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Posted: 1 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: NityaAhuja15

Wohooo...this was sooo good! I'm loving how you are progressing your story.❀

And really glad that you'll convert it into an SS...waiting for further chapters!

Also, just a weird name, but since I found it relevant, so I'm suggesting it...you can name it, CAN'T HELP FALLING IN LOVE WITH YOU! ❀️

Thoda lamba ho gaya na...but story ke hisaab se bola maine..anyways, whatever you name it, will be excited to read further.❀

Title is perfect as both are feeling same way.


Dear kindly tagged your readers here , I am totally not able to tag anyone.


Regarding story , I love to processed slowly. I myself too loving writing it after so many years

Ram and Priya rocks actually. They force you to hookup with the show and write.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Good One. I really liked the way Ram is clear about keeping Krithi away. I hope in our show also they show that he is not pleased to see her in his house and office. Even though its a contract marriage with Priya, Krithi acts as if she is Ram's wife. When Krithi had the opportunity , she didnt support him. Now when she lost her contract she wants Ram so that she can be financially secure.

Waiting for the next part. Please update soon.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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The ones whom I'll tag are already tagged by mrina diπŸ˜†

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: NityaAhuja15

Wohooo...this was sooo good! I'm loving how you are progressing your story.❀

And really glad that you'll convert it into an SS...waiting for further chapters!

Also, just a weird name, but since I found it relevant, so I'm suggesting it...you can name it, CAN'T HELP FALLING IN LOVE WITH YOU!

Thoda lamba ho gaya na...but story ke hisaab se bola maine..anyways, whatever you name it, will be excited to read further.❀


Saw your comment and couldn't help myself because I was reminded of one of my favourite songs ❀️ Enjoy πŸ˜‰


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MqazV4hbu8E&ab_channel=7clouds


Thanks for the tag M!


@Naddiya: Will be back to read your story 😊

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Posted: 1 years ago
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I’ll read Chapter 2 when I get back home later tonight!

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Good One. I really liked the way Ram is clear about keeping Krithi away. I hope in our show also they show that he is not pleased to see her in his house and office. Even though its a contract marriage with Priya, Krithi acts as if she is Ram's wife. When Krithi had the opportunity , she didnt support him. Now when she lost her contract she wants Ram so that she can be financially secure.

Waiting for the next part. Please update soon.

thanks dear glad you liked it , sure I am going to update soon just promise me you all are going to leave comments .

I am writing after 8 years so bit shaky


I have made both of them possessive

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Very nice update. Ram and Priya have their moments.❀️

Ye Kriti yahan bhi aa gayi.πŸ˜”πŸ˜‘

Continue soon.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: minakrish

Very nice update. Ram and Priya have their moments.❀️

Ye Kriti yahan bhi aa gayi.πŸ˜”πŸ˜‘

Continue soon.

thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 1 years ago
#29

Chapter 3

Thank you readers for your support. Sometimes surely I am going to tell you guys about myself right now let's start with the next chapter.

Kriti stood stunned as he passed by her holding her hand walked to the sofa pulled the trolley and started opening the lid .

" Jaan Ka Khana Ka khayal rekna hai khud Ka Nahi " he filled her plate .

" Mr Kapoor I can't eat this muhje " she placed her hand on his , he started at her she quietly took the plate , Priya finds it awkward Kriti standing staring at them

" please you too join us " she said Ram who was busy eating didn't give it a heat .

Kriti was boiling from inside , she could not hold herself

" Anything happens between you both !" she said all of a sudden in a sarcastic way . Priya choked and started coughing Ram who was controling himself blast

" Kriti " he left his plate and started patting Priya 's back " I guess you better leave before I ..." Priya held his arm and tries to speak .

" relax Priya " he passed her glass of water and tissue.

Kriti bang her foot and walked towards the door " Ram we needs to have a conversation when you are free call me " she said from back he acted as if he didn't listened her

" She is your girlfriend Mr Kapoor" Priya said as she calmed herself

" you are my wife " he wiped her tears as coking made her almost breathless. " Finish food we have to leave " he said and started eating . Ram mood was completely off .

While waiting for his car in lobby

Manger " how was your stay Mr and Mrs Kapoor?" Before Priya could reply he said

"A memorable stay we will visit soon" he said loud

Priya look at him in shock , she saw Kriti standing on other side of lobby. Other visitors too recognised them and started murmurs #RaYa

" Kya yeh Kriti ko jala Raha Hain " she said to herself.

"Let's go " he offer her his arm , she has no other option to hold it

" Priya you sit at back " Kriti came close and said she was about to open the door Priya look at him and that at Ram who was talking to Shartul but looking at them . She steps back

"Kriti we must wait only Ram and Priya Bhabhi can go right now as I could arrange only 2 seats " Shartul said

" Priya can wait I will go with him " she at once said

" Ya sure " Priya whispered but Ram walked towards her and held her hand " you are coming with me " he said and walked towards other car .

Both seated at back as the driver drove it towards the airport . He was looking out side .

There was an awkward silence in the car.

" Kyun ghusa mein Hain aap " she whispered so the driver can't hear them . He didn't replied her .

