RanTara SS: Fallen In Love..DISCONTINUED - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
wow a different idea
please continue
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Amazing new concept...
Do pm me...
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Res
unres

another story๐Ÿฅณ

its alwayz a treat to read ur stories๐Ÿ‘

m loving this plot ๐Ÿ˜Š

waiting for t eagerly๐Ÿ˜Š

continue soon๐Ÿ˜Š
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#14
thx guys...
yes will update all stories together,.. <3
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Uff ur imagination wale skills r killing me.. too good ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Hats off u DD... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Raghu..loving someone else.. ๐Ÿคข
and there is another secret... ohh patience is being tested now... lol ๐Ÿ˜†
pls update asap... ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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thx guys..<3
like button is not working.. :(
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Hey interesting concept...
Update d first part soon will be waiting..
Thanks fr pm..:)
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PLLLZZZ UPPPDDDAAATTTEEE SSSOOONNN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š WAITING !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey guys.. hope u all r doing well..here is the first part of this story..
hope u'll like it..
guys, plz do read and leave ur comments...
Happy Reading.. :)

PART 1

Raghu was leaning back on his recliner in his room..he was staring at the ceiling and was lost in some thoughts..
he turned his face in side and looked at his wife sleeping on the right sight of bed..
he kept staring on her angelic face for minutes.. and then he got up and walked towards her side of bed to switch off the lamp...
and then he saw some tears on her cheeks which have been dried by now...
he closed his eyes and clutched his fist in anger.. he turned off the lamp and came back to the recliner.. and again leaned back on it...
he thought of the incident happened 2 hrs back..

- - - - - - FLASHBACK - - - - - -

Antara how many times i need to tell you that STAY AWAY FROM ME AND MY STUFFS...
DARE YOU EVER TOUCH THEM AGAIN...
her body was trembling in fear... she got scared and stepped back.. he saw that and realised how badly he shouted on her..
he moved forward to her in order to hold her.. but she got scared and hid her face.. as if he came to slap her..
he was stopped there only... he clutched his fist and moved back...
tears were rolling on her cheeks...
she cried and tried to speak something but she wasn't able to because of hiccups... "you looked worried.. ".. sobs..
so i.. sobs.. i only tried.. sobs... to help u...
and she walked out from the room...

he sat back on his chair.. held his head in his hand and took a deep breath..
he was sitting like that only..
when he heard the sound of her bangles... he turned.. and saw her...
she got scared.. "co...ff...ee.." she said and forwarded the mug to him..
wo gira di thi maine... and she lowered her eyes..
he looked at her face...she was scared of him as hell.. why he always keeps shouting at her.. and she never says anything...he thought.
he took the mug from her.. and she sat down and wiped the floor and table...
without touching his files... tears were still rolling on her cheeks which she kept wiping them off...

he saw that she cleaned everything.. but din't touch his file...
he picked the file and gave it to her.. she wiped coffee that was spilled over it..
and gave it back to him.. "sorry.. "
he din't say any thing... and she came out of the room..
she made dinner after some time and came in the room... "k..hh.a...n..aa.."
he was busy in his work and without looking at her.. "hmmm.." he said..
she felt hurt.. and came out.. she arranged dinner on table.. and he came after 5 minutes...

they both had their food.. she wasn't able to eat properly..
he was always like that.. but he never shouted on her.. and today it was limits.. she only wanted to help him and brought coffee for him..
which he din't notice and it was spilled over the table...

he looked at her.. "sorry" he said softly... she looked at him...
i am sorry.. i shouldn't have shouted at you like that.. it was not your mistake...
she nodded in no.. as she wasn't able to speak.. she forgave him in a moment..

they finished their dinner.. she did some other work.. and came back in the room.. he was sitting on the recliner and was working on his laptop..
he slipped in her duvet and dozed off...

- - - - - - FLASHBACK ENDS- - - - - -


In morning.. everything was back to normal.. their daily routine..
a week passed like that..
raghu was in his office.. after lunch he went to wash his hands... he was about to leave when one of his mate stopped him...
what happened to u raghu.. u look tensed.. is everything ok??
hmm.. yeah!! everything is fine... thanks..
okay.. n ur hands are not washed properly.. there is something on your finger..
he checked it and again went to wash his hands.. he was cleaning his hands again.. when he touched his ring...

he was sitting in his cabin.. and was continuously playing with his ring...and he was lost in some memories.. good or bad he din't know...

precap: those memories...
actually that will take quite long part to write.. in first part i just wanted to start the story.. let me know how was it..?

heyy guys...i really hope u guys hv liked this update..
please leave ur comments/suggessions/questions..
please hit the like button.. thanks for reading..
loads of luv..
-akki


please buddy "DeadDevil-FF" to receive PMs..
Edited by DeadDevil - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Unedited
I m first...
Res
Edited...
Its lovely..
Raghu is a bit harsh...
Antara is sweet...
I liked it...
Do continue soon...
Precap is intresting...
Edited by hayakhan5 - 10 years ago
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