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hello friends it is my first time writing a short story on shive gauri which is my favourite couple i love them it is short effect to write something hope you like it
will update the first part in few minute...........

it has only six parts hope you like it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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here is the part first




part 1

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after alot of efforts yes i find her ,i know she can't die she is alive ... shiv was laughing because he was happy after the news.....
he open his cupboard and where we saw alot of pictures of gauri ....he was very happy .....

shiv- gauri i know this ,you can't die how can you die when i am here ......after 2 years ,6 months ,12 days ,i am eagerly waiting for the day when i will find you ..... he was happy really happy after a long time ..

his smile was echoing in his huge mention....

he was impatient to hide his happiness...

nikihla and evrybody was very happy when they saw him , he was laughing ,like every normal human being this is simple act but for shiv ...he just forget to smile but he was smiling........

sam- shiv .aaj tuje aise dek ker acha lagaa......per kya baat hai koi kajana haat lag gaya hai kya ?

shiv- ha samar aaj mein bahut khush hoon ,itni jyda khusi to muje life mein kabhi bhi nahi hue hogi jitni aaj hue hai....

nik- arre shiv ,kya khusi ke baat hai ,jaldi bataa na beta....

kaya- ha ,shiv plz bato na.....

nikhla shoot a angry glare to kaya.......which kaya saw and she did not say anything after that.

shiv- bhai humne us company ko take over kar liya hai.bus ab mein wait nahi ker sakta mein jaldi se jaldi waha janna chata hoon
is liye mein bahut khush hoon.........

nik- beta tuje khush dekhker hum bhi khush hai ...

shiv- bus maa muje ashirwaad do ke mein jo chata hoon vo paa loo .

nik- ha shiv tuje jo cheez chaiya vo jarur milegi......

sam- congrats ,they both hug each other....

kaya- congrats shiv.......

shiv- thx bahbi .

kaya- shiv tumhe koi help chayia packing mein.....

nikhla- kaya mein shiv ke help ker doongi ........she said rudely........

kaya was hurt by nikhla's behaviour.but her face was not showing this hurt expression....

shiv-he smiled.it's ok mom and bahbi ,i can do this myself..... so don't bother for me ok....and he went outside..with samar to discuss some details for their project ......

there only left nikhla and kaya.....

nikhla- kaya mene tumse kitni baar kaha haike tum mere or mere bete shiv ke life mein koi interfare mat karo it's none your business.....tum is ghar mein mere bete ke wife ke hesiat se ho is liye bus wahi banker raho mere shiv ke bahbi bane ke koshish mat karo ,aaj poore 2 saal baad mein shiv ko itna khush dekha hai or vo bhi tum nahi tolrate ker sakti ,tum or tumhari bahen ne hamari sari kushiya to cheen he le hai ab or kya chati hoon ,ek ne marr ker bhi saath nahi choda or ek tab tak nahi chodgi jab tak mar nahi jaygi......

nikhla was saying this ,she was not like the jagdalu saas ,like ekta's serial ,she was very sweet but circumstances changed her .......

kaya was hurt by her words......nikhla's word pireched her hard ,.....

she open her room's door and she was sitting on floor her head on her knees...

kaya pov
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her koi ye soctha hein ke shiv ne ye khoya ,maa ne shiv ke khusi ko khoya lakin meri bahen ne to apni jindgi he kho de,kya galti thi uski ,jo usse ye sazaa mili ,kissi ne nahi suna uski baat yahaa tak ke mein bhi nahi papa ne bhi nahi ,papa to kabhi suntein he nahi they ,bachpan se he usne papa ka pyar nahi paya ,papa ko laga ke vo maa ke death ke liye responsible hai, is liye papa ke liye to vo vasse he mar chuki thi, sirf mein thi jis ke liye vo jee rahi thi or phir ye sab ........

maa aap mujse nafrat karo muje koi problem nahi lakin aap meri bahen se nafrat kartin ho muje is baat se dard hota hai,jisna aap mein hamesha apni maa ko dekha aap se bus vahi pyar chaha jo vo papa se chati thi........

