Oh my Ram being rational, logical and using his brains?? Wow that is a miracle!
Loved the story, I am honestly okay if they go this way with the story because atleast that would mean the misunderstandings are now finally over.
You and your brilliant ideas👏❤️
Loved this Nita! It’s really good and is it inspired by Dobaara or Mirage? There u had a geostorm that allowed for manipulating the past which altered the present. How I wish something like that happened when they brought in Tapsee as a guest? They could have gone back in time and none of this would have happened. Loved this TS and reading your fiction pieces on RaYa lets us envision what we wanted to see in the show but couldn’t 😭 thanks dear ❤️
Originally posted by: BlurredLines
Sorry about the length of the TS 😆. It was supposed to be OS and it was too long that I made it into a TS instead. 5000 words written purely out of frustration 😆.
Wow 2 parts I first thought its the same story as previous one due to title...but then noticed this one was centred around Ram rather than Priya😆
I loved how Ram stood up against his mother❤️
Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon
Hey Nita! I donno how I missed this one out. Loved it 😃 . Thanks Mandy ❤️. Glad you liked it . 🤗.
Did not expect the story to take this turn but even if time travel is outside rational bounds I don't mind seeing that happen coz that means Shivi and Akki will still be a part of Raya's lives and this is how it should have been ❤️ Thanks for this OS. I think it was something that was talked about in EDT that nothing could make this show work then making it a dream or something. Hence this irrational OS. I know it doesn't actually make sense but it is better than the show trying to make sense 😆.
I know there is no Pihu but there will be a Pihu in their lives eventually and loved how Priya mentioned about them having a child in future coz she always felt awkward when Ram broached that topic 😆 Loved reading this one again Nita 🤗 I do miss writing on PIhu, but at least she won't be born in a messed up situation in this dream OS .
P. S - I donno how you are able to write on RaYa anymore even after the show took that turn 😆 I guess turn maybe the wrong word coz it was always illogical but my love for RaYa and mostly Pihu kept me hooked to the show but now everything feels out of place . It is because I write mostly out of frustration than love for RaYa anymore. If you ask me to write AU wjth RaYa, I might struggle because I can't relate to this current version of characters one bit 😆. I still do have a soft spot for RaPi ❤️. So my SS will hopefully be completed .
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Awesome and mind-blowing update.you can make this a full fledged story .If possible write further about the phase of pregnancy of Priya with mood swings and baby birh continue soon
Originally posted by: Nitisha_NM
Love the way you write the stories. Loved the concept of this one. Keep writing such amazing stuffs. Thank you for the lovely feedback and support ❤️. Glad you liked my stories🤗
Would love to read about Raya being together during the pregnancy phase from your pov. Because every story that you write feels so good to read ❤️. Once again Thank you for the kind words. I would write in such scenario if I find an idea around it .
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Originally posted by: AubodroKhargosh
What a beautiful story! Loved the way you wrote this. Thank you. ❤️. Glad you liked the story🤗
Even though I knew something like this would happen, I still gasped when Ram said kaun Pihu?. I adore Pihu and not writing on her was bit different 😆.
Also love that Shivi is back! She's annoying but Ram loves her so much that I'm glad for him. And Akki!! Love it. Exactly, she maybe bit spoiled and stupid at times, but her heart was never in the wrong place and she doesn't deserve to die that early either .
And you got Shashi caught lol. Nice. Well someone had to since the writers forget about him in the show and let him walk scott free 😆
A smart Ram who is able to connect the dots. I was so afraid he was gonna come in screaming that you knew and never said anything Priya etc Screaming Ram gets boring, we see that often in the show itself. I don't know how he goes from screaming to forgiving the next second in the show 🤣
Loved the concept. Maybe that is all that can save this show. Time travel . I truly believe it is our last chance. Because the show keeps going on a circles . Thank you once again for the lovely feedback ❤️🤗
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Wonderful shot ☺️😇✨
Seriously after reading this shot even i hoped everything was a dream of priya , if time travels back to five years then akki and shivi would still be part of Raya's lives, shivi would still be alive and akki also would be there , because makers have done worst blunders in the show !!
Thank you for the lovely feedback. ❤️. Glad you liked it 🤗.
Yeah the show writers have made every track into a mess .
Originally posted by: BlurredLines
Thank you for the lovely feedback. ❤️. Glad you liked it 🤗.
Yeah the show writers have made every track into a mess . Your welcome ☺️ yeah i really did , exactly 💯💯💯
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Originally posted by: tournesol
Wow, this one was a whole roller coaster ride. Took me back into a whole lot of what ifs, the biggest one being what if Shivi never died.I know right killing Shivi made the entire characters reach a point of no return.
I liked how the story turned and Priya started experiencing deja vus from her dream, I totally loved it. Thanks Tia. Glad you liked it. It was like once I went into the rabbit hole of What if, I couldn't stop wishing we get such a retake for this show .
Thank goodness Shashi and MS got caught. The ending is so beautiful, Ram and Priya thinking of becoming proud parents of Pihu, their daughter, with no one among the three missing out on pure love ❤️ I am glad you liked it ❤️. Yeah any thing is better than the one we get on the show now.
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