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Posted: 5 years ago
#51
Tq fr ur patience guys ..held with sis mrg..so can't able to update
Given small update will try to give long in next update

Dedicated to Jasmine n bani who r regularly texting me fr updates..😳

Kittu pushed him
Rishi shocked
Kittu hold her head
Rishi got tensed: tanu r u ok
Kittu closed her eyes tightly
She is getting some flashes
Kittu hold her head
Rishi hold her shoulders
Kittu: y I'm getting this unusual feeling .Im.feeling like I already experienced this feeling
Rishi.smiled
He went into thoughts
Flashback:
Tanu n rishi married with kb blessings
Tanshi started on bike
Rishi is driving .tanu kept her hand on his shoulder
Rishi turned his head back
Rishi: oyy my dear wife..is it way to hold ur hubby
Tanu understud his intention
She blushed
She hold his waist and leaned on him
Rishi: perfect
He started driving
He stopped vehicle in middle
Tanu confused
Tanu: rishi y u stopped here
Rishi: arey stop ur kaun banega karodpathi ...first get down
Tanu got down confusingly
Rishi parked bike aside
n came to her
Tanu: rishi Kya karna chahthe hein thum
Rishi: bahuth karna chahthe hein ...bt u r not allowing me
He said with mischief smile
Tanu blushed
Tanu: rishi first let's go later u can do ur naughtiness
By saying this she abt to go towards bike
Rishi hold her hand n pulled towards her
n hugged her tightly
Tanu z shocked by his sudden hug
Bt later she too joined her hands
She too hugged him tightly
They r njying the closeness
Later tanu released her hug
Tanu: arleast now let's go
She said looking into his eyes
Bt his eyes not giving permission
Tanu: rishi wat ?
Rishi kept his finger on his lips n signed her
Tanu is shocked
Tanu: kiss...no no rishi not now
Rishi faked anger
Rishi: if u won't give...I won't come to home ...I vl stand here itself
Tanu hold her head
Tanu: ur really kid rishi
Rishi: tanu I'm waiting...u decide let's stay here..r v go
Tanu: ok clz ur eyes
Rishi: y
Tanu: arey clz ur eyes
Rishi: no cheating na
Tanu: no
Rishi clzed his eyes
Tanu went towards his cheeks n kissed him
Rishi opened his eyes
Rishi: Yar...too much...where I asked ..where u gave
Tanu: I vl give kiss to kids like this only
By saying this she started running
Rishi: u cheater cock I won't leave u
He said n started running towards her in order to catch her
She ran n hide beside a tree
She slowly tried to c whether rishi is coming r not
She didn't find him
Now she looked around
It is full of trees
Like fully forest area
She got tensed
At that time some one kept hand on her
Of course he is rishi
Rishi: pakad gayi
Tanu who is tensed hugged him
Rishi understud she is scared
He too hugged her
n carassed her hair
Rishi: arey tanu...y fear when ur rishi is here
Tanu lukd at him
Now she herself when towards his lips
N held his lips
Rishi is surprised by her sudden action
Bt later he to allowed her
It turned into deep liplock
They kissed like this is the last day
Later due to lack of breath they released kiss
They both looked into each other
Tanu can't able to bare his mischief eyes
she down her head n hugged him
Rishi too hugged her
Rishi: ok now let's go
Tanu agreed
They both again started their journey

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Posted: 5 years ago
#52
Awesome update😳
Rishi n tanu cute chemistry ❤️
Their sweet nok jhok❤️
Loved to the core❤️
Waiting for the next
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Posted: 5 years ago
#53
wow so beautiful update.Love tanu rishi romantic fb.Plz uodaup sooner
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Posted: 5 years ago
#54
What an update dear wow...wait is worth it ...really loved it ... waiting for more n more ... update soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#55
thanks for the dedication.didnt get pm.
krithika saying that she has experienced this before was nice.bike ride scene was so romantic. tanshi hug was sweet n romantic .rishi expected lip kiss but tanu gave him cheek kiss saying that she gives only cheek kiss to kids was funny.tanu hugging rishi in fear was emotional. liplock was very romantic
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Posted: 5 years ago
#56

Rishi who is in his dream world came out of thoughts when he heard kittu voice

Kittu: shit... she said looking around

Rishi looked at her confusingly

Rishi: wat happened

Kittu : hey mr first of all tell me wr I m first

Rishi: ofcourse on the bed

Kittu glared at him

Kittu: should I laugh fr this bloody joke

Rishi: ur wish

Kittu got up irritatingly

Kittu: its waste of time to talk with u..let me go

By saying this she rushed outside

She saw jiyu n akki talking with each other

Kittu: u guys here..

