Aadha Aadhura Tera Bina(AR FF) on Hold - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was a brilliant part... Really liked the way it's been written... There have been a few loose ends but i guess they will be filled with the coming parts so plz continue the work... Thanx for the pm too...
Take care!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update❤️❤️
and thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Savvy11

It was a brilliant part... Really liked the way it's been written... There have been a few loose ends but i guess they will be filled with the coming parts so plz continue the work... Thanx for the pm too...
Take care!!



hey plz tell me if u won't mind me asking tat wheree u think is loose ending so that i can give them a finishingly smoothy touch ... help me out...
thank u for commenting and likking my silly FFs.. all the 3.. as have seen that. are constant and fast reader of my FFs and i really appriciate it seriously... thank u soo much
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u for commenting and likking my silly FFs.. all the 3.. as i have seen that u . are constant and fast reader of my FFs and i really appriciate it seriously... thank u soo much
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

lovely update❤️❤️

and thanks for the pm😊




thank u for commenting and likking my silly FFs.. all the 3.. as i have seen that u . are constant and fast reader of my FFs and i really appriciate it seriously... thank u soo much
and it my preasure to pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u dear⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guyies plz help me out with telling me the best in my FF plz
and any suggetions u want
or any complain according to u in my FF's plz be frank and tel me
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Edited by mishs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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to feel the sensation both were having their eyes closed and and ridhima let her lips on armaan's forhead to linger for sometime taking the moment in heart for forever...
then

nikki - ahem ahem
no effect
anji - ann-chuuu...
no effect
samrat - ammy ...
shaking armaan..
armaan ridhima blushed and came back...





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here goes the next part


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mayank - nupur mein tumhe pick kar lunga party ke liya be ready at 8..
nups - okay.. see u then bye guyies...
abhi - mein bhi chalta hun... bye
mayank - yup... bye...


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rahul and muski drive to home in full silence...
then at dinner both were playing with food...
but muski can't take it anymore and she burst out crying...
rahol - muskan kya hua... tu
muski - rahul mein... mein ridz ko bahut mis kar rahi hun...
rahul is silent
muski - tujhe pata hai rahul jab bhi mujhe koi problem hoti thi toh ridhz hamesha mera pass hoti thi... mera bina bole vo samjh jati thi ki mein kya bolne wali hun.. kya mehsus kar rahi hun... kya mein chahati hun...
par ja hamare college change hua toh hum lag ho gaye.. aur phir...
i missed her rahul i missed her very much...

rahul - made a mental note to find ridhima for muski and bring her on her birthday here to meet muski at her b'day which is 7 days later...



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then atul pick up the chit and then
the person next to ur patner's next...means gunjan
atul gets up and kuchi ku to gunjan...
then both hug each other as atul consider gunjan as his own sister...
actually gunjan is so inocent that both armaan and atul become her brother as she has no one in this world...
and gunjan lives with armaan and atul (atul malik)... they 3 share a flat being bother and sister...


then they all retier to their room but as we all kow sab gaye aapne room mein but armaan aapne room mein kaise chala jaye aapni basket se aakele mein mile bina...lolzzz...

first all goes to their roon then armaan texted ridhima like after 20min...

**beep beep**
armaan - mujhe yaad kar rahi hona...

**beep beep**
ridhima *smile reading the text and blushes too... then typed*
tumhe kaise pata bbut deleted it and...wrote..
nahi toh... mein kyun tmhe yaad karungi mein toh sone ki taiyari kar rahi hun...

**beep beep**
armaan - jhuti aagar aisa hai toh pehle wala sms delet kyun kar diya...

ridhima look here and there if he is there in her room when

**beep beep**
armaan - mein wahan nahi hun basket toh mujhe mat dekho...

**beep beep**
ridhima - toh tumhe kaise pata mein kya kar rahi hun...
blushing...


**beep beep**
armaan - mujhe aapni jaan ke baar mein sab pata hota hai...
jaise aabhi meri jaan blush kar rahi hai

**beep beep**
ridhima - armaan ... chalo gud nyt... *thinking plz baat karte rahne plz*
and keep her cell on her heart and blushing and waiting for reply

**beep beep**
armaan - but tumhara toh mera se baat karne ka man kar raha hai... hain na...
plz basket tarrace par milo na.. abhi 5 min mein...

