PYAAR KO HO JAANE DO~~A VIDITI FF~~ CHAPTER 3b-UPDATED pg 5

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Prologue:

GIRL:Hm dono best flends (friends) h na viklant ?? Tum muje kbhi nhi chologe hna??

BOY:Haan adu hm dono best friends h ...mai tumhe kbhi nhi chodunga.......................................................

The kidz and their cute talks .....were unaware of the cruel plans of destiny ........what was almighty planning to do?? 😕

The story is about two best friends who were separated in childhood due to circumstances ......but destiny has its own plans.........😉😳

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Stay tuned for chapter 1 ...😊

Ignore the typos...and spellings...

Stay happy stay blessed ....luv viditian❤️



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Posted: 5 years ago
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After so many days,..getting to read a viditi story😃....eagerly waiting for chapter 1...👍🏼😃

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Originally posted by: ritwika13

After so many days,..getting to read a viditi story😃....eagerly waiting for chapter 1...👍🏼😃

sure will continue soonish😃😆
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Heyy! I'm so happy that finally something on viditi ❤️. Thanks for starting it. And ya as u r new so welcome to our Anjaan family.

Update 1st chapter soon I'm hell excited to fall in love with viditi again.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Heena_my_inspir

Heyy! I'm so happy that finally something on viditi ❤️. Thanks for starting it. And ya as u r new so welcome to our Anjaan family.

Update 1st chapter soon I'm hell excited to fall in love with viditi again.

sure will post it tonight 😃.......a veryy biggggggggg THANKU AND A HUG AND DHER SAARA PYAAR....🤗......LUV ....VIDITIAN❤️❤️
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viditian1

sure will post it tonight 😃.......a veryy biggggggggg THANKU AND A HUG AND DHER SAARA PYAAR....🤗......LUV ....VIDITIAN❤️❤️

jaldi post karo I am eagerly waiting for it 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
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CHAPTER 1..

GIRL: Ye lo vikku maine tumhale gudde ko leady (ready) kr dia

BOY:thanku ..maine bi tumhari doll ko ready kr dia ..

GIRL:ab hum inki shaadi krwaenge...haine vikku

BOY :haan aur fir bde hokar apni bhi kr lenge ...

GIRL: tum muje kbi nhi chodoge hna vikku....

BOY: haan ...mai tumhe kbi nhi chodunga ............,........................................................peep *peep* peep * vikrant opened his eyes with a jerk and found himself sleeping in his car ...putting his head on steering wheel ......but what was that.....no no not the sleep....the vision he just got ...was that a dream ...was that real ....peep *peep* honk !!honk!! He again came back on earth and first started his car and made his way to his most fav place shaitaan chowki 😃...but ...all the way he kept on reminding the vision ...dream ....hallucination...god knows what ....but all of the above his attraction was stolen by the girl .....who was she .....well in the vison girl had no face....what a comedy ...no what a tragedy ......he should think about the case this hour of time but his thoughts were occupied by the girl ........no ! He cant dream of a girl ......this was not his personality .......this was not the great VIKRANT SINGHAL whom everyone knew .......and with these thoughts he stopped his car in front of his fav place ...and made his straight way towards the entrance and saw a women standing .........indulged in reading files she didnt noticed vikrant entering ....woah ! He exclaimed she was really busy ...he tip toed and shouted gooooodddd morninnnnggggg MS. ASP the lady turned slowly .....smiled ....kept the file on the table .....and this was the time when she found him running with her chasing him like tom and jerry and after a small show of running and chasing he found himself on the ground ....with numerous of things in him ....he could see her throwing all tge nearby things throwing on him ........but after a while she stopped and offered him hand to make him stand but he was he .....he shook her hand and stood up on his own showing his style and swag...yeah this was he ...MR.RUDE ...MR .AKDU the real vikrant singhal ...........the lady as usual smiled in sarcasm .......and went to work .......he also without wasting another moment in this thats occupied his seat to read the case files........well it was 10th time in 15 mins since he started reading files .... When the lady looked at him with a curious face ...well this was enough.....he asked what was it .....only to get a reply that wasnt he forgetting something ??? He thought for a while and replied oh yes!! And saw a bright smile on her face ....and said thnku for reminding that he forget to give pedigree to jimmy this mrng ......and this was the time he felt himself committing the most dangerous crime...if not expressions of her were enough to make him feel that he should run now as any moment time bomb would explode in form of her ...which proved true as he felt a heavy file straight on his face.......goddd!!! What he did now???? And with that the lady bursted that how he could forgot about the first anniversary ...as they completed one year in relationship .........how he could forget this ....was the only thing he kept on thinking while making himself stand ......well this was not the concern for now but rather stopping her ...who was now leaving.....he ran behind her calling out her name .....but after all she was his girlfriend....who could never listen anyone ...but however he stopped her ....apologised....listened her bursting out ...but in the end to stop her he exclaimed ...chipkalii !!....and the lady who could kill anyone by just a glare.was now running ......he got amused but controlled.....did a little hush hush !! To make lizard go away....and turned to her ...and again apologised and finally hugged her....to mend his mistake he offered her a dinner date ...to which she readily agreed......but there trance was broken by the calm of SURESH SIR who had called up just to get informed about yhe new case on whivh tgey were working now.......he hung up the call and went inside ....only to find her busy with the case files again......they finished the work in the evening......everything was set .....they were about to leave for their date when his phone rang!!! .............







Hush !!! Likh dia bhai likh hi dia .................plz comment ...like ....and btana jarur kaisa tha😉......next chapter mei ota lgega ki kon h woh ldki😛so till then stay happy stay blessed ..keep guessing ....bbye ...luvv............viditian❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Amazing story continue it soon

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter

Near about after 6 to 7 months reading a new viditian story ....

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snu123

Amazing story continue it soon

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter

Near about after 6 to 7 months reading a new viditian story ....

thanku sooooo mjchhhhh......well stay tuned for furtger chaoters😃...well who was tha girl ...any guesss...😕
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viditian1

thanku sooooo mjchhhhh......well stay tuned for furtger chaoters😃...well who was tha girl ...any guesss...😕

Confused between Adu nd Shivani

Probably it's Shivani as Aditi's personality doesn't match with the girl..

Let's see chances are 50 50

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