Jiyu smiled

Jiyu: wr ever kittu di goes jiyu follows her

Kittu lukd at akki

Kittu: then u wat u doing here

Akki: wr ever jiyu goes her prince follows her

Jiyu blushed

Kittu: uff ithni drama

Aki: okk cool krits...this is gr8 akshay kumars house

Kittu: really

Akki: ofcourse

She saw rishi coming towards them

Kittu: then wat this guy doing in ur house that too in the room wr im staying

Akki: oh rishi ji...he is family friend

Kittu saw rishi who is looking at her with mischief smile

She remembered the kiss they shared

Kittu closed her tightly

Kittu to herself: arey kittu control..dont fall fr his trap...

Kittu: ok im not going to stay here even sigle minute..i cant tolerate this guy

She said and rushed from there

Jiyu: arey di..wait im coming

Before jiyu reached kittu she left the place

Jiyu: uff this di na...cant control her anger n cant control her happiness..now c jiju hw she left me n went

She pouted her lips

Akki: arey darling..im there na don't worry I vl drop u

At that time ahman came there

Ahana: rishi wr is di...u know wat I prepared gobi parota specially fr her..u know na she love it

Jiyu: ahana di ..kittu di left now itself

Ahana felt sad

Ahana: I thought to spend time with her

Rishi: arey ahana..chill...u know wat...this time ur tanu di is same like u...sherni types.. ..if she get angry ..mooh thod dungi vo...so v have to handle her carefully..n don't worry..very soon the time vl come wr v can spend time together fr ever

Man: ha ahana wat bhai said is right...our happie days vl b back...n plz atleast now give smile..u look so cute when u smile

Ahana blushed

Akki n jiyu: oho...super.

Akki: wow I didn't c this angle in u manpreet ji

Man: aarey stop embrassing me guys

By d way bhai im super happie fr one thing

Rishi: wat

Man: when ever ahana says mooh thod dungi fr me...I used to feel bad that I got hitler wife..bt now kittu bhabi is hitler ka baap..not only face..she vl break all ur bones

He said n started laughing

Rishi glared at her n signed ahana

Ahana hold manpreet ears: wat u said...hitler? N wat u said to my di...hitler didi?

Manpreet shouted with pain

Manpreet: arey baby..chod dho yar..i was just kidding...from when u started taking my talks seriously..plz yar its paining yar

Ahana twisted his ears moore tightly

Manpreet went towards her kissed on her cheeks

Ahana left his ears in shock

jiyu: awww so cute

manpreet started running

ahana started running to catch him

rishi akkki jiyu enjoying their cat fights

jiyu: ok jiju im leaving

she said bye to bedi family n left the place

akki dropped her to the home

she went inside

she saw dadi n her parents having food

she signed them abt wr is kittu

dadi: yeh azeeb ladki hai wo...came to home seriously n rushed to her room...I was abt to ask wr she was at entire night bt she didn't pay heed to my shouts

she said angrly

dadi: leave abt her..wr u were yesterday night...do u know hw much v tensed

jiyu to herself jiyu beta ur out now...

jiyu: woh dadi

she is stammering

dadi: ha tell..wr r u

jiyu: arey first leave all those things...I came here with so much excitemet to say abt super duper news..bt u na...with ur inquiry u made me frgt that

dadi: ok vl talk abt that later...first tell wat is that news

she asked curiously

jiyu hugged her n kissed her

jiyu: u r right dadi...n v found him

her parents lukd at her confusingly

bt dadi understud

dadi: chotu..that means...my kittu's savior.? Ur talking abt him only na

jiyu nodded her head as yes

dadi got happie tears

she rushed towards mandir in her house'

dadi: jai matadi...tq so much matadi...im frever indebted to u

she rushed to jiyu

n hugged her

arun n jyothi felt so happie they to prayed god fr giving such a good news

dadi: chotu..first tell..how u met him..n wat u got to know abt him

jiyu told how she met rishi n his family n narrared rishi tanu story( ofcourse excluding alcohol part)

they got tears

dadi: arun c..meri pothi...she gave her life fr her rishi...c mataji ki chamatkar...in that birth kittu saved rishi n now rishi saving kittu...