**beep beep**
ridhima - armaann... *blush*
okay... i m coming... wait...

after 5 min both goes to tarrace...

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here rahul is consoling muskan and they they all went to party for getting tender of the year...

where
rahul and muskan were sitting and looking at abhi and MN(mayank-nupur) enjoying the party and remember their old frndz respectivly ...

nupur gets talli in the party... and dancing like anything...
mayank - nupur chalo ghar chalo..
nups - nahi mujhe dance karna hai...
mayank - tumhe chad gai hai nupur... ghar chalo...
nups - nahi mujhe nahi gana... tum bhi dance karo na...
and within no min all the cheap boys comes and start doing forcfully dance with nupur and mayank to protect her start dancing himself with nupur... (same as in MJHT)

watch it... but background mein disco dal lena imagination se plz guyies...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6R5HjOcidFU">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6R5HjOcidFU

after that muskan n rahul goes to their house and abhi to his and
mayak drops nupur the goes to his house...


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rahul was searching for ridhima through his men with the knowledge of muskan...

one day his men found ridhima and inform this to rahul and it was on the eve of muskan's birthday and rahul goes to meet ridhima in restrurant...
and armaan being very possessive acompnied ridhima...


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armaan - ridhima ye koun hai jo tumse milna chahata hai...
ridhima - paata nahi bus itna pata hai ki ye kissi gb company ka maalik hai...
armaan - excuse me *to waiter*
armaan - one cafechino..with little milk and one teaspoon sugar and one expreso coffee...
waiter - yess sir
ridhima looking at armaan
armaan - i know it ridhima aisa mat dekho...

a girl come to armaan and kissed him on cheeks...
girl - ammy kaise ho tum...
armaan - koun...
girl - OMG ... ammy tum mujhe bol gaye... college mein tum mera saath rahte the 24 ghante...
armaan give confused looks and then look at his basket making puppy face and ridhima give angry look and then comes and take girls hand from armaan's shoulder and stands in between armaan and the girl...
ridhima - hi... i m ridhima... armaan ki fiance...
armaan - hain aur meri jaan bhi *holding ridhima from waist*
girl - wooo ammy tum shaadi kar rahe ho... vo bhi iss behanji se... what happen to the cool dude of the college... hain...
armaan - hey hello...miss..hmm... miss whatever u are ... get one thing directly in ur head... *looking at ridhima* she is my life and going to be wife so don't u dare speak one moe word about her... and if u don't want ur dignity and character to be lost then stay away that to zipped mouth and not dare to speak a word about my basket else u will face that old armaan that never feel ashamed of speaking ill to the person who deserve that...

girl make a face and goes to her frndz group...
armaan was boiling in anger and ridhima know what armaan might be thinking...
armaan - basket mein...

ridhima puts her fingure on his lips to keep him silent.and directly looking in armaan's eyes..
and spoke...

ridhima - mujhe pata hai armaan... tumne kuch nahi kiya hai,...
aur vo jo bhi thi vo tumhare past mein thi ...
mujhe pata hai tum usse jante bhi nahi ho aab...
aur mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki mera armaan mera ilawa kisi aur ke baare mein sochna toh dur kisi aur ko dekhta bhi nahi hai... **ridhima's fingure was still onn armaan's lip*
ridhima -hain na???

armaan just nodded and hug ridhima tightly...
armaan - i love u basket... i love u...
ridhima -i love u too armaan i love u too...
then both settle down...holding hands
armaan - mein abhi aaya...
ridhima - kya hua...
armaan - vo washroom...
ridhima - okay...

armaan goes... and he get stuck in the washroom due to bad door lock there...here a man approches ridhima...

















Edited by Aayu-loveKaJen- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
awesome part
plz plz plz plz plz plz cont soon

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