Maneet FF- Pavithra vivah-pt-22 , pg-144

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi friends, I have started my second FF Pavithra vivah .please let me know your comments about this fiction...eagerly waiting for your comments and like buttons. I hope my friends will help me to write another FF how they guided in my First FF.

Pavithra Vivah.

Characters

Maan singh khurana: 26 years old , MD of Khurana Construction.

Balvanth singh : un known character in this ff.

Geet : 18 years old, orphan...she lost her parents when she is too small?but she is

But she is dreamy girl.

Dev Singh Khurana: brother of Maan Singh Khurana.

Brij : geet cousin brother.

Anni : only one lovely sister of Maan singh Kurana. She is the sole of KM.

Savithri devi : she is the big pillar of khurana mansion.

Sameera : fiance of Maan Singh Khurana.

Prolog: she is an orphan .faith played in her life. made her marriage with unknown person Balwanth singh. After their first night he left her. She don't know how he will look...she don't know anything about him. she become pregnant for unknown person.

Dev loved her lot. He want to marry her, again faith played in her life. she married another force full marriage with Maan singh Khurana.

No one are there for her...without anybody support, how the innocent 18 years girl win her life...

Did her dreams came's true.

Again I am expecting your valuable support friends. Pls press like buttons and leave comments. Just tell me can I continue this concept, let me know.

Thanking you,

Yours

Varsha.

Varsha FF's...

PART-1 PART- 8 PART- 14 PART- 22

PART- 2 PART- 9 PART-15 thread- 2
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Whypadhu thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi varsha
Awesome ff
prologue made me tempting to read full story at one attempt.
Add me in ur pm list dear.
Update the parts asap.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loving the concept.

and i love how you give twists to your stories.

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only thing i hope balwant singh was maan and coz he knew that geets child was his thats why he forced her to marry him.

now the thing is how and where will you bring the twists and sarrp turns in your FF.

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please do not forget to continue with your other ff . i am in love with your " tum mere kaun ho ".

thx for being a consistent updater.

and a big thank you for not hijacking your readers by waiting for hundreds of likes .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful and interesting prologue...continue soon.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one dear
great part u made
ossum...one
then if she became the pregnant where is the baby dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow nice start yaar .. i loved it !! geet and 3 marriages ??? hope you bring sudden twists ... do continue soon //
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new ff
interesting prologue...
please update soon...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on new ff...
interesting prologue...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome concept varsha
do continue soon
plz do add me to pm list for this ff too
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome dear maine kal hi aapka dusra ff pada great work yaar mai to aapki fan ho gayi kya mai aap ko suggestion do agar aap bura na mane to ...maan ko thoda sa bad dikha vo hi geet ko shadi kmai add e liye majboor kare aap ki story bhut achi hai do conntinue aur muje dono ff ke pm list karlena U R GREAT WRITER👏
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