mein jisse vo jaan se jayda chati thi,uski baat bhi nahi suni apne payr ke liye mein itni andhi ho gayi thi ke muje kuch or dikhyi he nahi diya .kuch bhi nahi .. uski baat bhi nahi suni mene .........

gauri vapas aa jao ,muje phir se apne gale laga lo plz nupur....vapas aa jao..........


she was crying..................
the whole day passed ,she was sitting in same position.not moving inch.

it was night .....sam open their room door and saw see was sitting her knees was near her head .
he slowly moved and sit beside her ......

sam- kaya ,kaya.....

no reply .

sam- he shook her.....and storked his finger through her hair......

kaya saw sam and hug him and started crying.

sam know the reason behind this he hugged kaya .

sam- kaya don't cry plz don't i know mom's behavior hurt you but she need time.....

kaya- no sam ,mom is my mother too and her words never hurt me. i was feeling sad ,i was missing my father.i want to go there.plz sam plz i want to .

sam- kaya,agar tum papa ke pass jana chati ho to koi baat nahi mein tumhe unke pass le joga per kaya ab tum janti ho na shiv bhi one month ke liye shimla ja raha hai ,or phir agar tum cahli gayi to mein apne office work per concentrate nahi ker poaga..plz tum mere liye thoda sa wait karo.

she was confused ,how sam's office work and she related with this...

sam understood this .

sam- meri payri patni ab dekho agar tum cahli gayi to muje roz acha kahna kaun banaa ker kahilyga ,kiski godd mein sir rakh ker soiga,or kisko raat ko apni bahoo mein laker soga, or kisse apne office ke baato se bore karoga..,kisse good morning or good night kiss doga ,lakin ye bandaa apni sweet wife ke liye ye ker sakta hai ke vo usse apne papa ke ghar regular drop or pick ker lega.

kaya she was feeling lighter now after sam's hug she was set ..and sam's cute and sweet words again make her to smile.

kaya- sam papa's house is so far from your office you have to drive alot ,don't do i will handle ok. don't worry i will stay for two days and your lunch will alwys on time boss .she smile saying this.

sam- dekha tumhe kissi ne kaha hein ke tum smile karti ho to badi hi cute lagti hoon bilkul teddybear jassi.

kaya- ha ,kissi ne mujse kaha tha .

(sam know this whom she was talking ,he does not want that she again feel guilty ,he was equally guilty for this ,his heart know this gauri can't do this )

sam- kaya tum usse jitna miss karti ho,utna he mein bhi karta hoon ,lakin shayd vo hume itna miss nahi karti thi ,isliye shayd khud he humse door ho gaye. chod gayi to bus kuch yaadien or vo bhi kadvi sirf kadvi. kaya ab tum plz us past ko mat yaad karo ,jis se sirf pain he milega or kuch nahi .plz kaya .

kaya- sam ,hume uski baat sun ni chayia thi ,she was telling us but we are so adamant to listen.

sam- kaya plz ,ab hum baat nahi karinge is barre mein .plz.

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next day
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all were happy because shiv was going their to set their new business,no body know his true interest ,his true motive.
he was very impatient and his flight was delay for two hours and these two hours was like a big big punishment for shiv .every passing mintue was increasing his heartbeat to meet the girl whom he was searching for almost two years ,whom everybody thought that she is no more.

and the plane arrived and he waved his hand and smiled at everybody ,everybody was there expect gujan,
he know why she was not there.so he just turned becoz he want to reach his destination.

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here in shimla we saw her she was working there in a office as P.A. . but now she want to leave this job because some another company take over this company and she was afraid of working with new bose ,yes she was no other then gauri ,she was afraid of any new person becoz now she does not want any body to enter her life.

