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Hey friends, Please come over and give this OS a read...
Just tagging a few BALH 3 readers for my writer friend Naddiya.😊
Hey friends, Please come over and give this OS a read...
Just tagging a few BALH 3 readers for my writer friend Naddiya.😊
Wow what a pleasant work dr
I love these kind of feel good, light hearted, romance
Candle light dinner was cherry on the cake
Beautiful OS
Loved it
Thanks a lot Mrina for tagging me here to read it
Originally posted by: minakrish
Hey friends, Please come over and give this OS a read...
Just tagging a few BALH 3 readers for my writer friend Naddiya.😊
Will catch up later!
Thanks you friends for reading and leaving comments. It's means alot. For you all beautiful people.
Priya walked to the window and looked outside " I don't know Mr Kapoor kaise iss ko tolerate karta Hain , yeh tou bilkul bhi unn kai Tarah Nahi Hain , she is so proud and arrogant " she had a self conversation.
It lighten again " aah " she at once closed the curtains and quickly walked to the bed . " Mr bunny bhi Nahi Hain mein ab kya Karo gai " she laid down and tightly closed her eyes " bearish Achi lagti hai per lighting Nahi " it thunder loud " "Mr Kapoor " in fear she whispered ,she slide close to him decreases the distance between them, It lighten again she quickly clench his arm which he intentionally moved towards hers " kal se 6 feet distance as per contract" she murmur and held his arm tightly . Places the pillow over her ears . She didn't notice he was looking at her as she has moved more closer . He turns towards her " I am here " he placed his other hand on her's and move the pillow . She opens her eyes and stare finds him gaze at her " I am here next to you don't be afraid sleep" he softly caress her hairs that where covering her face . " sleep Priya " he again runs his finger through her hairs she couldn't see in his intense eyes she closed her eyes. His gentle touch makes her dizzy she forgot about the thunder.,with in few minutes she was fast asleep. He look at the wall clock it strikes 12, " now how I am going to sleep " he took a deep breath and look at her angelic face . It was heavily raining out side ,she was peaceful asleep tightly holding his arm.
He was tried after a drama and hectic day, but her presence was making him crazy, he was not able to take his eyes off her " Ram sleep if Dr Priya finds out what is going on in my mind she will take out my teeth " he said to himself n smirk , " then how I m going to eat " he had a self conversation . In sleeps she turns other side left his arm , he felt something missing, her tight firmed grip , he slides next to her close enough so she could feel his presence . He closed his eyes " I am falling for you dentist" he said touches his arm to feel her touch , he too slept .
Next morning
Ram woke up with phone ring , he finds Priya head resting on his shoulder and clenching his shirt he couldn't stop mesmerizing her innocent face , sun rays were kissing her lips , his phone bell irritates him ,he picks up " Ram why you took so much time to pick up " Kriti asked from other end , he who so continuely mesmerizing Priya " call you back " and switch off the cell phone .
Priya moves he closed his eyes , and tries to stay calm ,it took couple of minutes till she was fully awake, she could feel the rythm of his heart beat she gently caress,his chest ,she blushed as finds herself sleep in his arm " Priya " she slowly let go of his shirt and sat " Kitna cute lagata hai Mr Kapoor aap " she whispered and moved his hairs from his forehead. Ram could not take hold himself more he opens his eyes " aap jaagh Raha tha " she blushed n tries to move he held her fist
" Kya Bola " he suddenly pulled her she almost lost her balance and fall , his intense gaze made her dizzy she closed her eyes " please Jana da muhje " she whispered he caresses her cheeks and moves her hairs ,she was blushing and her lips were trembling . His fingers were about to touch her lips . A loud bang brought them back in their sense,he let go her and walked towards the entrance door . before opening he turns back and look at her she was walking towards the washroom.
" Oh Priya " he smirked and opens the door
" Bhabhi your and Bhabhi 's dresses " his cousin ( I forgot her name ) he noticed she was looking towards the bed , " give it to me thanks " he took it from her hand . He was about to close the door she noticed her arm " Bhai yeh aap Ka arm per kya huwa hai " she pointed towards the marks , Ram too look at it " nothing " he almost pushed her and closed the door " Dr Priya you in sleep held me so tightly that you have left marks " he smiled placed the dresses on sofa and drop himself diagonal on bed " your clothes are on sofa " he hugged her pillow to smell her aroma . " Wake me when you are done ?" He said in sleepy voice
Priya inside washroom standing next to the long mirror and looking herself " Priya he has a girl friend," she knocked on her head and blushed at same time , " this is not possible Priya " she closed her eyes and recollected everything, " I can't fall in love with him ,it's a contract marriage, love hurts " a lump choke in her throat " I must maintain distance " she tries to calm herself but few tears roll down her eyes . One bad experience has made her over protective. " I must change his dress" she peeps out to check him he was fast a sleep , there clothes were lying on sofa . She on tip on toe walked out , as she didn't wanted any kind of encounter with him at present. As she was going back she noticed his arm all bruised , she very well knew how it has happened. Priya bits her lips , " why you didn't free your arm ?" She felt bad she ran in washrom and started crying
Flash back
Priya and Yuvraj in auto. It was raining heavily and lighting Priya held his arm " Priya please you hurt me, grow up " he had freed his arm .