jiyu I want to c rishi

jiyu: ha u can ...bt I have small idea

dadi: wat

jiyu: didi na...u know abt her...she is so stubborn to accept her love...she is gng away frm jiju ...becz of thus stubbornness...now our duty is to bring them together

jiyu told an idea

dadi: wow..ek dum perfect..lets do it

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautiful family . Very beautiful family bonding.Aahaman seen.Kitu family seen . Enjoying reading it.Plz update sooner
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After some time
Jiyu went to kittu room
Asusual kittu is in her own dream world
Jiyu went to wardrobe
N taking all her clothes outside
She literally throwing all clothes on kittu
Kittu sensed this
She found so many dresses on her like mess
Kittu: jiyu wat r u doing
She asked confusingly
Jiyu took pink gown frm that messn kept infrnt of her n asked
Jiyu: this vl b good na Didi
N these dimond rings vl b nice na on this dress
Kittu: ha baba it vl b nice bt tell wats d matter
Y u r doing this much hungama
Jiyu: arey Didi today Dadi bestie coming to meet us along with her family
Kittu: wat..Dadi bestie? Achanak Dadi ko friend kaha mil gayi
Jiyu: wat
Kittu: oh I mean till now v don't know na abt her best friend
Jiyu: arey di..she is Dadi childhood bestie..Dadi told she met her in some mall..she invited them to our house..n Dadi arranged small party too
Kittu: hey wow ..
Jiyu: and ha she told u to invite ur friends akki n ritika( smrithi khanna)

Kittu: anyways u r there na to invite akki...I vl invite only ritika only
Jiyu smiled

Evening
Party started
Kittu is in her room
Getting ready
At that time ritika entered her room
She saw kittu who wore knee length white dress
Ritika saw her
Kittu saw her in mirror
She rushed to her n hugged her
Kittu: hi baby...missed u
Ritika : I too miss u darling..
Kittu: hw z ur family trip
Ritika: boring Yar...no boys no fun...I felt like going temple with those elders
Kittu laughed
Ritika: by d way kittu ur looking smoking hot..omg any one vl fall fr u
Kittu smiled
Kittu: okk babe let's go party vl start
Ritika: ok
They went down
Already Dadi jiyu n all waiting for guests
Kittu went to Dadi
Dadi: arey Hitler. ..wr is ur bestie...u tell I take so much time fr make up..bt c I'm ready..ur bestie didn't come till now..
Kittu taunted her
Dadi took her mouth aside
At that time they saw family entering
Jiyu signelled Dadi
Dadi rushed to them.
She saw old women..she rushed to her n hugged her
They both r hugging n wishpering to each other
Dadi: namesthe ji...Meri naam kalyani ...kittu ki Dadi
Old women: namesthe kalyaniji..I'm sarada .rishi ki beeji
They both introduced them to respective families
Ahana became emotional when she saw kittu
Kittu too sensed something when ahana hugged her..she too got tears
At that time kittu heard ritika screaming
Ritika: omg
She said by looking at entrance
She saw rishi coming
She is shocked
At that time she felt pain in her shoulder
Yeah ritika is pressing her shoulder with excitement
Kittu : rithu wat r u doing
Ritika : arey kittu..c rishi sing bedi..India top most business icon..n most handsome person..n u know it's my dream to meet him..n I never thought my dream vl fulfill this much early
Kittu irritated with her constant jaap...( Actually it is jealous)
Before kittu say something
Ritika rushed to rishi
Ritika hi sir
Rishi: hi mis..
Ritika: ritika
Rishi: ok miss ritika
Ritika: u know sir...I'm in cloud nine...I can say it's a fan girl moment...I adore a lot sir...I'm die hard fan of u
Rishi smiled
Rishi: happie to know that
Ritika: sir..autograph plz
Rishi: ok...buk plz
Ritika. Forwarded her hand
She opened her fist n signed him
Ritika: give here
Rishi: wat
Ritika: plz sir
Rishi to himself: crazy girl
He took pen n signed in her palm
Ritika: sir one selfie plz
Rishi : hmm ok
They took selfie
Ritika felt so happie
Bt some one stomuch is burning
Jiyu observed this
She smiled inself
She shown thumbsup sign to ritika..
Rishi looked at kittu
Rishi to himself: omg tanu y ur testing my patience..u don't know how much difficult fr me to control..bt tanu ur looking so hot
Kittu: yay Mr
Rishi: wat
Kittu: wat did u say
Rishi: wat I said
Kittu: don't act..I heard wat u said
Rishi: oh..then say wat I said
Kittu: y should I say
Rishi: ok don't say
Kittu: how.dare u to say like that
Rishi: arey u only said na u won't say .I told don't.say that ..wats wrong in it
Kittu: uff..not. abt that..
Y u commented like that
Rishi: arey when I commented u
Kittu: u commented me...u said
She stopped