(mr.mehta- he was like father figure for gauri,he was going u.s .so he just sell his company he know that she was afraid of new bose.)

mr.mehta- gauri beta ,i know you were thinking about new bose ,but don't worry i talked with him and he was very nice ,no staff will change here he said to me,and as i talked with him .and also meet with him too ,you miss the meeting so you don't know but don't worry he is very honest and loyal too.

gauri- but sir you know ,i am not feeling comfortable why i don't know the reason,but plz sir.plz accpet my resignation letter..

mr.mehta- dear gauri,i can understand your problem too,but as you know the term and condition you have to give this resignation to your new bose and if he accpet this then you will regine .

gauri- sir ,plz sir .

mr.mehta-gauri he is nice guy ,why you ingrain this that everybody will hurt you,beta "ache logo ke saath to acha he hota hai or tum to bahut ache ho is liye tum bus apna work karo or kuch mat socho ,itna ke tumhe kuch ban ker dikahna hai,apne mom dad ka har dream porra karna hai . " so you have to do this job .

hearing this word she thought for her parents her family ,which was now .......


she feel something hot on her face .tear drops .she was crying ,missing them who just disown her,her family she love them miss them ,but for them she was nothing ,she was just ..... no body given her any chance to explain her .

mr.mehta notice that she was lost somewhere.

mr.mehta- gauri where are you .. ?

gauri- no where sir i was just thinking whatever you said ,you are right sir i will do this .sir where is the detail of our new M.D.

mr.mehta- well gauri ,he is coming today .....suddenly his phone ring..
gauri we have to go airport to recieve him he is coming ....

gauri- ok sir.i will tell every body that our new boss is coming today .but sir i want to tell one thing that we will never forget our favourite boss who inspire us alot.

mr.mehta- he smiled and bless gauri.

ok we are geeting late and punctuallty is most important for everything.

gauri- yes sir.she smiled
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gauri pov-

i don't know but after two years i was feeling the same saddness same loneless in my life which i feel two years ago,the fear of lossing again ,fear of loosing my self...fear of being hurt by loved ones ,accused by them . btu i have to face it mein apni vo life bahut piche chod chuke hoon ha shayd ye dard ha jo pass reh gaya ,vo naam jo muje mila bus vo pass hai or kuch nahi ,per aaj phir se kissi tofaan ke aane ka asar lag raha hein jassie vo tofaan muje phir se vahi le jayga jahaa se mein .bhag rahi thi. lakin muje isse face karna hoga.i have too,kyo mein unke liye karo jin logo ne mere sach per trust nahi kiya ,muje muje he nahi mere dil ko mere aatma ko bhi nahi choda ....nafrat hai muje un sab se ,nafrat hai....i hate them .. per kyo bus ye sach mein keh nahi pati ke mein sab se nafrat karti hoon ,us insaan se nafrat karti hoon jisse pyar karti thi....

mr.mehta- gauri come ...

gauri was turned but she collided with someone and other persons whole coke spilt on her dress....
nup- omg ,ab kya hoga .

per- plz sorry.

gauri- it's ok it's my mistake too.

mr.mehta- gauri i think you should change so you may leave i will handle ok.

gauri- thank you sir,actually she was thankfull to god too because her heart was telling that something is not good and she was relieved ,she need a brake and now she get whatever she want.

she leave the airport
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mr.mehta- welcome mr.shiv kapoor nice to meet you.

shiv- me too sir .

mr.mehta- i am very glad to meet you one of the most eligble bachlor and intelligent business man ,happy that now my comapny is under you and it will reach the highest level.lets go.

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they reached the office where every staff member meet with shiv and happy to know about there new boss.

and soon he sign the papers and the deal was confirmed ..

mr.mehta- well tonight there is a party held by mr.shiv and you all Are invited.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey dear nice FF.. enjoyed the update... looks very interesting... y does Gauri hate Shiv??? do continue soon n plzz add me onto ur PM list..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey ya,
luved it...plz update soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice to read a new ff please to contnue soon, do have a few qestions but i guess they will all come to be answere as you carry on with story line but still ...shiv and gauri married?? and this hatred for shiv ..hmm.
intresting read please do carry on.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi adi_gupta,

This FF is very nice.... please continue soon... the story started at a very intrestign mode..... and I am really intrested to know what will happen next.... what was the truth?... why is Gauri hiding...? why is shiv searching for her...?

