ARIYA SS:U R MINE..always mine*COMPLETED* - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima15

fantastic update :) loved it

loved arjun's thoughts in the beginning :)
love arjun's bonding with his mom...
arjun thinking about riya :) riya too feeling his presence...
feeling bad for sameer :( he is really a gentleman...
can't wait for ariya meet
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon

thanks fatii for ur lvly comment...n domt feel bad for sam...somthing...special for him
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kunchu

fab update dear!!

loved the way you expressed the feelings
pls Arjun - ri milvado..

Thanks helu...ariya milap..hummm...kuch to kerna padega
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007


Katti😭😭😭

itne acche part mai aake
tbc bolti hai...

Uff kati...hummm...kuch to kerna padega..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: umamah70

wow...cool update..👏

riya aur arjun amne samne kab aayenge...????


Thanks n just wait
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BabyGee_1995

A great update! Thanks for sharing and pm! Cant wait to see what happens at the party, riya arjun se mil payegi ya nahi?! Intezaar nahi hota! Please update soon x

Thank u so much dr...bus intjar khatm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank u so much frrr s i read ur comment...n after reading ur comments...i feel realy happy...u all hv lot of q in mind...about ariya..but plz hv som paisence...
hope u like next part...
plz hit like butten n leav ur comment...ifff...by hearts u realy realy like...
thank u so much frs...
n plz forgiv for any error...
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Posted: 12 years ago
*PART-6*
"Tera saya"


Arjun-riya ruko plz meri baat suno..
But she did not listen n continue her walk..
Ar-riya main manta huin mujhase galti ho gaye..plz listen to me..
Riya-its not a mistake arjun..
aap jante bhi hai aapne kya kiya..
maine kitne dream dekhe they or aapne..
Ar-i kno riya per vo kaam bhi jaruri the..
Ri-vo kaam jaruri..ager vo kaam aapke liye etna jaruri tha..
to apne ye program banaya kyun..
Ar-riya ek dinner he to tha..phir kise or din,
Ri-bus ek dinner..arjun its our first date..aap first time mujhe aapne sath dinner per le gaye..main kya kuch soncha tha but u spoil it..
Ar-riya plz stop yr..i kno its our first date..but case se importent call the to mujhe udani padi..
i promise next time ehsa nahi hoga..
Ri-next time..haan jaror janabut not with me..meri sotan ke sath jana..
Ar-what.?kya kaha tumne..arjun grrabed her wrist n pull her toward him..
Ri-yes i say u hv to go with my sotan,
Ar-ab ye bhi bata do tumhari ye tum...
Ri-ab es taraha shoch hone ke jarorat nahi..
main aap ke mobile ke baat ker rahi huin..
ab samjhe ya samjhayon..
Ar-arjun. in naughty way..rest his hand arround her waist..
ohh tumhen samjhana bhi ata hai..ab kya kare etne angry mood se koe samjhayega to samajhne main..
he looks her deep black eyes.
Ri-riya hits his chest n say..dekhiye main majhak ke mud main bilkul nahi huin..
i m so angry..u spoil our first date..aap or apka ye phone..
maine soncha tha hum pehale dance katenge..uske . baad ek saath candle night dinner karenge..or baad main hum dono ek dusre ko..
Arjun smile or baad main..
Riya without thinking says or baad main kya..jaise after date sab ek dusare ko kiss kertain hain to maine soncha hum bhi...stop in mid n realise what she says jus now..n hide her face in his chest..
Ar-vaise idea bura nahi hai..


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Posted: 12 years ago

not a bad idea..so try kare..
Arjun lift her face by his hand..mana hamari date..
jaise tumne sonchi vaise nahi the..
per end vaisa ho sakta hai..
jaisa tumne soncha tha..
tum kaho to..
riya blusses n again hide her face on his chest..but arjun again lift her face..n slowly bend his face..n softaly pick her lips..arjun notice her smile during kiss..
he pulled her more closer to him..they can feel each others..warmth riya move her hand arround his neck n pull him more closer..she comletely lost in him..they passionatly kiss each other..
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Ahhh...by mistake riya put her legs on some slipery area..
accutualy she is walking very near to the swiming pool ,in one corrner there is some slipery area..unfortunatly she lost her balance..but befor she fall in the pool somone comes from behind n hold her by her wrist n pulled toward him,
the action was very quick,she culdnt balance herself n bang on his broad chest..
the pool side area is litle dark..
his body collides her body..
A cool shiver pass her body due to sudden tuch of his body..
the fear of falling in
pool ...she hug that person tightly..n closed her eyes..
the person stand there without responding back..
she knew that tuch..the
feel..the smell of his body,
Every thing would be known
first she composed herself until her heartbeat racing normaly..
After few minute..she feel that..she hug somone..but why she never wanna to breack thease hug..why why she feel home in his arms.
she heared somone calling her from behind.
it was non other then sameer..she imadeatly break that hug n lift her face n wanna to see who is he? her heart saying that he is his arjun..but how?
she culdnt beleve n never a guts to lift her face n at list one time recognise him
she collect all her courage but befor she look again hear sameer voice




