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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 9 years ago

#941

Originally posted by: NusiSg
Okkk I'm done with chap 14"blow winds and crack your scrutiny" Hello again
... woahh wat's wrong with datta.. he was total jerk in ths one.. 😛 chhotti's blood boil bt I thought she's doing her usual female chauvinism act bt gosh ths time I totally agreed to her.. he was being jerk..irrelevant n extremely annoying..😛 bohot kuch keh dya tere datta ko.. bt I kno u'll band bajaoed him in next few chap..u urself described datta brilliantly in ths chap itself..."I think you are a pompous ,self opinionated, arrogant MCP... well that's men for your shaadi ke time they want a choi moi . shy , mau mein zabaan nehin.. and certainly not forward type chorris... I think it was phele kiss for both.. naku trusted him completely and he didn't take further advantage of the situation...
so I'm cool will wait eagerly how u'll fix his brain via sherni nakku..😆

I think I'm lagging behind n mostly my replies came out after discussion with chhoti so bear with the same kind of responses lately hammie.. 😛 nus... you are reviving history by reading and commenting on PR.. what could more wonderful for hammie??
Okk missing u come bac n gve us ur darshan on ths thread wil wait fr ur response..😳
you call out .. had to come... even barbs popped by Nus..😆... kabhi bhi ah sakte hai.. haq se😛.. loved your comment , read on nus... much love hammie

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#942

Hammie hammie hammie ,
Hello I m here after so long.
Was a bit bz.
Pichli bar dutta ko bura bhala kehke gyi thi.
Wo banda tha hi iske layek.
Nuspa calls me female chauvinist, I guess I m one. I always had issues with this point of view of MEN. Kisike sath jo marzi karo lakin shadi k waqt untouched ladki chahiye.
😡
U have portrayed d weakness in every man very beautifully. 👏 love u for that.I agree men thinks n acts this way.but why we readers react?(I went through comments of others last time n majority had d same opinion like me.most ur readers were female) cz we look for Ideal mr perfect in d hero.Hero must do something heroic, animated characters... idealistic.but here to remember dutta was never an ideal hero.he used to do marpit a lot that looks dramatically heroic but he was a man of flaws.we saw dutta physically assaulting his wife, on d other hand we saw a great husband who ,despite all deception his wife gave him,put pistol on a man's head who tried to defame his wife.complex character. MUJHE SHAK USPE NEHI USKE PYAR PAR HAIN...

here u have portrayed d same complexity very beautifully.though he gave d sexist opinion, I cant stop admiring dutta as he surprised me when he never tried to stop naku from working,even when he knew that champak too worked there.

Dutta came to apologize, this is a sign of bein a good human being.and he realized he can't live without her.he let his ego being washed away .n I loved loved loved n loved these lines specially:he swallowed hard as his eyes welled up again, and he belonged to her she was the the very air he breathed ,yet the the feeling of disillusionment weighed him down ,why did she not wish to see him before she left? ,was he not her object of desire? as she was to his ?was she staging a drift off?

I m so glad tofind a much stronger nakku.this is d actual point of being educated, never let urself b a doormat.

Ughhh kitneee lambe reply hain.lambe chapter k lambe reply.
Ughhh how I miss this brilliant writer...

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nusrat

@NusiSg

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#943

Ohhh hi Hammie. .. m here to reply fr chapter 15
"Sweet are the uses of adversity"..Shakespeare

ohhh man ths datta again started ruling my heart.. kia baat hai iss ki... din shru nahi hota nakku ko dekhe bina iss ka.. ufff their hostel date was awsomeee.. 😛 mazza aagya.. nakku knew well how to tackle datta..😛 I loved that grass wali hostel..laga koi England ka hee school u ve trying to capture.. green lush lawns.. hmmm tera school haina yeh..??😛

Mama was trying to come in btw.. his side of story of losing his son in war was not vry pleasing.. but datta was gentleman there.. loved him n his stance there.. he does empathise with the old man.. that's my man datta😳..

Ye tasha starting anywhere yaar.. kahin b shru ho rahe hain.. jaldi shadi krwa do.. ab nahi ruken ge..☺️

baaji pe bht pyaar aaya... headquarter se phone phir kitchen ki nigraani.. love baaji n his friendship...