Ohh you left me with so much imagination.... Please continue soon.... I will wait for you to continue your FF....

Please....

Bunny.
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part 2
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shiv- he was sitting in his flat. they have a flat in shimla .and he know gauri was his p.A.
and he was eagelry waiting for her ,he want to saw her .to tell her .

party started but there was no sign of gauri.shiv was waiting and now he know he will meet her in the morning.

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in office

he was impatientlly waiting for gauri , it was 8 'o' clock and he was there becoz whole night he can't sleep properly ....he want to see her ,want to saw the shocked expression on her face.

time pass and the clock strike ,he saw her she was coming .....

he turned his face and covered it with a file.

gauri knocked the door and she entered.

gau-good morning sir ,i am gauri,your P.A.

he was not responding.

( she was standing there,but he was so engrosed in file ,and this was irritating her the most so she finally speak again.)

gauri- sir ,plz tell me about my work.and now he remove the file and showed his face.
and he smiled .

shiv- to akhir mein tumhe donde liya na .

when she heared the voice her file fall from her hand she looked in horror and saw shiv's face.
she was in state of shock ,how he find her....

shiv- kya hua gauri ,tumne kya socha ke tum logo ko yakin karwogi to vo mann lenge ke tum mar gayi ho,gauri tum kassi mer sakti ho ,kassi tumhari her sanse per mera hukk hai,or gauri itni asaan maut nahi hai tumhare nasseb mein ,gauri tumhe to til til ker marna hoga jssie ke itni saal mein mara hoon ,gauri mein tumhe kaha khaa nahi find kiya ,mein janta tha ke tumhe maut nahi mil sakti jab tak tum apne her galti ki sazaa na paa lo.jassi mein apne pyar ke liye tadapa hoon tumhe bhi jab tak mein vass nahi tadpa doonga tab tak muje chain nahi mil sakta .

gauri was in state of horror only listening shiv's word and crying . she just forget where she was .only she know one thing that he was there and his eyes only showing hate no other emotions .

gauri pov-
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aaj bhi itni nafrat ,vahi gussa ,vahi chera per kuch badal gaye ho tum ,kyo tum muje samaj nahi sake pehle bhi or muje pata hai tum kabhi nahi samaj ge. nahi samjoge ke mene kuch nahi kiya .

shiv- kya hua gauri kahi phir se apne sapno ke duniya mein to nahi kho gayi .mat lo gauri kyo ki ab tumhara her sapna totne wala hai ,bus totne wala.or tum kuch nahi ker sakti ,or if you are thinking to leave the job then i want to tell you that you have signed 2 years contract so you can't leave ,otherwise you will face trouble or agar mein tumhe yahaa find ker sakta hoon to kahin bhi find ker sakta hoon.
to ab kya yuhi dummy bane khadi rahoge .

gauri was know that his words true and now she have to face everything .

gauri- tum kya chat ho mujse ,ab mere pass kuch nahi hai khone ke liye ....

shiv- gauri tum kyo bhool jati hoon ki tumhare pass bahut kuch hai ,kya hua tumhar pass apna surname nahi hai, per tumhari smile to hai ,tumhari sannse to hai .or jab tak tum jinda ho gauri mein tumhari life ko hell banane mein koi mauka nahi chdoga.

gauri fall on floor and she brust into tears and saying "shiv mine kuch nahi kiya ,tum sab ne meri baat nahi suni shiv plz mera yakin karo shiv ,yakin karo ....she was hicuuping

shiv- trust or gauri per ,gauri you are homewrecker ,tum per trust ,trust kya hota hai tum janti ho is ka matlab ,nahi gauri you are a s****.such a cheap .....

