YOU ARE MINE....VIDITI FF (UPDATED CHAPTER 16 In another thread) - Page 7

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Love you guys!!!!You and your comments leave me smiling all day long!!!🤗Here you go
CHAPTER4 PART2
(VIKRANT AND ADITI REACH ANOTHER CHOWKI)
"Vikrant tum chalo main aati hoon."With this Aditi picked up her dads call and Vikrant went inside the chowki.
(INSIDE THE CHOWKI)
"Kitne din aur haan...kitne din aur aap yeh kahenge ki aap koshish kar rahe hai!!!Char din hogaye hain meri Arohi ko ghum hue hoye aur aap abhi yehi keh rahe hain ki aap koshish kar rahe hain!!!"screamed the man in the chowki.
"Dekhiye sir hum koshish kar rahe hain."
"Jadhav!"
"Vikrant sir aap...Jai hind."
"Jai Hind...kon hai re yeh??"
"Virat Sharma"replied the man looking into Vikrants eyes without an inch of fear.Vikrant was impressed...It wasnt often to find a guy who had the courage to speak to him eye to eye.
Looking at him Vikrant could see that he was of the same age as him...or younger by 1 or 2 years.He had the same physc as him and was quiet handsome.
"ACP Vikrant Singhal...aap ka case solve karne aaya hoon."
"Ohh!really?!?By the way mujhe aap logon se koi ummed nahi...main apni Arohi ko khud dhund lunga.."
(ADITI ENTERS)
"Dekhiye main samajh sakta hoon ki aap ke upar ky..."Befor Vikrant could complete his sentence the man started screaming again.
"Aap nahi samajh sakte...Nahi samajh sakte ki kaisa lagta hai jab aap jisse pyar kar rahe ho woh apki ankhon ke samne se gayab ho jaye aur aap usee chah ke bhi nahi bacha pate!"The man had tears in his eyes...it was obivious he loved Arohi.
"Bas Virat...aur baat rahi samajh ne ki toh mujhse behtar yeh koi nahi samajh sakta ki kaisa lagta hai jab ek ladki apke ankhon ke samne se gayab ho jati hai aur aap kuch nahi kar pate...Maine bhi Aditi ko aise hi khoya tha...aur mujh se behtar yeh dard koi nahi samjh sakta."
This left both Aditi and Virat surprised.Aditi was surprised that her kidnapping had such a deep effect on Vikrant and Virat was surprised that there was someone else who had lost his love the same way he did.
"Aap plz meri Arohi ko dhundh lijiye..."Virat was finally done...He didnt have the energy to scream any more.He just wanted Arohi.
"Hum Arohi ko dhundh lenge...Vishwas rakhen"Aditi finally made her presence felt to everyone.
Vikrant turned to see Aditi near the door...He just wished Aditi hadnt heard the convo.
"Aap???"
"ASP Aditi Sharma."
"Toh aap hain Aditi.."Virat finally could see sunshine of hope.If Aditi had come back then Arohi would also return.
"Virat humme poori baat shuru se batao."Vikrant diverted the topic.
"Arohi meri girlfriend hai...mein pichle ek saal se uske saath relationship mein hoon.Paanch din pehele Arohi ki tabyat Achanak kharab ho gayi isiliye hum next din hospital gaye.Hospital mein test karvaya aur phir main reports lene ke liye hospital room se bahar aaya...achanak lights on off hone lagi...dhuan dhuan hone laga aur Arohi ke chilane ki awaaz ane lagi.Main room ka darwaza kholne ki koshish kiya par woh khul hi nahi raha tha...kuch der baad sab thik ho gaya...darwaza bhi apne aap khul gaya...par Arohi wahan nahi thi...Woh chali gayi."
It was hard for all three of them present in the room...Virats heart was clenching with fear of losing his loved one...Aditi was feeling as if she was again in the situation and Vikrant reminisced his fear of losing Aditi... after Aditi had gone missing.
"Virat hum Arohi ko dhundh lenge...tum jao."Vikrant knew he had to go to the hospital for further investigation.
"Plz usse dhundh lo...main un dono ke bina zinda nahi reh sakta."
"Dono???"asked Aditi and Vikrant in unison.
"Sir woh actually...Reports mein yeh kaha tha ki Arohi pregnant hai.Main papa banane wala hoon...kitni aajeeb baat hain na ek second mujhe iss duniya ki saari khushiyan mili thi aur dusri second meine sab kho diya."Virat couldnt hold the tears back...it was killing him in inside that he wasnt able to protect his love and child.
"Dekhiye Virat aap ko rest ki zaroorat hai...hum Arohi ko dhund lenge."
(VIRAT LEAVES...IN THE CHOWKI)
"Saach kaha Virat ne...ek second mein kuch bhi ho sakta hai."Aditi was feeling very sorry for Virat...he lost his love and also child.
"Madam per..."
"Per kya Jadhav??"Vikrant could see Jadhav thought the otherwise.
"Sir mujhe lagta hai ki ladki bhaag gayi..."
"Aur aisa kyun lagta hai tumhe?"
"Sir use pata chala hoga ki woh petse hai...phir kya bhaag gayi hogi..apni shakal dikhane layak nahi rahi na isiliye...matlab shaadi se pehele baacha aur investigation ke hisaab se woh dono Shaadi se pehele hi ek dusre ke saath reh rahe the...kya zamana aa gaya hai...aur maa baap bhi kuch nahi bolte."
"Jadhav maine tujhse teri rai mangi??"
"Nahi sir"
"Toh free ka gyaan kyun jhad raha hain...aur baat rahi baache ya saath rehne ki...yeh unki zindagi hai...unki life...tum jaise neech soch walon ke wajah se hamesha ilzaam aurton per lagta hain mardon per nahi."
"Sorry sir."
"Chal case files la."
In all this Aditi was quiet impressed with Vikrant...He was right if a girl chose to be in the same house as his boyfriend or had a child...always her character was questioned and not the boys.
"Thik hai sir."
(THEY SOLVE THE CASE...THERE WAS A GIRL NAMED SRINAL WHO WAS OBSESSED WITH VIRAT IN COLLEGE BUT VIRAT ONLY HAD EYES FOR AROHI.SHE KILLED HERSELF A YEAR AGO WHEN SHE FOUND OUT THAT VIRAT AND AROHI WERE FINALLY IN RELATIONSHIP.THEN WHEN AROHI GOT PREGNANT...HER ATMA ATTACKED ON HER OUT OF JEALOUSY...BUT AROHI AMD THE KID WERE SAFE NOW.)
(IN THE CHOWKI)
Vikrant and Aditi came inside with Arohi.Arohi saw Virat near the table.
"Virat!!"Virat turned to find Arohi in front of him...His joy had no bounds.(Virohi hug.)Vikrant and Aditi remembered about their kiss in the bed after Aditi had returned back.They looked at each other...No words were required...Their eyes spoke everything.They broke thier eye contact when they heard Virat speaking.They looked at Virat.
"Arohi...mein hamesha kehta tha ki tum mera pehela pyaar hoo...par in char-paanch dino mein mujhe yeh realize hua ki tum mera pehela pyaar nahi...balki meri zindagi ho...aur ek pal bhi main tumse door nahi reh sakta."With this Virat knelt down and brought out a beautiful diamond ring.Everyone in the room were surprised...Arohi had tears of joy in her eyes.Viditi never had witnessed such a moment in their life...their was a different kind of warmth in their hearts.They both looked at each other when Virat spoke...
"Kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi Arohi??"
"Haan!!Virat...Haan!!"with thisVirat made Arohi wear the ring and Arohi hugged virat.It felt like not only two souls had sealed their deal with the rings...there were two more souls who had sealed the deal with their eyes.Everyone applauded in the room.
(ADITI AND VIRAT REACH SHAITAAN CHOWKI)
"Maa ka call aaya hai...main abhi aata hoon."With this Vikrant went out.
Aditi was still feeling giddy with excitment...that was such a cute moment and she was girlish enough to wish something like that happened with her but at the same moment she was feeling like dying with heat...man the scarf!!!
She went to on the fan switch when she felt something down of her.It was medicine box...ANTI DEPRESSION PILLS?!?!
What the hell was anti depression pills doing in Shaitaan chowki that too in Vikrant place.She called suresh sir and found out that he had forced Vikrant to consume the anti depression pills after Aditi had gone missing...This was too much...She knew her kidnapping had a deep effet on Vikrant but she didnt expect him to consume anti depression pills.
(VIKRANT ENTERS THE CHOWKI AND FINDS ADITIS SACRF DISLOCATED...HE THEN SPOTS THE LOVE BITS AND STUBLE BURNS ON HER NECK AND REALIZES THAT ADITI WAS TRYING TO HIDE IT.)
NEXT:CHAPTER 5 PART 1


