res me 1st😆 arey tu kaise first ho gayi ????? mereko patahi nahi challa kaise ????
unres...hmm.. abhi main kya bataoon..😕... kuch samajh mein nahin aa raha hain.. honestly i don;t have capability to review this kinds of masterpieces 😳... cause my thinking could never reach to the point which you have depicted in this update... my my pampu...main toh jaanbooch kar tum sab yedi yon ko confusion me daal rahi hun ...sunke aacha laga that am to some extent successfull inmy mission ...hahahha ... WAISE YEH SAB TERA BANNER KA ASAR HAI ...sharp, smart, mindblowing, flawless, intelligent, thrilling,full of susoensee.. now i can;t remember any more adjectives...🤔😆 oye Thamba ...rukkh ja ...saans lele thodasa ...😆😆😆 Inna praise karegi toh udne lagungi ..aur fir dhaam se gir ke fracture toh pakka 😆😆😆but truly to say, you are going to place another flag of victory on the pick by this story..👏👏and yes.. mahele too lagta tha kii tune raghu pe PHD kiya hain.. par abtoo lagta hain tune double tripple PHD kar li hain😆.. mine god.. u didn't left a single details about him... ditto... when you were describing raghu i was felling like he just appeared in front of me...😳useless to say for me now that raghu's portraya; was as usual beyond perfection by my dear vampy...😉...but also liked... no notjust liked.. I LOVED the new shades in raghu's charecter in this ff... he is truly a merciless, emotionless stone here, with sharo inteelligence annd smartness-a perfect deadly combination!!... a true gangster who can do anything for only money... truly a hearless soulless being... u know what i loved raghu's new shades here... totally dark charecter almost,... it will be treat to watch how u reveal his every shades with progrsiing storyline...ek baat bata maine aisa kya likh dala Raghu ke bareme jo tu inni uchal rahi hai khushi ke mare ...😲😆 WAISE tune NOTICE kiya ...Raghu ko maine naya car diya ..AMAZON green REnault DUSTER😉wo thik lagraha hai kya ????😕lol... raghu nee uss seth bechare ki band baja di just for being late for 15 min...😆and then comes a very crucial moment in the update...hee got the e-mail from an unknown number.. and saw the his victim's photo... an innocent girl's face...the person who could do anything for money without a hesitation was suddenly confused...yup i won't say that he is hesitant or unwillingly to do the job... afterall it is matter of 5 crores😆... and here raghu is like paise ke liye kuch bhi ...😆(i know sound funny but aur koi word yaad nahin ayya...)... he is hard nut to craack and no one can deflect him form his aim... his only aim is now only the ammount of money he was offered😆... lets c what happns in next..might be he could crash his victim.. aka that innocent girl's (everyone know who is she!!!😆) life mercilessly...ya it might happen😭or may be he wouldn't..ya he might NOT do so ...😲😆man this sstory is so unpredictable for me🤪... i don't know what future holds... just wanna enjoy this unique brilliant piece by our brilliant pampy the vampy😉waise thanx re ...wo kya hai na pahlibaar mere liye koi BRILLIANT word use kiya hai meri akkha zindegi mein pahlibaar ...mujhe inni khushi ...😭 innni khushi ...😆 haha dar mat main thoda emotional ho gayi thi ...par sambhal liya 😆wo maine kiya confused sabko aur mil gayi praise Riyu yedi se ...dil garden garden ho gaya ...😃sacchi !!!
---------------------------------------------------------------------------PS: one more request yaar... if possible keep raghu just like this for some long time😆... please hinu and other readers don't throw chappals on me🤣.. but i am totally enjoying this smart intelligent merciless gangster raghu😎... it is the thing which i only read in twinks story before.. woo larki too pata nahin kaha chali gayi😡... ab bas yeh story sahara hain... so my utter request, keep raghu as a hardcore gangster for some moment😉... lol not throughout the story,,. kyun ki aisa huya too readers aur writer dono mujhe marne lagengey😆lastly...is it needed to say?I LOVE YOU..🤗
Originally posted by: honeybees22
Hayeee I don't want it too be too dark its going to sound so creepy ... LOLZ hinu inna dara mat kar yaar ..this is just a story aftera
llCming to the updateI loved it sooo much , the way you described Raghu ufff☺️ stil red right nowThe way u wrote about Raghu and his love for money was just great, u described each and every feeling of his towards money.Who is that man and why does he want antara?NAHI BATAUNGI 😆Poor antu doesn't even know whats coming her way.Is this story from back to front or is it just me cuz in the last update you said that Raghu was already there to marry herI am hell confused with some parts right now but I know soon they will be cleared.machmach seems more nicer than Raghu in this story lol, Raghu seems to be the harsh and mericiless, it suits him but not too muchI am eagerly waiting to see what Raghu is going to do,is this going to be a love story ot just a dark tragic and sad story???WELCOME TO THE LAND OF CONFUSION😆 ...IT WLL INCREASE MORE I THINK ... JUST GO WITH THE STORY ...ITS A DARK TRAGIC SAD STORY OR NOT ...I DON KNOW ...AS U NEVER KNOW WHAT AWAITS IN FUTURE ...NOT EVRYBODY'S LIFE IS BLESSED THAT MUCH N SHOWERED WITH ONLY FLOWERS ...😃my thoughts on this part:Something inside him was making him mad to accept the deal and to show his acceptance he needed to reach Nibholi by next day morning. He had a feeling that if he didn't accept that deal ...the mysterious man would hire someone else for the task and Raghu didn't want to miss the deal of 5 crores at any costI really was thinking he would leave a chance to marry antu lol silly me.Now I know I don't have to say this but for u its nesscessryPlease cont asap and update JAAN!YA WLL UPDATE jAAN ALSO ...BUT NOWADAYS ONLY sATHIYA IDEAS R ROAMING IN MY HEAD ...
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waise Raghu yehan pe change honewala nahi hai ...uske aur bhi khatarnak rang dekhneko milega ...just wait n watch ...jahantak maine socha hai abh tak ...there is only fatal attraction ...but dur dur tak koi pyar ki nishani nahi milegi from Raghu's side ...antu ka mat puch ...kyunke pata nahi 😆
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