Rishi: ha tell wat I said
Kittu: u said I'm hot
Rishi to himself: this is heart to heart connection tanu.. u hear my heart too
He smiled

Rishi: nope I didn't say
Kittu: u said...don't.lie
Rishi: ok I agree ..i.said ur hot
Kittu: ..u u u how dare u
Rishi: ur hot that's y i.said
Kittu:again...how dare u to say like that
Rishi: wats wrong in that .tell me when u talk normally to me...always vl give that chilly hot fuming looks..that's y I said like thatk

Kittu ego got hurt she fumed at him.again went to another place to chit chat

Rishi went to beeji
Beeji introduced him to Dadi, Arun, n jhothi
They felt so happie to c him
n they liked him
Rishi promised them that he vl.keep their kittu in his heart

Jiyu: went to stage
Jiyu: ok guys now it's dancing time
Let's nacho
Jiyu played a song
All pairs in party started dancing
Only kittu ritika rishi standing aside
Rishi n kittu looking at each other when other is not cing
Ritika rushed to rishi
RitiKa: rishi sir shall v dance
Rishi: sorry.ritika..im.not.intrested
Ritika: plz sir ..this is my dream sir..one step with u..enough sir
Rishi didn't not understand how to react
After her contionus begging
He agreed
Ritika.dragged him to stage
They both started dancing
Kittu is fuming here
She can't able to c him with another
She don't know wat is happening.to her
She rushed to them
She just pulled ritika aside
N joined her hands with rishi
Ritika left stage
Akki n jiyu came to her
They 3 hified
Kittu n rishi started dancing
He hold.her waist
She hold his shoulder

Haan aaa aa ooo ooo
Ooo

Main jaan ye vaar dun
Har jeet bhi haar dun

Keemat ho koi tujhe
Be intehaan pyaar dun

Main jaan ye vaar dun
Har jeet bhi haar dun

Keemat ho koi tujhe
Be intehaan pyaar dun

Saari hadein meri
Ab maine tod di

Dekar mujhe pata
Aawaargi ban gye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye...

Aeee aa aa ooo oo aa aaa

Kya khoob rab ne kiya

Bin maange itna diya
Warna hai milta kahan

Hum kaafiro ko Khuda
Kya khoob rab ne kiya

Bin maange itna diya
Warna hai...


Rishi: so
Kittu: so
Rishi: the gr8 kittu fell fr this poor rishi
Kittu: wat the...no way..
Rishi: aha..stop lying
Kittu: im.not.lying
Rishi: then wat is this...y ur in my arms now
Kittu: hey don't dream much...I just want to dance..so I joined u
Rishi: aha..is it way to join...by pushing that girl aside
Kittu didn't understand wat to say
Rishi: keep ur ego aside...n accept that..u love me
Kittu: stop hallucinating ..it's not gud fr health
Rishi: I'm not hallucinating...bt ur deceiving ur.heart by not accepting ur.love
Kittu: Mr...enough..bahut sun liya...don't over.think..
Kittu never fall in ur trap
By saying this she pushed him
n rushed outside seriously
Akki: omg wr she is gng now
Jiyu: n it's raining..n Didi is scared of those thunders n.lightenings
Ahana: really jiyu ? Tanu di is also scared of those
Beeji: when both r same then their qualities vl also match
Ritika: this girl ma..bahut ziddi... Won't think fr min .she vl do wat she feel at that time..wat is need to go in this situation ..weather is not at all good
Dadi: there is no need to get tensed ..rishi went behind her...so nothimg to worry
He is.there fr her ..so no problem

Kittu is in car
Kittu: arey kittu y u have this.much ego rey..y can't u express ur love..ur.such an.idiot.yar..n.now c..u came out in this.situations..n.those thunders...omg

At that time.her.car.stopped.all.of.sudden
Kittu: shit
This bloody car also stopped now itself
N she realised she frgt.to bring.her mobile
She hit.her head with her hand
She got down