gauri- she just closed her eyes ,so she can't again remember the horrible moment.....

shiv gave her a hanky plz gauri apni aansu pooch lo ,kyo ki agar tum abhi he aansu bahaa loge to bakki ke zindgi kassie katogi.

gauri was not uttered a word only looking at his face.

shiv-gauri aaj itni saal baad muje itna sukun mil raha hai ,mein bata nahi sakta gauri..... gauri i think you should leave now ,aaj ke liye to itna kafi hai ab tumhe bhi kuch time chayia hoga na ,apna dard batne ke liye.or ha mere liye coffe bsj do or mera taste to tumhe yadd he hoga.

gauri was standing there like statue .shiv was only inch away from her ,his breath on gauri lips .she was feeling very uncomfortable by this act ,and she moved back....and her back touched the wall no space to escape.

shiv- kya hua gauri tumhe darr lag raha hai kya ,

gauri he said in his husky voice which alwys increase gauri heart beat..
gauri said nothing she shut her eyes so tight not want to face anything,

shiv- gauri open your eyes ,look at me gauri.....gauri and he just put his mouth on hers.....

shiv was hardly kissing her but she was not responding ,she was pushing shiv ,but shiv's grip was hard on her hands, and her hand hurt and blood ozz from her hand

shiv- gauri you don't forget na our first kiss,and now you will never forget this kiss, did i say this our second kiss or you find someone else here too ,which fullfill all your n***.

she can't listen more she just slap shiv hard ...

gau- shiv ,first i thought i was guilty for everything which happen but know you deserve this shiv ,you are not the one whom i love ,i hate you i hate you,shiv mene tumse kabhi nahi kaha ke mein tumse payr karti hoon aaj mein bahut khush hoon ke mene tumse vo teen shabd nahi kahe kyoki you don't deserve tum jo kuch sochna chatein ho socho karo muje koi effect anhi hoga shiv,or agar tum ye sochtein ho ke tumhari presence se muje koi fark pegda then let me tell you ,mein tum sab ke liye ,mar chuki hoon or died person feel nothing,or ab tumhe kuch nahi milega shiv,tum jo karna chatein ho usse tumhari takleef badegi meri nahi.... lakin agar tum sochtein ho ke muje is tarah torcher karne se tum khuch paa sakt ho to shiv you are wrong........you are wrong

and saying this she left the office......

shiv was listening her words he was sitting on his chair......and she was on floor crying ......

she tell her friend that she need leave for two days as she was not feeling good..

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gauri was sitting in her cabin and now she was feeling very low ,she was thinking about her life and her black past ,which she never want to remember...
suddenly the phone ring .it was shiv he call her in his cabbin.......

she knocke the door and open it when he permit her to enter......

sh- miss gauri ,do you know your work ,i think you did not ,because there is alot of work pending ,do you know about this.saw this file i know you are p.a and office manager too.....but i think you are not worthy for both jobes...... and he throw the file on gauri face ,,,,

she was shocked with this sudden attack the file hit her hand which was already injour........she winched in pain but shiv was feeling nothing.....
shiv was shouting at her and the whole office was stunned to listen this he was behaving very badly with gauri ..

gauri was feeling very hummilated with this........
but she controlled her self ,,,she clamly asked sir what you need in this project i will do the correction as your reqirment.....

shiv- i need this now so ,you have to complete this today ,or jab tak tum isse complete nahi ker leti tab tak tum office se nahi jaoge ....

gauri- sir i will complete this today ..... and saying this she left shiv's cabbin.