Ohhh Ham was caught up so was disappeared. .wud be regular frm now on..

Thnks fr replying to 13 n 14... jst saw them.. I thought u frget to anno here..

Chal bye abhi k liye.. will be bac soon😳..

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#944

Hammie hammie hammie,
Hellooo back again ur lazy n busy reader.
An episode full of baji rao chap 16.
It was a great way to show dutta bsji bonding which brought d true essence of laagi.
I remember the rakhi scene where dutta gifted naku on behalf of shethji n kala badmouths naku.
Kala was fun today,MY BABY?seriously? 😉
I loved d whole concept of bringing d background of rakhi and dutta forgiving his sis.

I felt it extremely touchy , specially when dutta was calling roops chotti...d bro sis relation is heavenly.
So dutta sher again.ROARRR.

thanks for writing so many things for us its really entertaining.

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nusrat

@NusiSg

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#945

Done with chap 16

"the most unkindest cut of all"...Shakespeare

Ohhh Hammie baaji was great here.. u wrote baaji's emotion guilt, love of his only known reletionship, fear all with perfection.. jst loved his breakdown n I felt his pain so deeply..

Raakhi's celebration came vry timely indeed... jst love datta chhoti convo.. I loved her referring him as her father... 😳

The last heroic measure of datta saving baaji frm trench was filmy bt I jst loved duji interaction there... especially baaji giddy act was heartwarming hammie...

All in all a vry vry emotional chap bt I'm glad ths duji confrontation comes timely.. I jst love love love ths dujified chap...romance ki khair hai.. wese b thora zada hogya tha..😉 will b bac soon fr 17..

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#946

Hammie ,hi again.
Now on chapter 17.
I m as frustrated as baji is,
Come on itna bhi kya galti kardi usne, wont he b able to enjoy his bhaus engagement?
Jail chala gya itna saza kya kam na thi ?
I loved loved d tasha scene here.dutta desperate to see nakku even if its against d rules.I found d scene really cute😉
So hammie r we heading towards a grand wedding ?

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nusrat

@NusiSg

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#947

Hmmm done with 17.. yaar I felt sometimes datta consider baaji inferior to him.. taken him for granted. .that's wat I didn't like about datta in actual serial too.. dost dushman ki pehchaan nahi usse... I kno baaji ne chhupaya sach.. but datta's behaviour sometimes really extreme.. it seems he doesn't consider baji as roops best match..khair.. still being an army man n he goes to thaana himself fr his friend was a great deal in itself I guess.. but baaji jesa friend deserve more than that I feel.. meko tere datta pe thora gussa aaya hammie..😉

Datta's excitement on his own sagaai is really cute.. his zid n stubbornness on seeing her face only once before sleeping was endearing. ..thoroughly loved the scene..

Datta mama confrontation scene indeed was to tying the loose ends.. finally mama now on good terms with datta... loved datta's homewrk before ths meeting. .datta was smart n two step ahead of mamaji.. cant wait to see mama's argument with brig paarekh..
Very well written update..love reading the pre-sagai preparation the most..
Will b back soon hammie. . Come n gve us ur darshan here.
Waiting... ... ...

Edited by NusiSg - 8 years ago

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#948

Hayeee mera bz hammie hammie hammie,
Manna padega jinko shadi na bhi karni ho na, apke ye sara engagement wala segment padhke ussko engagement karneka man karega.mera allergy hain aise ceremony se.firbhi I really enjoyed ek ek portion zevar se leke make up kaise honge, dutta k dhoti, even u described d kapre of all d family members as well.hmm mamaji vs parekh dekhneko milega kya?me excited.waise dutta mamaji ko accha makkhan lagwaye hain.
It was something really beautiful, u covered indian rituals really beautifully. 👏 👏
Loving d way dutta looks at nakku.usse ab na hoyega intezar.
What amused me d most is d event those army jawan made.aise sachme hote hain kya army people k shadi me?
I want to see some action packed episodes soon.I remember ur brilliant chapter on blue blood where ravi destroyed nakkus flower shop, wo main kabhi nehi bhul sakti ur biggest strength is action, like when dutta took d bullet to save his friend.aise...
Why did u stop writing hammie?
I miss u.I miss commenting everyday n pressing likes.ye to ekdin khatam ho jayega fir where will I comment ?

