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Thanks a lot my dear friends


Tere Ho Gaye Hain Hum.... I have become Yours...(Alternative version)Part 3

Present...

Myruh:Later we met accidentally at a party.I was called there to sing and entertain the people.

Past...

Arjun:You?

Myruh:I am here to entertain you all.After all it's my job.

Arjun:All the best.Looking forward to listen to you sing.

Myruh:Thank you.

Myruh sang.

Some men went near her:Your singing was superb.

Myruh:Thank you.

They:If you re alone shall we go for a date?

Arjun burnt with jealousy.

Suddenly he held her hand.She was stunned and she looked at him.

Arjun:She is not alone.I am here with her.

They:Sorry.

They went away.

Myruh:Thank you Arjun.You saved me from those stupid guys.

Arjun:Whenever a girl is alone such people will come.I don't know why.

Myruh:Are you jealous?

Arjun:Why should I be jealous?I am not.

Myruh:Ok ok..relax.

They played music.All the couples started dancing.

Arjun:May I dance with you?

Myruh was surprised.

Myruh:Me?Are you sure?

Arjun:Yes.

Myruh smiled:Ya..sure.

He held her by her waist and started dancing.Unknowingly their dance turned out to be romantic.Arjun and Myruh started feeling goose bumps.

Mila hoon ab jo tum se
Hai dil ko mere kasam se
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila.

Tujhe hai paaya Rab se,
Hai dil ko mere kasam se
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila.


Har pal haseen sa huaa hai
Saanson ko tune chhuaa hai
Badhi tujhse nazdeekiyaan
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila. mm.


Arjun:Why I am losing myself in Myruh?


Myruh:Why I feel so nice to be with Arjun?



Mila hoon ab jo tum se
Hai dil ko mere kasam se
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila. mm.

Jab se juda tujhse jiya
Chain o qaraar dil ko mila Jab bhi rahoon sang tere
Bhoolun har…(Mary Kom)

Myruh was making noodles in the kitchen.Suddenly she felt that Arjun embraced her from behind.

She was becoming weak in his touch.

She looked at him.They shared an intense eye lock.

She moved away from him.

Arjun:Myruh....

Myruh:Arjun...What is this?

Suddenly she realized that it was her illusion.

Myruh:What a dream was it!

Arjun saw Myruh slipping and about to fall down.

Arjun:Myruhhhh..

Suddenly he caught her before falling down.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Suddenly he realized that it was his imagination.

Arjun:Even in dreams I can't bear some mishap happening with Myruh.I love her.I will confess my love to her.I want her.I can't lose her.

Myruh was surprised when she saw Arjun in her house.

Myruh:Arjun...

Arjun knelt down before her holding her hand.

Arjun:I miss you every moment.But I see imagine you everywhere.I realized that I love you Myruh.

Myruh was stunned.

Arjun:I know that you also feel the same.

Myruh felt pain inside and lied:No Arjun.I don't.

Arjun:Don't lie Myruh.I can see it in your eyes.

Myruh became emotional.

Myruh:You are very rich.But I am not.You have a reputed family.But I am just an orphan.We are not a match.

He cupped her face in his hands and said emotionally:In love there is no family background and finance Myruh.I request you to not reject my love because of this reason.Because I can't live without you.

Suddenly Myruh embraced him crying:I love you too Arjun.

They smiled tearfully.

Present...

Myruh:Everything was going well.But Arjun's dad wanted him to marry his best friend's daughter.

Purab:So he left you?

Myruh:No.But I asked me to obey his dad.

Purab was shocked:What?

Past....

Arjun:Are you out of your senses Myruh?How could you ask me to marry someone else?

Myruh:You have to Arjun.

Otherwise your father's heart will break.He will be ashamed to face his own friend.He might even lost his best friend because of you.He will be in deep pain then.Do you want your dad to be upset?As a son how can you make your dad upset?Don't you want your dad to walk with pride before his friend or you want him to be guilty to face his own friend?

Arjun became upset:But for that I can't sacrifice you.

Myruh:You have to Arjun.Otherwise there will be distance between you and your dad.Your dad threatened you that he will break all his ties with you if you don't marry his friend's daughter.Right?

What if he does that if you choose me?

Arjun:Let him abandon me.I don't care.

Myruh:It' not as easy as you think Arjun.I am brought up without a family.So I know the pain of not having a family.So I can never let you detached from your own family.If you do that I will be guilty till the end.I can't bear it.I know the value of parents.So I will never separate you from your parents.

Arjun:Myruh....

Myruh:If you really love me please obey me.You go back to your dad and tell him that you will obey him.

Arjun wept:No Myruh...

Myruh's tears rolled down her cheeks:You have to Arjun.If you love me you have to do that.Otherwise I will hate you as you don't value your own family.

Arjun shed tears:Ok...I will listen to what you said now.But I am agreeing to marry someone else only because I can't tolerate getting hated by you.

Myruh wept.

They embraced each other crying.Then he ran out crying.Myruh cried bitterly.

Present....

Myruh:I left the place and came to Goa.Then we met.