Edited by AMIKA14 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#62
Wow... Yr...amazing... I want next...please please please update soon can't wait...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Aww Virohi proposal was so cute and romantic, Vikku tum bhi aisa hi kuch krna. And Amika next chapter jaldi se pist karna jada time mat lagana,waitni ho pata
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Posted: 6 years ago
#64
U did it again amika!! U left me hanging in the middle 🥺 Mei nahi reh sakti Jane Bina me Kya hoga in dono ke bich..
Also one thing.. I think it's ur autocorrect, but there is a slight typo in this chapter, there is vikrant instead of virat and I almost screamed!!! 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveinshi

U did it again amika!! U left me hanging in the middle 🥺 Mei nahi reh sakti Jane Bina me Kya hoga in dono ke bich..

Also one thing.. I think it's ur autocorrect, but there is a slight typo in this chapter, there is vikrant instead of virat and I almost screamed!!! 😆

Ooh teri!!!Thanks for telling it...Man!Vikrant can never do this with some other girl...I have edited it...looks like my phone also loves Vikrant😉I will post it soon.😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Babygirl728

Aww Virohi proposal was so cute and romantic, Vikku tum bhi aisa hi kuch krna. And Amika next chapter jaldi se pist karna jada time mat lagana,waitni ho pata

Vikku would do something far more romantic babygirl!!!He is an hulk with the most romantic heart😉I will update soon😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

Wow... Yr...amazing... I want next...please please please update soon can't wait...

I will Sakshi!!!!😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Shaitan chowki mein hone wala something something
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: mitras

Shaitan chowki mein hone wala something something

Ofcourse mitras😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Why do u leave me hanging 😭 this is not done!!! I need the next part soon!!
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