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gau- shiv mein janti hoon ke ye sab tum muje pershaan karne ke liye ker rahay ho ,but ab mein jitna ro sakti thi ro chuki hoon ab nahi mein phir se nahi vo sab hone doongi...and she brushed of the thought and start to work.......

she did not relaize that it was quite late almost 12 'o clock .

she complete the project and then she relaize that it was quite late ......all office was empty.she pick her bag and said the watchman to lock the office.......

she was very tired mentaly and physically too....and her hand was hurt too....this day was very tough for her ,,her life just show her the worst nightmare.....

she don't relaize that she was walking alone lost in her thoughts, some boys were just behind her,suddenly she tripped over a stone ,and her headwas hurt and bleeding to ..soon she feel someone was playing with her hands ,she tried to free her self from the grip of unknown person .she try hard to scream but one hand coverevd her mouth ,she was trying to hit the person with her leg but in vain ..

her duppta were laying on road and she was so helpless ......strugling to free herself.....
suddenly one boy who covered her mouth fall on ground she was unconcious due to fear not know what happen rest.......

but when she open her eyes she found herself safe an secure her duppta in her neck.....she saw she was lying in someone's bed....she was trying to figure out what happen previous night......
she hear someone is coming she want to know who save her and want to thank her....but when she saw the person was no other than shiv ......he was smiling when he saw she was awake......

giving her coffee,gauri was staring at shiv in amusment like she saw the next wonder of earth......

shiv- gauri tum ye soch rahi hogi why i save you even i want to hurt you too,but gauri let me clear tumhe hurt karne ka rite sirf or sirf mera hai or kissi ka nahi ,or agar koi iske beech mein aayga then i will never leave that person.....

gauri's tounge was glud what she say she does not know ,some time before she want to thank him but now......

shiv-acha to ab coffe pio or jao......

gauri - shiv tum janti ho tum ye jo apne dil ke andhar ka sab dard hai usse hata do tumhara dil to bilkul coconet ke tarah hai,kyo vo banan chatin ho jo tum nahi ho,maynk badla kabhi kissi ko kuch nahi deta ,kyo tum us shiv ko marna chatein ho jisse sab pyar kartin hai....kyo she was asking him the question....

shiv just grab her and this sudden push they both fall on bed shiv was over gauri ......

sh- gauri ye tum kah rahi hoon ,sab kuch to chin liya mujse tumne ab kyo achi hone ka dikva ker rahi ho,kyo meri itni pervaah ker rahi hoon.gauri kyo gauri........

gauri was undernath shiv and was feeling too uncomfortable by this........she can listen shiv's heartbeat and can feel his breath too.

ga- sh muje chod do ,plz plz shiv......

shiv- nahi gauri saying this ,he gave a love bite on gauri neck ,she pushed shiv ,and she open the door......

but this was the last mistake she did......
she dosenot know that her life is not easy to live their is something more there....

there was press at the door and they just click her picture with shiv....... the love bite which shiv give her was visible to press and her clothes was also telling them something else.........

shiv also come there ,he was shirtless . and this was enough for media to make a page three news......

media people were asking her some questions ......but she was to deaf to hear anything only tears coming from her eyes.......shiv grab her hAnd and he closed the door.........

gauri- she was crying bitterely.....

shiv- what happen gauri ...kya hua tum yahi to chati thi,ke log jaanne ke humne ek saath bahut time enjoy kiya hai ...or bahut ........

before shiv say anything further she slapped shiv......

gauri- you did this na,so everything was your plan .......your plan na tell me it's all your plan na........

shiv- he was laughing ,,,yes yes this was my plan......i think you must thinking ke ye brilliant idea tumhari mind mein kyo nahi aaya..hai na .

ga- you are sick shiv ,tum apne is revenge mein itne aande ho joge mine socha bhi nahi tha .....kya chayia
tumhe shiv mera sab kuch chala gaya ,ab to kuch nahi tha or jo kuch tha vo ab chala gaya......
she was hiitng shiv's chest ,why shiv why shiv?
kya chayia yahi na tum mujse badla lena chatein ho to just rape me shiv just rape me ...... nothing bad happen to girl like this......
just rape me your revenge will be complete .........
she was in so much wrath ,she couldont know what she was saying .......she throw her duppta and just kill me shiv take your revenge ,take your revenge .......saying this she collapsed.......

