ff: Main Aggar Kahoon(part4: page4)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys, I read a lot of ff's and to me they are my mushy gushy dose of the day, the lovey dovey ness that I need everyday. So this ff is dedicated to those others who need their dose of hope, life and love of the day just like me ;) Hope you like it.

By the way, in this ff there's no meera, no piya :D only pure love ;)

Part 1

Jai opened the door to find her hanging the painting on the wall, man was she gorgeous. She was wearing a red saree and her hair was hanging down all straight and bright. He looked at her up and down noticing the payal on her feet and the house keys on her hip. As she stood there on the stool trying to hang a painting, Jai was creeping up on her from behind. As he grew closer to her she turned around and nearly fell off the stool, but was caught by Jai.

They both stared into each other's eyes. Bani had never looked prettier. They were both gazing in each other's eyes when Rano and Ranveer came by and started to giggle at them. They went next to them and snapped their fingers. Jai and Bani both shyly looked away and went in different directions. Rano and Ranveer giggled. It was almost going to be a week that Jai and Bani had recently married and they were still shy and awkward around each other.

It was dinner time and everyone gathered around the table for a nice meal. Bani and Rano were serving everyone. Everyone was saying how delicious the food was.

Jai: "Wow masi, this is the best meal ever"

Masi: "You like it"

Jai blew a kiss at Masi and said it was the best meal ever.

Masi: "Really, then you should kiss the person who actually deserved it"

Jai: "What do you mean?"

Masi: "Today, Bani cooked the meal"

Jai: "Oh, so I guess I should give her a kiss huh?"

Bani started to blush and she excused herself and ran away. Ranveer nudged Jai to go after her. Jai ran after her. They ran up the stairs, passed the twelve rooms of the Walia Mansion but they just kept running. Everyone at the table giggled. Finally they were on the roof and there was nowhere to go. Jai had finally caught her, she couldn't run anymore. She stood there trying to catch her breath when she noticed the view. It was gorgeous. The city lights reflected amongst the mountains and gave a purple dew across the clouds and the sunset. It was the most beautiful thing she had ever seen.

She was admiring the view when a gust of wind came and blew her saree in Jai's direction. She shyly blushed and tried to hide herself. Jai came near her and wrapped her in her saree. They stood there hugging in front of the magnificent view of the city.

They gazed at each other, Jai kissed Bani's hands and Bani turned to the side and blushed. Jai went downstairs to enjoy his meal that Bani had made for him.

Bani was still on the roof, thinking. She thought how could she have it all. She had the perfect life, her great loving husband, a great household. She had it all. She feared if it would vanish with a blink of an eye. It was too good to be true.

She pinched herself to see if she was dreaming or not and then went downstairs to join the family.

I'll continue tonight, If I'm inspired and get enough comments. :D

Riya 😳

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simmi_89 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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continue soon babe 😆

u know i love this cute shtuff 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Riya,

That was a great start...loved it and cant wait for you to continue!!
Ria xx 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Riya, gr8 start hun. Plz cont. soon! Luv ya!
Chevarra
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great start.
Please continue soon can't wait to know what is going to happen next.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely start!! glad that jb are already married 👏

yeh dil maange more!!!! pls continue soon!!! 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2

The next day, the sun rose and Bani snuck out of bed to take a shower. Jai took a long stretch and noticed that Bani wasn't in bed. He woke up and he heard the shower and he knew Bani was in there so he went back to sleep.

Bani came out of the shower and was drying her hair. She flicked it from left to right and droplets of water splashed on Jai's face. He opened his eyes and Bani was still splashing her hair around. He came from behind her and hugged her.

Jai: "So Mrs. Bani Walia how are you today?"

Bani: "I'm fine, you?"

Jai: "I would be better if you would give me a morning kiss"

Bani: "Ok"

Jai leaned in to give her a kiss then Bani turned away,

Bani: "Ewww, go brush your teeth" and she giggled and ran away.

Jai: "Are, yaar, phirse bhag gayi"

Jai got ready for the day with his power tie and suit. He went on his laptop to read the news. It was the same old news, srk dropped a tissue and someone dove in mud after it, stock markets are the same. He went downstairs for breakfast and sat at the table with everyone.

He saw Bani and she never looked more gorgeous with her wet hair. As Bani was making the tea, Jai was eating toast and was pretending to read the paper. Everyone else went on about how much work they had to do that day.

No one had noticed that Bani and Jai were staring at each other the entire time. Suddenly Jai winked at her and Bani got distracted and accidently dropped the salt in the tea. Bani noticed what she had done when she tasted it, she didn't' know what to do, everyone wanted tea fast.

Jai knowing what Bani had done, said, "Bani where's the tea, I need it" and smiled at her.

Bani didn't know what to do.

She came up to Jai and gave him the first cup "Here you go, tell me how it is" and she winked at him.

Jai knew something was wrong with the tea, but he drank it anyway.

Everyone said how good the tea was. Rano noticed that Jai was sweating and turning red.

Rano: "What happened why are you sweating are you okay"

Jai: "Yea, I'm fine."

Ranveer: "God, you're making a puddle on the floor"

Bani just giggled.

Jai: "Water, water, water" and panted hard.

Bani: "Jai, what's wrong are you okay?" and laughed

Jai: "Yea yea, nothing is wrong."

Jai looked at the tea and noticed that red chilli powder was mixed in with the tea. He just laughed and went on his way to work.

Hope you liked it

Riya 😃

Edited by khwaboon_mein - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey Rivya..
love this ff.. it is so cute.. aww.. jb are cute.. specially.. jai.. man.. i havent went to my la la land.. in long time.. thanks for that.. now i am in my la la land.. 😳

but the only problem is that.. i have to study.. for precal.. and i dotn know.. one thing.. on it.. omg.

anyways.. sorrie about that.😕
back to ur update.
loved it.. aww poor jai baby.. had to have.. tea with mirchi and salt..
omg.. that is so sad.. 😳
but just love that he actually.. had that tea.. really.. loved this two updates..😳😳😳

you have to continue soon.
as i need this inspiration to write my next update.. which i have to do this thursday.. so please do write.. ur next update.. sooon
thanks..
nir❤️
Edited by nir_jaanu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆
Jb is toooo cute
i m loving it
plz cont soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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haila

this is soooo cute!! 😳

me so luvin it!!

plz cont soon!!!!

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