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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Payal25

haiii!!
amazing update yaar!! 👏
and SO CUTE! 😳😳
loads of running too 😆
cant wait to read more!!


hehehe
thx!
i noe
loads of running!
😆
thankyou1
if you can...... come tobkacn CC

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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
new update coming in a bit!!!1

finally managed to write one!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Recap:

Page 6 {Yes or No?}

Updete:

YES!!!

Aastha: okay so yes from both sides

Shubh: but what are we supposed to do about it?

Aastha: tell mummy, papa, aur uncle, aunty

Shubh: marriage?

Aastha: well atleast let's talk to them forst…….. then we cam think about all that

Shubh shrugs

And walks out with aastha

Lvinig Room

*Kripa went outside to do some shopping, with Angad…………..

*Sharad and Divz are in their own rooms.

Aastha: mummy!!! Papa!!

Shubh: dad! Mom!

SP n Ap: kya hai?

Aastha: mamma, I think hat its time divz gets ………

AM: yea?

Aastha: uhh. Married…..

AD: okay. Teekh hai. Par kises?

Shubh: don't worry…….. humne ek larke dhoond liya hai….

SD: kuan?

SHubh: u noe him, uve seen him,……..

SM: par kaun hai?

A: yeh bhi samaj mein nahi aaya? SHARD!

AM: saach?

A: haan mamma

AD: lekin tujhe kaise paata challa?

A: meine divz ki aakhon mein kuch alag sa dekha sharad ke liye… toh meine shubh ko kahan. Aur meine jakar divz se pucha, aur shubh ne jakar shard sae

S: aur dono ki ekhi jawab tha.. HAAN

SD: this is gud

SM: but I think we shud ask both of them [in hindi]

AS: haan, we only told you guys. Everything else is upto you

*they leave.

In DIvz's room:

Divz was sitting, reading a book……..

*knock

AM: umm….. divz beta……

Closes the door behind her.

D: aa….. jee mummy?

AD: umm. Yeh tumhari .. shaadi ki baat hai……..

Divz is quiet…….

AM: hume tumhare liye ek larka bhi pasand aya hai….

Divz [quietly]: kaun?

AASTHA comes in, and shouts

SHARAD!!!

Divz looks up, and luks away shyly

Am: you happy?

AD: agar tu kush nahi hain.. then……

Divz: are you crazy?????? I thought you guys forgot about me! YES!!!!! Im happy!!!!!!!

Aastha: wow?

In SHarad's Room:

SD: sharad?

Sh: jee dad?

SM: baa tumhari shaadi ki hain…..

SH: oh no……. please, oh god…. No

Sm: humara baat toh suno………. Larki bhi hume pasand aaya hai

Sh: kuan??????????????????

Shubh: divz

Sh: oh please……not those …….. wait divz?

Shubh: duh

SD: you happy?

Sm: its okay if ur……..

Sharad: no. umm….. its okay………..

They all hug….

The parent meet in the living room

AM, AD: yes from our side…..

SD, SM: us too!

Aastha: ye lo, mu meetha karo!!!!

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Next day:

SD: hume panditiji se baat karne hogi…..

Shubh: abhi bulathi hoon…

AD, AM, SD, SM: Namaste

Panditiji: nmamste

SD: aap kya hum eek aachi si shadi ka muhrat denge Divyank aur Sharad ke liye?

Panditiji: shadi sirf aur sirf ek hafte baad ho sakhthi hain. Varna 11 saal se koi muhrat nahi hain….

AD: ek hafte?

Aastha: that's enough time…..

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I noe very crappy update…… ill try to do an update tomorrow if I can. If not…. Im sorry.

Eid is coming, and im very busy….

Please comment, and suggestions are welcome!!!

-luv esha 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
AWHHH!
Crappy?? PFFFTT! Awesome Update ESHA!!! 👏
👏Cant wait to read more! 🤗

Edited by Payal25 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
aww thx

* esha.... not neha..... lolzzzzzzzz
its okay....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: shubh_astha4eva

aww thx

* esha.... not neha..... lolzzzzzzzz
its okay....



OH SORRY!!
My friend Neha was over at my house and So I wrote Neha!!
SOORRRYYYY

I shall change that.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

great update esha👏

i just remembered that i haven't updated in a while
i should prolly go n do that
loved the update, can't wait for the next
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
@ Payal - its okay..lol
@ raji - thankyou! cant wait for ur updates!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
new update coming
realli bored
and im free for a bit [eid tmoro!woohoo!]
so ill post it in a bit...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
actually i'll do the update later
a bit busy
rite now..again..........

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