[FF: Hum Tum] Notepg8 NOT CONT.FF!!!

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okay before you guys say somethig.

i was in Language Arts Class, and i was really bored.. so i strted writing a story.. and the story turned out to be a Shubh n Aastha story.. i only wrote the first part.. soo im gonna post it if u guys like the intro....
now dopnt worry.. im gonnaa make another couple of updates for my other FF and then ill end it.. cuz i have a better stry in mind..and i dont know what else to do for the other ff.....
unless u guys want me to continue both...ur choice..i have no problem.....




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Introduction......

in a Rajasthan.. lived Shubh n Aastha..
Shubh and Aastha's dads were really close frnds.. more like really close brothers....
Shubh n Aastha have been really gud frnds since they were 2 yrs old.....
8 yrs later Shubh goes abroad to London for his studies, and Aastha stays in Rajasthan doing hers... and one more thing..there is no negatives in this story......


characters:


shubh

Aastha

Deepa
( shubh's sister)

Mahen
( he'll be introduced later...as shubh's frnd.......)

Sharad
( Shubh's brother...)

Divyanka
( Aastha's Sister)

Other characters will be introduced as the story proceeds....

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so what do u guys think??

should i continue this ff??or just stick with the one im doing right now??
or
do both ff's??

its all up to u guys..........




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index:
Intro: pg1
Part1: pg 1
Part 2: pg 2
Part 3: pg 2
part 4: pg 4

Part 5: pg 6
Part 6: Pg 7




Edited by shubh_astha4eva - 15 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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it sunds interesting...you should continue both=)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ya its good u should continue both..
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Originally posted by: zumra03

Ya its good u should continue both..



thx zumra...
i guess i should keep both......😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1:
It was a nice summer day in Rajasthan………..
10 year old Aastha and Shubh were playing outside in their garden…..
Shubh: Aastha, chaalo naa.. gilli danda khelthi hai..
Aastha: nahi, mujhe nahi khelna…
Shubh: teek hai, tumhari marzi…
Chota Shubh ( that sounds so cute….) went to go play.. while aastha stod their…..
Aastha was getting bored after awhile, and seeing shubh having fun… made her want to go play….
Shubh: tum toh kheri thi kit um khelna nahi chahthi??
Aastha: haan par….
While Chota Shubh was playing.. he tripped over a rock…and scraped his arm……
Chota Aastha: shubh!!... tum teekh toh ho naa?? Dekhao mujhe…..
CS: Aastha, mein teekh hoon….
C.A.: Chup karo, aur tumhari haath do mujhe….
Aastha ripped a piece off of her 'dupatta' and bandaged shubh's arm……
That's how they were!! Caring, and Best friends!!!
8 yrs Later:
It was a nice, breezy fall morning
Shubh and Aastha were now 18 Years old..
Shubh is leaving for London today for his studies….
Note*
Aastha secretly likes Shubh…….
Shubh is a huge flirt, but he's nice at heart
Aastha was in her room. Looking out the window……
"knock-Knock'
Aastha turned around…
Divyanka: didi, woh shubh bhaiya jaa re hai…
Aastha, divz tum jao…
Divz: par kyun??
Aastha: mein usse bath nahi karma chathi
Divz: par…
Aastha: Divz…plz….
Divz: teekh hai….
Aastha stared aout the window……… remembering all the times she spent with shubh……..
Precap: its gonna be hard to explain …… you'll see………..

hope u guys like it....2nd part..coming in a bit........ dont worry ill update the other FF too.......😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great update hun...can't wait for the next one!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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update coming in a bit......

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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice i like it plz write longer update soon =)
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Part 2:
Recap: shubh is going to got london....( about to)
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Divyanka: didi, woh shubh bhaiya jaa re hai'
Aastha, divz tum jao'
Divz: par kyun??
Aastha: mein usse bath nahi karma chathi
Divz: par'
Aastha: Divz'plz'.
Divz: teekh hai'.
Aastha stared aout the window''' remembering all the times she spent with shubh
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Divz went downstairs, madhave kaak was loading shubh's stuff to the car, with the help of Sharad........

Shubh's Dad: Divyanka beta?? woh aastha nahi aaye?
Divz: nahi uncle.
Deepa:; par kyun??
Divz: woh kere thi ki woh.. bhaiya se baath nahi karna chaathi
Shubh: main jaa kar dekhthi hoon.......

shubh went to Aaasth's room.........
S: aastha?
aastha didnt answer.......
Shubh went over to aastha, and turned her around. aastha??
Aastha: tumse baat nahi karna chaathi
Shubh: y?
AAStha: tum jaare ho.
Shubh: toh yeah baat hai.
Aastha luked down......
Shubh: suno. mein 5 saal baad wapaas aajanga
Aastha: 5 saal!!!!!! tumahara dimaag toh teekh hai?
SHubh: haan, mien toh teekh hoon
Aastha: shut up. tum seriuosly 5 saal ke liye jaa re ho....
Shubh: yop......
Aastha: ( murmurs) aab kya hoga?
Shubh: tumne kuch kahan..
Aastha: nahi.tum jao. mein athi hoon.........

Shubh: teekh hai........

shubh left...
Aastha: yeh toh 5 ssal ke liye jaa re hai.. kyun?? mera pyaar ko kyun dur jaana par ra hai??. ugh my foot..............................😆

Aastha joined in 2 minutes.. shubh said gud bye to everyone........ and stopped at aastha.....
They did there frndship thing...more like the the thing kajol and srk did in KKHH

Aastha: wait shubh......

hum saab ka ek saath photo toh le jao........

Aastha had Madhav kaka take a picture of all of them....( 3 copies, one for aastha, one for the family, and one for shubh...)

Shubh: bye evryone.......
Aastha turned around and ran to her room.......

she stood near the window, and luked at the "photo'

it was hard for everyone to manage with out shubh.............

Next 5 yrs:


Shubh oh god, kaal toh graduation hai... aur mein aab sone jaa re hoon.. so stupid...........

Next mornig:
its the graduation ceremony at the Cambridge University........

Mahen: Shubh!!!!!!!!! uttho. tum phirse kaal raat 2 baaje sone gaaya right?
Shubh: aare yaar. i was on the computer.. plus .... we hada 'rugbeat' game... so i was practicing up till like 10.... chill
Mahen: dude! its grduation ceremony! and u have like 30 minutes... come on......
Shubh: oh shit!. shubh went to the showers came out ruffling his hair. and buttoning the shirt.....
Mahen: CHAALO!!!!!!!!!!

* btw mahen is younger than shubh, he skipped a grade when he was younger,...)

shubh and mahen went down, outside,m and to the auditorium.........

SHubh: just in time..
Mahen: shut up.... and walk.......
they walked to their seats......

Joe: yo man.... u slept late again right?
Nick: thats not new... he always does that, but ends up not being late........
SHubh: i got skills man.......

they all got their diplomas......

then they got those special" only 10 honor student" awards.. shubh was ofcorse one of them... for playing rugbeat, studies.......

then everyone through their caps...........

SHubh: i gotta get home man........ i cant wait. seriuosly...........

Precap: home sweet home..........

hope u guys liked tjhis one,a and hope its long enough.lolz.........😳




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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved it pla write more sooon n try to mak eit long plz hehhehehehe lol =)

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