Near by she saw small shed
She rushed to there
Bt she is tenssed
She closed her eyes tightly
At that time she heard some.sound
She opened her eyes
She saw a car stopped.behing.her car
Her eyes glown
Yes he is.rishi
Now her heart beat settled down
Bt her best friend is there na..of course none other than her attitude so she started acting
Rishi stopped car n got down
He came to her
She acted like she didn't c him
N pretended like cing him now
Kittu: hey u wat r u doing here
Rishi: don't u know
Kittu: no
Rishi: ok let me tell ...I just like this nature so I came out to njy this nature
Kittu: wow gr8
At that time they heard thunder sound
She scared n hugged him tightly
Rishi smiled
He too hugged her
They r njying the hug
After some time
Kittu saw her inside his hug
Kittu pushed him
Kittu: yey Mr ..y u hugged me
Rishi : wait wait wait..first u clarify ...did u have any multi personality disorder r u any ghajni types
Kittu: oyyy
Rishi: then wat .u hugged me n blaming me
Kittu: I was scared n hugged u..bt y u hugged me back
Rishi : arey Meri maa..I lost my brain that's y I hugged u ok plz maaf kijiye
Kittu: hmm ok this is last chance
Rishi: aha
Rishi to himself: drama queen
He smiled at her cute drama
Again thunder sound came
Now rishi immediately pulled her n started kissing her lips first kittu protested...bt later she too lost in kiss
They r exploring each n every corner of mouth
They stayed like that fr so much time
After kittu again pushed him
Kittu: hey Mr y u kissed me
Rishi: arey I helped u ..n ur scolding me
Kittu: wat ...wat help u did
Rishi : first c outside...rain stopped n thunders stopped
U dont know how many thunders came in this time...I diverted ur mind with this kiss
C u even not realised abt thunders sounds
Kittu: aha..stop actina..any way no t in mood to fight
.ok let's go
When she abt to go
Rishi held her hand
His eyes asked not to leave him
He pulled her.again
He abt to kiss her lips again
She just pushed him
n started running
Rishi tried to catch her
Bt at that time he saw some one dragging her inside the cab
Rishi: tanu...

Rishi got confused
He immediately went to his car n started following the cab
In mean while he called manpreet n told wat to do
Rishi: who the hell r they..how dare they kidnapped my tanu...I won't.leave them
He saw cab parked near some garage type area
He went inside
He saw 5 guys sorrounded her
He hands tied to chair
One guy is moving towards her
Guy: krits...I won't leave u...I vl take my revenge...Becz of u I was suspended whole clz.looking.me.like.an ass. ..studentsswho used.to.scared.of.me..is.making.fun ofome..all becz u...i loss my respect..today u vl loose ur respect
She gave a kick to him
Kittu: don't dare u ass...remember...it's not easy with kittu...u vl c hell
He fell down with pain
The remaing guys all went at a time.towards her
At that time.
Rishi entered
He thrashed them n hit them.black n bull
All fell down
He removed the ropes tied to her hand
Kittu hugged him
At that.time.manpreet n jiyu came
With police
Police arrested those guys
Bt one.guy took gun out
Guy: I won't leave u krits..u vl die in my hands only
He pointed gun towards
Rishi saw this
He immediately pushed her away
N bullet him
He fell down
He want into unconscious
Police.took away that guy
Kittu shocked
She screamed : rishi
In that shock she remembered her past
She remembered how she was shot in order to save rishi
She rushed to him
She kept his.head on her.lap
She started crying
In meanwhile manpreet took him inside car n drove.to.hsptl
Kittu: rishi...uto rishi...plz rishi...c ur tanu is.back...ha rishi I'm very sorry I forgt u..I don't know how I frgt our love..bt I remembered now rishi...plz rishi
She is crying hardly
She kept her head beside his heart
Plz rishi open ur.eyes
Rishi suddenly opened his eyes
He saw tanu
Rishi: tanu
Tanu: rishi...
Rishi: I ...lllooovvveee u uuu tanuuu
Tanu: I love u too rishi
Rishi is finding.difficult.to.talk
Rishi: c.tanu...last.timw u saved me n left me
Now I'm.leaving u
Sry tanu...bt I don't want to leave u...I want to love with u .I want to.share.my life with. U

Tanu: ha rishi ..v vl together...wat u thought...vl u leave me.like.that...do u think. I came here.to let.u go ..no.rishi..
Rishi ki bina.tanu nahi jee sakthi...n I know my rishi won't leave me...he vl.fight.with god n come.to.me

By that time they reached hsptl
.doctors started operation
Bedi family reached hsptl.
All r tensed
N praying.fr.rishi

Edited by honeyrosid-6 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#59
Wow dear wowww...both updates were sooo amazing ...loved it ...finally tanu remembered rishi😭...rishi got bullet😭 hope he will be fine😭...update soon dear ... eagerly waiting for next
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#60
rishi krithika nok jhok was so cute n funny.poor ahaina couldn't spend time with krithika.manpreet telling her to smile n it makes her cute was sweet.ahiana scolding him...then he kissing her was romantic. niyu telling everything to dadi was nice.happy that dadi jiyu are going to unite rishi krithika
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