DIL DEWANA (A FAN FICTION) - Page 4

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Sorry 2 be late friends here is the next part of my fan fic:

Recap: Arjun and Bhumi meet.

Episode #7

Now every one in the Goenka house is having breakfast and shakuntala is in the kitchen then Bhumi comes

B: maaji yeh aap kya kar rahi hain?

S: beta breakfast bana rahi hon

B: bas maa buhat ho gaya abhi kitchen ka sab kaam main karon gi!

S: arrae nahi nahi beti tum yeh sab….

B: maaji beti bhi kehti hain aur beti ka farz nahi nibhane deti

S: acha Bhumi tum jeeti mai hari, kush!!!

B: buhat!

Now every one is on the dinning table and then breakfast comes, Arjun and Suraj also come from the stairs 2 have breakfast

Bhumi was going 2 serve Mansen the breakfast but he just calls shakuntala 2 serve breakfast Bhumi feels a little sad and Arjun gives a kind of angry look

Suraj (su): maa aaj toh breakfast buhat accha bana hai

A: yes bro I agree with u maa dil karta hai aaj tumhare haath chum lon?

Shaku: Arjun yeh kahana mai nae nahi banaya

A: what!!!!!!

Mansen gives a look which was a mixture of anger & confusion

Shaku: haath agar chumnae hain toh Bhumika kai chummo!

A: Bhumika

Shaku: gi han!!

A: Bhumi ji …….oh sorry bhavri ji zarah yahan toh aaeye

B: woh kyon??

A: haath chumnae hai na !!

Bhumi becomes a little shy the baisa says

Baisa: Arjun tum bhi na har baat koh mazaq bana letae ho!

A: baisa yehi hansi mazaq zindigi banata hai aur humari zindagi rangeen hogati hai

Bhumi: ooh my god Arjun tum nae toh buhat philosopher dimagh{brain} paya hai

A: thanks waise tarif aur is wonderful breakfast ka buhat shukria{thanks}

Then suddenly Mansen shouts

M:Shakunlata!!

Shaku comes running out of the kitchen

Shaku: kya hoa???

M: tum janti ho keh mai itna gee aur oily cheesin{things} nahi kata aur tum nae mujhe koh yeh sab dae diya hai. What the hell!!! Kal sae tum hi mera nashta banao gi warna mai office mai hi nashta kar longa!!

Shaku then looks 2wards Bhumi and says :ji accha

Arjun's face becomes red then Mansen say to Suraj

M: Suraj tum tayar nahi hoi office nahi gana kya?

S: papa woh actually I am feeling a little fever toh mai aaj office nahi jaoo ga

M: ok

Then he says 2 Arjun

M: Arjun aaj tum aur devnatt Goenka group ki ek meeting mai chale jana!

A: papa actually I am also sorry I cannot come

M: kyon nahi??

A: dad aaj mai nae Bhumika koh bahir laker jane ka vadah kyat ha so I am sorry

Mansen becomes angry and leaves the house in anger

After the Mansen is gone then Bhumi says 2 Arjun

B: aap koh jana chiye tha

A: magar…

B: nahi uncle ki baat aap koh manae chiye thi

A: oh bhavi its ok

B: magar…….

A: agar magar kuch nahi

Then Shruti comes

Shr: bhaiya aap toh buhat paka plan banaya hai jane ka

Then a voice comes from the main door

"kahan jane ka plan ban raha hai"

Shruti in extreme excitement says

"mansvi didi"

then Suraj turns to see. A very beautiful girl wearing pink sari is standing ,friends this is the 2^nd heroin of the story "Mansvi"

Friends Suraj likes mansvi very much or u can say Suraj loves mansvi and mansvi too likes Suraj but suraj could not purpose her because Mansen hates mansvi's father "siddhart kapoor" that's the main problem…..but shaku likes mansvi very much so do everyone else except "Mansen"

A:hello my sweet mansvi !!

Bhumika: namaste!!

