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@ rocker12: thanks hamraโฆ lol even I have started to watch the show these days just cant get enough of manveer lol๐๐ณโฆ hehe going through the other ff once again well hope u like the way the story is going๐โฆ u know it actually feels so good to see ur comment after a long time and I really mean it when u saw ur name pop up I was happy that u made a comment after a long time and I thank u for that ๐๐
@ princessSonia: yep sonia another one like I had this type of concept in my mind and I thought of not posting it but then I couldn't control myself and gave it a try๐ณโฆ lol in fact I won a lottery for receiving lovely comments like this๐โฆ glad u liked chapter oneโฆ hmm manveer cold towards each other well its mostly uday who is acting cold but anyways to know the reason u will have to wait a little๐โฆ posting next part in few mintues and yes will add u to the pm list and lol yes u r second to post ๐
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@ catty2000: thanks vidhiโฆ glad u liked the cs and the first chapterโฆ. Yep uday and manyata do have a pastโฆ yes that's y manyata came back due to something that happens, wow yaar im glad u guessed it right๐๐โฆ will continue soon and will add u to the pm list ๐
@ serat: thank uโฆ yep manveer do have a past and u will see a little bit of that past in the next chapter will update in few minutes ๐
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J: didu what happened come on sit inside' manyata came out of her thought and sat inside.
In manyata room
Manyata was sitting on her bed and was just staring into space her mind was not ready to accept that she saw him after three years and wished that she had ran away when her six sense had told her to' because now she was feeling uneasy knowing that she is going to see him at the party again' she still cant forget that cold look knowing well that he hates her. She also noticed he has changed completely he doesn't look how he use to look before.
Flashback
Three years ago in New York
Pia (manyata friend): pia was manyata school friend and they both went to New York uni together
Manyata: pia come on we r getting late for lectures how long r u going to take in that bathroom
Pia: two minutes manyata I will be out soon
Manyata: k'. manyata started to arrange her books in her bag and till then pia came out who was getting ready
Pia: manyata is it necessary to go to lecture' you know that princi is so boring and there are no hot guys in that class she said applying her lip gloss while manyata gave her an annoying look
Manyata: pia u go to lectures to study not to see if there is any hot guys and if u fail in this test how r u gone get into second year and on top of that uncle will kill u
Pia: arien how can I fail when I have my smarty manyata with me' both girls smiled and left to go to uni' they both were staying at a rented house as they didn't want to stay on campus
Once entering the university they were walking towards their lecture until pia saw some hot guys with his group of friends
Pia: wow he is hot' manyata looked at pia and then at the guy and shook her head
Manyata: come on pia she said dragging her who was still staring at the guy.
Both were sitting in lecture hall manyata was busy in taking notes while pia was just staring in to space thinking about the guy' finally the lecture was over and they were heading out when pia bumped into that guy again who was with his friends
Pia: oh im sorry pia said with dreamy eyes. That guy smirked
Guy: its k beautiful' manyata didn't like the was pia was behaving hence dragged her away' one of the guys friend said
Friend 1: yaar UV ur so lucky every girl dies to be with u' (yep im sure u all knew it was none other uday)
Uday: chalo guys lets go'
Meanwhile at the canteen
Manyata: pia cant u just stick to one guy for the rest of ur life' I am sick and tired u always have new guys around u every week
Pia: oh come on manyata I cant help it I mean whoever I go out with turn out to be the wrong guy now its not my fault if I cant find my Mr perfect she said with a puppy face
Manyata: then don't go out with anyone until u think he is Mr right
Pia: omg im so lucky
Manyata: what? Pia here we r talking about something else and u r bringing another topic up
Pia: manyata yaar im seeing him the third time today hayee god is so great
Manyata: he is in the second year pia he is our senior
Pia: what really how comes I didn't see him before
Manyata: because ur always flying with one boy to another
Pia: manyata yaar he is so damn hot
Manyata: ergh u know what im going home see u later and manyata headed of but one of udays friend rajveer blocked her
Rajveer: hey pretty women' udays and his friend were looking at manyata and rajveer
Manyata: get lost she said annoyingly and moved away' they all looked at manyata walking away and laughed
Rajveer: hey uday look that girl seems like she is trying to get ur attention they said looking at pia' uday smirked and walked towards pia and sat next to her while pia was getting even more happy
Pia: hi again
Uday: hi
Pia: im pia she said forwarding her hand
Uday: im udayveer in short UV he said taking pia hand and kissing it giving his sexy smile which can make any girl faint while pia was feeling like she was in heaven 'Manyata who came back to get pia saw what was happening she quickly went over to pia
Manyata: pia come lets go she said tapping on pia shoulder bringing her back to reality
Pia: oh manyata. Erm meet him this is Udayveer in short UV
Manyata: pia im not interested to know who he is now come on lets go she said ignoring uday and walked away with pia
After the girl left his friends came towards him
Rajveer: yaar uday I thought all girl go crazy for u but look at this girl she has no interest in u
Uday: she sure is something different to other girls
Flashback end
Vijay: manyata, manyata wake up it 5pm.
