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Posted: 3 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: naaheean

Hey, Thanks a lot for the pm, the chapter was very nice...loved the understanding between Ariya....and other CID members' foolish reactions & their talks when they get to know that the New ACP being the 2nd in command of ETF and both Ariya worked there together. Also, the glimpse of ETF members' lives was written beautifully. I loved the way Sameer bursted on Sakshi ..... poor girl. I hope to get the next update soon.

Every word of yours means a lott to me..I ma really glad you liked it..

I thought without having ETF Ariyas story cant be complete..

I will try my best to update soon but so many entrance exams with little gap!!! No promises..

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Fantastic. Lovely update.

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Superb update!

Juniors are so funny

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Originally posted by: shah10

Superb update!

Juniors are so funny


Thanks a lot!!!

They are arent they!

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Fantastic. Lovely update.

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Awesome story

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CHAPTER 2

(Aren't you curious on what is happening in ETF... I am. So meanwhile in ETF)

IMPORTANT NOTE -I AM CHANGING THE DURATTION THAT RIYA WAS IN CID FOR 4 MONTHS. AFTER XORA SHE HAD TRETAMENT FOR 3 Months. THE GIRLS ARE IN ETF FOR 6 MONTHS THAT IS 1 MONTH AFTER RIYAS INCIDENT. I JUST FELT THAT 1 YEAR IS A LONG TIME. TILL NOW THE CID MUST HAVE BEEN CLOSE TO HER. SO IT MAKES LITTLE SENSE LIKE THIS THAT'S WHY?? YOU GUYS GET IT RIGHT?

ETF, Mumbai

Today, as everyone came to Office they see their chief at his usual place pondering over something. Everyone wished him as they came but he just nodded at them. After they all came and took their seats. Sakshi discreetly checked if Arjun was there and didn't find him. Then she faces Sameer and says," Sameer where is Arjun??"

To which Sameer stood up Saying, "Arjun nahi ayega. They transferred him." It surprised everyone. Sakshi furiously without thinking blurted out, "How can that happen and Sameer how can you let it happen? Why didn't Arjun tell me anything?" '

How can they not tell me? It's about Arjun for god’s sake. I must have known, thought Sakshi.

This, however, made Sameer angry. His friend is not hers for him to be answerable to her not when he is happy at last and he won't let anyone ruin it for him.Anyone could see the flick of anger in his eyes for a second.Only Shree and Ayesha noticed it. One understood the reason for it and hoped Sakshi would shut up at least now whereas the other was clueless and surprised to find him angry for nothing in her opinion. She felt that as Sakshi 'loved' Arjun, it was a natural reaction.

Then they hear Rathod reply "Sakshi neither me nor Arjun are answerable to you. It is my duty to inform you I did. Now none of you will speak on this." He left but not before signing Shree and Chotu to meet him afterwards. Meanwhile, Ayesha and Liza consoled Sakshi and encouraged her that Arjun will get back to her. She can still try. What they forgot was that they didn't even know where he was transferred.


CID, Mumbai:

(It is the continuation from where I left last-Arjun coming to know Riya was missing)

Arjun was worried and even a small part of him was scared for His Riya. She was the only bright thing in his dark life. He can't even afford to think of a scratch on her. He goes towards the other sa nd asks, "When did any of you see her the last??" To which Shreya replied while saying "oopar aate samay mainne use dekha. maine dekha ki woh canteen ki taraf jaa rahi thee aur kuchh puraanee files jo constable laa rahe the. Who unse takra gayi."

Listening to this Arjun took a breath of relief and asked Shreya when did she see this happen. To which she replied, "Lagbag kuch 30 minute"

Then Arjun said "Use kuch nahi hua. vah aa jaegee." Everyone was wondering on how did he know this so surely. Just as Purvi was about to ask about the same. They hear the door and see Riya enter the room with a cup in her hands and she goes straight to Arjun and gives it to him.

Their eyes lock and Arjun gives her a small to which she smiles her dimpled smile while her eyes twinkle. Something she does only for him and which takes makes his heartbeat every damn time she does that.

This interaction was seen by everyone and Pradyuman, Abhijeet and Daya who now were sure that something was going on between them. They exchange discreet glances. The juniors were too confused to utter something.Arjun took the tea.Takes a sip and devours its taste. No one can beat her at it. Sachin, seeing all this, was getting angry and frustrated. Dushyanth who noticed it talked before Sachin bursts out and says anything turns towards Riya and asks, "Tum kaha thi Riya ihtni dger. Sab dar gaye thae."

Before Riya could answer Arjun answered without looking up. All his concentration on his tea (With the swag You know what I mean). " As Shreya said she bumped into old files so miss clean freak who dust ko clean karni chali hogi aur use time ka patha nahi chela. Aur aathay wakt mera chai bhi le ayi."

