CAPTIVE MG OS UPDATED PART ON PG 1/ 15-11-2020

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Posted: 5 years ago
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INTRODUCTION


Just a random thought....

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Posted: 5 years ago
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CAPTIVE


PART LINK


Pw : protect1234

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Wish you all a very happy and prosperous Diwali 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗


Stay safe and healthy...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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HAPPY DIWALI BABY 😃

commented on blog 😃

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Happy Diwali

great but maan is leaving geet to the goons. Please don’t maan that would not do o her good. Yes he was forced to because of his grandad but still.


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Happy and Prosperous Diwali to you too.

Loved the story. Maan kidnapping for treatment of his grandpa.

The circumstances has made him emotionless.

Geet is Handa princess now falls to wrong hands

Hope it has another part.

Will be waiting.

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Reasing your work after like ages. Really felt good... Money sometimes become such a need that man cab do ethically wrong things as well.... Although deep down maan felt bad for geet but for him his grandfather was top priority.... Waiting for next... Keep writing keep rocking....


Happy Diwali

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Thanks for PM dear

Awesome update

Wish you a very happy Diwali

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Commented on blog

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Di, thank you for the wonderful Diwali surprise! smiley4

Very descriptive short story !

Maan is desperate to save his grandfather....... w/o thinking of the consequences. Curious if there will be a part 2 ?? Where he saves geet ??

Thank you

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