manyata got startled hearing vijay bhai and didn't realise when she fell asleep.. she was lost in her thoughts thinking about her past
vijay: manu u k' u seemed worried since morning he said caressing manyata brining her back to reality
manyata: yea vijay bhai im fine she said smiling' vijay knew she was hiding something but didn't dig into it
vijay: ok come on get ready the party will start soon and also guest will start coming
manyata: yeah'After 20 minutes manyata came out wearing this and applied less make up and straightened her hair leaving it down
It was 5:40 and manyata was ready on time and headed downstairs to see that everything was almost done after checking everything she went to her parents room and saw them arguing
Brij: komal im telling u this necklace doesn't suit ur saree
Komal: brij this necklace is lovely and see it does go with the saree
Brij: komal listen to me see this one is the best its goes well matching with ur saree and bangles
Komal: brij
Brij: in fact u change the saree and wear another one
Komal: brij its j birthday she is the one who has to look good now please don't annoy me
Brij: komal look don't argue and wear this one it looks so good on u' komal was about to reply back when they heard someone laughing and saw it was manyata
Komal: manyata y r u laughing
Manyata: maa papa how long have u been arguing about this necklace
Komal: since ages ok u tell me which is better this one or the one ur dad is saying
Manyata: erm this one she said pointing to the one that komal has
Komal: see I told u. k now come lets go down the guest would have started to come and all three headed down they were near the stairs when brij stopped
Manyata: what happened papa
Brij: beta I just left my phone in the room I will go and get it u lot go down
Manyata: papa u and maa go I will go and get it
Brij: thanks beta,,, come lets go once they reached downstairs they saw that Mrinanali was welcoming the first guest which was Giri family
Mrinanali: please come in
Giri: thanks mrinanali ma'. wow brij nothing has changed in this house its still the same they said sitting on the couch' till then manyata came down unaware of the first guest when she was on the last steps she started to walk slowly seeing who was in front of them' for a second there was a brief eye contact between manveer and then it was uday who broke it' she calmed herself down and went towards brij and gave him his mobile
Brij: thank u beta' arien haan giri yesterday u met vijay properly at the temple but not manyata ' manyata took giriraj blessing
Giri: brij, our parents were friends' then we became friends and now our kids he said looking at unnati and manyata
Vasu: beta unnati told me u joined the second year of uni a bit late over here
Manyata: haan aunty woh I actually was missing everyone so thought of continuing my studies in india' but from the corner of her eyes she could feel uday giving her a pity look' erm I will go and help vijay bhai attend the guest all nodded and she quickly went to vijay bhai and started attending the guest
Mrinanali: komal has j got ready
Komal: I will just go and check on her' after a while komal came back but she went directly to manyata and whispered something in her ears and headed back to where everyone was sitting
Manyata: vijay bhai I will be back' vijay nodded
Mrinanali: komal what happened where did manyata go
Komal: maa wo jay told me to call manyata as she need some help and I told manyata to bring j asap'. After a while j and manyata were walking down the stairs and soon reached near to the elders to take blessing' all the guest were coming near j to wish her and giving her the birthday gifts after a while she went on the stage while the elders went to the lawn and left the youngster to enjoy the party
J: thank you all for the birthday wishes and the gifts and also took some time out to attend the party so since its my birthday lets so something fun' the first thing we are going to do is give all the girls and boys a chit which will have a numbers and who ever has the same numbers have to dance with each other k, all agreed ' one of the servants bought two bowls of chit one for girls and the other for boy and j was distributing to the girls while vijay bhai was giving it to the boys' j saw manyata leave and she knew here sister was trying to get away from the dance
J: didu where r u going
Manyata: j I seriously don't want to play u lot continue
Unnati: oh come on manyata its j birthday don't let her down
J: exactly now come on pick a chit' manyata knew she cant get away so she took out a chit and j gave her a wide smile. After a while everyone had a piece of paper in their hands
J: k im going to say the numbers and whoever has that numbers need to come forward and pair up with their respective partners' j started to say the numbers and everyone was standing next to their respective partners' okay number 6
Jagat: that me
J: wow jagat ur lucky to dance with the birthday girl' while jagat smiled and went and stood next to j
Jagat: pleasure is mine
J: number 3' manyata looked at the piece of paper and 3 was written on it
Uday: im number 3 jay' manyata was about to screw the note when unnati saw the number written on the piece of paper
Unnati: arien that's u manyata' manyata cursed her luck for a second she felt like strangling unnati' uday went and stood next to manyata
J: k finally number 1 which we all know that is unnati and vijay as they were the only ones left.
