Hi guys, thanks to Gags k subtle taane 
, I've finally managed to fine-tune the first part my Surlie fiction. Writing fiction after almost a decade, so pehle hi expectations low rakhna... Disclaimer: Not much will happen story-wise in this part, just setting the stage... Here goes nothing...
AJEEB DASTAAN HAI YE...
CHAPTER 1
Surya Pratap Reddy exhaled a long, weary sigh as he stepped out of the police commissioner's office, the transfer orders clutched tightly in his hand. Just when he had finally started to make a real impact in the bustling city, cleaning up the streets and putting away some of the most notorious criminals, his superiors had decided to send him packing.
"Purvaiya!" he muttered under his breath, his brow furrowing in displeasure. "Of all the places they could have chosen, why this one?"
The sleepy village, nestled deep in the heart of the countryside, was a far cry from the fast-paced life he was accustomed to. Surya couldn't fathom what possible purpose this transfer could serve, other than to punish him for his unorthodox methods. His reputation for bending the rules and challenging the status quo had clearly rubbed the higher-ups the wrong way.
"Well, they can't keep me there forever," Surya resolved, his jaw set with determination. "I'll do my time in this god-forsaken place, and then I'll be back where I belong — making a real difference."
With a resigned shrug, he made his way to the station's parking lot, ready to embark on the long journey to Purvaiya. As he settled into the driver's seat of his trusted police-issue SUV, Surya couldn't help but feel a twinge of resentment. This was hardly the grand homecoming he had envisioned for himself after arresting the corrupt minister's son, who had recently run over a labourer.
The drive through the winding country roads was a tedious one, with the monotonous scenery doing little to lift Surya's spirits. He drummed his fingers impatiently on the steering wheel, half-heartedly singing along to the song playing on the radio while his mind was racing with thoughts of the cases he was leaving behind, especially that of the notorious gangster, Guru Bhai.
"Who's going to keep those scumbags in line while I'm gone?" he wondered, picturing the city's underbelly slowly creeping back to the surface.
Just as Surya was about to give in to the overwhelming temptation to turn the car around and head back, a signboard that read 'Purvaiya' came into view. With a resigned sigh, he steered the vehicle onto the narrow, tree-lined road that led into the village.
As he approached the modest police station in the village, Surya couldn't help but feel a sense of foreboding. This station could barely match the standards of the one he had left behind. The building itself seemed almost quaint; its faded paint and weathered facade a stark contrast to the sleek, modern structure he was accustomed to.
Surya stepped out of the car, straightening his uniform and squaring his shoulders. He may have been banished to this rural hell, but he was still a cop — and a damn good one at that.
'Dekha jata crime nahin, rone-dhone ke liye time nahin,' he thought, and with a steely determination, he pushed open the station's door and strode in, ready to face the challenges that lay ahead.
"Keyka..." he grumbled as he realised that the interior of the station was equally unimpressive, with outdated equipment and a distinct lack of the bustling energy that he associates with police work.
A few curious eyes turned his way as he strode up to the front desk, where a uniformed officer, Ram Tripathy — the nametag read — sat, idly flipping through a magazine.
"Ei Chowpaty, main senior inspector Surya Pratap Reddy," he announced, his voice cutting through the stillness of the room. "Mereko idhar Hyderabad se transfer kiya. Papers to fax mein aa hi gya hoga ab tak."
The constable looked up, a hint of surprise flickering across his face. "Err... it's Tripathy, sir... And yes, we've been expecting you." He gestured towards a cabin door at the back of the station. "The commissioner is waiting. Aap andar ja sakte hain."
Surya nodded curtly, his lips pressed into a thin line as he zoomed towards the cabin. When he pushed the door open, he found himself face-to-face with an elderly man seated behind a cluttered desk.
"Senior inspector Reddy," the commissioner greeted him, a warm smile spreading across his face. "It's a pleasure to have you here in Purvaiya."
Surya nodded in acknowledgment, but his expression remained guarded. "Thank you, sir. I must admit, I'm a bit surprised to find myself stationed in a place like this."
Commissioner Indraneel Sen chuckled. 'Seems like commissioner Rao was right. Somebody is really unhappy to leave the city,' he thought.
He smiled, gesturing for Surya to take a seat. "I can understand your apprehension, my boy. Purvaiya may not be the most exciting posting, but I assure you, there is plenty of work to be done here," he said encouragingly.
Surya settled into a chair, his posture still tense. "With all due respect, sir, I'm not exactly known for my patience or my ability to blend in. I'm more of a 'take-charge' kind of cop, and I'm not sure how well that will translate in a place like this." Surya went for the 'seedhi baat, no bakwas' approach.