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Posted: 12 years ago

riyaaa
she turn her face n saw it was sameer..
Sa-what happend riya or tum etni nervus kyun lag rahi ho..r u all right..if u not feeling well ..to hum yahan se jaa sakte hai..
RI-Sameer vo maine abhi abhi yaha..arj..
Sa-kya..kya huya ..kise ne kuch kaha..
Ri-no no vooo maine vo abhi yahan
sa-yahan kya riya ..yahan to koe nahi hai..
Riya move her head here n there but no one was there
Ri-vo arjun..befor she completed
Sa-what arjun..?..mrs chauhan ka son..usne kuch kaha tumhen..
Ri-how riya can explain sameer what she wanna to say..she control herself n say nothing..main to bus unse ek baar mil ker thank kehna chahati the bus..
Sa-ohh but uske liye hame ander party main chalna chahiye..
riya nodded in yes n both goes to inside...
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WHAT HAPPENED FEW MINUTE BEFORE-
riya feel very strong presence of arjun when he passes near to her n goes to his parents direction..
she feel saffocation n rathor notice this..
Sa-riya what happend ?..r u all right..
RI-kuch nahi bus thodi ghutan(saffocation) se ho rahi hai..may be etne time baad kise party main aye huin..
Sa-if u dont feel batter,so we can leav here,main. mr chauhan se baat ker ke ata huin..
Ri-no sameer its ok..mrs chauhan ne kitna insist ker ke bulaya hai..unhen bura lagega ager hum yahan se chale gaye..
bus main thodi der bahar ja ker ati huin..may be open air main batter feel ho..
Ra-ok main bhi tumhare sath chalta huin..
Ri-no sameer aap nahi..
Sa-**
Ri-i meen i wanna to spent some time alone..
Sa-ok but plz if u further not feel batter then u inform mevn then we should leav from here..
or koe bhi excuse nahi chalega..
Riya nodded in positive n go outside .
she goes back side of chauhaan house.
its a pool side area..she feel cold breez that make shiver in her body.
she hug herself to ptotect herself from that cold air




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Posted: 12 years ago

ehsa lag raha hai jaise sadiyan(many years)..ho gaye hai tumhen gaye..
phir kyun tumhara ehsas aaj bhi...kyun. kiya tumne ehsa kyun arjun..koe kise se etna pyar kaise ker sakta hai..
i hv never thinks once..
ke aap bhi mijhe kabhi etna pyar karenge..
its all bez of me ..i cant forgive myself..
.

Tum bin jiya jaye kaise ..
Kaise jiya jaye tum bin..
Sadiyon se lamben huye din..
Sadiyon se lambi hai raten
aa jao lot ker tum..
dil ye keh raha hai...
Tum bin jiya jaye kaise ..
kaise jiya jaye tum bin...

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kabhi nahi chaha tha ke ke main apke dur jaane ke vajaha banugi..
then why ur feels r stil in air..
phir kyun ye havayen mujhe kuch kehna chahati hai..
she lost in her thought..
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Riya was very excited..bez she going with arjun to dinner..
kuch samajh nahi aa raha kya pehanu or kya nahi..
aaj hamari first date hai..
after few minute bell rang..
she run toward the door n open door..it was him..
arjun culd belive his eyes..
Ri-arjun es tarah kya dekh rahe hai..kya main. achhi nahi lag rahi..
Ar-in mind koe etna beautiful ksise lag sakta hai ..maine pehale riya ko etna sunder nahi dekha..ya phir maine kabhi use etni gour se kabhi notice he nahi kiya..
she wear one black mini dress upto knees..her open. hairs n silver earing makes her looks more perfect..coincidently arjun also wear black shirt n blur jeens..
Ri-arjun kya huya kya main thik nahi lag rahi huin..
Arjun comes closer n giv
picks on both her checks..ab ek dam perfect lag rahi ho..
ab chalen ya phir yahin rehane ka erada hai..
vaise ager tum chaho to..hum dono ek sath..
riya smiles n say..mera ehsa koe erada nahi jaisa aao sonch rahe hai samjhe aap..ab chalen..
both goes five star hotal but befor they go inside..arjun. phon rang..
Ri-arjun kya huya aap rok kyun gaye or kiska phon hai..
Ar-sorr


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