in his mind...but of course Naku likes them no...she won't let him do it :P both talking about munno :) and we all know why lol ...
thought I would give every one a jolt by him thretening to go cheekna on the chest..chi chi chi.pooh poohed the idea. no way
great update hammie...loved it alot...continue soon...take care...love you lots...phir milenge chalte chalte

THANK YOU Daya ! tussi great ho! xxhammie
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey dear Hamiee🤗
First of all thanx a million for the wonderful update and pm ... 🤗 I know how hard it must be for u ...but the commitment towards ur work which u fulfill always..thanx 🤗
thanks for being so supportive..emoticon lady..
So dutta is content now 😉 that he has his got ..his love and life the women he loves ..
yes.he is calm about the fact that she is formally his..duniya ke samane bi..
Aww dutta holding the baby 😳 And naku giggling hehheh ..baby loving dutta ofcourse sher pe sabko pyar aata hai ..
yeah undoubtedly sherro is a real killer!..appeals to both young and old
So the 2 women sharing there thoughts ..especially naku wants to know how rani manages it all ..but I guess that's how it works ..U grow into it ..it's hard but then it's love that keep them
feelings of Service men's wives...
together even they are far ..Loved how rani explained it all to naku 😳 And Naku to content to get her life and love dutta ..
well she has to she has made an informed choice!
I beleive u must have enjoyed writing the Convo between dutta and ram 😉 Hain mein marjawaa ..love major supporting his women ..well every one have there views ..but happy to know dutta"s thoughts ..love ya for this ...
yes I did suhana ,these are beliefs I uphold all with many other friends from the forum ..I snicerly hope
Haila ram asking dutta about babies 😉 😆 Abhi Delhi door hai 😉
enjoyed that remark su.haaahaa .yeah right!
Waise they will be leaving for there respective jobs soon na 😳
afraid so dearie...kyon judai ke track nehi chayai kya?..sorry girlie that's life!
Hain yeh kya kar diya aap ne ..the way dutta described his feelings for her 😍 dutta will be a death me ...Iam speechless ..
no iam just happy he opened his gob to a woman!
Haila he is not using crutches ..that's great .
I thought I didn't make a ho ha about it that's why i brought it out
Poor naku ..sach mein jahanwar ho ap Saab! 😉 Loved it :.Gyan guru major dutta ban gaye Naku ke pyar mein ... 😉
I Suspect he likes being reffered to as an animal..
The breakfast scenes btwn all were great yaar ..awww only baaji is missing from the scene .
yeasss Baji was certainly missed.
Haila naku is testing dutta"s baby handling skills 😆 But he passed with flying colors
she just wants to see how he will look like as a daddy..so she wasn't going to miss this golden opportunity
So everyone left ..ganpat wanted take naku along but dutta said NO that he will drop her ..awww ..
well he wanted to be alone with his future wife..let him off for his pushy behaviour with in laws
The last part mein kya bolo ...Naku is indeed getting besharam and teasing dutta ..dutta will eat her alive 😆 the last part is for all the Dutta''s passion moves and passes lovers, on the forum..which may be many...

Breath taking update 🤗❤️ thanks suhana for the single red rose..the lovely commentsfrom you...hammie smiling...xxxhammie

Thanx alot for the Precap ...will wait for the nxt part ...U take care 🤗


Thank u Hamiee🤗

Love and hugs
suhana🤗❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago
like always you are amazing hamlet ,loved the up date specially abt dutta intereaction with ram abt woman empowerment & munno is so cute 😊 dutta is perfect man & i 'm sure a great husband & father in future , anxiously waiting for the next edition ,isse tarah likhtey raho aur hum sab are waiting anxiously 😊
hellooo naku..and thankyou for your lovely ,encouraging,comments...sure thing I write to give you all pleaure and joy ..with the hope of reviving past memories of LTL1.xxhammie
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: brvr

It was a completely relaxed feeling with this update, just the way dutta felt in the opening line . The relaxed feeling was also from the writers end as well brver.relaxed that the saagi ws over ..well nearly.. Liked the not so serioius chat of friends about life in army, wife, familly and work. Nakku too getting all the firsh hand gyan of being married to the man in the forces, good she learns of it beforehand.just simple day to day thoughts ,nevertheless,revelant in working couples live. Dutta is the real hero here, his views of why the woman needs to work if she wants to was too good. He doesnt see himself the family way in the immediate future, ofcourse he wouldnt, as he is not gonna messup his precious time with nakku so soon😆.