Mansvi: aap kon??

Bhumi: mai …

Shaku interrupts

Shahu: yeh bumika hai mai nae tumhe bataya tha na!

M: ji aunty

M: Suraj aaj tum office nahi gae??

S: woh meri tabeyat huch theek nahi!

A: mansvi tum koh dekh kar Suraj ki tabeyat theek hogae gi

S: Arjun!

Mansvi becomes shy

Shruti: hum bahir ja rahe hai aap bhi chalen

Mansvi: baba sae pouchna hoga!

Shahu: arrae tum uski fiqar maat karo aur jao

Mansvi: ok!!

Arjun then goes 2 talk 2 suraj

A: Suraj tum toh nahi jao gae ??

S: why not ?

Then shruti says: bhaiya aap ko fever tha na

A: yar shruti mansvi koh dekh kar Suraj ka fever bhag gaya hoga!

Then every one laughs

Bhumi goes 2 her room and opens the cupboard 2 wear a dress but she is not deciding what 2 wear then there is knock at the door

B: kon???

The person: Arjun!

Bhumi opens a door and Arjun is standing

A: bhavri kya hoa tum abhi tak tayar nahi hoi?

B: bas abhi aarahi hon

A: woh mai tumhare liae dress laya tha

B: mere liae!!

A: woh ….yeh rah tumhara dress

Bhumi opens the shopping bag there is light green shalwar kameez bhumi became very shy and happy

Then Arjun said

A: tum toh aisae sharma rahi ho jaise tum ko mai nai tumhari shadi ka dress diya ho

Then both Arjun and Bhumi laugh

Then they went out their were 2 cars one was arjuns a white ford and the other was suraj's Honda IDS-i

Arjuns cars roof was automatic and could open or closed

Arjun wore red t-shirt and white pant where as Bhumi wore the dress which Arjun gifted her now they r going 2 leave the Goenka house now in Arjun's car shruti sits on the back seat and Arjun on the driving seat Suraj is in his car and guess what a beautiful girl is sitting with him "mansvi"

Now Arjun says 2 shruti:

A: aab yeh Bhumika kahan chaligae

Then he makes horn

S: yar kahan hai Bhumi di

A: kahan ho tum kahan ho tum raat din donddo kahan ho tum{it's a song from no entry} …………….

Then after 5 min Bhumi comes Arjun sees that Bhumi is looking amazing in his given dress he in a very slow voice says

A: wowwww!!! She is looking beautiful!!

Then Bhumi sits with Arjun on the front seat

A: aaj pehli bar koi anjani ladki meri car ki front seat per bathi hai..

S: kya baat hai bhaiya buhat acchae mood main hain

Bhumi becomes shy and she laughs

A: shut up shruti!!!

Then the story moves towards Suraj and mansvi

Suraj driving the car

S: mansvi tumhari boutique kasi chal rahi hai

M: suraj theek hai bas kuch construction ho rahi hai

S: uncle ki tabyat kaise hai

M: suraj zayadah theek nahi rehti papa buhat zayadah tension letea hain

S: mansvi tum ko koi tension toh nahi

M: kya matlub….

S: aise hei tum kuch chup lag rahi hao iss liea

M: Suraj chup toh tum bhi chup rehte ho toh tumhin koi tension hai kya ???

S: nahi toh ! mai toh sirf…….mansvi tum sae koi baton mai jeet nahi sakta!!

M: mujhe malom hai!

Then s-m laugh

Arjuns car is in the front and suraj's car is behind so Arjun car stops at a beautiful scenic place there were gardens, pools and a old kander{ruined ancient palace}

Suraj and mansvi are together walking in gardens

And Arjun, Bhumi and shruti are near pool

B: kitni kubsoort jaga hai

A: belkul tumhari tarhan!

B{shocked}: kya???

A: nothing!

Shruti laughs then Arjun starts a different topic

A: tum pyar per yakin rakti ho??

