Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4

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Avantika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: kunchu
Hayeee. dedication!!!
Wo bhi kithni achi...
Thank you...😳

Aisha returns. Aur ni tho kya!! you have no idea how much I miss that lady
Mrs. Rathod banne ka asar tho hai
I always liked the dynamics you showed between Arjun and Aisha in all your story.
Nothing OTT
but a simple friendship
I am glad that the old ETF inside her is still alive. Loved that part
She looked at the white blanket of snow sprawled across the valley...
I wish I could see it too.
Long white fields. How much ever you say its no so happy to be cold, but still I wanna be there

Trivedi gets another round!! Aur do... it makes me happy too.
The new developments are tricking a lot. waiting for your brand new lollipops

And those bangles. I could see it sparkling. Those lil FBs and emotions... I wont elaborate, Ritu had already mentioned my fav lines before.
Ithna kaam aur lab ke beech me u wrote it!!
Hats off to you janeman

"HER Arjun..." that sounds so good. add 2+2 please...
Temple, bday and pain... hayeee... rula diya mujhe
but then cold cold and sooo cold
snowfall, snowman...
Hayee dreaming to see snowfields...
And yes GB, if you get any way to snow Mumbai, tell me the secret too
mujhe bhi snow chahiye...
The silent support.. you know how much I love khamosh wala love...😳

I have already counted the lollipops my dear... aur himmath ni hai
I know what comes next for me.
What can be better than an icing that too after a snow..
yuhooo

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
Lollipop
Mast snowman k ander wrap karke lollipop daale hai😆😆Ok thik hai kuch nahi bolti
First& foremost important question :Wat was written in the letter that Aisha sent through Bahadur for Saakshi before leaving that even after returning She first went to Saakshi's place to visit her. Also, now that it's clear that Bahadur was a mole ,how did he managed to get an entry at Rathod's place as a driver knowing the fact that the two husband &wife are cops &very vigilant.

She wouldn't admit it even to her husband, but despite knowing Arjun personally now, she still felt her heart thud nervously each time he delivered his trademark samjhe ya samjhaun'with a menacing glare.
***Calling Rathod***

Tripathi *Le pad gayi kalege wich thand*. 3-4aur de dena next time

Dig vikram Kumar
Akash Singh Sodha +He was in the Indian Army

Awwwii Ayesha-Saakshi moments were adorable. Ayesha is more like a mother hen trying to bring happiness in Saakshi's life.**Happy Wale Tears**

Lollipop**Calling sweetly**Somewhere at the back of their hear they did get the thought that the two are no strangers right? I mean she is sakshi.stargazer for him &he is arjun_ footballlfanatic for her especially with the two calling each other by their first name

"Arre Deva!", Did that expression reminded him about his nemesis sakshi.stargazer .

I m sure this cannot get unnoticed by atleast THE ACP Arjun Rawte

What were you expecting?

Was this that he had been missing all along?

After this, I can very well come to conclusion that Arjun k dil ki baj gayi hai

They both carried painful secrets in their heart and were pretending to be someone they weren't, willingly.

Ok here's another lollipop. Saakshi's painful secret is very well understood but what's with Arjun's painful one other than the death of his mentor. What's the conspiracy behind his parents, especially his mother?

Also ,his secret mission that landed him in Dhanaulti that even Rathod isn't aware of?

P.S.:KOi Mumbai mein snow lekar aao

Will be back, chudailon..

Oopsie,.. Sweet-hearts..

Fursat se thank-you jo bolna hai..

I louuve you too.. 🤗

Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 11 years ago

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Avantika

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Posted: 11 years ago

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angelicdeepti

@angelicdeepti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#533

me first...

wow...nice long update and there is more...great...

Edited by angelicdeepti - 11 years ago

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Sakshithegreat

@Sakshithegreat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#534

Okay so I read all parts in one go and I was really happy when I saw that u
Updates 2 hours ago. Anyway I love your story so please continue and update
Soon and if u can please pm me

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Avantika

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neeraja

@life93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#536

i was like

then

res😛

remember the snowman as arjun :P :P🤪

this one for arakshi lovers😉

Edited by life93 - 11 years ago

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#537

ress😎

Unres!😳

Sorrryyy this took a while to unreserve!! I had been saving the second part which I just read teehee😳

Sooo ahem... here we go!

Lalalaa I have Subhanallah playing in my mind right now. The second part was deffo my favourite...although... hold on I am skipping ahead! Let's start from the beginning!

Subhanallaahhh jo ho raha haiii pehli dafa hai wallahhh

Aisa huaaa

Haaayeee

Ok, back to the comment!

The beginninggg...

"Swiping a palm across his sweat-covered forehead, he had grasped for the first thing he could; and when he touched warm skin, he had felt an odd sense of security wash over him."

Haayyeee... I was blushing as I imagined the scene, his fingers wrapped around hers.. *thud*

I love how you write even the tiniest details..which makes it even more real! Like this line here:

"Sakshi wiped the mist that had gathered on the inside of the glass surface and looked outside."

