FF- aaoge jab tum PART 3 PAGE 5 UPD8D! - Page 2

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HEY !!! thx all sooo much 4 ur lovly replies! thx! i wont bable to upd8 4 a while since i hv exams cumin 4 da nxt 2 weeks! so plllzzz pry 4 me n bare wid me n srrry! thx gyz! i promise a gr8 upd8 once april exams over !thx!

No probs dear...All the best for exams and yeah we would be waiting for back to back updates and that too long ones when your exams get over...As far now just concentrate on your exams...

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nice start!!!=)))

Hey nice FF.. liked the first part..do continue soon n plzz pm me when u update..

Hi,

Finally new FF, I aleardy Love the concept..... will wait till Shiv marries Gauri..... I want many twists and turns in the story....

Good Luck with your exams ..... and once thats done.... Please give us a beautiful update....

Bunny.

Hey all! Sooooooooooooooooooooooo srryyyyy dat I havnt able to upd8 bt wot 2 do' exams r important naaa?!ny wyz' enough time wasting so enjoy da upd8 n plz comment (hope it is long as I said it wud be)

Ps: my full stops and commas still arnt workin so square brakets ] are full stops and ' are commas] also ''' means elipses] srry 4 dis n srry if u gt confusd bcus of it]

N I also 4gt 2 mention dat Ippy' Shiv n Anu r all in last year of uni while Gauri is home scooled (bt alaso last year of uni) sryyL

Precap: ipphy n gauri intro] ipshita informs gauri bout hr engagement in 2 weeks time] dey ask 4 permission 4rm prena until she finnaly agrees to let gauri attend saying:

P :bus meri gauri ka khyal rakhna (she walks towards gauri n placing a hand to lift her chin) pari ki tarha paala hain' kabhi kisi gher se milnai nahi diya

Wiping away hr tears she walks away leaving the two girls in wondr]

PART 2:

IN GAURIS ROOM

I: kya soch rahy ho gauri?

G: yehi ke choti ma ne aisa kyo kaha

I (higligtng da key ponts): kya kaha tha' haan- "meri gauri" tum kabse unki hoogai? "pari ki tarha paala hai" kis waqt? Manti hoon ke tumhara khyaal rakti hai lekin tumhe to scool se bhi nikaal diya tha na' or haan " kabhi kisi gher se nahi milne diya" yehi to hai overprotecting]

G: lekin' she had tears ipshita]

I: hmmmm''' mystry yt 2 b discvrd'''

IN PRENAS ROOM

Prena enters her room and walking towards her cupboard she unlocks the locked drawer and pulls out a pic which shows 2 cute little girls and starts to talk 2 it]

P: kya karoon beta' mein jaanti hoon ke mein tumhe limits mein rakti hoon' tumhe wo nahi karne deti jo tumhare umar ke baaachay kartay hain' lekin mein kya karoon' dharty hoon mein' (a tear drops on the pic as she continues) jo pehlle huwa wo doobara na ho' dharti hoon mein' kahin wo phir se''' (she suddenly becomes vry serious and wipes away hr tears) nahi' aisa nahi hooga] main aisa nahi hone doongi]

(her grip becomes tigtr and she wipes aways the tear on the pic) mein tumhare saath wo nahi hoone doongi jo Sanju ke saath huwa] bas tum khush raho or kush nahi chahiye]