So guys lets go on the dance floor' all the guys took their respective partners hand for a dance while manveer stood back' manyata was about to leave from their when uday puller her towards the dance floor without looking at her. He pulled her closer to him but placing his one hands on her waist and holding the other one while manyata one hand was resting on to his shoulder' and all started to dance' manyata was looking everywhere else and avoiding uday' while on the other hand he was looking at her without any expression'after a while he spoke to her
Uday: so MISS Manyata Rathord how r u
Manyata: fine she said still avoiding his gaze
Uday: oh god how stupid of me to ask this question of course u would be FINE since u ONLY care about Yourself' and this time manyata looked at him angrily
Manyata: What is your problem' uday ignored that question and still looked at her with cold eyes
Uday: Miss manyata how comes you decided to continue ur studies in india as far as I Know U use to study in New York right'I mean as far as I know u wanted to come to New York University right then all of a sudden missing family that's y u came back to india' that doesn't seem right? Or is there something u r trying to hide'u have become and expert in lying' he said smirking and then putting back on a cold look' manyata was feeling suffocated she wanted to run away from uday
Manyata: it is none of your business' uday pulled her even more closer
Uday: it is Manyata it is and even u know that right he said digging his nail into her waist which was paining her'
Manyata: ur hurting me uday.. but uday was in rage manyata somehow pulled away from him but again got pulled by uday
Uday: come on Manyata its ur sisters birthday want to upset her by leaving the dance floor
Manyata: y r u doing this
Uday: u exactly know y he said gritting his teeth
Precap: little more into the past
Ok guys here is part 2' thanks for all those lovely comments which I have replied to thanks for all the love and support' hope u like it and its not too boring please do let me know ur views
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Originally posted by: preya_radev
Thanks to those who like this part it means a lot to me
The following 10 member(s) liked the above post:
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thanks to those who posted a comment it really means a lot
@ rocker12: thanks hamra' lol even I have started to watch the show these days just cant get enough of manveer lol๐๐ณ' hehe going through the other ff once again well hope u like the way the story is going๐' u know it actually feels so good to see ur comment after a long time and I really mean it when u saw ur name pop up I was happy that u made a comment after a long time and I thank u for that ๐๐
@ princessSonia: yep sonia another one like I had this type of concept in my mind and I thought of not posting it but then I couldn't control myself and gave it a try๐ณ' lol in fact I won a lottery for receiving lovely comments like this๐' glad u liked chapter one' hmm manveer cold towards each other well its mostly uday who is acting cold but anyways to know the reason u will have to wait a little๐' posting next part in few mintues and yes will add u to the pm list and lol yes u r second to post ๐
@ htgcute: thank u harishta glad u liked the first part yep sure will pm u ๐
@ prernakhandelwa: thanks im glad u liked the character sketch and the first part. Sure will pm u. ๐
@: ...anju...: thanks anju im glad u liked it the first part' yep will reveal manveer past but slowly.. will update in few minutes ๐
@ catty2000: thanks vidhi' glad u liked the cs and the first chapter'. Yep uday and manyata do have a past' yes that's y manyata came back due to something that happens, wow yaar im glad u guessed it right๐๐' will continue soon and will add u to the pm list ๐
@ serat: thank u' yep manveer do have a past and u will see a little bit of that past in the next chapter will update in few minutes ๐
@ aathiraa: thanks u will update next part in few minutes๐
@Marooshmalik: updating in few minutes ๐
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