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2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Barunkidiwani

Thank u dear! I am glad I lived upto your expectations to give u an emotional update. How was it to see an emotional Advay?? 😉

I love emotional Advay
I think he expressed a lot as he was drunk
But still he was in some sort of control

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Barunkidiwani

Much love 😳

Much love to your story 😳

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Advay was very protective throughout this chapter.

His dark side was mellowed down by the harsh incident.

The alcohol acted as a catalyst in bringing out his softer side during his confession to Chandni.

The layer of the real Advay, underneath all the sarcastic ruthless layers that he projects to her, was revealed to her today.

I am glad that you did not make it dramatic, like he misbehaving with her after getting drunk (or) a mushy romance between them - which then, would have sounded cinematic. I am very happy that you projected a man with total reality and practicality - the real man, tired after the whole day's event, totally exhausted mentally and physically, intoxicated thoroughly by the drink, dozed off with her in his arms.

Edited by rajatshweta - 8 years ago

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: 2filmy

I love emotional Advay
I think he expressed a lot as he was drunk
But still he was in some sort of control

Our hotwa has lot of self control. He can never let anyone control him even if it is Chandini. Itna self control hai bande mei ki Chandini uske god mei thi phir bhi usne bohot decent behave kiya 😆

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Fa13

@Fa13

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Haai...😳

Emotional & beautiful chap.

Loved it!

So well u've penned the emotions 👏

She was eager to meet him.❤️

Ufff AdNi...hugs...kisses ☺️

Wow..Chandni peck Advay's lip..😲😎

Waiting for full hosho hawas wali AdNi kiss ☺️

Let see he'll gonna remember or not after waking up!

Thanks for the pm.

Do continue soon.😃

Edited by Fa13 - 8 years ago

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hailly

@hailly

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Wow Awesome update.
Loved it, continue soon please.
Thanks for pm.

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 36

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

wow such an emotional update.

Loved it so much.

continue soon.

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

😊

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2filmy

@2filmy

Trailblazer

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Barunkidiwani

Our hotwa has lot of self control. He can never let anyone control him even if it is Chandini. Itna self control hai bande mei ki Chandini uske god mei thi phir bhi usne bohot decent behave kiya 😆

Haan woh to dikha
Banda ka daat dena hoga
Itna self control shayad hi kisi aur me ho