Virman SS: I will make u my again one day

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Jannat

@Jannat94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Hey sweety
its a nice story...so count it
waiting for update...cont soon 😃

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virumanu

@virumanu

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

hey buddy... i realy love ur story..

its such a fab one...

hey dnt feel bad abt the mistakes and all...it happens dear...

its new rite...everyone in this forum wer once new to writing...

dnt get disappointed if no one is liking or commenting...u ask any writer in this forum abt hw many likes or comments they got while writing thier first work ...u write and write ok and for ur grt works their would be un countable fans...

and and and one more imp thing is tat dnt ever cme up with the idea of discontinue this ss or any of ur worksss...

please...

i loved ur pro a lot...

i knowww i know i late in commenting...srry...

was busyyy..

and i hate u because ur part 1 was too too short...(JUST KIDDING)

but the part was realy short..

i love too readd a lloonngg part now...so would u plzzz please...

continue sooonnn ...

would be waitingg buddyyy

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pink1

@pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Jannat94
Hey sweety
its a nice story...so count it
waiting for update...cont soon 😃

thanku I will update soon

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: virumanu
hey buddy... i realy love ur story..
its such a fab one...
hey dnt feel bad abt the mistakes and all...it happens dear...
its new rite...everyone in this forum wer once new to writing...
dnt get disappointed if no one is liking or commenting...u ask any writer in this forum abt hw many likes or comments they got while writing thier first work ...u write and write ok and for ur grt works their would be un countable fans...
and and and one more imp thing is tat dnt ever cme up with the idea of discontinue this ss or any of ur worksss...
please...

i loved ur pro a lot...
i knowww i know i late in commenting...srry...
was busyyy..
and i hate u because ur part 1 was too too short...(JUST KIDDING)
but the part was realy short..
i love too readd a lloonngg part now...so would u plzzz please...
continue sooonnn ...
would be waitingg buddyyy

thank u so much I will update soon may be tomm

Edited by pink1 - 12 years ago

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Part 2

V :- After the show he move his car to go home while driving
he was thinking about her and saying again again I know I was
wrong pls come back to me u don know how hard to leave
without u still I am here to full fill dream more than my is
u r dream to see to me a great singer than see naa now I am
become grat singer and start u know my every show my eye was
searching u but when I cannot find u its hurts me to so much
I know I deverse lot of pushiment give me that pushiment
but come my life again hurt me how much u want hurt
I am ready for that at last get happy u r front of me I only told
u go way from my life and forget me but for one second I not forget u
why I belive her why cannot I belive u if I belive u that day so u r
staying me only if get second chance I will make u my again

While thinking about her he reach house While passing through
coridoor he listen what his bahi and bhabi talking

Vn: I now virat is wrong he should belive manvi what she was
saying at last he relise his mistake he was in gulit and for his mistake
but one thing jeevika he still love her and he trying to search her
very hard

J : I know virenji he was in gulit for what he done with my mannu
but what should I do I will never ever forgive him because of him
I lost my sister and now I didn't know where she (looking her and her photo)saying Pls came back mannu u didn't know how i am leaving
with u

Listing his bhai and babhi talking he directly goes his room and
looking her photo and saying not for me al last u come for u sister

Finish I know this short but next update will long and fb part
if u like press like button and comment and sorry I cannot send pm
for this update

Edited by pink1 - 12 years ago

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Awesome updt...but again its short...where is manvi? Wat happend in btw them?...cont soon

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virumanu

@virumanu

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

this was too short yaar..y like this ah.
Bt loved to the core.
Plz cntinue soon plz

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

awesome
loved iit
but again short
where is manvi bring her soon

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

awesome update dear...but too short...make it longer plz
waiting for next part
update soon 😃

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luvmanat

@luvmanat

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

hey short update.. it was nice but what had happened with virman..
oh god jab bhi virman separate hote he aur iska reason sochti hu to swamini bua samne aa jati he..
i hope she is not the reason