2# FF Nandini's shadow chapter 74 at page 135 ( check page 145 ) - Page 26

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Posted: 10 years ago
Intense update !! Liked it a lot nd the promo soundcloud is not buffering coz my net is slow so is it on youtube if it is plz give me the link..thnx
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Posted: 10 years ago

this update is for all the parents who think their child is good for nothing , they don't respect or care for their parents , before blaming child they should look at themselves, have they ever appreciated their kid, hug them when they are broken , kissed their forehead to show their care and love, a child is always a child, if you will hide your emotions from them child will try to stay away from you they will build their own world to kill the loneliness , GF BBF drugs etc is best way to get away from the pain of their life which the mostly can't share they get old and die with it , dont Blame your child always , you didn't gave them time and ruin their personality and the suffer for rest of life , their heart bleed and cries to see their cousin , friends parent's showering love on their child .stop cursing your child once talk them politely may be that is enough for their whole life



now coming to the update



" we all must relax " Manik takes a deep breath and caress her back

" if he is dead then " she murmur again

"Nandini he himself slipped " Cabir from back press her both shoulders and said

" only we three know what happened ?" Nandini said

"Nandini relax " Manik left her and asked her to get down


They all went upstairs

"water " Nandini gave them both glasses of water

"Manik " she look at their hands both were hurt

"yar it is ok "Manik said she clean it

"Cabir yeh kya huwa" Navya came from back and hold Cabir arm

"they both had a fight "Nandini said and showed her Manik arm

" pinch me , Cabir and Manik fighting with each other and you clapped " she took glass from Cabir hand and drank water

"forget it Nandini tell me what songs you search for me " Manik said and asked her to change topic

" oh My cell is in car "she said

"you take mine i will get the cell" Cabir said

" Cabir " Nandini stopped him and with eyes look at Manik

"shit " Cabir said and snatch from Manik " you guys take laptop " he walked out of the car

"how could i forget i have the video of Soha ?" he said and walked down to collect the things

"did we did right " Cabir asked himself while walking back


"i can't sing as i dont have Maa" Nandini said

"your Maa must be watching from up there . i will only sing if you will be with me" Manik said and tries the notes on his guitar


"Cabir this is for you " Navya said as he entered home

"Navya " He made face

"no Cabir you will sing and i am sure Aunty will come to listen you " Manik said

" Manik ji you dont worry i will bring her " Navya pat her shoulder "wasie aik baat bato why you all are so tense " Navya asked

"it is the event tension " Nandini wrap her arm around her shoulder and walked in bedroom " girls problem " she waved Manik he nod

"haa Nandini itna achi jewelry" she hold her arm and said

"Dad gave me " she smiled and tap her feet , Manik look at her he smiled

" i am so happy for you " Navya hug her

"hope their happiness remains like that "Cabir sat and hold his head "Manik we should have search him i guess it was a wrong decision " he punch on the table


"kya huwa "Navya look back at him

"house fly "Manik said and grab a tissue picked up a imaginary bee

"Cabir how many time i told you not to leave your dirty socks here and there " Navya said and picked up his clothes "Aaah " she held her back

"Navya "Cabir forgot everything and ran to help her

" can't you sit and seal your lips for sometime " he made her sit and placed his finger on her lips , she sob " ab kya huwa " he became worried

"you always fight with me nahi rehan muhje ko yahan " she made sad face, he gave up and sat next to her

"you ladies are so impossible 24 /7 mood swings " he placed his head with the back of the sofa

"kya huwa , raat ko neend nahi aai " she forget about her crying and look at him , he look at Manik and smiled


Nandini walked to him and placed her hand on his shoulder " i love you" she wrap her arm around him and kissed his head and whispered , he smiled "relax " he hug her they didn't cared about Cabir and Navya



" chalo get ready, lets go to Space ' Cabir said

"My cell" Nandini asked him

" you take my old one your cell is not working , i will fix it " he said

" ok " she took it

"be ready " he offer them his room


"Nandini you promise me you will be my strength what so ever happen" he said as she walked in

"Manik last time i committed a mistake and daily i regret for it ,if unfortunately anything happened this time i will not become your weakness "she cupped his face and kissed him he was surprise what has made her so bold " i know what all you did was in self defense " she hug him " we will sing , i will send video to dad " she smiled and said he cupped her face and kissed her forehead " now i am sure whatsoever happened will make our relation more strong " he became relax " i will talk to Cabir , he is in stress " he asked her to change and walked out




At Space


Principle walked in auditorium " it is not mother day today but we are celebrating a day in advance , so that students stay with their mom's on the day " he said and left the stage



Nyonika was in her office when her peon came and told her that the event has started

"who is performing ?" she asked

"Fab5 and Nandini" he said

"Maink and Nandini are back ? " she stand and walked towards the auditorium


"Dad can you hear me " Nandini fixed her Bluetooth and asked

"yes beta what you are doing" he asked

"shh" she said as Manik started playing the guitar ,she walked close to Manik

https://soundcloud.com/nadd-iya/maaa

http://k003.kiwi6.com/hotlink/z0yi4aggws/Maaa.mp3 ( play it and read )

Mana Tha Na Kehna Aap Ka " Manik walked close to her and sang "
Abhi Yad Hai Zara Sa
Hum Ne Aap Ko Kya Diya "Nandini sang and look at Chachi and smiled
Kuch Na Diya


Papa Tum Ne Subha Se Sham " Manik came close to Nadini and sang
Kiya Bus Kaam
Mama Tum ne sub Ka Dukh Saha " Nandini sang and blow a kiss to wards Chachi
Diya Aaram
Mama Papa Jo Pyar Diya " (Manik and Nandini sang together )
Aapne Humko Bahut Shukria both bow down in front of Chachi ,she cried

"we love you dad " both whispers together Manik dad wipe his tears and nod

it was all dark on the stage

Cabir

"Navya where are you yar ?" he said as he seated and started playing guitar
Jab chot kabhi mere lag jaati thi " he started sing he was under the spot "
To aankh teri bhi to bhar aati thi
Maa... o maa!

