|| Ariya FF- The Burning Ice || ON HOLD imp note pg 24 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
superb update vampu...!!!
but ye kya sam and sakshi wo bhi together...!!! wow now that's a hatke wala new angle😉
ariya scenes were awsum...!!!! awww both stuck in snow...!!!! but love the way both are supporting each other😉
omg ye rihanna kon hai??? 😲
continue soon...!!!
yayyy me in pm list🥳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Finally you updated. I was waiting for it.
Sam and Sakshi couple 😲 .Interesting.
Now who is this Rihana. Kabab me haddi 😡 .
Arjun was lost in Riya's eyes they fall sleep in each others arm 😳 😛 .
Thnks for the pm and pls update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
vry interesting update.

ariya hate eachother. thats good caz hatred is the first step towards love.

Ariya nok-jhok was sweet n funny.

At somepoint thy both lost in eachother but spell had broken caz riya remind him of rihanna.

Awww thy both cuddled in to eachother arms n fall asleep.

Sam-saakshi is couple 😲 😕. Bechari ayesha uska ab kya hoga 😭.

Samakshi moments n convo was sweet n cute.

Thy both r really worried for Arjun.

🤗 🤗 thanks for pm.

continue soon.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
vampire didu awesome loved it specially sameer sakshi pairing so cute pls continue soon n thanx a ton 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb update... Arjun COOL dude... this is LOVE!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
nice start..continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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rihana beech mein kyu aa gyi yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
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banner added.
Banner credit- Moumimon

how is this???
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
iska update milegaaa pleeej pleeej pleeej
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Posted: 12 years ago
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P A R T T W O



ALASKAN HIKING POINT::
Reception-


Chotu cuts the call and turned his toe towards the counter and found a young girl clad in a long knee length overcoat ; was peeping inside the counter and was speaking something! At the same time another curly haired man wearing spectacles was trying to pacify her! As if assuring her or say consoling her and time to time getting glares from her!


The recpnst girl- Ma'm we can understand your problem but, one more person too was stuck with her there!

She- now who is he??
She literally shouted on the girl and the curly haired man pulled her aside and tried to talk to her!

The curly hair man- Liza , stop behaving like this! Kya kar rahi ho tum? Isn't this you, jiske wajah se ye sab hua hai! He asked her sarcasticlly and stopped after getting a hot glare from her!

Liza- Yea , I know it is all because of me, but it is defenately not me the reason of the snow thunder !!
She answered with the equal tone as he asked her!
" And you specky, she is my best friend DAMN IT!! " - she added later!

The guy moved away irritated with her and she realized that she was behaving too much!

Liza moved along his side and said, " okay shree, I won't behave like this! Now can we please look into this matter ! "

She could see the evil smile that is plastered now on his face! And she thought" he must be happy , that I am pleading him here! Agar ye Riya se related nahi hota toh..iski toh mai! .. " her inner side cursed him and he continued smirking!

This time shree took charge and asked the girl, " for how long we have to wait, do something quick! " , only got the reply , " we are trying.." and this time it angered him much!


Inside the car-


It is been ten hours , they are here . She opened her eyes after the nap and found cuddled with him! At the first sight she hated it and a little annoyance covered her face but at the next instant she tightened her hold around him and moved closer to his heart, as iif trying to hear his heart beat!

She sits still and immersed herself in the thought , that what will she do now! She took his wrist and observed his pulse rate and she found it is decreasing! She looked here and there and found that the more than half of the jacket is covering her and he is facing all the coldness ! She slightly caressed his cheek and tried to wake him up!

As she is a forensic microbiologiest, she have a thorough knowledge of the fundamentals of medical science! And she better know how to treat in such situation!

Sleep is the most dangerous thing for the patient suffering from hypothremia! She cursed herself for this! All he was doing is to make her safe from the storm and she thought she misunderstood him!

Now she patted his cheek and tried to wake him up! She rubbed his palms ! Then she completely covered him with the jacket!

He was feeling sleepy , and she was trying hold him back and made him not to sleep!

She was here in Alaska, for a very long time so her body was adopted with the environment but this place is still new for him and his body needs time for adopting with this environment!

She thought, she would keep him busy with her talks so that he would keep himself.

She started speaking, " hey , Umm Arjun right!! Listen, please do not close your eyes! She kept blabbering many things but those words are going to the deaf ears and he only could see the blurred vision of her face!

She looked here and there , if there would be something that could help them!

After very quick scan of the car she sighed as if got something pleasant! She helds his back supportively and rested his back on the other side of the seat in between the door and the back rest!

She made a quick move and ripped the sponge seat cover . Since the car was very old, she knew this couldn't help much, as this the strings of the cover is splitting with each pull! Somehoe she managed to pull the half of the cover and she immediately covered him with that! And again started rubbing his palm!

She herself was no in better condition! Her only woolen jacket is not enough for her. But now her priority is him !


He felt a little warmth for the covers and he widened his eyes! He looked at her and got a shock!

He found her bare hands on his neck ! And her head rested on his chest! He jerked off, and pulled her up, " what, you can't do this, I mean don't we have any other choice? " you won't have any problem?"

At first she didn't get what he was saying and she replied, " shut up , i know what I am doing so you shut your mouth up! "
little did she know that now her hand unknowingly tucked with the first button of his shirt!


Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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