Hamlet's Revised Fanfic Collection Index - Page 28

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

hi

hamlet

i feel a journey ended i felt i was part of it

it was wonderful ..all 's well that end's well👏

start a brand new story ...plsss soon

thanxsss ..you r wonderful 😎

Hi Hamlet

The end of story took us by suprise like all ...The story of Dutta & Naku we all felt part of the journey 😳

They both got their share of Happiness & paro too 👍🏼..otherwise it would be difficult to visualize parent giving away their kids

pls start a story which you have just waiting to unfold😊

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi hamletmissing friday ud

Originally posted by: CUTE_SAPNA

hi cute, many pardons for replying so late to your comment.. so busy with life for the moment, don't know if Iam going or coming

confession:- @hammie, dear i was thinking for some days that u have ended the 1st part of trilogy " out of my hands" by the ch-21.😊 so i will say that neither i am shocked nor surprised. 😊but won't say that it was expected because i thought , yeah , bit more to come so there could be 2 or 3 chapters remaining. it ended... not happy but will say that u have really spared me from the shock alike which i have got from @rose's "TMD".😊
I ended it, as my imagination got stunted.. but I had to remind myself, as a writer , I have a task to fulfill.. so kind of kicked my self back into some action.. even though sluggish..

for the last part:- dear, i felt, i m having the roller coaster ride. 😃👏didn't experienced such a fast moving story to end, for months.👏 GREAT. yes, the major twist which i wasn't experiencing was nana followed dsp with the help of his bgs . grt ,u ended both the tyrants in one go. 👏👏dsp such a person; even he let off go nana for 2-3 times but the death was calling him.😡😡 same for kaido.😡😡in between i was wondering where his men/bgs are. glad no one turned up. 😕😃😃awww felt bad 4 kajri and heera-sona. didn't want to abide by dsp' and naku's decision to give their babies. NOPE. 🤢
in my culture , babies may be offered to confirmed childless immediate family members.. its the ultimate act of giving Naku as a mother could have done
u have tackled the babi maa very well. and what about baaji-roops😕. it would have been better if the babies would have remained with baaji and roops with their babies so dsp and naku can have a quality time. 😆
baji and roops were not yet proved childless.. but dutta's brothers were, hence i did what I did..
awe, dsp still do remembers his"adda" and the fence where he met his naku for the 1st time. 😳😳so the fence is removed.and dutta living as an ordinary farmer. 😊dsp should be the "mukhiya"; he is the most deserving.👏👏
he decided to empower his older brother,despite all the ill will he had to bear on their account.. this was the familial credence dutta gave to his family.
good update. keep it always going-on. luv u loads.
thanks cute
spl note:- dear it is a "TRILOGY"😃. i am waiting for the "third story"; 😃😃👏can't hold my breath for long😆. pls give me some hints for the next friday' plsss.😉
yes ,I intend too, for myself, hate leaving work midway .. ju bola,I aim to continue.. however thanks for your valuable time you spent on reading my work.. and what joy to see your OS.. will surely read it and comment.
many thanks to you for commenting.. incidentally ,the bansuri music is twinks gift to me.. 😃... much love hammie

Originally posted by: afi7861

OMG hammie . dutta aur us ki animal foj 🤣 🤣 🤣 wise kitna acha hot agar dutta nana ko doh doh karpet ta😆 sona aur heera ne nana kaido ka kaam tamam kar diya its good something new 😆 finally AND bhala toh sab bhala😊 hammie tu na tezz express hai .shaadi bhi ho gaye twins bache . baad mein ek girl bhi.. maghar hammie beche mein kuch missing tha nahi???😉 mujhe lagta hai tere talent ko zong lag gaya hai😆😆

just joking yaar .loved the whole update happy ending👏👏

thank you so much for giving us a such beautiful story ..warna mein toh lagtar missing he raha ...maghar tu time pe update karte rahe you are great hammie...

hi kaka balli I smiled when I read your comment, and haan, chal you liked my plot in the end.. I know people expected dutta to be violent.. yaar , LTL 1 bas ek he tha', hammie cannot be jayesh patel.. bas can only try to make myself and few others happy.. aur haan, I will do a teeny tiny final SS.. so I can respectfully end this thread.. aacha you must be busy with chand raat and eid preparation..meri taraf se thujhe , Ali,aur bhabi ko eid ke mubarak , and bahut se dauian.. you have a blessed time.. much love to all three of you, thanks for the billi wala image.. 😃 hammie

Originally posted by: CUTE_SAPNA

deary hammie; getting very nostalgic s r8 now. 😭reason = when i joined this ss, the 1st part of trilogy was already finished. even u have written the part- 1/ch-1 of this 'FTH'. 😃👏followed it continuously for 20 weeks.😃😭so a separation kinda feeling.😭😭😭i mean i know there is more to come, i,e. the third part of trilogy ,⭐️ but wanna say ;simply loved this one.😳

dsp , with his father, brother and sil ,a friend more than a brother and his mother who is a mother more to dsp. 😃enemy's girl, the 1st encounter;😃 again following her,😃 their separation due to dsp's sil . 😡😡😡this was the worst phase, i mean the saddest part 😭😭😭. and after that there was all the good one.😃👏👏

in between , what i have referred the saddest part was also 1st due to the death of dsp'f father, 😭😭🤢my heart , literally wrenched with pain at that time,😭😭😭 i cried literally.😭 glad dsp was having naku at that time beside him , with him.😭😃👏 but then dsp , may be 4 short time , had to loose naku ,😭 baaji and AS😭. his baba's home too 😭when he was in the forest.😭 waited 4 him to come back asap.😭

few points r there , which i want 2 share with u @hammie. in the last part , u told that AS got dsp and naku married .😃👏 baaji and roops are there with her.😃👏 but why dsp made this decision to live separately,😕😭 i mean he loved his baba's room ;house too. he also could have lived with AS and baaji 😃👏👏. i know u gave the reason of dsp's self-dependence but still may be in the home adjacent to them.😃👏

not at all agree with the decision of naku and dsp's giving their sils their love, in the form of babies.🤢 i mean they don't deserve it simply😡😡. if they are refined, then also they can pour love on " naku's babies". 😊what they have done with my dsp is intolerable and unforgettable, no matter how much they r repenting.😡😡😡

why naku's was not willing for a 2nd child ? may be 4 the reason that dsp may give this one also to his sil !!!😲


waiting 4 ur answer. dear.😃😃 pls giv some hints of the 3rd story of trilogy.sorry, got very emotional😊