He has his plans cutout well...well interesting! may be I should do a chit chat between them regrding having babies straight after marrige.not sure though ..is he going to keep his time with her first? or think about filling the house up with the fruit of his loins haa haa ..,well for his mother's sake if nothing else??
Naku in a naughty mood nd she is teasing him 😃with the baby nd testing him as well if he could become a good father himself. Dutta did a decent job of it and he knows how to avenge this unwarranted hardship, moreso with the constant chest hair pulling by nakku and the baby. Poor guy almost shaved it to save from further agony.
have to confess I was hell bent on stressing his hairy chest in his episode!😉
My my! dutta was too mean when he outrightly rejected Ganpat from taking nakku to the dera. Kind of abusing his power here🤔, he will decide where she stays already, cant complain as i too like this possessive attitude, he wants her for himself, but still... How on earth will he manage without her around i wonder? this is it..we know what he is really like when it comes to her..he doesn't know who he is gunning ..mind you she didn't complain either did she ..kinda of just went along with it..sly kitten..how he will manage don't know yet?
Myself again pleasantly surprised when dutta talks about the reason for the obsession our society has towards fair complexion. This is another scourge of our society, god alone can tell when we can get over it listen brvr thanks for clocking on to this part..low esteem..biggie issue ..low morale /self esteem has to be raised in a people..but it does not come ovr night ..it takes genertions ..but some one has to make a start!!!...ties in with the Slavery scenario..?
Nakku pagal hogayi hain, sher ke muh pe hath daal rahi hain aur sochti hain bachke nikal jayegi,
haaahaaa oh my word! that's just wicked ..coming out of you..my eyes are watering with laughter...and me tummy s wobbling...!!
does she doubt his ability or is she indirectly inviting him😉, only Bappa knows nd ofcourse Hammie will tell. yeah right...
Thanx Hammie dear, will wait for the next one for sure, TC. thanks for your lovely comments dearest..always wait for them ..well all week..xxxhammie

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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update, liked the N and Rani convo and how D fully understands why women need to work,not just for money!
i was surprised the little munno liked D and D was caring in his own way.The update was fantastic, waiting as usual for the next!!!!!!
thanks norey
oh noreyyy ray of sunshine..thanks for your great comments.so munno pasand aye thujhe ..mujhe bhi .. me to loved the little cuddle pack hai...any way next one coming up ..xxhammie
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prncz

please raj...first and fore most pardon me for not formally tendering many thanks for your lovely x2 comments on par 1and 2 of chapter 18...mafa ker dene ..I said sorry to Daya as well...without taking on your comments .i just went and Posted my chap 19..suhana was badgering me to say thank you as well, but I said to her dont tell me what to do! .. I mean the great infallible major Dutta...but still sorry raju ban gaya gentleman...haaa haa hussi the phesssi
hi hammie .🤗 wonderful updat e
loved Dutta views on nakku wrking😛
enjoyed ,,dutta Ram convo and NAkku Rani convo
glad you enjoyed..real problems people might face ,thought will touch on them lightly
Aww the Cake of the highlight was Munno ,, he is cho chweeet .. and he loved Sheroo uncle dutta instantly 😳
yaar me to just loved he babes..just loved him .my little chubby munno
loved naughty nakku who made dutta play with munno ,,the sight was a swwet and cute
daddy bun ke kaise dekhe ga major shaib
Dutta shaving off his hair hahah no way --nakku wnt let him 😆
yesss no way phulwari ..yaad hai naaa .. and all the ccc jokes about his hairy chest
also lovd the fact that dutta wanted to drop nakku he actually wanted to spend as much time with her as he can,,he cannot survive without her for day , how will he manage whn she is in dera
i am sure he will camp outside her wrk place
just loved thisss remark ..milion canadian dollars yaar haaa..he'll be done for being a perv! woh ladies hostel hai.haaa ..mind you Bajiwould have done it for sure
Loved this update hammie and thanks for the regular updates and awesome journey of major dutta 🤗
thank you my deraest raj ..xxhammie ...my fav.ff writer..ahem ahem

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