Mmm I love how they go to see the snowman first thing in the morning... *Banjaara moment* Haayyeee. I have gone back to the snowstorm and the moonlight..

Anywaay back to this!

Loved the Aisha and Arjun convo!! I do miss Aisha so much.. she was my second most favourite character after Arakshi😳 ..Okay let's not go there!

The greenhouse scene!! I was jumping around like a mad person when I started reading it teeeheee... the nature girl in me woke up once moree and I was literally standing there amongst the pretty flowers, breathing in their sweet fragrance, feeling the moist air of the greenhouse..and of course Arakshi

Hayyeee... and then the song Chahoon bhi toh main... I love it so so much! Especially the bit with Kartik's voice.. it does something to me 😳

These lines were sooo beautiful:

"Warm sunlight filtered through the glass ceiling and walls of the greenhouse, plants rustled in their new pots on a long table against the left wall. Soil and specks of dirt covered the floor, and the lush foliage of double-rose begonias and angelwing jasmines rustled in the hanging baskets hissed and whispered."

I wanna be thereee ..it sounds so pretty

Aha! Aisha noticed the two 😆😆 Loved that bit😃

"Ayesha hummed to herself and took the shears from between Sakshi's fingers before she ended up chopping off her plant."

This part was

Hayeee their walk in the moonlight and then the almost-accident..I had major goosebumps and a hugeee smile on my face! Phew my mum wasn't around teeheee

"Between the bellowing harsh winds and the darkness, the only thing he could make out was her."

Goosebumps alerrtt!!!

Haayee they are in love alreadyy

Funfairrr!!! Ahhh you wrote the description so beautiful.. It was all so real, so alive! Even though I am sitting here in silence, I could hear the music, even the loud Bollywood ones LOL (guess what song was playing😉😆) smell the foood...hayee the street food! (Damn Delhi ki yaad aa gayi)

And mehndiii... mujhe bhi lagwana hai! Just remembered the Mihir Tulsi mehndi sceneee.. you know why😆

This part cracked me up so badd:

"Meow.."

"Meow? What kind of an answer is that?", she rolled her tongue in her cheek, teasing him.

🤣🤣🤣🤣

Kuch kuch ho gayaaa... the time they were walking and he was carrying the canvas boards.. hayeee.. such a simple thing and yet it brought a huge smile on my face😳

LOL LOL LOL Sakshi is jealous.. hahahahaha I cracked up at that🤣

Ab hotwa ke aage peeche kaunsi ladki nahi ghoomegi☺️

Colour palettes to work🤣

And then the pottery scene.. hayeee

Ab aur kya boluunnn.. That reminded me of Saraswatichandra btw.. there was a scene in the beginning when I used to watch the show he he

This was beautiful and skin tingling:

"There was something unique about the moment; the sight of the molded pot and her hands on top of his, hinted at something he had been struggling to accept for a while now. Was he really falling in love?"

Ah ah ah ah ah ahhh I guessed I guesss

Chubh toh nahi rahaaa

SRK- Kajol

Aapki halwai ki dukaan toh hum hadapke hi rahengeee

AAAhhh.

Back to Arakshi😳

That was just too tooo tooo beautifully written!! Damnn I was the mirror for a minute theree..he he he he. They are so pretty I could cryyy *snifff* *puts kaala teeka*

Ok my most favourite line out of the entire update:

"The fresh earthy colour defined her, for him. She was just like a breath of restful air in his lonely life, and although he hadn't quite accepted it to himself yet, somewhere at the back of his mind, a tiny wish had begun to sprout. "

How how how how how do you do it? How do you write such beautiful lines? Those goosebumpy ones. ahhh Secret batao naa! Wait mat batao! Magicians never reveal their secrets😉

And awwieee he bought bangles for her😳

Subhanallaaahhh ...haaye the song was too perfect!

When he was looking at her whilst she was dancing..soo beautiful

Darnn this is becoming too big (as usual!) and loaded with Emos (as usual)😆

Anywaaay..and wait whaaat just happened towards the end?

What did ..how did... whaaat?!

So so he had cut off all contacts with her after DIG Anand's death?!!! But but why would he do that? Of course there must have been a reason...but ... why did you stoppp

Acha ab jaldi jaldi next wala likho!!

Thank you sooo much for this mushy mushy goosebumpy update.. I absolutely loved it!! Abhi thoda hangover time hai.. the bangles sceeneee.. damn!

Subhanallaahhh

This is gonna be me tonight ->

I love youuu for this update and yeh lo:

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 11 years ago

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#538

Awesome updates
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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Shivani P

@Lovelost_shivi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#539

wow...two updates back to back...kya baat hai...aj hum par itni meherbaani... hehe...btw thanks yaara...for updates...it was awesome...i love it...waise tumne sach kaha...agar tumne jaldi update nhi kiya...toh koi or na sahi...i will serve u with rotten tomato...vegetable piles...garbage wastes...drainage water...n more...u never know...so jaldi jaldi update karna...or else I will be at ur door step...to welcome u...*evil.smile*

Edited by Shivi1997 - 11 years ago