They reached airport after boarding as they seated next to each other she asked look at him

" Aap tou muhje bhi stress ho Raha hai and bhook lagna lagi hai Mr Kapoor " she pretended

He put on the headphones .

" Girlfriend hai aap Kai she is getting insecure I was just giving her room , waise bhi muhje 3 months Ka baad Chala Jana Hain " she murmur while looking outside the window, thinking he was not listening her .

" How your parents will feel if they finds out I left you there and came with her " he whispered , she in surprise look at him " we can't hurt our parents , I have promised your father I will take care of you , how can I break that ? " He asked as find her looking at him in surprise " if my Jaan is important your family is as important as her , you know media and all they are always waiting for news and gossips " he added.

" Thanks for being so considerate Mr Kapoor " she said with a smile ," are you really hungry should I order something?" He asked her , she nodded .

" How much he cares for my parents, though I am just in a contact marriage with him , Yuvraj didn't bother about my parents , he walked away from a 6 years old relationship " she was lost in her own thought when Ram waved Infront of her . And passed her juice .

" cant stop myself falling in love with this man sitting to next to me " his shoulder was brushing hers and she felt so secure .

Ram had a meeting he directly went to his office , Priya went to Kapoor mansion .

'" thank God Priya tum aa gai yeh log muhje phir yeh soup da Raha tha ". mom said as she saw her entering the her room

" I told the cook " she at once took it from her hand

" Priya you must be tired , abhi Khana do Raat ko Kuch aur Bana Lana " Ram mami said at once

" Mein Maa Ka liya Kabhi bhi tired Nahi hoon sakti mein bus 15 mins mein aai " she hurriedly walked out

In Ram office he was sitting in his office he felt something was missing, he recollected how Priya dozed off in plane over his shoulder. A smile appears on his lips , " I m missing Dr Priya " he picked up his phone and dialed her number.

" Why she is not picking up , at least bata tou dati she has reached home" he stressed out and called his mom .

As Priya was not attending her phone Ram called his mom

" Dr Priya aagai ? He asked

"Nahi " maa was in mischievous mood she said

" Phone bhi Nahi utta rahi , where is she ? " He said

" Bohot faqir ho rahi hai , tou khud kyun Nahi aai saath la Kar " she pulled his leg and hides her smile . Priya walked in with the tray

" Maa meeting thi , she said she will go by herself " he said he grabbed a chocolate

As Priya placed the tray infront of her she passed her the phone

" Tumhara hai"maa said Priya asked her in sign

" Hello " she said

" Oh Jaan " it was so unexpected both held their breath to calm themselves.

" Priya bohot maaza ka hai " Maa said

" Aap ko acha lag Maa" she said

" Bohot , sorry beta I asked you to cook for me , tum ko freshen up Hona Ka bhi time Nahi Diya " Maa said

" Maa I came in plane , walk Kar Ka thori aai hoon Jo thak gai hoo gai " she smiled

he clenched the chocolate in his fist why he missed this .

" Kya huwa aap na phone kyun Kiya tha " she realised he was still on phone , and she has checked her cellphone which she has left on Maa's bed ,there was Ram three missed call.

" Woh " he could not complete his sentence as

Kriti walked in room , Priya could hear her voice she disconnected the call .

She sat a strange kind of feeling over shadowed her which was new for her.

In Ram's office

" Hello Priya " but the phone was discontinued.

" Ram how could you do this to me ? " She asked him angrily " for that Priya you ditched me twice " she said

" Mrs Priya Suood Kapoor" he said while

emphasising on name " I asked you to get married, I requested you but you step back , now when she is my wife why you are creating issues " he said " instead of having a contract with Priya I should have made one with you . " He picked up paper

' what you said?" She in shock look at him

" It's not yet late , let do it right now , actually I came here to make this. I have chalked down few clause " he started writing.

" Ram are you well ?" Kriti asked him her agressives tone changed .

" Sgin here " he signed and passed her

" Ram are you kidding me ?"she asked she look at the paper

" You insulted Us , you know how I felt ? I was not able to see in Priya eyes , for Us she is facing all this , and you made it so awkward" he said

"Ram Woh " Kriti

" Sign or I " he got up .

Kriti signed

" Now stick to it " he passed her ,her copy .

Kriti in shock started reading it.

At dinner table everyone was having dinner Ram had meetings he was late. Priya was sitting next to maa and talking both were smiling.

" I am sure he must be having dinner with her " she siad to herself.at same time

Ram walked in he walked towards his maa " hi Jaan missed you so much " he kissed her forehead" . Priya look at him he seems bit off too dull. . " Priya ko kyun Nahi Kiya " Maa whispered. " See she has made such yummy food for me " Maa said in excitement he suddenly turned towards her and kissed her forehead " Thanks for taking care of my Jaan " it was so sudden it shocked and surprised everyone. Priya blushed and truned red . maa giggle

" Good night maa I will see you all tomorrow I am tried need some rest " . Without waiting he walked away.

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Beautiful shot β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜‡βœ¨ LOVED IT ☺️✨

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