SS: Realisations and Retaliations-chapter-11 (pg11 - Page 7

Originally posted by: prem_diwani

resvd -- thanks May... really need an alternate universe for our mithvi...

aaj raat ko shanth se padti hoon.gotta run now...

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Wow!Was I lost?!😃Read all da chapters 1st time today...Loved it May!But does Data die?😲m worried..Plz update soon?!😉

Originally posted by: arshisoma

Again grt job.kp wrtng:-)

Originally posted by: sabaSpeaks

whoa, that was a lot 😲 and really on the edge , well done May 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Junoonian

Wow May!

I just read through all of this at one sitting - kya baath hai!👏

I love the way each character has been fleshed out and there is a back story to things instead of things being left high and dry - love that even Lakhan's nature has been explained and his jealousy / hatred towards Prithvi.

Some questions -

how did Akash and Sunehri meet? Is Sunehri still cast as Meera's half-sister or is she like a completely new character?

Now won't Prithvi and Meera be cousins?

I am sorry to bug you with these but I loved the back stories and I am so curious as to who the bad guys are. Please update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: phulwa

Nice buildup of suspense, would like to read more, pls havethe next update coming soon.

Originally posted by: sue_21

As usual, superb update May!!! Great job done!!! You write brilliantly!!! 👍🏼