PreRish OS : Zindagi Gulzar Hai - Page 3

Originally posted by: -RD-

Ye 500 words se zyaada tha na ? ek aur likho aisa hi 😆

words kaun count kartha be.,.. words pe math jaa bhaavnao pe jaa... ...
kyun nahi .. tu prompt de ,. I will try to write one this weekend

Originally posted by: Grey-licious

Awww it was such a beautiful OS Munni 🥰

Veejaj

Loved it 😍

Thank you Kriti 🤗💔

Originally posted by: oa2019

very nice & organic story.

Thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

words kaun count kartha be.,.. words pe math jaa bhaavnao pe jaa... ...
kyun nahi .. tu prompt de ,. I will try to write one this weekend

haan likho let me socho ...aajkal to tum essay bhi nahi likh rahi na to yahi sahi show mein prerish negligible sahi os mein kami nahi honi chahiye cause they keep us happy

Originally posted by: -RD-

haan likho let me socho ...aajkal to tum essay bhi nahi likh rahi na to yahi sahi show mein prerish negligible sahi os mein kami nahi honi chahiye cause they keep us happy

haan essays ke liye we have to wait for "Sahi samay" like RB .. 😎
@bold .. bilkul ... achchi si prompt socho

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

rone se kya hota, hasso ji 🤗🤣

Ekdam correct bola🤗

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Woohoo!

How delightfully charming!

After reading that VP bit in your OS, I expect Mehra to blurt it out in Prerna's presence. Come on Mr Mehra! 🤣

This OS has made my expectations skyrocket. I liked how you maintained a positive aura and kept it free from intruders.

All the conversations were beautiful and profound carrying great hopes for the future.

A night at the Sharmas with PreRish sharing a bed is our dream. At least your OS made us visualize such things with sheer beauty and precision. ❤️

RD ji got her VeeJaj here. 🤣

Cookie ji 🤗

Mehra ji is such a light and fun catalyst

intruders .. NO entry lol

their conversations have to be profound
thank you ji 🤗

yess Poo ka hi prompt tha ussi ki demand thi that I wrote this 😆

Originally posted by: MR21

This is such a perfect feel-good story. Dil khush kar diya Munni🤗

I can't express how happy I felt after reading this story. The doubt that they felt before coming to Sharma's which turned to happiness after they were received with all rituals. I loved Prerna's talk with Veena, she told her Anurag's truth, Bajaj's innocence, and his care towards her👍🏼. Veena being the elder understood the dynamics of their relationship, their silent eye talks, their communication through silent gestures❤️. Kukki got an extended family and their love and he got a maa with a family.

Mr. Mehra threw a googly on Bajaj in front of everyone🤣.

Bajaj is guilty, but I liked how Prerna said she wants to live in the present, not in her past. I think even he should stop living in past and think about his present & future with her. Veena and Bajaj teaming up against Prerna😆. They shared a bed. They got their gifts and an official bidaai of Prerna. The ending❤️.

Now my expectations have increased from tomorrow's episode, even though I know we won't get something like this.

Awesome OS, Loved it Munni❤️

Ramya 🤗

itna bada comment :v

the initial apprehension was expected for the unfavorable relations they have but then communication and confiding the truth before it's too late helped Veena not to misjudge Bajaj

their silent talks are my fav , bina kuch kahe hi sab kuch keh dete hain

Mr.Mehra has to be there.. when he can throw his Boss off guard .. yahan toh hona hi tha 🤣

When you accept what life has offered to you with open mind and conviction life will become easier and that's precisely Pre did she left her past behind

yess they are Maa and beta now without her knowledge which makes her scoff 😆

your comments are always to read u give a synopsis of the fiction

Thank you Ramya

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

Thank you Niyati 🤗

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Originally posted by: Manasi_16

Wow Munni! This is such a good, such a happy story...made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside

The bond between RB and the Sharmas is so well depicted, esp with Veena Maa. She sees her daughter happy with her new relationship and that is all she needs to accept RB...and RB gets his Maa😳 The scene where Veena Maa asks them to stay the night is so cute❤️

Even if we get 1% of this tomm (which I know we won't 😳), I will be satisfied!

Thank you for writing this 🤗

yess she sees P's happiness and at the end that's what matters for the parents ... yes RB gets his Maa

Thank you Manasi 🤗glad u liked it

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Awesome 🤗👏

I really wish we vet to see something like this in the show

But who am I kidding! In the show these moments will be spoilt by Mr. Basu 😡

So I am very happy that you wrote what we Prerish fans dream about

thank you, glad you liked it
@bold - as expected