ARIYA SS:U R MINE..always mine*COMPLETED* - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: yas23

great update
riya saw arjun...hope its him
riya got hurt...hope she is fine
who is riya getting married to
intersting precap
cont soon


Thanks dr i will tryyy
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Hey... do continue soon..!!!

I will try to conti all my ff ss today...n drr
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: madmadona

nice update
poor riya
i hope it's arjun
by the way, who is that sir riya is going to engage😲


Thank dr for ur sweet comment n next part main pata chal jayega
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Thank u so much fr for liking n comment..hop u like next part


**PART=3**
"kyun Tera ahsas"


SCENCE-Two beautiful couple r sit opposite side
arround the table..holding eachother hand in hotal
man wearing blue chek shirt n black jeens..n girl wear..blue sleevless deginer salvar suit..both looks perfect..
Man-why u feel so nerver,dont warry vaisa he hoga jaisa humne soncha hai..
G-i hop so ,but r u sure ke
vo..
M-maine kaha na just trust me..now u kno hamen kya kerna hai..
she nodded in yes..
both smile on each other..
M-holding is hand..i wanna to say u somthing..pata nahi kaise kaho..he take deep breath..bus bahut huya ab or nahi..mujhe tum se pyar ho gaya hai.yes i lv u ,i hv kno idea when ,how,but ho gaya..he look in her direction waiting for her reply..
G-yes i lv u to
one man us observing both n listen all this coversation,he didn't think the girl say i lv u back..he culdnt hold himshelf n goes near to her..n hold her hand..forcefuly stand her..maintain to look in him..
how dare u ..kuch time pehale pyar kerne ke baatain mere sath ker rahi the or ab..
girl try to free herself n say..haan kaha tha maine apse ke pyar kerti huin..or aaj bhi kerti huin..or shayad hamesha..per apne kya kiya..
dur raho mujhse dur yahi kaha tha na mujhase..to ab bahi to ker rahi huin..to esmain bhi apko problem hai..boliye chup kyun hai..boliye na..
pyar kerta huin. tumse pyar..suna tumne..yahi sunana chahti the na tum ..yes i accept it i lv u..nahi dekh sakta main tumhen kise or ka hote huye..samjhi tum..he rest his hand arround her thin waist n pull more closer to her.
suno meri her dhadker bus tumhare liye dhadkti hai..sirf or sirf tumhare liye..ager mujhe phir se kise ne jina sikhaya to vo tum ho..ager mujhe phir se kise ne pyar kerna sikhaya



Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
[COLOR=] to vo tum ho suna tumne riya sirf vo sirf tum..both looks each other
some one start clapping n both comes out to their trace..
chalo achha hai Arjun..very soon u realise..ager meri jagaha koe or hota to..
Arjun turn toward him..i m sorry yr..mujhe nahi pata tha ke tum bhi..riya se..
man-ehsa kabhi sochana bhi mat ke main or riya..it just a drama..ab kuch samjhe ya samjhayon..
A-what??
Man-etna shok hone ke jarorat nahi hai..ager main or riya ye darama nahi kerte ti tum kabhi ye accept nahi kerte ke tum riya se pyar kerte ho..
A-thanks sam ..u r reaky my gud fr..n hug sam(RATHORE) tightly..are ye kya ker rahe ho sabke samne..log kya sochenge..leav me ..apani riya ke gale lago mere nahi..main public ko koe chance nahi dena chahata..mere bare main galat sochane ka..akhir etf ka chif huin or tumhara
boss..hahhaaa all brust out with laugh..now u both enjoys ..mera kaam ho gaya so i hv to go..sameer left that palace..
A-tumne to ek pal ke kiye mere jaan he nikal de..
R-chalo ese bahane ye to pata chala ke aap bhi mujhase pyar kertain hai..
A-Darta huin ke meri vajah se tumhen..
R-shhh ehsa kuch nahi hoga arjun..
she wanna to tuch his hand..but not succssed..arjun hand go away away from her..arjun arjun..yeh kya ho raha hai..main tumhen tuch kyun nahi ker paa rahi huin..arjun arjun...she culdnt breath properly...she screemed out of his voice...arjun!!!!!!! n open her eyes..arjun ..
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one lady russed her side ..rubbing her back n say is every things ok ,i think koe bura sapna dekha hoga..
Riya-main yahan..or aap..vo car..or main..
Lady-dont warry baita darne ke jarorat nahi..ectualy tum achank se mere baite ke car ke age aa gaye or behosh ho gaye..or he dont kno anything about u ..so vo tunhen gher ke aya..
main mrs vandana chauhan..(Age 45) ..or tum es waqt mere gher main ho..
R-ohh



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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

WHAT HAPPEND FEW HOURS BEFORE -
SCENCE-riya madly running on the road n shouted arjun name arjun arjun..sudenly one car caming her opposite side ,when she turn n saw one car is comming with high speed..ahhh!!! befor she hit car stoped ..
arjun!!!! fall on the ground ..n faint..
Man come out the car n saw she is uncoinsius..may be shock..he hv no choise..so he picked her in his arms..n carefuly placed her back seet n drive the car n stop the car in front of his house..
n pikked her in his arms n come inside.
Mrs chauhan-what ? u married that girl hamen yahan aye ek din bhi nahi huya or u marry that girl..ager tumhare dad ko pata chalega to vo kya
sonchenge ..or tumne hame bataya bhi nahi..
man-mom jaisa aap sonch rahi hai ehsa kuch bhi nahi hai..
Mrs ch-are wah apni mom se jhud..yeh ladki to bilkul ehse tayar huye hai ..jaise koe apni sadhi main..or tum keh rahe ho tumne shadi nahi...
Man-mom meri baat suniye..main nahi janta ye kon hai kahan se aye hai..ir na maine esase shadi ke hai..ye sudenly meri car ke samne aa gaye or behosh ho gaye..to ager main ese vahin jhud deta to kya apko achha lagta..
mrs ch-ok my angry son, tum ese gest room main le jao
man-thanks mom n yah ek bar ager aap examine ker ley ..i meen koe chot vagera..
Mrs ch-dont warrt my son..yeh to mera first kaam hai,akhir doctor huin..
she examine her care fuly but no sing of any enjoury.
fladhbake end.
riya-ohh thank u mrs chauhan meri help ke liye
Mrs ch-ohh dont any formality..or tum to meri bati jaise ho..jabki sorry to mujhe kehna chahiye..vo mere baite ke karan..n u can call me aunti

R-no aunti esmain apki or apke baide ke koe galti nahi vo to main he dekh ker nahi..
vaise time kitana huya hai
mrs ch-morning ke six o clook
R-what??but ehsa kaise..i meen kal to meri engazement the..or main
T .B .C-
Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Nice update..!!
Do continue soon!!
And never say u disturb us please!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Really nice dear..waiting for next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
fantastic update :) loved it
flashback was awesome
loved the way arjun confessed his feelings to riya :)
she missed her engagement
who is that guy? is he arjun?
eagerly waiting to know who that guy is
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
awsum update..!!!
lvd sam n riya's plan to make arjun confess his feelings..!!😆
whos that guy who saved riya?
riya missed her engagement..!!!!
cant wait fr d nxt part..!!!
continue soon..!!!

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