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Posted: 1 years ago
#11

THANK YOU SO MUCH for writing this. After seeing todays episode I was so upset. The character of Ram is shown as a selfish and self centered Hero. This is like an antidote to todays episode. I really wanted her to continue with her cold treatment or at least go home for a day or two with her mother.

Lovely writing !!πŸ‘

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Posted: 1 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: DazzlingLight

Tamatar bade mehenge hai abhi, woh naa phenka jaayega humse 🀣


Will come back to comment on the OS soon 😊


Aa gayi! Once again I'm so glad about my choice of time to read your story. I just finished today's episode and came here to read this..and I swear dil ko shaanti mili. I am so done with Ram of S3 and the doormat they have made Priya into.

Loved every word of this OS...kaash Priya iska half bhi suna deti Ram ko!

Shalini wanting to go with Priya was such a masterstroke of a twist...now that Ram will be left alone with his kidney, hopefully ab thoda usko grease laga ke chalane ki koshish kare. πŸ˜†

PS: Just saw that you've titled it as a TS..bring it on! Isko FF hi bana do aap

@bold : Dekho, you need to thank me for this big achievement! Maine karwaaya hai ye os se ts ka safar..so give me my due credit πŸ˜†

Also, saath me 101 rupay ka chadhave ( offering ) bhi leti hu main, so don't forget πŸ˜‰πŸ€£

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Posted: 1 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: NityaAhuja15

@bold : Dekho, you need to thank me for this big achievement! Maine karwaaya hai ye os se ts ka safar..so give me my due credit πŸ˜†

Also, saath me 101 rupay ka chadhave ( offering ) bhi leti hu main, so don't forget πŸ˜‰πŸ€£


@bold: Cash ya UPI? Wo kya hai na, 101 rupay ke liye main credit card nahi use kar sakti.🀣

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Posted: 1 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: NityaAhuja15

Let's be honest...and I'm crying here right now, whilst writing this! Seriously


Awww... Love you Nityaaa...πŸ€—

Looking forward to reading your comments whenever you get time.❀️

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Posted: 1 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: DazzlingLight

Tamatar bade mehenge hai abhi, woh naa phenka jaayega humse 🀣


Will come back to comment on the OS soon 😊


Aa gayi! Once again I'm so glad about my choice of time to read your story. I just finished today's episode and came here to read this..and I swear dil ko shaanti mili. I am so done with Ram of S3 and the doormat they have made Priya into.

Loved every word of this OS...kaash Priya iska half bhi suna deti Ram ko!

Shalini wanting to go with Priya was such a masterstroke of a twist...now that Ram will be left alone with his kidney, hopefully ab thoda usko grease laga ke chalane ki koshish kare. πŸ˜†

PS: Just saw that you've titled it as a TS..bring it on! Isko FF hi bana do aap


Hahaha, tamatar hai to mehenge. Waste nahi karna chahiye.🀣

Thank you so much Dazz for the lovely comments and I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading it.πŸ€—

@bold: Shalini Aunty is going with Priya to Bangalore in the next Chapter for sure. You literally made me laugh so hard with: "now that Ram will be left alone with his kidney, hopefully ab thoda usko grease laga ke chalane ki koshish kare."🀣

Haan ji.. TS bana diya kyunki mujhe laga ke Ram ka redemption likhna zaroori tha. Also, Nitya wouldn't have let me be in peace if I wouldn't have continued.πŸ˜†β€οΈ FF ka.. abhi promise nahi kar sakti... TS hone do.. phir dekhenge scope of story.😳

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Posted: 1 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Pensive

This is so beautiful. The way you have added depth to your Ram and Pri ...and even the plot is amazing Mina❀️...Harneet's Ram is too shallow


Thank you so much P!πŸ€— I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it.❀️

I just cannot... with Harneet's Ram. He is not worth being a part of any of the FFs of this forum.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Riddhi_S

Oh wow! This was, surprising! Different from what we're seeing on screen, but I absolutely love your version!πŸ₯Ίβ€οΈ This OS could actually turn into a full fledged story! (Me being greedy for your writings) πŸ™ˆ


Love the depth of the characters you carved with your words and perspective. Was a wonderful read. πŸ’«


Keep writing πŸ’―β€οΈπŸ™ŒπŸ»


Thank you so much Riddhi!πŸ€— This OS will now be a TS so you will get another 1 or 2 parts, depending on how I plan to take the story further.😳


Will do. Thank you for the encouragement and appreciation.β€οΈπŸ™ŒπŸ»

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Posted: 1 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: HpTheChosenOne

Wonderful dear... this was the kind of outburst that was expected from priya. You sure have a way with words.. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ€—


Thank you so much dear. Appreciate it.β€οΈπŸ€—

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Posted: 1 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Well I don't watch the episodes regularly so don't know what is happening. But Ram doing this to Priya can very much happen.

Ram should know that izzat dene se hi milti hai.

Respect is a two way process.


Hahaha, It's good that you're not watching the episodes. Itna gussa aa raha hai pichhle kuch episodes se ke kya bataau.😑

Thank you for your comments.πŸ€—

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Posted: 1 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Dewdrops1995

Beautiful os

I absolutely love this version


Thank you so much.😳

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