The Story Under Wraps [TanShi SS] [Chapter 18 &19 Page 21]

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey guys i m here with a new story...
Hope u guys love it and support it too like TIMJ... 😳
Love u all...❤️
So here is a prologue enjoy reading...😳


[PROLOGUE]

His life came to an end that day when that incident happened...
A cheerfull guy became a living dead...
What was the incident...

"I cant forget that day...it was all my fault...
I m behind all this...will mama and papa forgive me???
Should i be forgiven???
Am i eligible to be forgiven...i think so no"
He thought while looking at the moon...
A tear of drop fell from his red swollen eyes due to continuous crying...

What is life holding for him...
Will he be able to forgive himself...
What was his sin which broke him from outside as well as inside...
Was his sin so worst that he cant be forgiven???
What is the story under wraps???
Wraps of many people with different faces...
Wraps of some committed sins...
Wraps of some happiness...
Wraps of some disasters...
Lets see what is his destiny...


Hope u guys like it...
Enjoy reading...😳
Will try to update soon...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow new story hayu.. really exciting..what the story it is.. can't wait.. update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

Wow new story hayu.. really exciting..what the story it is.. can't wait.. update soon

wo word lemon for ur excitement...😳
One thing dear this story is full of suspense...😉
I m working on it...will update soon...❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
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kuch nehi bolna chahti ho bas jaldi story ko
lekar hajir ho jaiye😳
waiting for the story 🥳

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: TearDrop50

kuch nehi bolna chahti ho bas jaldi story ko
lekar hajir ho jaiye😳
waiting for the story 🥳

awww thats so sweet of u moni...😳
I will update today...InshAllah...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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My Haya is back with new story!!! I can't control my happiness!!!😳...
Superb prologue... Painful... Foxi u said that this story is full of suspense... I can't wait anymore for this mysterious story... Jaldi update do na...❤️...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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[CHAPTER 1]
[LONELINESS]

-KYUN YE RANJISHAIN YE UDAASIYAN
HN YE BAN CHUKI MERI TARJUMAN!!!

[Poetry by me]

"I m alone...alone in this crowd..."

Continuous flow of tears swollen his eyes...
He is approx dead and broken from inside...
Shattered pieces of past came in front of his eyes...
Tears full of pain are rolling down from his cheeks...
He fell on his knees...

"I cant forget that day...it was all my fault...
I m behind all this...will mama and papa forgive me???
M i eligible to be forgiven...i think sooo..."

He took a pause and said...

"No..."

Tears are rolling down from his cheeks just like the water flows in a water falls...

"Please forgive me mama papa...please forgive me..."

His tone became even more low...

"Please forgive me.."

Suddenly he heared a sound of knocking...
he stood up and washes his face...
Knocking sound again came to his ears...

"Who is there???"

He said with a stammering voice...

"Rishi sir apse koi milne aya hai"...

His servant said...

R: ok i m cmng...

He went down after cleaning his face properly...

*...*...*...* (this is the symbol where the scene ends...)

"Abhay tu...tu kab aya.."

Rishi tightly hugs Abhay...

"Woh!! Woh!!! Woh!!! Relax dude...hadiyan torega meri..."

Abhay said with a smile plastered on his face...
But Rishi is as usual serious...

R: aya kb tu??? Btaya bhi nhi mn tjhe airport se pick hi kr leta...
A: abey it was a surprise...bta deta to surprise kahan se rehta...khr...bs do din k liye aya hon mn...
R: tu aya hi kyun hai...chal nikl yhn se...

Rishi pushed him slightly...

A: yr kya kr rha hai??? Dekh mn naraz hojaonga...

He said with a wink...

R: hoja...
A: yr kya kron off nhi mila na...boht mushkil se do din ka le kr aya hon...ab tu bhi aise krega mere sath...to mn chla hi jata hon wapas...
R: acha na meri drama queen...chl aja mere room mn chlte hn...

They went in Rishi's room...
Abhay is the only person to which Rishi talks that much...
But with Abhay also...he smiles once in a blue moon...
Otherwise no one seen him even smiling...or talking too much...

*...*...*...*

*morning*

Today is the day when his new PA has to be assigned...
He told his manager to assign on his own...
A girl in jeans and T shirt comes in...
Wearing a stroller in her neck...
She is looking damn gorgeous...
Her hairs are tied in a high and tight pony tail...
Chewing a bubbles gum she said with a beautiful smile...

"Sir may i come in??? "
R: u r already in...

He said with an irritated tone...

"Oopppsss!!! Sorry sir i didnt noticed..."

She said...

R: u should...

He is sunk in his files with his head down...

R: whats ur name???

"Tanu...Tanu Shri.."

She said...

He looked up only to see his new PA...
But he lost himself in her for a while...
He threw away his thoughts...
On seeing his face her facial expressions changed and tongue slipped...

T: handsome...
R: what???
T: noth...nothing sir...i was just saying here is my record..."
R: give me...

He is much smarter to understand what she said...
But he dont want to react on her words...
So he pretended that he didnt heared her...

R: ur job is done...but remember one thing no chit chat only work...

Her smile vanished and disappointment took place on hearing his words...
bcz she cant live without doing chit chat...

*...*...*...*

First day of TanShi went very well together...

*At ni8*

*Rishi's room...*

He took a photograph from table...
Lay down on the bed hugging that pic with his feets touching the ground...
Tears roll down from his eyes...
He said with pain...

R: i miss u...i miss u alottt...


-MERI ZINDAGI MN HAI KUCH KAMI
MN NA JAAN PAAYA HON AAJ TAK
MERI DUNIYA IS TARHA UJAR GAI
K SUKOON PAAYA NA AAJ TAK!!!!!

[All poetry in this story is my own...i wrote it]

(Rishi is not doing poetry...its a part of background story...means narrator is doing poetry..and this note is for all poetries in story)

Precap: some memories of past...

I know this story is emotional...i was also approx crying while writing it...
Hope u guys like it...
Do comment and hit like...
Enjoy reading... 😳
Edited by HayaZehra313 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: gopsss

My Haya is back with new story!!! I can't control my happiness!!! 😳...
Superb prologue... Painful... Foxi u said that this story is full of suspense... I can't wait anymore for this mysterious story... Jaldi update do na...❤️...

wo word babes...😳
Yes this story is full of suspense...emotions...and mysteries...😳
Its updated...enjoy reading...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting story foxi..really very suspense..I didn't understand why rishi was crying..I hope this will be revealed in ur next update..so plz hayu update soon..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome story Foxi... Hume bhi rula diya... Rishi didn't spent time with anyone... He only spent time with Abhay... Yeh toh suspense k upar h Foxi... Who is d girl for whom he is crying??? What's their relation??? Tanu as Rishi's PA... She is a naughty girl... TanShi intro scene superb!!! I loved ur all poetries Foxi... He is seeking forgiveness... Means he had done something wrong... I can't wait anymore dear for next part... Interesting precap increased my curiosity... Loved it to the core dear❤️... Eagerly waiting Foxi...
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