Purab:It's so sad Myruh.How are you adjusting to your fate?

Myruh:Just like you did.

Purab:But my relationship with Sakshi has not ended.I still have hope.That hope makes me live.

Now my career is fine.So I am going back to Sakshi as I promised.I am sure that this time her father won't object as I am quite settled now.

Myruh:I am really happy for you Purab.Let you and Sakshi reunite soon.

Purab smiled.

Arjun and Sakshi’s families were sitting together.Suddenly Andy came there roaring.

Andy:Arjunnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Andy slapped Arjun.All were shocked.

Raghuveer:Andy..what’s this?

Andy:He deserves this.Panditji had called me and I met him.Arjun threatened him to say that Arjun and Sakshi do not have horoscope match.

All were shocked.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you so much dear full on arjun myruh part arjun jealous feel karta hai jab koi aur myruh se baat karta hai beautiful song arjun myruh ek dusre ke sapne dekh rahe hai arjun confessed karta hai apna pyar pehle myruh mana kar deti hai status dekhkar fir maan jati hai myruh purab ko batati hai usne arjun ko force kiya apne father ki baat maankar kisi aur se shaadi kar le oh god arjun ki pol khul gai bechaare ko thappad khani padi awesome update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

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Tere Ho Gaye Hain Hum.... I have become Yours...(Alternative version)Part 4

Arjun and Sakshi’s families were sitting together.Suddenly Andy came there roaring.

Andy:Arjunnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Andy slapped Arjun.All were shocked.

Raghuveer:Andy..what’s this?

Andy:He deserves this.Panditji had called me and I met him.Arjun threatened him to say that Arjun and Sakshi do not have horoscope match.

All were shocked.

His wife Sumitra asked Arjun:Arjun…is this true?

Arjun:I gave him money to lie.I did not threaten him.

All were shocked.

Andy:I will believe that you did’nt threaten him,But you made him lie.

Arjun:Yes.

Andy:Are you not ashamed to do such a shameless act?

Raghuveer became upset:Arjun,why did you do that?

Arjun:Because I did not want to marry Sakshi.I am sorry uncle.

All were shocked and upset.

Raghuveer:You did’nt even think once about Sakshi ?How hurt she will be when you break this engagement!

Sakshi could’nt bear it anymore.

Sakshi:Arjun did this for me also.

All were shocked.

Raghu:Sakshi!

Sakshi:Papa..did you forget that I love Purab?

Raghuveer was embarrassed when Sakshi said so in front of Andy and Sumitra.

All were shocked.

Sakshi:I agreed to marry Arjun for you papa.But that does’nt mean that my love for Purab died.

Raghuveer was shocked:Still you love Purab?

Sakshi:Yes,I love Purab now also.

How did you even think that my love for Purab will vanish so fast?You thought that my love for Purab is so weak that if Purab leaves it will vanish?No papa.Purab has only left this place,but not my heart.

Sakshi’s eyes were wet.

Sakshi:I am suppressing my pain for you paoa.

Raghuveer was stunned.His heart pained:I never knew that you were eating pain now also.

Sakshi’s tears rolled down her cheeks.

Raghuveer looked at Andy:For my daughter Sakshi Arjun broke the engagement.He must be very upset.I am sorry on her behalf.

Arjun:Please don’t say sorry Kaka.Sakshi is not at fault.I did it for myself also.Because I love someone else.

Raghuveer and Sarla were shocked.

Andy:You still love that girl?

Arjun:Yes dad.I will love Myruh till the end.

I sacrificed her love for your happiness.Because Myruh asked me not to hurt you.Myruh knew the value of a family and parents more than me.So she told me that as a son I should value my father’s happiness ,reputation and friendship with his friend more.She left me for you dad.I obeyed you to get engaged to Sakshi as Myruh wanted it.But I can never stopped loving her.

Arjun burst into tears.Sumitra hugged him to console him.She was in tears.

Sumitra:Andy..can’t you see our son in pain?

Andy’s eyes became wet.

Andy:A girl who has’nt even met us valued our happiness more than her love.No one can make a better daughter in law than Myruh for our family.Call back Myruh.I myself want to conduct your wedding with Myruh.

Arjun was surpised:Dad…

Andy:Sorry Andy for not seeing your pain.

Arjun hugged Andy.They both smiled crying.

Arjun:Thank you so much dad.

Andy looked at Raghuveer:I am sorry Raghu.

Raghuveer:Why should you say sorry to me?You took the right decision to unite your son with the love of his life.

Sarla:Raghuveerji,you also try to see our daughter’s pain and understand where her happiness lies.

Andy:Yes Raghu.A parent’s biggest happiness is his child’s happiness.You also feel that happiness making Sakshi happy.

Raghuveer kept his hands on Sakshi’s shoulders:I am the villain in your love story.I detatched your love from you.But I am not cruel anymore.My blind eyes have been opened and I know with whom your happiness is.So I want you and Purab to get married in front of me.If possible please forgive me.

Sakshi’s happiness had no bounds.

She hugged him:Thank you so much papa.

Raghuveer caressed her smiling with fatherly affection.

