OS: New Beginning!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys!

I am trying something different to what I have written till now. I don't know if everyone will agree with me on this but I always felt that after the final encounter between Arjun and Sikander, Arjun will become very emotional and weak. This OS is an attempt at that scenario...

Let me know what you guys think!



New Beginning!

The gun shot echoed like cannon blasts. I pressed down on the trigger again, and again, and again. Each bullet shot out of the gun with years of vengeance.

He stayed fixed to ground for a second before staggering back several feet, his eyes rolled up, and his body became limp. He fell to the ground life less.

Sikander was dead.

I walked up to him with deliberate slowness, taking my time. After four years of endless chasing and waiting. After four years of nothing, but heart wrenching ache and peace less nights. Somehow I thought this moment will make me feel much, much better than it does now.

But, the truth was his death has changed nothing! Roshni was still dead. Her loss still hurts as much as it used to.

I wanted to cry. Something I haven't done in a long time, but nothing is quite sunk in yet. A kind of void filled me; everything was a blur except for the body that lay in front of me. I stared at the life less form of Sikander, who became the whole purpose of my life after Roshni.

With him gone so did my will to live.

Just then a warm and familiar hand touched my shoulder. The warmth from the hand gave me an unknown hope; the gentle tug brought me back to life.

I gave in to the tugging and followed as the hand commanded me. It pulled me up on my legs and led me out of that place. I could have walked out of there with my eyes shut, because it made no difference that my eyes were open. There was a lot of sound - siren of the ambulance, siren of the police cars, people talking, people murmuring. Nothing made any sense. The only thing that held me together was the warmth and gentle caressing from the hand in mine.

The next thing I know, I stood in the doorway of an unfamiliar house. Again the hand tugged mine, I followed.

I was tucked into the bed like a child. Everything came rushing back to me; Roshni's death, the want to cry but feeling way too numb to even think about crying, the pain as if someone ripped my heart out of me.

I tried so hard to gather myself but it was pointless. It felt like there was a large hole where my heart was supposed to be, nothing will be the same ever again. The tears that stayed put for the last four years rolled down my face on their own accord. I could not keep it in anymore, could not put up the pretence. As grief burst from within, sobs racked my body.

The warm hands pulled me into a hug; I clung to the figure like a lifeline. The warm and tender hug seemed to subdue my pain. Maybe if I stayed like this for a while longer the pain will leave entirely. Though I doubt that could ever happen I could dream for a miracle.

After sometime when I started to feel dehydrated and did not have an ounce of energy left in me, my eyes started to shut and sleep took over after four years of abandonment. In the final seconds of my consciousness, only one thought came to my mind.

It was all finally over.

A bright new day starts tomorrow!




P.S. I am going to leave it up to you guys to decide who the person is comforting Arjun - Riya, Ayesha or someone completely different!!



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funkylicious thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fabulously penned down..
loved it
Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago
vidya.anand thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome...
and bingo...thats also what i feel...I feel Arjun would become emotionally weak after revenging Sikandar...
He would feel an emptiness, a vacuum, a dark hole in his life..as if the sole purpose of his life is over...
and someone would have to console him, comfort him and make him feel the need for a new tomorrow...a brighter tomorrow...

You portrayed it soo well...Amazing OS!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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brilliant begining dear...👏👏👏 so sik has been killed but wanted to know the person who was comforting him 😕...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i think it shud be riya ...coz ayesha i cnt really picture her you know being soft nd comforting for me she is strong minded and less emotional so its realy hard for me to o picture her in that senario... the os is amazing nd its really upto you as to who you want to potray to bring back arjun to life again...i am sorry if i ofended neone
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey nice start dear...my vote goes to riya

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Wow dear this is amazing...arjun feeling shown so beautifully. Love it


Please please...


Add riya here na...only she can handle him...I want to imgaine her only...she is perfect for this
Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing OS... Arjun's emotions feelings r beautifully potrayed... could feel everythng as real... it felt real... may be this is wat we will see n show also aftr Arjun Sikki confrontation...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear
i hv no wrds to explain dis wrk..
speechless
hats off to u
lovely
claps!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It amazing dear.
I want it to be Riya.Because I can't imagine aisha being emotional. No offence Its just my thought.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely and a very painful OS😭
and Arjun will maybe really undergo what you have written😭

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