Sayin this she puts away da pic n locks the drawer]

~~~~~~~~1 week l8r~~~~~~~~~

The morning starts wid the arti which is carrid out by gauri] tody was a big dy 4 gauri n ippy] tody gauri ws goin 2 meet hr bst frends hone wala mangetar (fianc)!gauri ws excitd- aftr having permission from prena' she felt anxious]

As promised' ippy came early' shouting on top of hr voice bringin down da hole house]

I: Gauri!!!!! Gauri!

G: haan haan arahy hoon

I: jaldi kar na

Grabbing gauris hands dey take arshirwad n r bout 2 leave wen

P: Ishita! Gauri ko saath bajay ghar chor dena]

Ippy nods n dey leave]

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Ippy n Gauri wait at a restaurant

G: Ipshita' yahaan aane ki kiya zaroorat thi? Hum koi d'''

I: oo ho Gauri' tum bas chup kar ke inezaar karo] wo atay hi honge]

Gauri does as told n sits quite]

Suddenly Ipshita's face lightens up as a huge shy smile spreads across hr face n hr eyes shine behind Gauri] Gauri' noticing da sudden change in hr bst frend realisees that all dis must b due 2 hr frnds fianc who she is 2 meet 2dy] following hr eys' Gauri stops 2 c a handsome man entr da plce] she realises who he ws since Ippy wavd hm ovr n wtchd as he wavd bck wid a great cheeky smile on hs face]

I: kitni der laga di' we were waitin na

Person: srry Ipshita' lekin ye meri nahi apke fianc ke dost ki galti hai] Tum janti ho' abhi bhi Sh'''

I: ok baba' maaf kiya] abb beht bhi jao]

Person takes a seat

I (2 da person): in se milo' yeh hai'''

P: Gauri je

Gauri looks up suprisd

P (wid a serous face n tone): to app hai Ipshita ki bst frend' jis ke baray main wo hr pal baat karti rehti hain]

Gauir n Ipshita bcome vry shokd due 2 da seriousness]

P: app jaanti hai ke app ki vaja se mujhe kitni pareshani hoti hai]

I: kya keh rahay ho' ye tumhe achanak se kya huwa?
P: abhi to kuch huwa nahi per aage jakar shayad ho] to akir hum mil hi gai he na? Mein bhi dekhna chata tha' jaan na chahta tha ke tum kis tarah ki dost ho]

I: enou'''

P: jab bhi dekho bas apka hi naam lakata rehta hai Ipshita ki zubaan per' chup hi nahi hoti] jab thora sa bhi hume akele mein waqt milta hain' tab bhi app hi shamil hoti ho]

I: STOP IT! Yh ky akeh rahay ho tum? Main Gauri ke bare main pehlay bataya tha tumhe ke wo'''

P: haan} bataya tha] lekin job hi bataya wo sab galat tha] jhoot tha]

Ippy n GAuri r stunnd]

I: Anu'''

P: kyun ke app ki bst frend se milne ke baad mujhe aisa lagta hai ke '''

Suddenly Gauri gts a bad vibe n thinks dat may be he will break off da engagement

G: nahi! plz] agar app ko Ipshita ki dosti meri saath achi nahi lagi to main ainda Ipshita se nahi miloon gi

I: Gauri

G: kabhi aap ki raste main nahi aaongi lekin plz app Ipshita ke saath aisa nahi kare]

Both da person n Ipshita r confusd

G: Ipshita app se bohot pyar karti hain] yaha tak ke wo jab bhi mujhse milti hain humesha app ke baarai main baat karti hai] isiliyay' plz' app ye mangani na toray'plz]

Gauri is bout 2 leave wen

P: Ek minuite! Main ne abhi tak apna sentence khtam nahi kiya]

Gauri looks at Ipshita n sits down

P: main ke raha tha ke ( speakin to Ippy) app ki bst frend se milne ke baad or especially abhi jo unho ne kaha hain' isse sabit hota hain ke gauri je se achi dost tumhe milhi nahi sakti!!

Gauri n Ippy r both suprisd

P: aur mein keh raha tha ke ab app ki bst frend se milne ke baad mujhe aisa lagta hain ke

I: ke

P: ke tumne jo bhi Gauri je ke bare main kaha wo sab galat tha kyon ke she is much better n gr8r den how u described hr!!

Dis bought asmile 2 all faces

I: Anupam!! (she starts hittin hm lihtly n acts as if 2 kill hm) u idiot!! Mein tumhe nahi chorongi!

A: dekha' dara diya na? Kais lga mera mazak GAuri je?

G (also laughin): acha hai lekin plz aisa ainda na karain

A: jo app ka hukam] now if u don't mind' app apni dost ko sambhaal saktyy hain varna yh mujhe khaa jai gi!

Hope u gyz like it] plzzzz comment n reply ) If it lacks description or nythin den plzzzz lemmeno) thx! Hope u gyyz enjyd it n srrrrry 4 da longgggggggggggg wait!😡😡😃😳

Hi,

"Sh..."

Atleast you should have given the name yaar...😆 😆

Ohh..... So, Shiv is coming too.... Now Shiv will see Gauri..... 😳

You have taken away my Dreams now.... will be waiting for the next update.... *Sigh*.....

This is too bad yaar..... there jagrutid and here you...... she hides gauri and you are hiding Shiv....
too bad.... You should both learn from me..... see..... I write parts with both Shiv and Gauri in it.... 😆😆😆

Just Kidding!!!! Nothing serious....

But was not kidding about waiting for next update.....

"Ab Shiv ayega..... Tabito... Mazza Ayega....." 😉


Loved the part..... Please Post an Update soon.....

Bunny.

Originally posted by: bunny_fun

Hi, HI
"Sh..."

Atleast you should have given the name yaar...😆 😆
happy dat u took it in acount cuz i thougth myb nt mny wll ntice it
Ohh..... So, Shiv is coming too.... Now Shiv will see Gauri..... 😳

You have taken away my Dreams now.... will be waiting for the next update.... *Sigh*.....

This is too bad yaar..... there jagrutid and here you...... she hides gauri and you are hiding Shiv.... LOL! intezar to karna parega!😆😛
too bad.... You should both learn from me..... see..... I write parts with both Shiv and Gauri in it.... yh n dey r gr8 bt suspense u c''''😆😆😆

Just Kidding!!!! Nothing serious....

But was not kidding about waiting for next update.....

"Ab Shiv ayega..... Tabito... Mazza Ayega....." 😉

aaage aage deko kya hota hai!
Loved the part..... Please Post an Update soon..... thx will do soon

Bunny.

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but yaqar where is shiv 's turn and what is the secret
plz update soon
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