B: kabhi kabhi

A: kaya matlub??

B: asia hi

A: tum nai kabhi pyar kyon nahi kiya?

B: pata nahi

A: kya pata nahi keh pyar kase karte hain

B: nahi…

A: toh pher pata hai

B: nahi nahi ……..Arjun plz change the topic

Arjun gives a cute smile and Bhumi and Arjun laugh

Then shruti starts antakshri{song game}

1^st is Arjun's turn and he sings:pyar hoa iqrar hoa hai pyar sae pher kyon darta hai dil

Then shruti: lal dobata orh gaya hwa kai jonkai sae mujhe ko piya nai dekh lia dokhe sa

Now bhumi's turn: ankhen baandh kar kai jo ek chera nazar aaya who tumhi ho aae sanam

Then Arjun smiles

Now mansvi sings: mere haath mai tera haath ho sare jaante tere saath hon

Arjun: wow mansvi ji magar jis ke haath mai aapka haath hai woh hai kahan???

B: arrae han Suraj ji kahan hai?

Then shruti points a little spot and says

S: milgae bhaiya!!

A: oh ! mansvi ji Suraj ji aapko janatea{heavens} dekhane kaliea haathi {elephants} lai hain

Mansvi & Bhumi go close and see that Suraj is sitting on a elephant and there is one more behind them

A: mr Suraj aaj toh kamaal hogaya ! good going brother!

To be continued ……………..

Plz give comments !!!

Enjoy!

Sidra

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Mere paas jo bhi comments hain I think you will take it frm me in few more episodes after that I will create new ones.It's tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Gooood. 👏

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Hello friends thanks 4 comments here is the next part of my fan fiction:

Recap: Suraj brought elephants.

Now the story starts:

Suraj brings elephants and all 3 girls became very happy 2 see them

A: good going brother!

S: thanx yar tum betoo gae ya nahi

A: sure, why not???????!

Now mansvi, Suraj & shruti sit on the 1 elephant while on the other hand Arjun and Bhumi sit on one. Bhumi is very much scared

A: tum itni daar kyon rahi ho????

B: Arjun tum nahi jante mai buhat zayada daar pook hon!

A: really??!! I like it!

B: Arjun! I am tensed!

A: ok ok!

Then Suraj shouted

S: Arjun yar every thing ok ???

A: ok bhai!

S: Bhumika are u fine??

Bhumi did not spoke because she was scared then Arjun spoke

A: Suraj us ski toh aawaz hai nikal rahi but it will handle her ! u enjoy with mansvi!

S: plz Arjun !!!!!

Then shruti spoke

Sh: mansvi didi r u comfortable!

M: han kyon???

Sh: ohh I was just asking ! waise Suraj bhaiya mansvi didi ka aap hi khayal rakye ga! Mai toh dossri taraf dekho gi !

Suraj: dossri taraf kyon???

Sh: iss liea keh aap dono disturb na on!!

Then the elephant starts 2 stand now lets see the state of a-b

Elephant stands

A: here v go now!! Bhumika fasten ur seat belt

B:[shouts] arjunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!

Arjunnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!

She then shouts a lot, when the elephant bends on the same time Bhumi fell on Arjun

A:[then in a slow and really romantic style as he does, deep in bhumi's eyes]: mera haath thaam lo kuch nahi ho ga.

Bhumi then kind of just sees Arjun like every thing in the world has gone only she and Arjun are there

A: tum ree saath rehna ………hamisha kailie……

Then the elephant man stops the elephant and Arjun + Bhumi come out from the love spell. Now in the Goenka house baisa , dadaji and shaku r talking:

B: shakuntala tumhe nahi lagata kai Suraj aur mansvi ek dossare kalie hain??

S: aap theek kehrae hai Suraj mansvi ko buhat pasand karta hai aur mai bhi

D: toh deir kis baat ki hum sab siddrath kai ghar ja kar rishte ki baat paki kar aatie hain!!