shiv who was responisble for all this he just pick her in his arms and laid her on bed and cover her with blanket........

sh- gauri aaj muje bahut sukun milna chayia tha lakin pata nahi muje ye acha nahi leg raha hai,hum dono to dost thay na,aaj hum kiss mod per aa gaye ke mene tuhme media ke samne itna insult kiya .tumhe kahin ka nahi rakha ......meine two years tak wait kiya ke kab muje tum milo or kab mein tumhe itna majboor kar do ke tum bahut tadapo lakin aaj kyo tumhari ye halat mujse bardast nahi ho rahi tumne galat kiya lakin mein bhi to vahi ker raha hoon....

(he saw her face ,she was frowing like watching some horrible dream )
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gauri- arre kaya ,ab jaldi ker na ,kitni wait karwati hai.....

ka- ga yaar mein teri badi sister hoon thoda to respect ker kabhi to di kaha ker ...

ga- vasse mere pass di se bhi acha word hai ......

ka- acha or vo kya hai......

ga- maa,tum to meri maa ho ...or papa bhi....

ka- she was touched by this and hugged her.....

acha ab chalo jaldi varna late ho jayge.....

ga- to mene kaha hai yahaa khade rahne ko ,chalo chalo.....

in college
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kaya- hi sam..

ga- hi hone wale jiju......
sa- hi kaya or meri sali i mean aadi garwali ji...... kassi ahi aap ....

gauri- mere pyare payre jiju aap mujse pooch rahey ahi ya kaya se ke vo kassi hai......she smiled naughtly........

kaya- gauri......

ga- mene galat kaha hai kya.......ha bahi sidha sidha keh do ke jija or salli ka baat karna pasand nahi hai....

ka- gauri ruk ja abhi tuje batai hoon saying this kaya run behind gauri.....

ga was running to save her from kaya and she slipped and she closed her eyes she know she will end up hurting herself but she feel strong grip on her waist....she open her eyes to saw the person and he was there smiling.....

the person was no other than sashank

shank help her to stand...

ga- thx shak.she was very uncomfortable.....

shiv was watching this and think he should help gauri.....

shiv- hey gauri ,

gauri turned and saw her friend shiv who was waving her.her face brighten when she saw shiv.....

flashback end

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Edited by adi_gupta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#8
awww sab kuch ulta hai yaha tou LOL well update soon
saba
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Posted: 14 years ago
#9
Ohh.... again you did it... You left me with cliff hangers......

I am demanding you now..... I want to know right now... what happened later...

Please tell me.... This suspense web that you are creating with this story..... I have become the
bug stuck in that web and fighting to comeout of that web..... please jaldi se...... give another update...... please....

What happened.... when Shiv and Gauri were such good friends... why is Shiv like this now...
Why is shiv doing all this.... I thought he was searching for her.... because he wants to know the truth...but I never thought that he was trying to find her.... to torcher her.....

Why is he being so heartless..... Gauri is saying right she didnot do anything.... then why is he
not listening to her..... what do you mean by Homewrecker????

What did Gauri do in her past..... When Shiv and Gauri are friends and Shiv and Gauri married each other.... what was the problem.... Did Gauri love someone else...????

What did Shiv mean by saying..... This is our second kiss..... When they were married.... DId they not take their marriage to the next step....

Ohh... when are you going to update again.... I am already waiting for the next part.....

Common yaar... you have increased the cliffhangers....and not reduced it......
Kuch toh reham karo is poor, FF reader par..... So many questions...... and Not even one answer....

You are a dam good writer if you keep this tempo till the end.....

and once again.... Update really soon Ok????..... warnaa.......😡.... OK OK sorry....
Please update soon....😳😳 Will this work.... ????
Please update soon.....😭😭 or Will this work....???

Love,
Bunny
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Nice update.. but y does Shiv want a revenge n hurt Gauri?? Wht happened to their frndship???
lot of questions!!!!!!!!!
do continue soon...
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