Chapter 1

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Ok guys so m writing one more one shot, n this one's way diff thn my usual stories, i have no idea hw it turned out to be......i don't knw how many of u are going to like it.....bt it's really special to me this the first time m writing something like this.....i jst hope u guys like it.....
 
Until My Last Breath
 
"Riddhima jaan jaldi aao, kabse tumhara wait kar raha hoon"
 
"Armaan tum phone rakhoge tab aaungi na"
 
"Pakka main phone rakhunga to tum jaldi aaogi" he asked cutely
 
"haan baba pakka tum phone rakho aur 5 min main tumhare pass" she said smiling at his cuteness
 
"ok thn m waiting come soon" he said with a smile n cut the call......its had been a week since thy last meet, n he cld no mre take it, so he called her n asked her to meet him if she truely loved him, she tried explaining him tht in 4 days thy wld be together forever bt he was jst nt ready to listen, so finally she agreed as she too wanted to meet, bt she told him tht it wld be jst for a brife moment n he agreed at least he wld gt to see her tht was mre thn enough for both of thm.....
 
Armaan was waiting for her at the bridge near her house, it was quiet late at night so ther wer no much ppl or traffic....it had been 15 mins bt yet she was no wer in sight, he removed his phone to call her again wen he saw a cab stop on the other side of the road......n ther she stood in her red salwar kameez with her hands cover with henna, looking gorgeous......she looked at him to see him starring at her making her blush.....she started moving towards him smiling......when a bright ray of light hit her hard......n she was gone
 
"RIIIIIDDDDDDDDDHHHIIIIIIIIMAAAAAA" he jerked up frm his sleep panting......Nikki rushed to him as he shouted......sitting next too him she tried calming him like always.....
 
"Armaan calm down, Armaan please relax"
 
"Nikki Riddhima......Nikki i want my Riddhima back.....Nikki he hit her.......I want her Nikki.....I want her" he kept on saying, while she gave him the injection to calm his nerves......n soon he went back to sleep due to the effect of the injection.....
 
It had been 4 months now since tht accident......n everything had turned up side down......wer once ther was joy n excitement of wedding nw ther was jst pain n suffering of losing the dear one......Ther had nt been a single night tht Armaan didn't had tht dream, ther hadn't been a single day wen he would nt curse himself for calling her ther, ther had nt been a single moment when he wld nt feel the pain.....he was living a life of a dead man, wer only emotion of pain was alive in him......
 
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"I can't see him like this anymore" Nikki said crying as Abhi held her in his arms.....
 
"Nikki u need to be strong, he needs u Nikki he needs his best frnd" he said stroking her back.....Nikki had been ther with Armaan ever since the start, thy wer the best of frnd even ther love Riddhima n Abhi wer nt allowed to come in btw thm, she was ther with him wen he took Riddhima's blood covered body to the hospital......she had seen him curse n hurt himself everyday, she had heard him cry in pain n guilt every night.....n she could no more take it, she cldn't him hurt himself day n night......
 
"Abhi its been 4 months n he needs to get out of his trauma Abhi he's hurting himself nt physical bt mentally.....n i can't let him do this"
 
"shhh baby everything will been fine....." he said hugging her until she fell asleep.....
 
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Next Morning was the same.....Armaan got up late due the heavy dose of the injection......he got up with a heavy head bcoz of crying.....his eyes wer blood red.....bt a small smile formed on his lips as he took her photo n caressed it lovingly trying to feel her closing his eyes.....wen a tear tickled down his eyes.....he kept the frame on the side table n went in the bathroom......after a quick shower he went down.....
 
