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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 7



Next morning, 10 am, at the hospital.
Bikram reclined on the bed with a plate of food placed in front of him. Trisha sat on the other side, legs folded, newspaper in her hand. Rajbir sat beside him and helped him with his food. (Not by feeding him but by eating it himself.) Raghav and Swati sat side by side on two chairs, facing the bed.


"The news is leaked. We are on the front page. It's a full blown scandal now."
" CBI chief turns out to be a criminal. An agent shot and hospitalised." Trisha read the heading aloud. She sighed and lowered the newspaper to look at them. "They have come to know what happened that night. The statement of the teacher, the principal and the bus driver has been printed. Rajbir stop eating his food!"
"What? I'm only helping him! He doesn't want to eat all this."
"Get up and exchange places with me."
"Please Trisha.." Bikram whines.
"Shut up!" Trisha snaps. "You guys don't even know what is good and what is bad. I have to take care of everything. I should appeal for a raise in salary for babysitting you three." She pulled Rajbir to his feet and sat on his place with a huff.
"Arre! What did I do? Why are you dragging me in this? I didn't touch his food for once!" Raghav complained. Trisha ignored him.
"We'll get a temporary chief, a recently retired officer, who has been requested to hold the position for a while before a new chief is appointed. Meanwhile, Chauhan's wife has been brought in for questioning and she claims to know nothing of this vidushak side of her husband. Apparently, she has been fooled too." Said Trisha.


"What's with the frown Raghav?" Rajbir asked suddenly.
"Something is not right." Raghav paused. "How can she not know anything about this? How can someone be fooled for so many years? Most people can say if their spouse is lying or hiding something. And this is a big thing. He had to invest a minimum time for his criminal activities. What excuses did he give about his strangely busy schedule?"
"Busy with work maybe?" Supplied Swati.
"Not convincing enough. Tell me, if he gave you such an excuse repeatedly, wouldn't you doubt him? Besides, she could easily enquire about his workload from anyone from the office."
"Maybe he said that he has a business. Showed her fake documents. Would be a piece of cake for him." Said Bikram.
"And what about profits? A business should result in profits. They should have had a higher living standard. Wouldn't his wife ask about that? And we've been to his house once, remember? We didn't see anything that indicated more money than was expected."
"So that means she is lying. We need to interrogate her." Trisha concluded.
"When?" Asked Rajbir.
"Today. Now. Let's go." Said Trisha.
"Oye! What about me?" Bikram sat up straight.
"What about you? You'll be here, resting. You haven't been released." Trisha ended with authority. Then seeing Bikram's pitiful face, she added, "okay, we'll video conference with you."
"Deal." Said Bikram with a smile.



P.S. awaiting your comments..😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Read both the chapters in one go...nice to see Trisha bringing back the strength in Raghav and Raghav revealing about his fears...nice progress to the story where you introduce chief's wife to be involved someway or the other...
Waiting for your next update...

I loved Trisha and Rajbir moments in the hospital 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice updates Ritu 👏👏
I loved Trisha getting something from Raghav's fears and that leads to her changing the topic. Lovely moment to see Raghav expressing himself and Trisha taking care of his feelings.
Rajbir, Bikram, Swati all are into the investigation, but Raghav's hawk's eyes can see what others are not able to. He is sensing in the right direction that if Chief's wife doesnt know anything, something is fishy somewhere.
And like before, he won't be wrong this time too.
Thanks dear for the chappies, loving the track so so much.

Loves 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Good one Ritu... ⭐️👏
As Raghav is relieved from Bikram's side.. his guilt is again surrounding him... but what a way from Trisha to make him feel home.. !
Loved to see the fear of losing Trisha in his eyes... n she also came to know to some extent... 😳
Nice going... the team talking with a firmness against the Chief... but the truth that never goes away from Raghav's eyes.. he has his own definitions for whatever has happened.. .
I guess he will soon discover the truth of the chief... that he was only a masked vidushak...

Looking forward to the next... the story n the plot is taking a good shape so far.. Keep going...

N God bless... !
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Good update Ritu 👏
Loved the convos of Raghav and Trisha and later Raghav's sharp mind not allowing him to believe that Chief's wife is unknown to his facts.
Loving the track, hope to see some RaTri moments soon!

Luv ya dear and thanks ❤️🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Read both the chapters in one go...nice to see Trisha bringing back the strength in Raghav and Raghav revealing about his fears...nice progress to the story where you introduce chief's wife to be involved someway or the other...
Waiting for your next update...

I loved Trisha and Rajbir moments in the hospital 👏 ⭐️


Thanks a lot dear.. writing about Raghav's emotions are the toughest as at one side, he is very casual and fun but on the other side he is so troubled. But he also doesn't make it a big deal like in other (Byronic) heroes.
I loved writing Rajbir and Trisha moments..😊
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Originally posted by: babita..

Nice updates Ritu 👏👏

I loved Trisha getting something from Raghav's fears and that leads to her changing the topic. Lovely moment to see Raghav expressing himself and Trisha taking care of his feelings.
Rajbir, Bikram, Swati all are into the investigation, but Raghav's hawk's eyes can see what others are not able to. He is sensing in the right direction that if Chief's wife doesnt know anything, something is fishy somewhere.
And like before, he won't be wrong this time too.
Thanks dear for the chappies, loving the track so so much.

Loves 🤗



Thanks so much babita..😊
Yes, Raghav will find out the truth. Woh sach hi kya jo isse chup jaye, right? Luv ya..❤️
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Good one Ritu... ⭐️👏

As Raghav is relieved from Bikram's side.. his guilt is again surrounding him... but what a way from Trisha to make him feel home.. !
Loved to see the fear of losing Trisha in his eyes... n she also came to know to some extent... 😳
Nice going... the team talking with a firmness against the Chief... but the truth that never goes away from Raghav's eyes.. he has his own definitions for whatever has happened.. .
I guess he will soon discover the truth of the chief... that he was only a masked vidushak...

Looking forward to the next... the story n the plot is taking a good shape so far.. Keep going...

N God bless... !


Thanks a lot ...😃
Vidushak is mad to think that he can fool Raghav. Ek baar aur janm lena padega use..
About ratri.. what can I say.. I think they are the most matured and natural fictional couple I have ever seen. Koi drama nai hai dono ke beech. Only respect, admiration and love..👏
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Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Good update Ritu 👏

Loved the convos of Raghav and Trisha and later Raghav's sharp mind not allowing him to believe that Chief's wife is unknown to his facts.
Loving the track, hope to see some RaTri moments soon!

Luv ya dear and thanks ❤️🤗


Thanks a lot dear.. once this chief is out of danger, I promise to do ratri overload. Saving Chauhan is more important right now..😛 phir to ratri ki baarish hogi, I mean, that is the whole point of writing this ff, writing about ratri romance..😆😉
Keep reading.. luv u too..😳
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Suddenly Raghav called for them. "Trisha, Swati, come and sit here for a moment. I have something to discuss." He took the phone from Rajbir's hands so that he faces Bikram and waited for the other two.

Update tonight at 11..😊 luv ya..😳
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