Flash back ends
"Why I am crying am I happy or I am sad, I have found someone who don't frees himself even I am hurting him" she asked herself as smile appears on her lips . " How I stop myself falling for him " she calmed herself and walked out finds him sleeping in same position " haar waqt Kam Kam Saar per sawar rekhta Hain , rest tou karta Nahi , aunty kal diet Ka saath saath Mr Kapoor Kai bhi sleep Ka hours Hona chaiya , tabhi tou itna be waqt kahta hai " she tries to hunt her bag " mil bhi jao na I apply thek hojai ga " she took a small bottle of cream , " Priya Dekh la uth Gaya na tou phir " she bits her lips closed her eyes and slowly walked towards the bed , kneel next to it and gently applied oittemnet and blow it so it doesn't hurt him " I m so sorry Mr Kapoor I have hurt you " she caressed iit gently . Was it her touch or he could feel her presence he smiled in sleep " zaroor pizza dekh Raha hoga with extra cheese topping " she mummer and walked to other side of bed room. " I am not waking him up , let him sleep for few minutes more " she looked at time. And sat next to the window . Fresh breeze and sun kissed her face " even I am relax after ages " she feel like having coffee but then dropped the idea " will have with Ram " she said to herself " correction Priya Mr Kapoor".
" Shreya why they are taking so long " Kritika asked her for the 4th time
" How would I know ? " She raised her shoulder
Ram mom " I think we all must go back Ram and Priya will come by themselves" she said .
" Aunty hum kaise unko Chor Ka ja Sakta Hain" Kritika at once said
" Beta aik couple Honey moon per Akela aata Hain na Ka puri family and friends Ka saath, waise bhi meri Priya SE baat huai hai , ram is sleeping and they may take sometime " she wanted to end the conversation
" Aunty Ram itna Nahi sota Raat ko bhi jaldi aur abhi 11 Baja tak " Kritika said
Everyone looked at her
" She means to say Bhai workaholic hai Woh kahan rest karta hai " Shreya at once covered her up
Shartul you take these girls I will come with my friend . Ram mother said , he placed his hand on his heart and bow down as a obedient son smiled at Kritika
" Hum ko chalna chaiya , aur drama na Karo yahan Ram Bhai na Raat ko bhi Bola hai " Shreya pulled her arm .
" Ram ka arm per huwa kya tha" she asked her
Shreya regret why she has told her " I told you scratch tha shayad koi chot. Un na muhje Dekhna bhi Nahi Diya tha " she said and shakes her head " by the way I am going , if you want to stay and wait for them you may " Shreya had headache as all night Kritika kept on standing next to the connecting door try to listen , she didn't let her sleep for a second .
Ram woke and stretched his arms " good afternoon " Priya said .
" Afternoon " he look at the clock ' 1 o clock Dr Priya why you didn't woke me up " he said and jumped out of bed , Priya didn't answered as for last 3 hours she was continually look at him while sleeping. ' I have never slept so much in my life" he was shocked he switched on his phone
" Did you had breakfast?" He looked back and asked her ' I was waiting for you ,aur agar aab abhi bhi na utha na tou mein na bhi sojana tha " she yean
" I never sleep so long " he runs his hand in his hairs
" Kyun Ka aap Ka phone haar waqt buzz karta hai " she took it from him .
" Freshen up ho I have ordered brunch , baqi sab wapise Chala Gaya Hain " she said , he looked at her " aap ko rest chaiya , sab cheezo se break chaiya " she said , he stared at her .. " jai please I am hungry and I need coffee "she said
" Tou order kyun Nahi Kai " he asked her
" Iss liya kyun Ka aap na disturb Hona tha " she said and walked towards the door as she heard knock .Ram walked in washrom.
Dr Priya is so different she waited for me and let me sleep " while brushing he looked at his arm " when she applied that ?" It was all dry " Priya " he takes a deep breath " alone with her " he held his breath and turned on the shower.
He looked himself in mirror " I am bit better that Yuvraj , Dr Priya can fall for me " he brushed his hairs, checked himself and walked out with a smile
" Ram baby are you fine " Kritika walked towards him , he stopped her with a hand " where is Priya ?" He asked
"Mr Kapoor I am here " Priya said from the balcony . Ram make his way and walked to her
" Ram I have asked her to go with Shreya and Shartul she said she will first ask you then she will go" Kritika said
" She is right , as she is my wife " he said and held Priya arm ... " Have lunch first you haven't eaten anything since morning " he pull her with him .
To be continued
I wanted to end but story is going on and on
Suggest a proper name
Let me turn into a SS
My lost writer awake now ....
Originally posted by: minakrish
Hey friends, Please come over and give this OS a read...
Just tagging a few BALH 3 readers for my writer friend Naddiya.😊
I really don't have any idea how to tag readers new India forum is confusing
Just under the text box, there is a box for tag users. You’ll Beed TL put the username of the members. You can tag up to 10 people at once.Originally posted by: naddiya26
I really don't have any idea how to tag readers new India forum is confusing
I don't even know who are interested in reading I m not able to do with cellphone.Originally posted by: minakrish
Just under the text box, there is a box for tag users. You’ll Beed TL put the username of the members. You can tag up to 10 people at once.
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Wohooo...this was sooo good! I'm loving how you are progressing your story.❤
And really glad that you'll convert it into an SS...waiting for further chapters!
Also, just a weird name, but since I found it relevant, so I'm suggesting it...you can name it, CAN'T HELP FALLING IN LOVE WITH YOU!
Thoda lamba ho gaya na...but story ke hisaab se bola maine..anyways, whatever you name it, will be excited to read further.❤
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