Lifting his head and looking Riya into her eye which made her catch her breath for a second felt strangely intimate. Unable to form words, she nodded.

Shreya then asks,"Par sir Riya aap ke liye chai kyu layege?" To which Freddy added "Haa, Kyu??"

Pradyuman who was a silent spectator till now says, "kyonki ve donon pahale saath kaam karate the!! ab savaal yah hai ki aap log kis departmant se hain.jab riya ka yahaan tranfer hua tha. hamen usakee pichhalee posting ke baare mein nahin bataai. Ab tum dono hame batha sakte ho??aisa kyon tha?"

To which Arjun replied "ETF! Hame ETF se transfer kiya gaya."

To which without giving anyone a chance Freddy started saying "kya sach mein?? Meine tho suna hai bahut khataranaak teem."

Kevin added "Ha sir!unhonne bahut kam samay mein kaee aparaadhiyon ko pakada!They say the cheif is very strict and almost heartless."

Listening to this Riyas thinks

Sameer Sir and Heartless. Why do people even think that.

Rajat then started speaking, bringing her out of her thoughts: "I heard their second in command is ruthless and even breaks any rules and protocols if they come his way. suna hai ki higher authorities bhi darte hai usse. He is called the SUPERCOP of the department. Naam se unhe bohot kam log bulathe hai"

Riya gets shocked hearing it. Her eyes widen. Arjun who was listening to all of it silently felt how dumb are these people. They forgot an ACP from the same team they were talking about is right here and they are too oblivious to think of the fact that he might be the person.

He also noticed Riyas change in expression throughout.

Can she get anymore cute??!!! Haye mein mar jawan!!

Sachin said "Even I heard about him. kahate hain aparaadhee to naam sunakar hee baat karane lagate hain.Sochta hu ki kitana daraavana hoga ki aparaadhee usaka naam sunakar kaampane lagenge.Bhohot hi elder and experienced hinge dono head. Nahi to itne kam samay main ithna progress."

That is it Riya abruptly said "Sir!"

Whereas Pradyuman with the others who are silent as they had already put 2 and 2 together didnt know to laugh or bang their heads at their teams foolishness. They werent like this always. In the time of duty they were very clever but when it comes to some situations like this..uff.

He turned towards Arjun, "tum kis post par thay Arjun??"

This is when Freddy ,Rajat ,Kevin and Sachin came into their senses. All the others were holding their laughs.

Everyone focused on Arjun.They were confused he could either he the chief, some other officer in the ETF they had no information about or THE SUPER COP himself.The juniors desperately hoped its the 2nd. They couldnt handle another strict and terrifying boss. A.C.P Sir, that was enough.

Arjun walked 2 steps towards the center and said " Main Second-in-command tha sir. A.C.P Arjun Suryakanth Rawte."

Eveveryone of the juniors were speachless and Sachin paled thinking about what he said and the glares he has been sending Arjun all this while.

Pradyuman just nodded and went to his cabin after saying everyone to get to work followed by Arjun who left to his cabin (Perks of being the ACP You know)..Daya and Abhijeeth also went to their desks.

Riya was amussed seeing their reactions and was laughing in her head. Chuckling she say, "Woh unte bhi old nahi hai."

She then leaves towards her desk and getting to work. The rest were looking at eachothers faces and after a while Freddy said, "Ab se dho- dho hitler!!" and went away cursing his fate.

Taking it as the cue the others also dispersed towards their desks and concentrated on the case.


ARJUNS CABIN,CID-MUMBAI:

Arjun was in his cabin going through the case details once again.(If you guys dont remember A body was found in a deserted street)

Victim Name: Dharshan Verma

Age: 26 years

Occupation: Working in a software company. Banglore

Family: A middle class family.

Father: Venkat Verma

Mother: Sunita Verma

Siblings: Dhruv (24 years, Accident before 2 weeks hit and run case, The driver of the truck got imprisonment for 6 months-He isnt dead just injured)

Kamal(29 years-doesnt live with the family. Status - Unknown)

Criminal Records: NONE


Arjun was disturbed by a knock on the door. He permits the person to come it. Rajat who comes in says "Umm..ACP sir is calling for the case discussion."


He nods and both of them go towards the common space where the screen and boards are set up to discuss the case (For every case for that matter)


Pradyuman who nods at them as they come says "Kya lagta hai case kay bhare mai?"

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Okay guys, I know that I didn't give an update in a long time!!

I am not really in a good space, mind or environment right now.I know I promised a long chapter and this one isn't soo long..I am really sorry for that..I will try to update the next chapter soon but no promises..

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PLEASE DO TELL ME HOW IS THE UPDATE AND WHERE CAN I IMPROVE











Bechare bacche dar gaye

Sachin jealous with capital J

Arjun's mind voice about riya was just awesome sooo cute 😘😘

Thanks for PM waiting for next part

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