The commissioner nodded, his eyes twinkling with amusement. "I'm well aware of your reputation, senior inspector Reddy. And that's precisely why I requested your transfer here."
Surya blinked, caught off guard by his senior's words. "Requested my transfer? But I was under the impression that this was a punishment posting."
Indraneel leaned forward, his expression growing serious: "On the contrary, my boy. I specifically asked for you because I believe you're the right man for the job. Purvaiya may be a quiet village, but the problem at hand surely requires a strong, unconventional approach."
Surya's brow furrowed as he processed the commissioner's words. "And what exactly is this problem you need me to address?"
Indraneel's expression darkened, a shadow passing over his weathered features: "There was an extremely suspicious death of a businessman. The local police have been struggling to keep up, and I believe your skills and expertise could be the key to unraveling the mystery."
Surya felt a spark of interest ignite within him; his natural instinct for investigation piqued. "And what makes you think I'm the right man for the job?"
The commissioner leaned back in his chair, a wry smile tugging at the corners of his mouth. "Let's just say I have a hunch that you're about to stumble upon something much bigger than you could ever imagine. And when you do, I'll be counting on you to rise to the occasion."
Surya's eyes narrowed as he considered the commissioner's words. There was clearly more to this transfer than met the eye, and the prospect of a challenge — a real, juicy mystery to sink his teeth into — was suddenly far more appealing than the prospect of returning to Hyderabad.
"Alright, sir," Surya said, a faint glimmer of determination in his voice. "I'll give this place a chance. But I can't promise I'll play by the rules."
Indraneel chuckled, the corners of his eyes crinkling with amusement. "That's exactly what I was hoping you'd say, senior inspector Reddy. Welcome to Purvaiya!"
The sun had long since dipped below the horizon, casting the sleepy village of Purvaiya in a warm, golden glow, when Surya finally made his way out of the police station. As he stepped out into the quiet streets, he couldn't help but feel a sense of unease settle over him. The decision was made. But the idea of getting stuck in this god-forsaken place for an indefinite period of time, filled him with a growing sense of dread.
Surya ran a hand through his hair in frustration, mentally running through his options. Perhaps he could find a way to convince the commissioner to transfer him back to Hyderabad — or, at the very least, to a more exciting posting. But just as he was about to climb the steps to the police station, a commotion down the street caught his attention...
Intrigued, Surya quickened his pace, his instincts as a cop kicking in. As he rounded the corner, he found himself faced with a throng of villagers gathered around an upturned cycle trolley. Large utensils and piles of aloo-puri were strewn across the road and a woman, dressed in a stark white saree, was hunched over a now dented board that read 'Babu Aloo-Puri: Aloo-puri khao, Shut-up ho jaao'
Surya couldn't help but chuckle at the signage, but just then, he noticed a tempo rushing towards the woman who seemed unaware of the world around her. He ran as fast as he could, and just in the nick of time, grabbed the woman by her waist and dragged her out of harm's way. Both spun around a few times due to the impact...
"Marne ka itna shauq hai kya tumko? Saamne se itna bada gaadi aa rha tha tumko dikha nahi?" He screamed at the woman at the top of his lungs as his heart pounded uncontrollably, horrified at the thought of what could have happened.
But the woman, Imlie, had a war raging within her very being. She was too dumbfounded to respond to his screams.
As she steadied herself and caught sight of this man in front of her, her heart skipped a beat... her breath caught in her throat... Time seemed to stand still as her gaze locked onto his face, a face so hauntingly familiar... She stood frozen, too stunned by the uncanny resemblance. While her mind kept screaming that this can't be her Babu, her silly little heart refused to listen to that voice of reason, and her treacherous eyes, simply wouldn't tear the gaze away or even blink, lest her Babu vanishes again...
Her mind raced, unable to comprehend what she was seeing, grappling with a torrent of emotions — shock, disbelief, and a flicker of hope. Could it be... But how? But what if... Her world stopped, consumed by the ghostly visage of her beloved.
And before Surya could comprehend what was happening, the woman fainted in his arms. And for the second time in a matter of minutes, this beautiful stranger had kicked in his protective instincts...
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Rest of the parts of this story have been moved to a private blog. If you're interested in the story, please PM me for invite and access.
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That's all for the first part... Like I said, nothing much happens... Ab ande-tamatar ki baarish shuru ho sakti hai...
With love,
Shree
(I shall now convert more ppl, buhuahahahhahah
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