S: per yeh intna assan nahi !!!!

B: who kyon??

S: baisa aap toh janti hain keh Mansen siddhart kapoor ko pasan nahi karte

B: lakin Mansen siddhart ko pasand nahi karta mansvi toh buhat acchi larki hai

S: baisa pata nahi kyon yeh mansvi koh bhi pasand nahi karte!! Mai toh har tariqe sae Suraj ki kushi chahiti hon !

B: hume Mansen se baat karni chiye…….

S: ji….magar jab bhi mai unse yeh baat karti hon toh woh naraz ho jate hain!

D: magar kuch na much karna hi hoga

On the other hand Arjun and Bhumi are returning home shruti said :

S: mujhe toh buhat maza aaya

Arjun gave a very cute smile 2wards Bhumika

S; Bhumi di tum toh buhat darti ho!

B: lakin aaj dar nahi laga!

S: woh kyon???

A: hum jo saath thae!!!!!!

S: ooooohhh!

Bhumi became shy by Arjun's words then lets go 2 surajs car

S: mansvi tum ko ghar chordun

M: nahi mai tumhare ghar gaoon gi

Then they go Goenka/heritage house next day:

Bhumi goes 2 the kitchen and she sees shakuntala is standing making tea:

S: arrae Bhumi beta kaise ho??

B: theek maaji!

S: Bhumi tumhari picnic kaise rahi ?

B: acchi!!!

S; bhumi beta yeh chai[tea] zara tum Arjun kai kamre mai laijao gi

B: theek hai

Then Bhumi goes 2 Arjun's room Arjun was asleep

B: aabhi thak soraha hai!!

She then thinks how 2 wake him them it stricks her Bhumi take Arjun's hand and puts it into the tea cup then Arjun wake with a shouting voice

A: ahhhhhhhh!!! What's going on???

Bhumi then laught very loudly

A: subha subha shararat!!!

B: subha ?? Suraj toh tumhare sar per hai

A: waise mujhe uthane ka thanx!!

B: woh kyon ???

A: iss liea kai subha tumhara chera dekha toh din accha guzre ga!!

B: Arjun tum bhi na!!

A: accha mai zara fresh hogaon

Arjun when goes 2 wash room bhumkia opens the cupboard and selects a suit 4 Arjun it is of grey colour Arjun when came out saw the suit laying on the bed he becomes very happy as Arjun gets ready 4 office he 1^st goes 2 the kitchen where shaku & Bhumi are standing

S: kya baat hai beta aaj kitchen mai kaise???

A: maa! woh juice chahiye !!!

S: accha beta!

Bhumi gives a smile when shakuntala sent 2 have juice then Arjun said

A: kaisa lagraha hon mai??

B: kya baat hai ?? aaj toh kafi handsome lag rahe hain!

A: mera suit kaisa lag raha hai???

B: u r looking gr888!

Then shaku came

S: yeh lo

A: thanxxxxxxxx

Then Bhumi said

B: aap ko office jana tha na

A: ok ok jar aha hon jaldi kya hai??

When shaku was not looking Arjun just winkled [ankhe mari] 2 bhumi.bhumi became extra shy

Then Arjun goes 2 office :

He enters the office and every one stands up and say "good morning sir !!!"

A: hello every one!

Then Suraj comes

S; omg u in office ! what a miracle!

A: stop it Suraj !

Arjun goes in to his cabin. He sits on the chair then the phone rings. Arjun picked it Mansen is online:

M: Arjun ek file tumare table per hai uss ko study kar lina.

A: yes dad magar Suraj ko aap…………

M: Suraj Suraj Suraj har waqt Suraj plz be independent !!!!

A: ok dad plzzzzzzz! I will do it….

Then Mansen disconnects . the queen of problems comes in……….shefali

to be continued.............

hope u all like it !!!

plz post comments

sidra😊

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it was tooooooo lovely n sweet sidra.. specially elephant n a-b wala scene.. very well done..