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Posted: 11 years ago
its a beautiful love story...perfect blend of happiness, sorrow, separation...Loved it...
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Lovely love story !!! It's so touching !!!!
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Wow such a nice story. Everyone, read this. :p hehehehe
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anupama.


Wow such a nice story. Everyone, read this. :p hehehehe



🤣

Funny how you caught on it so late 😆
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Originally posted by: Anupama.

Wow such a nice story. Everyone, read this. :p hehehehe


Anu...you are absolutely hilarious 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was beautiful, this story of two souls bound by the memories of their 8 days together in extreme strife. So short yet so complete in its portrayal..full of possibilities in the future. Poignant.
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Posted: 11 years ago
that was a nice one Anupama
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
This one was recommended to me by Charu when it was still an OS. Guess ti took me a very long time to come here.


The setting was quite unique, and so was the way you paced it- fiRst with the meeting of the duo and then the leap of nine years. I also liked that a chapter had been dedicated to Khushi's brother. which also makes em say that I'm glad that this was turned into an SS; otherwise there would have been many questions left unanswered.

Not many might be appreciative of the idea of an ending like this one and the one in 'Brewing up', but I for one like it that you end things in that manner. The end in the form of 'The beginning' provides yet another story of hope, happiness while providing an open culmination.
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Enjoyed reading this story...good job!
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lovely! Don't know how I had missed reading this ..
It is so beautifully written!

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