ChanDni SS- HIS ESTRANGED QUEEN Ch 4-pg 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Hi

Iam fron chennai??How about u???

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RTDeewani

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Originally posted by: JanakNandini
Hi
Iam fron chennai??How about u???

I am a Madurai girl but I am at Chennai right now pursuing my Engineering. Small world...

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👏 Loved the suspense you have kept in each and every frame . Do continue . Loved the title Why Chandra is suffering now ? How and who was he before ? Nandh ? what he has done to Chandra ? How Chandra's queen connected to Nandh ? Are they connected ? and how did CN fall in love, marry ? and now they are seperated ! Hoping I shall get answers to all these in coming episodes .

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Originally posted by: Nandinisharmaa
👏 Loved the suspense you have kept in each and every frame . Do continue . Loved the title Why Chandra is suffering now ? How and who was he before ? Nandh ? what he has done to Chandra ? How Chandra's queen connected to Nandh ? Are they connected ? and how did CN fall in love, marry ? and now they are seperated ! Hoping I shall get answers to all these in coming episodes .

Glad you loved the update and suspense, Nandini Di.Thank you. You will soon get your doubts cleared in the upcoming chapters. Thanks again.

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Hi dearie You are keeping your promise.I tell you that to find a chandini in real life is so difficult. ..They are reallly out of world. .

This post is purely depicts nandini...

how she came to ooty with unborn child...

She really toiled day and night for her survival.

Nandini longing for her chandra but wht she does not wAnt to go back to him?Was it a marriage of convinence?

What did she do ...Did she play with his feeling.

I think you need to give a flashback how they gt married..just some hint so that we can get understand their depth of their love.

She waits for her fate but little does she know that chandra is going to come to ooty soon...I am so happy...

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Again you have maintained suspense 👏What did Nandni do ? Did she break Chandr's heart ?how ? Interesting . Update soon 😉

Good you gave some happniess to Nandni in form of child here . True. even in show we had seen she was always surrounded by devils .At least you have shown her with her baby here. She can feel secured , loved . say there is something of her own , be happy about it .

Waiting to see CN meet and also know about their past life

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An excellent beginning with inbuilt suspense and twists 👏

I like the backdrop of Ooty for the Story.

Hmmm So Nand and Chandra were erstwhile friends and now arch rivals of the same industry.

His wife may be the Victim.

But in reality, Chandra is both the Pawn and the Victim. He has been cheated by Best Friend and his Wife.

Great. My vote is for Chandra here 😛

For a change, Nand is (was) Chandra's Friend; not Father-in-law. 😃

Chandra spoke to his wife about killing their unborn child ??? I guessing that Chandra suspected his wife of having an affair with his friend.

I am a bit confused here about Chapter 2 lines dearie.

On one side, she says "We were cheaply tricked into marrying each other without our consent".

On the other side, she says "I failed to save him from getting married to me" ...

The second statement says that she was AWARE that she is tricking him consciously, but silently entered into the agreement.

So, "WE" and "OUR consent" in the first statement is a bit confusing -coz then, his wife is proven innocent.

May be the situation you are weaving is a tricky one, that applies to both situations huh?

Ummm. Just one question.

You have both Jodha Akbar and Chandra Nandini photos as the Promo pictures.

Which one do you plan to keep as Hero and Heroine ???? 😉

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Originally posted by: rajatshweta

An excellent beginning with inbuilt suspense and twists 👏
I like the backdrop of Ooty for the Story.

Hmmm So Nand and Chandra were erstwhile friends and now arch rivals of the same industry.
His wife may be the Victim.
But in reality, Chandra is both the Pawn and the Victim. He has been cheated by Best Friend and his Wife.
Great. My vote is for Chandra here 😛

For a change, Nand is (was) Chandra's Friend; not Father-in-law. 😃

Chandra spoke to his wife about killing their unborn child ??? I guessing that Chandra suspected his wife of having an affair with his friend.

I am a bit confused here about Chapter 2 lines dearie.
On one side, she says "We were cheaply tricked into marrying each other without our consent".
On the other side, she says "I failed to save him from getting married to me" ...
The second statement says that she was AWARE that she is tricking him consciously, but silently entered into the agreement.
So, "WE" and "OUR consent" in the first statement is a bit confusing -coz then, his wife is proven innocent.
May be the situation you are weaving is a tricky one, that applies to both situations huh?

Ummm. Just one question.
You have both Jodha Akbar and Chandra Nandini photos as the Promo pictures.
Which one do you plan to keep as Hero and Heroine ???? 😉

Hi Akka. Finally your comment has come which I know will be critical enough to think and you didn't disappoint at all.

@bold Yes, I try my best to change the relationship between the leads if my fictions accept that change. Because,as a reader myself, that will be pretty amusing while reading and also the readers won't be bored by the same characterizations. There is no rule that we must abide by history here,is it? So the ball is in our court.

Well, you guessed it right Akka. The twist is quite tricky and so are the phrases confusing. Giving explanation to your doubt will spoil all the fun. So, patience please till I unwind the twists with my updates.There is no constant time zone in this fiction. We will be swapping back and forth between the past and present.

@ red You naughty... Jodha Akbar is not my promo pic Akka. It is my signature. The HERO and HEROINE are CHANDRA and NANDINI only.

Loved your comments, Akka. Thank you.

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Originally posted by: Nandinisharmaa
Again you have maintained suspense 👏What did Nandni do ? Did she break Chandr's heart ?how ? Interesting . Update soon 😉

Good you gave some happniess to Nandni in form of child here . True. even in show we had seen she was always surrounded by devils .At least you have shown her with her baby here. She can feel secured , loved . say there is something of her own , be happy about it .

Waiting to see CN meet and also know about their past life

Well... who broke who's heart will only be unveiled as the story progresses. However, I would just like to tell you that no one is that evil as we may think of a typical antagonist in a story. All the characters are ALMOST GOOD only in this fiction. You'll know why as the story progresses.

Well about the child, yes, she does deserve a child because she's not some scheming,evil witch who deserves nothing good in life. Her child is her everything. I badly wanted them to have a child in the show,especially a daughter just like Chandra asks Nandini. But sometimes I welcome the fact that CV's marr our expectations like this because we can salve ourselves by making it happen in our fictions if not in the show.

Also, when the HELLena can have two kids from Chandra why not Nandini?

ALL IS FAIR IN LOVE AND FICTION!!!!😉

Anyways, thank you Di!😃

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