Sakshi danced happily thinking of Purab.

Hey Mitti Pe Kheenchi Lakeerein Rab Ne 
To Ye Tasveer Bani
Aag Hava Pani Ko Milaya
To Phir Ye Tasveer Saji

Hey Hasti Teri Dishaal
Kudrat Ka Tu Kamaal
Hey Man Mohini Teri Ada
Tujhe Jab Dekhle To Phir Ghata
Barse Jhar Jhar Jhar Jhar Sarar Sarar Sarar
Naache Chamak Chamak Vo
Bijli Deewani
Hai Bemisaal Tu 
Kori Kori Anchhui
Tujh Mein Hai Kudrat Saari Khoyi
Tujh Mein Hai Kudrat Saari Khoyi Khoyi
Tujh Mein Hai Kudrat Saari Khoyi Khoyi

Tat ta..

Mitti Ki Hai Moorat Teri
Masoomiyat Fitrat Teri
Ye Saadapan
Ye Bholapan
Tu Mehki Mehki
Tu Lehki Lehki
Tu Chali Chali
Har Gali Gali
Tu Hava Ke Ghan Sang Sanana San
Tera Ang Ang
Jaise Jaltarang
Koi Leher Leher
Chali Teir Teir
Paani Ka Mel
Tere Tan Badan Jhar Jharar Jharar 
Angaarey Jaisa
Tera Rom Rom Hai Dehka Dehka
Agni Ka Khel
Tu Agan Agan

Takir takir...

Zara Dhirak Dhirak Zara Lachak Lachak
Kabhi Matak Matak Kabhi Thumak Thumak
Khali Jhoom Jhoom Kabhi Ghoom Ghoom
Dharti Ko Choom Mach Dhoom Dhoom
Chanchal Badi Tu Natkhat Badi
Dehki Bahaar Ras Ki Fuhaar
Tere Teekhe Nain Tere Keshe Rain
Ye Balkhana Ye Itrana .

Tat tat ...
(HDDCS).

Sakshi:Purab..we are going to be one soon.No one can separate us.

Purab was thinking of Sakshi and smiling.

He said in his mind:Finally that time has reached.I am coming to you Sakshi.I am coming to take you with me.

Abhi and Pragya reached there.Pragya smiled.

Pragya:Dreaming of someone?

Purab blushed.

Pragya:Dreaming of Myruh.Right?

Purab was shocked.

Purab:Myruh?Why should I dream of Myruh?

Pragya:I have observed you and Myruh getting closer and how happy you are with Myruh.I know that you are in love with Myruh.I am happy that you moved on.

Purab was shocked.

Purab:What are you saying Pragya?You know that I love Sakshi.Then why are you talking like this?Yes..I like Myruh..but as a friend.I can only love Sakshi.Within a few days I am going back to meet Sakshi and talk to her dad as I promised her.

Pragya and Abhi became upset.

Pragya:Don’t go Purab.It’s too late.

Purab:Too late?Why?

Pragya:Because Sakshi has moved on.

Purab:What?

Pragya:Though her father cut all the ties with me and is not allowing me or Sakshi to contact each other Abhi and I enquired about her life.We came to know that she got engaged to her childhood friend Arjun.

Purab was shocked:No..it can’t be true.

Pragya looked at him painfully.

Abhi:It is true Purab.The photographer John who was our last stage show’s photographer was her engagement’s photographer arranged by her fiancé Arjun’s family.John sent me their photographs.

Abhi took his mobile and showed Arjun Sakshi’s engagement photos.Purab was shattered.

Abhi:We wanted to tell you before.But we could not get the courage to tell you.

Myruh reached there.She was shocked to see Purab upset.

Myruh:What happened to you Purab?

Pragya :Purab’s beloved Sakshi got engaged.

Pragya took the phone and showed the engagement picture to Myruh.Myruh was shattered to see Arjun as Sakshi’s fiancé.She burst into tears.

Abhi:What happened Myruh?

Myruh:This is Arjun..the only person I loved in my life.

They were shocked.

Purab:It means your lover and my beloved are becoming one?

Myruh nodded tearfully.They embraced each other and cried.

Pragya and Abhi were upset in their room.

Pragya:I never thought that things will go like this.Myruh lover is Sakshi’s fiancé.How shocking!

Abhi:Even I am shocked.

Pragya:I thought finally Purab can get his true love from Myruh.But she is also a broken soul like Purab.

Pragya rested her head on Abhi’s chest and Abhi caressed her emotionally.

Purab and Myruh were  on the beach.

Purab:It’s my fault also.I took time to build up my career and got delayed in going back to her.She must have lost hope and gave up our relationship.

Myruh:I have no complaints. I only forced Arjun to accept that girl though he cried in front of me.

Still I feel hurt when I see Arjun with someone else.

I did’nt know that she was your girl.

If I had known that she is your beloved I would not have forced Arjun to accept her.I am sorry Purab.

Tears rolled down her cheeks.He wiped her tears.

He held her hand and said:Don’t say sorry Myruh.It’s not your fault.You did’nt even know me and my love life that time.

Somebody was clicking their photographs.

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