~The Traitor~An OS

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VOILA an OS

faint faint faint...

eee happy turba

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Kya baat hai Piu Ma'm,oops sry sry sry,Piu Di.Kya OS Hai!! 😃.The more I read OSs and FFs and SSs of Neil/Kesar,the more I fall in love with him.The charm which he has left on all of us can never end.But you, Hats of to you!! But,what happened to Nishabda?

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wow am amazed at how many story ideas u have...

love you for this birthday gift..enjoyed it thoroughly...mujhe mera kesar dose mil gaya...

the story about pre-independence era...with all the sparks of kesar and gulaal...u r genius...u bring something which i dont even think about...

i love how their story started bachpan se hi...and for a change..kesar bada hai.. :D suited to that era ...

my fav part was home coming of kesar...such a kesarified feeling...with all that pangs of separation...well written..the photo scene was so touching ...it must be so overwhelming moment for kesar..and waah sasurji caught it bechara...

my god kya band baja rahe the gulaal ki saheliyaa...hahaha..kunal was so cute there...
the conversation was very amusing...but jo sun na chahiye tha vo tho suna nahi hi..isliye ho gayi na saari gadbad...

loved gulaal's characterisation ..her true patriotic nature...so gutsy to even call of her marriage for her country...us waqt to itna communication possible bhi nahi tha ki clarification ho sake...ya misunderstanding door ho...even after getting rejected by gulaal for being a traitor he still joined..that was interesting..was he punishing himsef or her..???

the flag hoisiting part was nice...best was last scene with their cute fight over netaji and bapu ji...hahah..eventually both supporting the opposing party LOL

thanks piu..u made my day...❤️

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aww . .such a lovely gift for your bodyguard . . .aur humara bhi bhala ho gaya 😛 . .last year mansoon , this year snow fall . . .beautiful story piu . . . .apne GK kisi bhi period mei aaye rahenge GK hi . . .now i know ki yeh dono uss time hote toh chai vs. doodh ki jagah baabu vs. neta ji karte .😆 . .ab kitne baar bolu . .you are amazing . .⭐️

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Piu Chatterjee

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Originally posted by: nneeiill
VOILA an OS

faint faint faint...

eee happy turba

Jago jago..Utho budday hai enjoy karo...Aww yeh tere liye hi hai EXCLUSIVE🤗

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Originally posted by: -sanaa-
beautifully written...love it..

Thanks Sana🤗

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Piu Chatterjee

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Originally posted by: Astoria
Kya baat hai Piu Ma'm,oops sry sry sry,Piu Di.Kya OS Hai!! 😃.The more I read OSs and FFs and SSs of Neil/Kesar,the more I fall in love with him.The charm which he has left on all of us can never end.But you, Hats of to you!! But,what happened to Nishabda?

Aww Thanks Ayesha🤗
Ahh so TRUE Kesar and Gulaal have a charm of their won.No matter how many times or how many versions I think,They always pull a string in my heart.That's the MAGIC of their relationship😳
P.S-Nishabda is gonna come soon...Want to finish SOTN first Phir Nishbada ka back to back updates PUKKA

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