" aunty bus " Nanvy pull Cabir mom and brought her in room

"Navya " she said and freeze as she saw Cabir looking at his bandage wounds and singing
Jab chot kabhi mere lag jaati thi
To aankh teri bhi to bhar aati thi " he wipe his tears and closed his eyes and sank
Ek chhoti si phoonk se teri
Sabhi dard mere hote thhe gum
" i can feel you Maa " he opened his eye and look around tried to search her in crowd
Aaj bhi koi chot lage to
Yaad aati ho, yaad aati ho tum
Aaj bhi meri aankh bhare to
Yaad aati ho, yaad aati ho tum " he cried and sang with husky voice

Maa.. meri maa.. meri maa...
O maa.. meri maa, meri maa.. maa.. " he sob and left the stage "

Navya hold his mom arm she hug her and cried bitterly "thanks beta for bring me here "



The stage was again dark Nyonika was about to entered when she saw cops" what are you doing here ?" she asked

" we came here to arrest Manik Malhorta " he showed her the warrant

"for what ? " in auditorium Manik voice echo

Main Kabhi Batlata Nahin

" for killing Pandit today on highway " Cop said


Par Andhere Se Darta Hoon Main Maa "Manik sang and he look a Nandini who was standing with fairy lights in her hand next to the stage to show him light"
Yun To Main,Dikhlata Nahin " Nyonika ran in "Manik" the light spotted him
Teri Parwaah Karta Hoon Main Maa " he was looking at Nandini and sing "
Tujhe Sab Hain Pata, Hain Na Maa
Tujhe Sab Hain Pata,,Meri Maa

"cop asked student about Manik , they all pointed towards stage , he asked his men to go up and arrest him "

Bheed Mein Yun Na Chodo Mujhe " he sang when a cop came and placed cuff in his hand "
Ghar Laut Ke Bhi Aa Naa Paoon Maa "Nandini and Cabir ran in Nyonika too came on stage but the cop asked them to stay way "
Bhej Na Itna Door Mujkko Tu " Manik didn't discontinue singing he held Nandini hand in his she tangled her fingers with his and walked down the stage
Yaad Bhi Tujhko Aa Naa Paoon Maa "Manik turn back and look at Nyonika
Kya Itna Bura Hoon Main Maa " he smirk and sang , she came forward and hold his arm . he left his arm from her clench and walked out singing
Kya Itna Bura Meri Maa " she was emotionless she was not getting how to react she sank on floor

The hall echo with clap and sob " leave Manik " student shout on top of their voice

Nyonika stand and ran behind them " he is my son you can't arrest him like that " she shouted but student voice was louder than her's Nandini turn back and look at her she was making her way to come to them

"now you will prove your son is innocent " Nandini tight her grip on his hand

"you have killed Soha and now your teacher Pandit " cop asked him he look at Nandni who was calm and compose ready to face the truth , what was cooking in her mind he didnot knew he was sure she will find a way to be with him




guys dont beg , i have a outline in my mind , i will continue it , if separation is written in their fate they will be ,don't make me spoil the story , love is not always to stay together it is to be his or her for rest of life , enjoy it is just a story

i dedicated it to my Chachi she is like my mother

Edited by naddiya26 - 10 years ago
Angel13 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Everyone is so tensed
Manik Nandu Cabir think only them know but no..the guy has seen them
He will make trouble for them
They all are preparing to sing
Very very emotional one
Yaar I literally cried especially the way manik sang while looking at Nandu and at last nyonika
Hope she reacts here at least a bit
damn the cops already arrived
Hope Nandu and Cabir at least find a proof
The lyrics were incredible mind blowing fantabulous heart touching
Thanks for pm
Hope Nandu finds a way soon to be manik and that is what manik knows and trusts
Looking forward to read next update
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice
dedicate to MOTHERS DAY
KaShforever06 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful Update..
MaNanBir are so tensed..
I have a feeling that Pandit is not dead..
loved your choice of songs...
Thanks for the PM..
Continue Soon


Happy Mother's Day...
Edited by KaShforever06 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww hw cute it was i jst loved it yaar ultimate dis was i love u yaar for writing such an ff . God dis is so cute...
Plz update new one soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update..
Now nandini knew manik has not done anything..
Loved the update and the song is very touching..
yams_ini thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Manik got arrested
Nyonika might help manik bringing him out
Nw nandini wud reveal soha being alive
Cont soon dear
Waitn
Thanx fr Pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update . ..
all three of them are soo stressed..
cavya are cute...
manan are each others strength...
song selection was beautiful...
cabir and his moms part ws emotional ...
n then maniks song ... gooddd...
that ws awsme.. cops arrested him...
hope nyonika this time shows her love..
n nandini is thre.. im sure she will save him..
update soon...
n yess i loved ur msg before the update..
it ws soo heart touchng and true..
n may ur chachi gets well soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow beautifully written update
loved it
beautiful songs
literally cried
cont soon

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