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nusrat

@NusiSg

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#949

Hmmm finally done with engagement chap 1 n 2.. quite long but a very well written chap hammie. . u ve captured the festive mood brilliantly. .ur writing as flawless as ever.. the opening scene with Aye sahib n the decoration of bappa Aye recognising it as baaji's effort...really well put on hammie..take a bow..

Ur self obsessed Datta n u calling him as narcissist was ROFLing hammie.. 🤣 loved his grooming n his obviois panic over dhoti.. isshh.. kahan se aate the ye ideas tujhe hammie..😆

ohhh it was brilliant writing indeed hammie.. it was gving me the feeling even even I'm attending TaSha engagement. .so powerfully written.. each n every detail u write was jst amazing effort... hats off to u.. all the 4 song n the dance steps u collaborated within the lyrics was too too good.. aise laga im watching it on tv itself.. 😳

Ohhh yea n I absolutely loved mamma-parekh heart to heart convo.. I jat loved how u incorporates the core issue in their engagement itself.. parekh was convincing indeed..

Bt ths line takes the cake Ham..

"it is great to go to war but greater to rise above and strive for peace" 👍🏼

Hmmm Datta's besharami increasing by leaps n bounds now.. nobody can stop him but Naku's bappa..🤣 lagan tak he'll wait or not..I'm eager to read ... 😛

Hammie dun stop writing dear.. . it's in ur blood..still praying something inspire u enough to resume writing.. luv u..😳

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#950

Originally posted by: simple2joy
Hammie hammie hammie , hi taz.. here finally
Hello I m here after so long.
Was a bit bz. no problem
Pichli bar dutta ko bura bhala kehke gyi thi.
Wo banda tha hi iske layek.
Nuspa calls me female chauvinist, I guess I m one. I always had issues with this point of view of MEN. Kisike sath jo marzi karo lakin shadi k waqt untouched ladki chahiye.
😡 but you forget.. dutta never knew a woman before..he didn't know quitee what to expect..naku on the other hand was innocent and geniunely wanted to appease him him
U have portrayed d weakness in every man very beautifully. 👏 love u for that.I agree men thinks n acts this way.but why we readers react?(I went through comments of others last time n majority had d same opinion like me.most ur readers were female) cz we look for Ideal mr perfect in d hero.Hero must do something heroic, animated characters... idealistic.but here to remember dutta was never an ideal hero.he used to do marpit a lot that looks dramatically heroic but he was a man of flaws.we saw dutta physically assaulting his wife, on d other hand we saw a great husband who ,despite all deception his wife gave him,put pistol on a man's head who tried to defame his wife.complex character. MUJHE SHAK USPE NEHI USKE PYAR PAR HAIN...
yes taz.. its called being part of a patriarchical society..the same strand went through IKRS.. too.. the first episode.. read viplav's views when he sees a nymph emerge out of the water dressed in white a symbol of purity
here u have portrayed d same complexity very beautifully.though he gave d sexist opinion, I cant stop admiring dutta as he surprised me when he never tried to stop naku from working,even when he knew that champak too worked there.

Dutta came to apologize, this is a sign of bein a good human being.and he realized he can't live without her.he let his ego being washed away .n I loved loved loved n loved these lines specially:he swallowed hard as his eyes welled up again, and he belonged to her she was the the very air he breathed ,yet the the feeling of disillusionment weighed him down ,why did she not wish to see him before she left? ,was he not her object of desire? as she was to his ?was she staging a drift off?
humm hard exterior but soft centre.. the don with the golden heart
I m so glad tofind a much stronger nakku.this is d actual point of being educated, never let urself b a doormat.
there are many who thought she was dense.. but there was something about her koel or not.. dutta gravitated towards her
Ughhh kitneee lambe reply hain.lambe chapter k lambe reply.
Ughhh how I miss this brilliant writer..
tu thakte nehin.. rewind kar kar... want to bin the tape... aacha loved your feedback.. itold you write a story .. about anything 😛.. yours hammie

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