"U up early today, come i jst made ur fav parathas" Nikki said smiling at him
 
"ummm m nt hungry"
 
"Armaan u didn't even have dinner properly, u have to eat at least 2 n tht's n order, i don't want any more arguments " she said in a strict voice......sighing he sat down n she served him the
paratha.....he kept starring at it as memories of the past came rushing back
 
Flashback
 
"Are u done, or u want more"
 
"done i jst started sweetheart"
 
"jst started Armaan u already had 4 parathas n u saying u jst started.....m nt going to make any more my hand hurts" she said putting the roller down
 
"awww baby ur hand hurts.....come here i'll make it fine" he said moving towards her....while she moved back recognizing his naughty intentions "No its ok m fine, i'll make u more"
 
"no sweetie u are nt" he said as he back her to the counter n held her by her waist pulling her close.....he unclipped the clip frm her hair, so nw her hair hung loose over her shoulders.....tracing her facial feature, he smiled seeing her close her eyes......he traced her lower lip will leaning over him.....bt suddenly she pour the glass of water over him making him back off due to the sudden movement.....laughing hard she ran away frm him b4 he cld catch her, he ran after her......casing each other thy kept on sunning frm one room to other laughing, she at once turned around to look at
him when she lost her balance n fell on the sofa, n he jumped on her laughing
 
"Armaan gt off me" she said giggling bt nervous of his strong gaze on her
 
"No" he said bending more over her.....holding her close he kissed her b4 she cld protest any
more.....
 
Flashback Ends
 
A smile formed on his lips as he rem the incident, which soon faded as the reality stuck him.....tears tickled down his face......Nikki placed her arms on his shoulder while he hugged her tight for a moment n thn left the house......
 
"Armaan kab tak" she asked as she saw him moving out
 
"Until my last breath" he said turning to face her for a sec n thn left.....
 
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Reaching the hospital he got busy with the work, he never compromised on his work.....after a successful surgery he headed towards the special ward.....his heart skipped a beat as he saw her lying ther lifeless attached with various machines which kept her heart n brain working....doctors have already given up on her bt he was not ready, thy tried very hard to explain him to let her go bt he wouldn't......he believed in his love for her n was sure tht one day she wld be back.....n nw he jst lived with this hope n her memories......
 
Sitting besides her he stared at her pale face, which one's used to be full of life n happiness.....he caressed her cheeks n held her hand....
 
"I miss u Riddhima" he said caressing her hand "please wapas aajao" he said as tears flowed down his face n on her hand.....he didn't say anything else, ther was complete silence in the room.....no one was allowed to come in except for Armaan n the doctor in charged who was always accompanied by Armaan.....this was his daily routine since past 4 months he wld jst come n sit besides her n kst stare at her.....
 
Today was also the same he kept on starring at her for the longest time.....when he felt her finger move a little.....shocked he looked down at her hand when the machine's started making various noise, scared he rushed out to call the senior doctor's......who came running in with nurses......checking the machines thy started operating on her.....
 
Disbelief was written all over ther face as thy operated....while Armaan stood at the corner observing everything n praying to god to save her to get her back.....nurses moved in n out of the room to get the medicines n other stuff.....whole hospital nw waited outside praying for her well being, praying for a miracle to happen......ther wer tears in each n every eye....ther was hope tht nw finally everything will be normal......after almost 8 hours the doctors came out......Shashank went n stood besides Armaan.....Armaan looked up at him with teary eyes, when a smile formed on his lips n he hugged Armaan tightly
 
"we got her back Armaan, ur love ur belief got her back Armaan, Riddhima is back" he said hugging him tight.....as tears of joy formed in everyone's eyes......Armaan rushed in the room to see her yet lying ther bt the diff was tht nw she was nt attached with the machines n was conscious......
 
"Riddhima" he said softly, to see her turn towards him.....tears tickled down his eyes as he ran n hugged her tightly, nw crying badly......nurse went out of the room living thm alone.....it was a pure miracle tht she survived, every one thanked god for the miracle.....Doctors had declared her dead as she was alive jst bcoz of the machines n once thy wer removed she wouldn't have lived for a sec.....bt Armaan's love was tooo strong to let her go.....he prayed hard to get her back.....n nw
finally after 4 long months his wait was over.....Riddhima was back..... 
 
