viditi SS; the final hunt CH 9 last part UPDATED - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: shreyatode1

Looked so much real like all is happening in front I wish show me aisa kuch dikhate awsm one 👏👏

Continue soon

thanks 😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: mitras

Really nice one our very own Tarzan vikrant Waiting for the next update

yes tarzaan vik😆 thanks for comment😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
yaar kya main itna buri likhte hoon 😕 itne kaam comments😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Riya95

yaar kya main itna buri likhte hoon 😕 itne kaam comments😭

No tum bohot accha likti hoo yarr just keep writing and😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Extremely sorry for late review Riya...
Read both the chapters..It's so good yaar...Aditi is finally with Vikrant...season 2 main kuch aisa ho jaye bas...Aur kuch nehi chahiye...
And btw tum bohot zada acha likhti ho..But you know show end hone k bad se forum ki activity kam ho gayi hai...But please keep writing..Forum ki activity is very important...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina744

Extremely sorry for late review Riya...

Read both the chapters..It's so good yaar...Aditi is finally with Vikrant...season 2 main kuch aisa ho jaye bas...Aur kuch nehi chahiye...
And btw tum bohot zada acha likhti ho..But you know show end hone k bad se forum ki activity kam ho gayi hai...But please keep writing..Forum ki activity is very important...

it's okay aur thnx yaar for support 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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The morning light peeping from the branches of tree falls on her face. She woke up and found that he is not there. she went down to see him Though it was morning, it was cloudy day. she ran her eyes here and there and was standing when she turned around and found vikrant water dripping from his hairs and body and ofcourse he is shirtless☺️ he was shocked to see her and vice versa aditi turned her face immediately and said
tum... aise iss halat mein.. kya kar rahen ho😳 said while still not facing him
arrey nahane gayan tha mein.. lekin tum kyun uth gayin itni jaldi...while trying to cover him
jaldi shirt pehno mein 10 tak count karoongi phir mur jaungi😆 and she started counting 1 2...
vikrant trying to wear the shirt fast hooked all his button wrong and said ... ho gayan
she turned and found vik in a funny state she laughed and went near him and placed his button right
tum se ek kaam thik se nahin hota (while vik looked at her)
after that they went to search for weapon parts They were confused where to go and suddenly her locket glowed showing them right place they came near a cave like place and as it was dark they glowed there flash light they started crossing it when all of a sudden aditi could hear whispers and cry It was so loud that she felt her ears would burst she sat on the floor holding her head
plz... baas .. karo ..aah she said still trying to close her ears
kya hua aditi? vik said while found aditi in such state. she was moving on the floor like a fish without water (like that banjara case)
vikrant cannot hear this sound and somehow managed to carry her outside the cave and took deep breath. he found a book there in the cave but empty still he carried it.
aditi tum thik ho? he asked
haan... she said now feeling better vikrant mujhe wahan par chikhe sunayi de rahin thi dard bhari...
after moving for a while they found it was dark now and so vik carried a stick with fire to protect from animals still they have their phone with flash light.
When all of a sudden they came to a forest which is more dense and with more darkness they faced before The trees there are very much taller than those normal size.
all of asudden the book they were carrying fell from there hand and it read
JO DIKHTA HAIN WO HOTA NAHIN AUR JO HOTA HAIN WO DIKHTA NAHIN - maut ka jungle aditi read it while picking the book from floor
they moved forward and she felt that someone is following them. but there were no one to be seen. after a while she found that she is walking alone and vik is nowhere to be seen suddenly he saw vik standing near a tree facing his back toward her but when she went there he was gone.
same case here with vik
he found several sound screaming and laughing but cannot see aditi
the locket glowed and now aditi can see vik talking to someone who is not visible She went toward her and said Vikrant while jerking him and he came out of that state of hallucination and now they came came to a place where they could see the first sign THE POWER😊
SO GUYS HERE IS THE PART HOPE U LIKE IT SORRY FOR TYPING MISTAKE😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
Ohh aise lag raha hai hatim wali duniya mein aa gaye very interesting update waiting for next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Fab Riya
Read all the chapters together 👏
And you write really awesome
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: mitras

Ohh aise lag raha hai hatim wali duniya mein aa gaye very interesting update waiting for next part

hatim ka toh pata nahin lekin haan harry potter and the deathly hallows se zaroor inspired hain😆
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