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Two Months later
 
"Riddhima baby listen to me"
 
"Armaan please m done i can't eat any more"
 
"baby u need to eat u r yet very weak sweetie" he tried explaing bt she jst nodded her head in no
 
"ok this one last bite from me please" he asked her cutely.....she could never say no to his cute expression n ate the last bit.....thn Armaan picked her up n carried her to ther room......yes thy wer married nw.....Riddhima got discharged a month b4 n the first thing Armaan did was marry her, so tht she cld never leave him again, for which everybody happily agreed......thy all knew tht it was jst bcoz of his love n his faith in ther love n god tht Riddhima was alive today......Bt she was yet very week n was nt allowed to do any heavy work.....bt didn't even let her do any work at all.....Nikki bcame her resident doctor, she wld check her after every 3 4 days on Armaan's strict order, n she was glad too follow thm...
 
He settled her on the bed n climbed in frm the other side.....Riddhima moved a bit closer to him so nw her head lay on his chest with his hand holding her close by her waist, while she tooo held him close to herself....
 
"thnx Armaan" she said softly
 
"kisliye" he asked confused
 
"mujhe itna pyaar karne ke liye"
 
"pyaar karna to maine tumse hi sikha hai Riddhima, to main kaise na karun tum se itna pyaar, u r the only reason i live for Riddhima, u r the reason i breath, n i promise to love u Until my last breath" he said as she bcame teary n hugged him tightly whispering "I Love you" while lightly kissing his chest.....
 
"I love u 2 sweetheart" he said kissing her forehead.....feeling content to jst have her besides him forever now......
 
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Hey guys i hope u all like it.....do leave ur honest comments/criticizms abt it....or press the Like button if u like it.....Smile

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crazy_4_karan2009-09-30 16:00:48

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Comments (31)

Hey Deepa,It was an awesome, one shot I loved it, especially Armaan.Keep it upPS: sorry for the short comment, but I have to reply on lot of FFsLuv u❤️33Kashish

14 years ago

hey deepa..gr8 one shot...an emotional one..enjoyed reading it..do write more ..thanks for the pm..loads of love..Caramel..

14 years ago

BRILLIANT, OUTSTANDING, EXELLENT...DEEPA....!!!!!!!AMAAZING CONCEPT...FABULOUSLY WRITTEN...I M AMAZED...!!!LOVED IT..SAKSHI

14 years ago

Now this is what i love... the emotion.... the intensity... tragedy but happy ending... FANTASTIC!!!
Love,
Ambryn


14 years ago

hey deepaits amazing deari became teary eyed while readingloved it

14 years ago

HEyyy yarrr i m really upset U ROTEE SOO MUCH IN MY ABSENCe.... i dont from where to start reading :(

U know its hardd... for me and for my little braiin...

weelll i just read this and its mind blowing wooohhooo
Awsome work !! keep it up

THANK GOD U DIDNT KILLED RIDDIMA ... GOD ... I read Soooo many shots where she dies.... urggghhhh it hurts me mann !!

but i m happy she is alive... i cant see arman with her ... plzzz deepa dont kill her in any of ur FFs lol

Goood work !!
keep on going !

Love ya

14 years ago

""Armaan kab tak" she asked as she saw him moving out

"Until my last breath" he said turning to face her for a sec n thn left....."Omg!!!! I loved this line! It was so full of emotions and intense!!!

14 years ago

Hey deepa..nice OS..

The starting was really sad..n sort of shocking..! .

Nikki took good care of Armaan..n Abhi supported her..thnx 2 them that Armaan can do smtn now.!

n wow Armaan's love got her back!?..thats amazing!..true love man!..

n wow dey're married now..thats kewl..he's totally treating her like a kid..thats cute..

thnx 4 d PM
do write more

-Aish

14 years ago

Hey deepa....Gr8 one shot....It was emotional....but happy at the end....Loved....Do write some more....Woud love to red from you....And can you pm me when you do so...pls ??Take care...LoveRia

14 years ago

Liked this one shot a lot. Touchy and sentimental. But end is happy ... so cool!!!

14 years ago